Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
** What's even worse is that the real life counterpart was an ardent supporter of rape, murder and terrorism, of which all three of them were put in practice, so in a way makes the fanfiction even ''more'' terrifying.
to:
** What's even worse is that the real life counterpart was an ardent supporter of rape, murder and terrorism, of which all three of them were put in practice, so in a way makes the fanfiction even ''more'' terrifying.terrifying.
* The fact that Kotonoha and Sekai were still able to retain some of their rivalry with each other and stab each other to death despite Makoto's absence is frightening.
* The fact that Kotonoha and Sekai were still able to retain some of their rivalry with each other and stab each other to death despite Makoto's absence is frightening.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* The pursuit of killing Varg by the girls is quite unnerving, as it involved a lot of stalking and him in loads of [=NDEs=]. Granted, Varg wasn't innocent for obvious reasons, but put yourself on his shoes: two ''School Days'' heroines are on the march to kill you for seemingly no reason, as you haven't even known them or the visual novel they were from, let alone done anything to them.
to:
* The pursuit of killing Varg by the girls is quite unnerving, as it involved a lot of stalking and trying to off him in loads of [=NDEs=]. Granted, Varg wasn't innocent for obvious reasons, but put yourself on his shoes: two ''School Days'' heroines are on the march to kill you for seemingly no reason, as you haven't even known them or the visual novel they were from, let alone done anything to them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* The pursuit of killing Varg by the girls is quite unnerving, as it involved a lot of stalking and him in loads of NDEs. Granted, Varg wasn't innocent for obvious reasons, but put yourself on his shoes: two ''School Days'' heroines are on the march to kill you for seemingly no reason, as you haven't even known them or the visual novel they were from, let alone done anything to them.
to:
* The pursuit of killing Varg by the girls is quite unnerving, as it involved a lot of stalking and him in loads of NDEs.[=NDEs=]. Granted, Varg wasn't innocent for obvious reasons, but put yourself on his shoes: two ''School Days'' heroines are on the march to kill you for seemingly no reason, as you haven't even known them or the visual novel they were from, let alone done anything to them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* The pursuit of killing Varg by the girls is quite unnerving, as it involved a lot of stalking. Granted, Varg wasn't innocent for obvious reasons, but put yourself on his shoes: two ''School Days'' heroines are on the march to kill you for seemingly no reason, as you haven't even known them or the visual novel they were from, let alone done anything to them.
to:
* The pursuit of killing Varg by the girls is quite unnerving, as it involved a lot of stalking.stalking and him in loads of NDEs. Granted, Varg wasn't innocent for obvious reasons, but put yourself on his shoes: two ''School Days'' heroines are on the march to kill you for seemingly no reason, as you haven't even known them or the visual novel they were from, let alone done anything to them.
