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* Assassin!Kiritsugu's situation. Not only he's forced to serve the whims of a mad witch, ''his children are contestants in the Holy Grail War'', meaning he could be forced to hurt them. The scene where he almost uses an Origin Bullet on Archer - a future version of Shirou - is nothing short of AdultFear.
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* Assassin!Kiritsugu's situation. Not only he's forced to serve the whims of a mad witch, ''his children are contestants in the Holy Grail War'', meaning he could be forced to hurt them. The scene where he almost uses an Origin Bullet on Archer - a future version of Shirou - is nothing short of AdultFear.fear.
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* An omake dealing with Shirou in the world if Fate/Grand Order reveals that most of the cast in the From Fake Dreams version of the game died in the Fourth Grail War. Kirei himself recalls Shirou dying in Kiristugu's arms shortly after the man found him in the fire's wreckage. Makes one wonder just what happened to the Kiritsugu of that world given how Shirou was his last tether to sanity in canon.
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* An omake dealing with Shirou in the world if of Fate/Grand Order reveals that most of the cast in the From Fake Dreams version of the game died in the Fourth Grail War. Kirei himself recalls Shirou dying in Kiristugu's arms shortly after the man found him in the fire's wreckage. Makes one wonder just what happened to the Kiritsugu of that world given how Shirou was his last tether to sanity in canon.
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** She is even one step away of realizing he is the Ash of Miracles, and Waver only gets off the hook by using ExactWords and MetaphoricallyTrue statements, but things won't be pretty at all if she decides to act on this, and she's clearly shown as hesitating.
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** She is even one step away of realizing he is the Ash of Miracles, and Waver only gets off the hook by using ExactWords and MetaphoricallyTrue statements, but things won't be pretty at all if she decides to act on this, and she's clearly shown as hesitating.hesitating.
* An omake dealing with Shirou in the world if Fate/Grand Order reveals that most of the cast in the From Fake Dreams version of the game died in the Fourth Grail War. Kirei himself recalls Shirou dying in Kiristugu's arms shortly after the man found him in the fire's wreckage. Makes one wonder just what happened to the Kiritsugu of that world given how Shirou was his last tether to sanity in canon.
* An omake dealing with Shirou in the world if Fate/Grand Order reveals that most of the cast in the From Fake Dreams version of the game died in the Fourth Grail War. Kirei himself recalls Shirou dying in Kiristugu's arms shortly after the man found him in the fire's wreckage. Makes one wonder just what happened to the Kiritsugu of that world given how Shirou was his last tether to sanity in canon.
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* Chapter 37 mentions a Sealing Designate [[ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime who tried to make Pokemon]]. [[ShmuckBait Harmless, right?]] [[RealityEnsues Then we get to know what happened when they found it]]:
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* Chapter 37 mentions a Sealing Designate [[ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime who tried to make Pokemon]]. [[ShmuckBait Harmless, right?]] [[RealityEnsues Then we get to know what happened when they found it]]:it:
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* Chapter 60 has an InternalReveal with Lorelei finding about a LOT of the secrets Waver and Sirius had been hiding, which means a horrible fate might still await Shirou, Waver and everyone involved.
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* Chapter 60 59 has an InternalReveal with Lorelei finding about a LOT of the secrets Waver and Sirius had been hiding, which means a horrible fate might still await Shirou, Waver and everyone involved.
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* Chapter 60 has an InternalReveal with Lorelei finding about a LOT of the secrets Waver and Sirius had been hiding.
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* Chapter 60 has an InternalReveal with Lorelei finding about a LOT of the secrets Waver and Sirius had been hiding.hiding, which means a horrible fate might still await Shirou, Waver and everyone involved.
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** Two hostages get remotely spared... but the last one ends up in TearJerker territory.
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** Two hostages get remotely spared... but the last one ends up in TearJerker territory.territory.
* Chapter 60 has an InternalReveal with Lorelei finding about a LOT of the secrets Waver and Sirius had been hiding.
** She knows about him having a Reality Marble, and that he becomes a Servant in an alternate timeline, bringing about the Counter Guardian who participated in the war as the Archer Servant.
** She is even one step away of realizing he is the Ash of Miracles, and Waver only gets off the hook by using ExactWords and MetaphoricallyTrue statements, but things won't be pretty at all if she decides to act on this, and she's clearly shown as hesitating.
* Chapter 60 has an InternalReveal with Lorelei finding about a LOT of the secrets Waver and Sirius had been hiding.
** She knows about him having a Reality Marble, and that he becomes a Servant in an alternate timeline, bringing about the Counter Guardian who participated in the war as the Archer Servant.
** She is even one step away of realizing he is the Ash of Miracles, and Waver only gets off the hook by using ExactWords and MetaphoricallyTrue statements, but things won't be pretty at all if she decides to act on this, and she's clearly shown as hesitating.
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** Or push Archer into killing (likely again!) Sakura to save the world.
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** Or push Archer into killing (likely again!) Sakura to save the world.world.
* Fina proving in Chapter 58 why he is NOT a foe to be trifled with, taking hostages among Shirou's protectorate. Given his track record, this means Fina signed in for a horrible death.
** Two hostages get remotely spared... but the last one ends up in TearJerker territory.
* Fina proving in Chapter 58 why he is NOT a foe to be trifled with, taking hostages among Shirou's protectorate. Given his track record, this means Fina signed in for a horrible death.
** Two hostages get remotely spared... but the last one ends up in TearJerker territory.
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* [[MySkullRunnethOver Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer and taking in the whole of his life and existence as a Counter Guardian], reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent, only able to profusely apologize.
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* [[MySkullRunnethOver Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer and taking in the whole of his life and existence as a Counter Guardian], Guardian]], reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent, only able to profusely apologize.
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* Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer and taking in the whole of his life and existence as a Counter Guardian, reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent, only able to profusely apologize.
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* [[MySkullRunnethOver Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer and taking in the whole of his life and existence as a Counter Guardian, Guardian], reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent, only able to profusely apologize.
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Not just for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, [[GuiltComplex but also for the small insight]] we get into his [[ChronicHeroSyndrome mental process]] for not being able to make it in time to save the first victims.
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Not just for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, [[GuiltComplex but also for the small insight]] we get into his [[ChronicHeroSyndrome mental process]] for [[YouAreTooLate not being able to make it in time time]] [[ItsAllMyFault to save the first victims.]]
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Not just for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, but also for the small insight we get into his mental process for not being able to make it in time to save the first victims.
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Not just for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, [[GuiltComplex but also for the small insight insight]] we get into his [[ChronicHeroSyndrome mental process process]] for not being able to make it in time to save the first victims.
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* Chapter 37 mentions a Sealing Designate who tried to make Pokemon. Harmless, right? Then we get to know what happened when they found it:
--> ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. A little yellow rat. After she had been electrocuted with enough amperage to literally fry her heart, nerves and brain, no one else had hesitated in crushing every little mistake that met their eyes into a chunky red paste.''
** Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created]].
--> ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. A little yellow rat. After she had been electrocuted with enough amperage to literally fry her heart, nerves and brain, no one else had hesitated in crushing every little mistake that met their eyes into a chunky red paste.''
** Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created]].
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* Chapter 37 mentions a Sealing Designate [[ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime who tried to make Pokemon. Pokemon]]. [[ShmuckBait Harmless, right? right?]] [[RealityEnsues Then we get to know what happened when they found it:
it]]:
--> ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. [[SeriesMascot A little yellowrat. rat]]. [[BodyHorror After she had been electrocuted with enough amperage to literally fry her heart, nerves and brain, brain]], [[WeAreNotGoingThroughThatAgain no one else had hesitated in crushing every little mistake that met their eyes into a chunky red paste.paste]].''
** Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to havevisited visited]] [[FridgeHorror before they were created]].
--> ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. [[SeriesMascot A little yellow
** Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have
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** Then, Shirou bestows upon him the full extent of what the cursed sword Kiritsugu is capable of: not merely crippling magic circuits, but the SOUL, therefore memories. He ends up an undignified, blurbing mess that is just scared witless of Shirou, before being finished by his StormOfBlades.
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** Then, Shirou bestows upon him the full extent of what the cursed sword Kiritsugu is capable of: not merely crippling magic circuits, but even the SOUL, therefore destroying memories. He ends up an undignified, blurbing blubbering mess that is just scared witless of Shirou, before being finished by his StormOfBlades.
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** Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created.]]
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon, monster, and divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disguste [[HorrifyingTheHorror even outright monsters like Rider.]]
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon, monster, and divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disguste [[HorrifyingTheHorror even outright monsters like Rider.]]
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** Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created.]]
created]].
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon, monster, and divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outrightdisguste disgust, [[HorrifyingTheHorror even outright monsters like Rider.]]Rider]].
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon, monster, and divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Both for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, but also for the small insight we get into his mental process for not being able to make in time to save the first victims.
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Both Not just for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, but also for the small insight we get into his mental process for not being able to make it in time to save the first victims.
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* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. [[HorrifyingTheHorror Even outright monsters like Rider.]]
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* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, dragon, monster, and divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. disguste [[HorrifyingTheHorror Even even outright monsters like Rider.]]
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* Shirou stumbling upon vampire victims for the first time. Both for the standard zombie apocalypse factor, but also for the small insight we get into his mental process for not being able to make in time to save the first victims.
* How Louvre kicks the bucket. Truly horrifying, it nearly feels like a slasher movie turned on its end with the human actually HorrifyingTheHorror.
** First, Shirou gets rid of his regeneration power by forcefully binding his time stream to Gaia's. This has Louvre doubt his sanity.
** Then, Shirou bestows upon him the full extent of what the cursed sword Kiritsugu is capable of: not merely crippling magic circuits, but the SOUL, therefore memories. He ends up an undignified, blurbing mess that is just scared witless of Shirou, before being finished by his StormOfBlades.
* Some Dead Apostles missions Shirou had to deal with.
* How Louvre kicks the bucket. Truly horrifying, it nearly feels like a slasher movie turned on its end with the human actually HorrifyingTheHorror.
** First, Shirou gets rid of his regeneration power by forcefully binding his time stream to Gaia's. This has Louvre doubt his sanity.
** Then, Shirou bestows upon him the full extent of what the cursed sword Kiritsugu is capable of: not merely crippling magic circuits, but the SOUL, therefore memories. He ends up an undignified, blurbing mess that is just scared witless of Shirou, before being finished by his StormOfBlades.
* Some Dead Apostles missions Shirou had to deal with.
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* Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer, reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent.
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* Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer, Archer and taking in the whole of his life and existence as a Counter Guardian, reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent.prevent, only able to profusely apologize.
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* Shirou's reaction to seeing Archer, reduced to a blurbing, quivering mess, finally realizing what Kiritsugu wanted to prevent.
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** This could have led to a berserk shadow unleashed with all the nightmare factor from the ''Heaven's Feel'' route.
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** This could have led to [[EldritchAbomination a berserk shadow shadow]] unleashed with all the nightmare factor from the ''Heaven's Feel'' route.
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* Medea [[spoiler:turns her Master into a living wand]]--which involves putting her in a test-tube, [[AndIMustScream unable to scream or move]].
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* Medea Witch!Caster [[spoiler:turns her Master into a living wand]]--which involves putting her in a test-tube, [[AndIMustScream unable to scream or move]].
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** ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. A little yellow rat. After she had been electrocuted with enough amperage to literally fry her heart, nerves and brain, no one else had hesitated in crushing every little mistake that met their eyes into a chunky red paste.''
* Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created.]]
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. Even outright monsters like Rider.
* Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created.]]
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. Even outright monsters like Rider.
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* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. [[HorrifyingTheHorror Even outright monsters like Rider.]]
* Shirou's Apostle instincts acting up when he runs on fumes and instinctively making him want to bite anyone close.
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* Archer's past is this for Rin, moreso when he reveals he was executed and she was ''probably'' right there.
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* Archer's past is this for Rin, moreso when he reveals he was executed and she was ''probably'' right there.there.
* Witch!Caster messing around with Sakura's curse in front of Archer:
** This could have led to a berserk shadow unleashed with all the nightmare factor from the ''Heaven's Feel'' route.
** Or push Archer into killing (likely again!) Sakura to save the world.
* Witch!Caster messing around with Sakura's curse in front of Archer:
** This could have led to a berserk shadow unleashed with all the nightmare factor from the ''Heaven's Feel'' route.
** Or push Archer into killing (likely again!) Sakura to save the world.
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* Medea [[spoiler:turns her Master into a living wand]]--which involves putting her in a test-tube, [[AndIMustScream unable to scream or move]].
* Chapter 37 mentions a Sealing Designate who tried to make Pokemon. Harmless, right? Then we get to know what happened when they found it:
** ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. A little yellow rat. After she had been electrocuted with enough amperage to literally fry her heart, nerves and brain, no one else had hesitated in crushing every little mistake that met their eyes into a chunky red paste.''
* Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created.]]
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. Even outright monsters like Rider.
* Assassin!Kiritsugu's situation. Not only he's forced to serve the whims of a mad witch, ''his children are contestants in the Holy Grail War'', meaning he could be forced to hurt them. The scene where he almost uses an Origin Bullet on Archer - a future version of Shirou - is nothing short of AdultFear.
* Archer's past is this for Rin, moreso when he reveals he was executed and she was ''probably'' right there.
* Chapter 37 mentions a Sealing Designate who tried to make Pokemon. Harmless, right? Then we get to know what happened when they found it:
** ''One intern had made the mistake of trying to pet one of the little monstrosities. A little yellow rat. After she had been electrocuted with enough amperage to literally fry her heart, nerves and brain, no one else had hesitated in crushing every little mistake that met their eyes into a chunky red paste.''
* Incidentally, [[ContrivedCoincidence Zelretch just so happened to have visited before they were created.]]
* Shirou being a very unique hybrid case of... an Incarnation of the sword element, a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Living Apostle]], with taint from dragon blood, divine blood, and protected by a very powerful Fae artifact... This makes for a very peculiar regeneration process when all of these bits work together to fix his body as it gets broken in more and more... creative ways. For example, the sight of him regenerating a blown up heart out of blades causes every Servant on the scene to pause in abject incomprehension or outright disgust. Even outright monsters like Rider.
* Assassin!Kiritsugu's situation. Not only he's forced to serve the whims of a mad witch, ''his children are contestants in the Holy Grail War'', meaning he could be forced to hurt them. The scene where he almost uses an Origin Bullet on Archer - a future version of Shirou - is nothing short of AdultFear.
* Archer's past is this for Rin, moreso when he reveals he was executed and she was ''probably'' right there.
