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* A recurring theme in later chapters is that your character is spacing out and forgetting things almost at random. This is because [[spoiler: they're dying. Rather, the digital construct they're stuck in is beginning to fade. Why? Because you keep Connect Jumping. Every time, it wears you down a little more. It's essentially committing suicide over the course of weeks and months, and you don't even know it.]]
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* A recurring theme in later chapters is that your character is spacing out and forgetting things almost at random. This is because [[spoiler: they're dying. Rather, the Well, not dying exactly. More like their digital construct they're stuck in body is beginning ''tearing itself apart at the seams'' and is getting ready to fade. '''''[[CessationOfExistence fade out of existence entirely.]]''''' Why? Because Because, one, you keep Connect Jumping. Jumping which is eroding your body from the inside out, especially considering the nastier things (like ''Eaters'') that you keep jumping into, and two, your body is already on borrowed time since it's ''not supposed to exist according to the laws of physics anyways.'' Every time, it wears you down a little more.more, on top of the fact that it is eventually going to implode by itself even ''if'' you didn't use your Connect Jump abilities. It's essentially committing suicide over the course of weeks and months, and you don't even know it.]]
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* Once you get the ability, use High Security 3 in any area with enemy encounters. The lack of movement in the areas other than your own character is really subtly creepy.
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* Once you get the ability, use High Security 3 in any area with enemy encounters. The lack of movement in the areas other than your own character is really subtly creepy.creepy.
* Ami's/Takumi's predicament, overall. Unlike other victims of EDEN Syndrome, whose mental data was consumed and preserved by the Eaters, their mental data managed to escape, and manifested in the physical world as a half-cyber, half-physical entity. This might sound awesome at first, but consider that their state is a ''temporary'' one; eventually, their cyber/physical body ''will'' break down due to not being able to sustain itself, and they will collapse into scattered data, which essentially means they will '''''[[CessationOfExistence cease to exist completely]]'''''.
* Ami's/Takumi's predicament, overall. Unlike other victims of EDEN Syndrome, whose mental data was consumed and preserved by the Eaters, their mental data managed to escape, and manifested in the physical world as a half-cyber, half-physical entity. This might sound awesome at first, but consider that their state is a ''temporary'' one; eventually, their cyber/physical body ''will'' break down due to not being able to sustain itself, and they will collapse into scattered data, which essentially means they will '''''[[CessationOfExistence cease to exist completely]]'''''.
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*** Its first form is an ordinary Eater, a strange squid thingy that very obviously moves in ways it ''shouldn't''. It's eye is very twitchy and has a laser attack that eats at data.
*** It's second form vaguely resembles a human made of tendrils and eyes. It moves in a very strange way, like it has too many joints or something.
*** Its third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
*** It's second form vaguely resembles a human made of tendrils and eyes. It moves in a very strange way, like it has too many joints or something.
*** Its third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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*** Its first form is an ordinary Eater, a strange squid thingy that very obviously moves in ways it ''shouldn't''. It's Its eye is very twitchy and has a laser attack that eats at data.
***It's Its second form vaguely resembles a human made of tendrils and eyes. It moves in a very strange way, like it has too many joints or something.
*** Its third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it usesit's its special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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*** Its third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it uses
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*** Its fourth and final form, Eater Adam, is actually [[spoiler: Arata.]] It's a strangely humanoid figure with swirling patterns inside it's almost Slenderman-esque body, with hair made of tendrils. It really doesn't help when it uses it's special attack, where hundreds of spikes burst from the ground almost like the Dragon Teeth from Mass Effect.
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*** Its fourth and final form, Eater Adam, is actually [[spoiler: Arata.]] It's a strangely humanoid figure with swirling patterns inside it's its almost Slenderman-esque body, with hair made of tendrils. It really doesn't help when it uses it's its special attack, where hundreds of spikes burst from the ground almost like the Dragon Teeth from Mass Effect.
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* After [[spoiler: the Digital and Real Worlds begin to merge]] everyone is saying it's dangerous outside, but it's always in a way that sounds like a wild rumor. Then Chapter 16 hits, and you go into Odaiba. Not only is it ''on fire'', but it actually looks remarkably like a war zone. It's appearance hits REALLY hard, especially since the only hints that [[spoiler: the Digital World]] is ''there'' is bits of floating glitchy data before now. By the way? [[spoiler: Examon]] is here. Y'know. [[spoiler: The giant dragon you saw falling from the sky a few chapters back?]] The one being consumed by Eaters? That one. It's absolutely covered in holes, areas where Eaters have eaten away at it. Your first glimpse at its in game model shows that it's about the size of a ''skyscraper.'' You, the character, are about as big as one it's ''claws.'' When in a talking cutscene, it's model takes up almost the ''entire screen.'' It's ''wingspan alone'' can almost entirely surround the rooftop you stand on. If you've been really grinding levels, by now you'll have a 70-90 level Digimon that can deal 2000 damage in a single hit, and that does almost NOTHING against this guy. FIVE ROYAL KNIGHTS show up to fight him, and barely land a scratch. It's full title? [[spoiler: Examon the Dragon Emperor.]] Everyone who knows of it will basically state it's insanely strong. It is, without a doubt, the [[spoiler: strongest of the Royal Knights.]]
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* After [[spoiler: the Digital and Real Worlds begin to merge]] everyone is saying it's dangerous outside, but it's always in a way that sounds like a wild rumor. Then Chapter 16 hits, and you go into Odaiba. Not only is it ''on fire'', but it actually looks remarkably like a war zone. It's Its appearance hits REALLY hard, especially since the only hints that [[spoiler: the Digital World]] is ''there'' is bits of floating glitchy data before now. By the way? [[spoiler: Examon]] is here. Y'know. [[spoiler: The giant dragon you saw falling from the sky a few chapters back?]] The one being consumed by Eaters? That one. It's absolutely covered in holes, areas where Eaters have eaten away at it. Your first glimpse at its in game model shows that it's about the size of a ''skyscraper.'' You, the character, are about as big as one it's its ''claws.'' When in a talking cutscene, it's its model takes up almost the ''entire screen.'' It's Its ''wingspan alone'' can almost entirely surround the rooftop you stand on. If you've been really grinding levels, by now you'll have a 70-90 level Digimon that can deal 2000 damage in a single hit, and that does almost NOTHING against this guy. FIVE ROYAL KNIGHTS show up to fight him, and barely land a scratch. It's Its full title? [[spoiler: Examon the Dragon Emperor.]] Everyone who knows of it will basically state it's insanely strong. It is, without a doubt, the [[spoiler: strongest of the Royal Knights.]]
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** Consider it's history and the scenario gets worse. The first case [[spoiler:took place during the Beta test - [=EDEN=] Syndrome has existed as long as [=EDEN=] itself has.]] And ever since then the company policy for how to deal with it has been to put their fingers in their ears and pretend it isn't happening, despite and because of how obvious it is what the problem is - that there exists something in their virtual world that can destroy uploaded minds, bypassing all of their safeguards.
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** Consider it's its history and the scenario gets worse. The first case [[spoiler:took place during the Beta test - [=EDEN=] Syndrome has existed as long as [=EDEN=] itself has.]] And ever since then the company policy for how to deal with it has been to put their fingers in their ears and pretend it isn't happening, despite and because of how obvious it is what the problem is - that there exists something in their virtual world that can destroy uploaded minds, bypassing all of their safeguards.
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* [[spoiler: Beginning of Eden.]] The whole place looks like a kid's playground, all bright colors and floating blocks. You even get to see a version of Galacta Park, which is completely fine and unbroken. Knowing that this is the original version just makes it's [[spoiler: future]] all the more depressing. Then you and [[spoiler: the children]] see a Connect Jump spot. When it cuts back to the real world, all that's left are your goggles. You're gone.
* Almost all of Chapter 18, and TheReveal in all it's glory. [[spoiler: During the EDEN Beta, five children found a gateway into the Digital World. Suddenly, an Eater appears from thin air. One of the children decides to distract it, while the rest run away. The end result? One child became the first victim of EDEN Syndrome, and the other four become horribly traumatized, enough to get their memories wiped clean. These children? Yuugo, Yuuko, Nokia, Arata, and ''you.'' That's right, ''you personally'' are the reason the Eaters exist.]]
* Almost all of Chapter 18, and TheReveal in all it's glory. [[spoiler: During the EDEN Beta, five children found a gateway into the Digital World. Suddenly, an Eater appears from thin air. One of the children decides to distract it, while the rest run away. The end result? One child became the first victim of EDEN Syndrome, and the other four become horribly traumatized, enough to get their memories wiped clean. These children? Yuugo, Yuuko, Nokia, Arata, and ''you.'' That's right, ''you personally'' are the reason the Eaters exist.]]
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* [[spoiler: Beginning of Eden.]] The whole place looks like a kid's playground, all bright colors and floating blocks. You even get to see a version of Galacta Park, which is completely fine and unbroken. Knowing that this is the original version just makes it's its [[spoiler: future]] all the more depressing. Then you and [[spoiler: the children]] see a Connect Jump spot. When it cuts back to the real world, all that's left are your goggles. You're gone.
* Almost all of Chapter 18, and TheReveal in allit's its glory. [[spoiler: During the EDEN Beta, five children found a gateway into the Digital World. Suddenly, an Eater appears from thin air. One of the children decides to distract it, while the rest run away. The end result? One child became the first victim of EDEN Syndrome, and the other four become horribly traumatized, enough to get their memories wiped clean. These children? Yuugo, Yuuko, Nokia, Arata, and ''you.'' That's right, ''you personally'' are the reason the Eaters exist.]]
* Almost all of Chapter 18, and TheReveal in all
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** One would think that the case immediately after Scramble Pentagram, Nightmare Eater, would alleviate the horror of the Scramble Pentagram case. It shows that there's a program in EDEN that gathers up and removes user data if they die, it can delve into people's memories and even be used to mask someone's presence from others. On top of that, it's gone rogue because [[spoiler: It's latched onto a Clockmon.]] This should be a case of DoingInTheWizard right? [[spoiler: Except the Baku program can't imitate the dead, the Clockmon's been rendered emotionless from the program overwriting it's personality, and more importantly it's locked to EDEN itself. ''[[NothingIsScarier What the hell was that ghost girl then?]]'']]
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** One would think that the case immediately after Scramble Pentagram, Nightmare Eater, would alleviate the horror of the Scramble Pentagram case. It shows that there's a program in EDEN that gathers up and removes user data if they die, it can delve into people's memories and even be used to mask someone's presence from others. On top of that, it's gone rogue because [[spoiler: It's latched onto a Clockmon.]] This should be a case of DoingInTheWizard right? [[spoiler: Except the Baku program can't imitate the dead, the Clockmon's been rendered emotionless from the program overwriting it's its personality, and more importantly it's locked to EDEN itself. ''[[NothingIsScarier What the hell was that ghost girl then?]]'']]
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*** It's third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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*** It's Its third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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*** It's fourth and final form, Eater Adam, is actually [[spoiler: Arata.]] It's a strangely humanoid figure with swirling patterns inside it's almost Slenderman-esque body, with hair made of tendrils. It really doesn't help when it uses it's special attack, where hundreds of spikes burst from the ground almost like the Dragon Teeth from Mass Effect.
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*** It's Its fourth and final form, Eater Adam, is actually [[spoiler: Arata.]] It's a strangely humanoid figure with swirling patterns inside it's almost Slenderman-esque body, with hair made of tendrils. It really doesn't help when it uses it's special attack, where hundreds of spikes burst from the ground almost like the Dragon Teeth from Mass Effect.
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* After [[spoiler: the Digital and Real Worlds begin to merge]] everyone is saying it's dangerous outside, but it's always in a way that sounds like a wild rumor. Then Chapter 16 hits, and you go into Odaiba. Not only is it ''on fire'', but it actually looks remarkably like a war zone. It's appearance hits REALLY hard, especially since the only hints that [[spoiler: the Digital World]] is ''there'' is bits of floating glitchy data before now. By the way? [[spoiler: Examon]] is here. Y'know. [[spoiler: The giant dragon you saw falling from the sky a few chapters back?]] The one being consumed by Eaters? That one. It's absolutely covered in holes, areas where Eaters have eaten away at it. Your first glimpse at it's in game model shows that it's about the size of a ''skyscraper.'' You, the character, are about as big as one it's ''claws.'' When in a talking cutscene, it's model takes up almost the ''entire screen.'' It's ''wingspan alone'' can almost entirely surround the rooftop you stand on. If you've been really grinding levels, by now you'll have a 70-90 level Digimon that can deal 2000 damage in a single hit, and that does almost NOTHING against this guy. FIVE ROYAL KNIGHTS show up to fight him, and barely land a scratch. It's full title? [[spoiler: Examon the Dragon Emperor.]] Everyone who knows of it will basically state it's insanely strong. It is, without a doubt, the [[spoiler: strongest of the Royal Knights.]]
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* After [[spoiler: the Digital and Real Worlds begin to merge]] everyone is saying it's dangerous outside, but it's always in a way that sounds like a wild rumor. Then Chapter 16 hits, and you go into Odaiba. Not only is it ''on fire'', but it actually looks remarkably like a war zone. It's appearance hits REALLY hard, especially since the only hints that [[spoiler: the Digital World]] is ''there'' is bits of floating glitchy data before now. By the way? [[spoiler: Examon]] is here. Y'know. [[spoiler: The giant dragon you saw falling from the sky a few chapters back?]] The one being consumed by Eaters? That one. It's absolutely covered in holes, areas where Eaters have eaten away at it. Your first glimpse at it's its in game model shows that it's about the size of a ''skyscraper.'' You, the character, are about as big as one it's ''claws.'' When in a talking cutscene, it's model takes up almost the ''entire screen.'' It's ''wingspan alone'' can almost entirely surround the rooftop you stand on. If you've been really grinding levels, by now you'll have a 70-90 level Digimon that can deal 2000 damage in a single hit, and that does almost NOTHING against this guy. FIVE ROYAL KNIGHTS show up to fight him, and barely land a scratch. It's full title? [[spoiler: Examon the Dragon Emperor.]] Everyone who knows of it will basically state it's insanely strong. It is, without a doubt, the [[spoiler: strongest of the Royal Knights.]]
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error meaning he likely ''doesn't have a body to return to.'']].
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error meaning he likely ''doesn't have a body to return to.to anymore.'']].
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error]].
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error]].error meaning he likely ''doesn't have a body to return to.'']].
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* The end of [[WhamEpisode Chapter 10: To the Promised Land]], starting with TheReveal [[spoiler: of Yuugo being Yuuko in disguise. Followed by the secondary reveal that [[BitchInSheepsClothing Rie Kishibe]] can ''control the Digital Shifts and the Eaters''. [[FromBadToWorse And then she forcibly logs Yuuko out, and shows the third reveal that Yuuko's been strapped to a huge terminal that allows Rie to read her memories to discover how to control the Eaters.]] And then when the Protagonist Connect Jumps in to save Yuuko, Rie unveils the ''fourth'' reveal that ''[[ParanoiaFuel she already knew about the Connect Jump ability]]'' and then ''forces the player character to Connect Jump to Shibuya against their will'' sporting a terrifying facial expression for a moment while [[FreezeFrameBonus her true self, Crusadermon, flickers behind her for a moment.]] And to make matters worse she then begins painfully extracting Yuuko's memories, leaving us with a fade to black and Yuuko's bloodcurdling scream of agony. ''Holy SHIT.'']]
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* The Eaters. They are a race of [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]] whose one and only purpose is to consume everything in their path, and they only manage to get worse as the game progresses. [[spoiler: Turns out that they occasionally turn up in Eden and consume people's avatars, destroying their mental data and leaving their physical body in a (seemingly endless) coma, but they eventually start appearing in the real world as well, where they start feasting on the people of Tokyo in earnest. The feeding process is thankfully usually shown as them just kind of hitting people with their tentacles... except in two cases; namely, Yuuko and Yuugo getting attacked by them. The former gets an Eater sicced on her while bound and blinded, and the following boss battle is against an Eater [[BodyHorror with her partially merged into its body]], while the latter gets overtaken and consumed by an Eater at the tender age of eight-ish, [[HarmfulToMinors right in front of his friends.]]]]
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* The Eaters. They are a race of [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]] whose one and only purpose is to consume everything in their path, and they only manage to get worse as the game progresses. [[spoiler: Turns out that they occasionally turn up in Eden and consume people's avatars, destroying their mental data and leaving their physical body in a (seemingly endless) coma, but they eventually start appearing in the real world as well, where they start feasting on the people of Tokyo in earnest. The feeding process is thankfully usually shown as them just kind of hitting people with their tentacles... except in two cases; namely, Yuuko and Yuugo getting attacked by them. The former gets an Eater sicced on her while bound and blinded, and the following boss battle is against an Eater [[BodyHorror with her partially merged into its body]], body and the boss itself keeping her bound, blind, gagged and conscious the entire time]], while the latter gets overtaken and consumed by an Eater at the tender age of eight-ish, [[HarmfulToMinors right in front of his friends.]]]]
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*** It's third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded and ''ballgagged''. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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*** It's third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded blindfolded, ''ballgagged'' and ''ballgagged''.possibly worst of all: totally conscious and aware of what's happening. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag [[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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** One would think that the case immediately after Scramble Pentagram, Nightmare Eater, would alleviate the horror of the Scramble Pentagram case. It shows that there's a program in EDEN that gathers up and removes user data if they die, it can delve into people's memories and even be used to mask someone's presence from others. On top of that, it's gone rogue because [[spoiler: It's latched onto a Clockmon.]] This should be a case of DoingInTheWizard right? [[spoiler: Except the Baku program can't imitate the dead, and more importantly it's locked to EDEN itself. ''[[NothingIsScarier What the hell was that ghost girl then?]]'']]
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** One would think that the case immediately after Scramble Pentagram, Nightmare Eater, would alleviate the horror of the Scramble Pentagram case. It shows that there's a program in EDEN that gathers up and removes user data if they die, it can delve into people's memories and even be used to mask someone's presence from others. On top of that, it's gone rogue because [[spoiler: It's latched onto a Clockmon.]] This should be a case of DoingInTheWizard right? [[spoiler: Except the Baku program can't imitate the dead, the Clockmon's been rendered emotionless from the program overwriting it's personality, and more importantly it's locked to EDEN itself. ''[[NothingIsScarier What the hell was that ghost girl then?]]'']]
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** One would think that the case immediately after Scramble Pentagram, Nightmare Eater, would alleviate the horror of the Scramble Pentagram case. It shows that there's a program in EDEN that gathers up and removes user data if they die, it can delve into people's memories and even be used to mask someone's presence from others. On top of that, it's gone rogue because [[spoiler: It's latched onto a Clockmon.]] This should be a case of DoingInTheWizard right? [[spoiler: Except the Baku program can't imitate the dead, and more importantly it's locked to EDEN itself. ''[[NothingIsScarier What the hell was that ghost girl then?]]'']]
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*** It's third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] trapped inside it. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear it's victim screaming in agony from behind the gag they're wearing.
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*** It's third form is called Eater Eve and is [[spoiler: fused with Yuuko.]] In this form, it's a giant spider that has [[spoiler: Yuuko]] trapped inside it. restrained to it: arms and legs shackled, blindfolded and ''ballgagged''. When it uses it's special move, you can audibly hear it's victim [[spoiler: her]] screaming in agony from behind the gag they're wearing.[[spoiler: she's]] wearing and struggling furiously to get free to no avail.
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* The Eaters. They are a race of [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]] whose one and only purpose is to consume everything in their path, and they only manage to get worse as the game progresses. [[spoiler: Turns out that they occasionally turn up in Eden and consume people's avatars, destroying their mental data and leaving their physical body in a (seemingly endless) coma, but they eventually start appearing in the real world as well, where they start feasting on the people of Tokyo in earnest. The feeding process is thankfully usually shown as them just kind of hitting people with their tentacles... except in two cases; namely, Yuuko and Yuugo getting attacked by them. The former gets an Eater sicced on her while bound and blinded, and the following boss battle is against an Eater [[BodyHorror with her partially merged into its body]], while the latter gets overtaken and consumed by an Eater at the tender age of five-ish, eight-ish, [[HarmfulToMinors right in front of his friends.]]]]
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** Perhaps most horrifying of all is how the whole case unfolds. Going in, one doubtlessly expects a hostile Digimon or perhaps an Eater to be behind it all, but no. No battle, no real resolution, [[NothingIsScarier nothing.]]
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** [[spoiler:Yuugo's death at the hands of the first Eater. The children are horrified and traumatized. Arata is scarred so badly that, had he kept the memories, he could have required emergency counseling.]]
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** The entire place gets filled with an eerie whistling noise too. And it's not wind, that's obvious. There's a SUPER creepy thing going on with your character, too. In the cutscenes, they don't walk so much as shuffle along, almost as if they're limping. Finally, their dialogue choices here are all sort of... Creepy? It's like it's not actually a choice, just them stating the same thing three times in a row.
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--> '''Infermon:''' I GET THE DATA TO MAKE THE DOLLS THE DOLLS STEAL THE PEOPLE'S SOULS THE DOLLS ARE LIFELIKE THE PEOPLE ARE DEATHLIKE
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--> '''Infermon:''' I GET THE DATA TO MAKE THE DOLLS THE DOLLS STEAL THE PEOPLE'S SOULS THE DOLLS ARE LIFELIKE THE PEOPLE ARE DEATHLIKEDEATHLIKE
* Once you get the ability, use High Security 3 in any area with enemy encounters. The lack of movement in the areas other than your own character is really subtly creepy.
* Once you get the ability, use High Security 3 in any area with enemy encounters. The lack of movement in the areas other than your own character is really subtly creepy.
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error]].
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error]].error]].
** The Infermon that gets the data necessary to make a doll is rather creepy too.
--> '''Infermon:''' I GET THE DATA TO MAKE THE DOLLS THE DOLLS STEAL THE PEOPLE'S SOULS THE DOLLS ARE LIFELIKE THE PEOPLE ARE DEATHLIKE
** The Infermon that gets the data necessary to make a doll is rather creepy too.
--> '''Infermon:''' I GET THE DATA TO MAKE THE DOLLS THE DOLLS STEAL THE PEOPLE'S SOULS THE DOLLS ARE LIFELIKE THE PEOPLE ARE DEATHLIKE
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* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error]].
* The "Living Doll, Dead Person" case. You investigate the case of a salesman stealing female appearances and turning them into life-size dolls that he sells in Akihabara. Near the end of the case, [[spoiler:you find out that the dolls mentally trap the young men in EDEN while they still think they're in the real world. The businessman then takes their unconscious bodies and supposedly sells them on the black market for parts. What's worse is that you meet a victim and he finds this out the hard way when he gets a logout error]].
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* The Investigation of the Scramble Pentagram UrbanLegend case [[spoiler:has the ghost of a girl killed in a car accident three months ago trying to kill five people (the player included) by being hit by a truck. Kyoko reveals that not only did the truck driver ''not'' see them, but they were blind and deaf to everyone else trying to warn them to move. And the case ends with the ghost saying that she'll kill ''everyone'' to make herself be happy again.]]
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* The Investigation of the Scramble Pentagram UrbanLegend case [[spoiler:has the ghost of a girl killed in a car accident three months ago trying to kill five people (the player included) by being hit by a truck. Kyoko reveals that not only did the truck driver ''not'' see them, but they were blind and deaf to everyone else trying to warn them to move. And the case ends with the ghost saying that she'll kill ''everyone'' to make herself be happy again.]]]]
-->'''Girl:''' If I kill everyone, it'll make me lucky. And if everyone is killed, it'll make me happy!
** Oh, that creepy girl. Trust me, she gets creepier. First off, she speaks in red text, something literally no other character in the GAME does! And then she'll start sending you texts. Like really creepy ones.
-->'''Girl:''' S T O P L O O K I N G A T M E.
-->'''Girl:''' If I kill everyone, it'll make me lucky. And if everyone is killed, it'll make me happy!
** Oh, that creepy girl. Trust me, she gets creepier. First off, she speaks in red text, something literally no other character in the GAME does! And then she'll start sending you texts. Like really creepy ones.
-->'''Girl:''' S T O P L O O K I N G A T M E.
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** On that note... [[spoiler: King Drasil/Mother Eater.]] Imagine a human, covered with eyes and tangled in what looks like their own skeleton. It ''bleeds'' red Eater essence into the Digital World, eternally creating a diseased land. Hundreds of fragments of code float inside it, wave after wave. It's an abomination.
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** On that note... [[spoiler: King Drasil/Mother Eater.]] Imagine a human, covered with eyes and tangled in what looks like their own skeleton. It ''bleeds'' red Eater essence into the Digital World, eternally creating a diseased land. Hundreds of fragments of code float inside it, wave after wave. It's an abomination.abomination.
* The Investigation of the Scramble Pentagram UrbanLegend case [[spoiler:has the ghost of a girl killed in a car accident three months ago trying to kill five people (the player included) by being hit by a truck. Kyoko reveals that not only did the truck driver ''not'' see them, but they were blind and deaf to everyone else trying to warn them to move. And the case ends with the ghost saying that she'll kill ''everyone'' to make herself be happy again.]]
* The Investigation of the Scramble Pentagram UrbanLegend case [[spoiler:has the ghost of a girl killed in a car accident three months ago trying to kill five people (the player included) by being hit by a truck. Kyoko reveals that not only did the truck driver ''not'' see them, but they were blind and deaf to everyone else trying to warn them to move. And the case ends with the ghost saying that she'll kill ''everyone'' to make herself be happy again.]]
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** Consider it's history and the scenario gets worse. The first case [[spoiler:took place during the Beta test - [=EDEN=] Syndrome has existed as long as [=EDEN=] itself has.]] And ever since then the company policy for how to deal with it has been to put their fingers in their ears and pretend it isn't happening, despite and because of how obvious it is what the problem is - that there exists something in their virtual world that can destroy uploaded minds, bypassing all of their safeguards.
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** Which would be bad enough. Except that [[spoiler: you've been using it to root around in a cosmic horror's digestive tract, exposing your unstable body directly to its corroding effects. After the first time, you're out of action for a week and start breaking out in static at odd times, then spend the next 8 chapters pretending that nothing is wrong.]]
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*** An [[http://wikimon.net/File:Eater_sketch4.jpg early sketch]] of Eater Eve shows that it could potentially have been even ''more'' disturbing, incorporating some vaguely insect-like features and a bloated abdomen filled with what appears to be literal demonspawn.
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* [[spoiler: King Drasil's Core.]] The place is covered with Eater motifs, and outside of the tower is a weird swirling static mist sort of thing. There are pitch black digital glitches everywhere, some with what looks like black tar leaking out of them. And instead of tendrils, there seem to be ribbons of QR Codes floating around the place...
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* [[spoiler: King Drasil's Core.]] The place is covered with Eater motifs, and outside of the tower is a weird swirling static mist sort of thing. There are pitch black digital glitches everywhere, some with what looks like black tar leaking out of them. And instead of tendrils, there seem to be ribbons of QR Codes floating around the place...place...
** On that note... [[spoiler: King Drasil/Mother Eater.]] Imagine a human, covered with eyes and tangled in what looks like their own skeleton. It ''bleeds'' red Eater essence into the Digital World, eternally creating a diseased land. Hundreds of fragments of code float inside it, wave after wave. It's an abomination.
** On that note... [[spoiler: King Drasil/Mother Eater.]] Imagine a human, covered with eyes and tangled in what looks like their own skeleton. It ''bleeds'' red Eater essence into the Digital World, eternally creating a diseased land. Hundreds of fragments of code float inside it, wave after wave. It's an abomination.
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* The [[spoiler: Digital World]], when you arrive in Chapter 20, is no longer a bright green jungle paradise. It's now a blackened husk, with Eater tendrils and patterns sucking the life out of everything.
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* The [[spoiler: Digital World]], when you arrive in Chapter 20, is no longer a bright green jungle paradise. It's now a blackened husk, with Eater tendrils and patterns sucking the life out of everything.everything. Swirling patterns cover everything, with the only sign of life being floating red flower spores. It's shortly followed by a MASSIVE hole in the ground, one big enough for an Examon to sit inside comfortably. Which leads into...
* [[spoiler: King Drasil's Core.]] The place is covered with Eater motifs, and outside of the tower is a weird swirling static mist sort of thing. There are pitch black digital glitches everywhere, some with what looks like black tar leaking out of them. And instead of tendrils, there seem to be ribbons of QR Codes floating around the place...
* [[spoiler: King Drasil's Core.]] The place is covered with Eater motifs, and outside of the tower is a weird swirling static mist sort of thing. There are pitch black digital glitches everywhere, some with what looks like black tar leaking out of them. And instead of tendrils, there seem to be ribbons of QR Codes floating around the place...
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* When you get to the Tokyo Metropolis Building, there's a Digital Shift that takes up half of the front of the building! And it's implied it can get even ''worse.'' On higher floors, there are hundreds of glowing tendrils floating through the holes that data has made in the walls, a hint that [[spoiler: Eater Adam]] is there.
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* When you get to the Tokyo Metropolis Building, there's a Digital Shift that takes up half of the front of the building! And it's implied it can get even ''worse.'' On higher floors, there are hundreds of glowing tendrils floating through the holes that data has made in the walls, a hint that [[spoiler: Eater Adam]] is there.there.
* The [[spoiler: Digital World]], when you arrive in Chapter 20, is no longer a bright green jungle paradise. It's now a blackened husk, with Eater tendrils and patterns sucking the life out of everything.
* The [[spoiler: Digital World]], when you arrive in Chapter 20, is no longer a bright green jungle paradise. It's now a blackened husk, with Eater tendrils and patterns sucking the life out of everything.
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* When you get to the Tokyo Metropolis Building, there's a Digital Shift that takes up half of the front of the building! And it's implied it can get even ''worse.'''' On higher floors, there are hundreds of glowing tendrils floating through the holes that data has made in the walls, a hint that [[spoiler: Eater Adam]] is there.
