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* Nearly the whole fic is a slow build of terror. Tea and Ryou are stuck together, but things aren't ''so'' bad as the begin to connect... until Yami Bakura emerges. From then on it's a near-constant battle against him to save themselves, their sanity, and their budding love.
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* Nearly the whole fic is a slow build of terror. Tea Téa and Ryou are stuck together, but things aren't ''so'' bad as the begin to connect... until Yami Bakura emerges. From then on it's a near-constant battle against him to save themselves, their sanity, and their budding love.
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* The play Tea and Ryou were assigned was ''Theatre/TheCrucible'', and at one point Yami Bakura takes over mid-reading.
* Tea accidentally sends the group to the Shadow Realm, where a shadow demon finds them and preys on their worst fears. It nearly overwhelms Yami Bakura until he's able to snap out of it, and the descriptions of what it does and what the experience feels like are horrifying.
* Tea accidentally sends the group to the Shadow Realm, where a shadow demon finds them and preys on their worst fears. It nearly overwhelms Yami Bakura until he's able to snap out of it, and the descriptions of what it does and what the experience feels like are horrifying.
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* The play Tea Téa and Ryou were assigned was ''Theatre/TheCrucible'', and at one point Yami Bakura takes over mid-reading.
*Tea Téa accidentally sends the group to the Shadow Realm, where a shadow demon finds them and preys on their worst fears. It nearly overwhelms Yami Bakura until he's able to snap out of it, and the descriptions of what it does and what the experience feels like are horrifying.
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* Dealing with the shadow demon causes Yami Bakura to revert to a more Zorc-like form, which ''severely'' freaks Tea out when he returns.
* Yami Bakura's plan is to [[spoiler:erase Tea's memories of the experience]] so Yami Yugi won't come after him.
* Yami Bakura's plan is to [[spoiler:erase Tea's memories of the experience]] so Yami Yugi won't come after him.
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* Dealing with the shadow demon causes Yami Bakura to revert to a more Zorc-like form, which ''severely'' freaks Tea Téa out when he returns.
* Yami Bakura's plan is to [[spoiler:eraseTea's Téa's memories of the experience]] so Yami Yugi won't come after him.
* Yami Bakura's plan is to [[spoiler:erase
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* Tea accidentally sends the group to the Shadow Realm, where a shadow demon finds them and preys on their worst fears. It almost tames nearly overwhelms Yami Bakura until he's able to snap out of it, and the descriptions of what it does and what the experience feels like are horrifying.
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* The premise of the whole fic is a slow build of terror. tea and Ryou are stuck together, but things aren't ''so'' bad as the begin to connect... until Yami Bakura emerges. From then on it's a near-constant battle against him to save themselves, their sanity, and their connection.
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* The premise of Nearly the whole fic is a slow build of terror. tea Tea and Ryou are stuck together, but things aren't ''so'' bad as the begin to connect... until Yami Bakura emerges. From then on it's a near-constant battle against him to save themselves, their sanity, and their connection.budding love.
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* The play Tea and Ryou were assigned was Theatre/TheCrucible, and at one point Yami Bakura takes over mid-reading.
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* The play Tea and Ryou were assigned was Theatre/TheCrucible, ''Theatre/TheCrucible'', and at one point Yami Bakura takes over mid-reading.
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* Yami Bakura's plan is to [[spoiler:erase Tea's memories of the experience]] so Yami Yugi won't come after him.
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* The premise of the whole fic is a slow build of terror. tea and Ryou are stuck together, but things aren't ''so'' bad as the begin to connect... until Yami Bakura emerges. From then on it's a near-constant battle against him to save themselves, their sanity, and their connection.
* Yami Bakura first makes his presence known to Ryou in the first chapter, scrawling ''You can't escape'' onto his school notes. It disturbs him so much that he crumples the whole page up.
* The play Tea and Ryou were assigned was Theatre/TheCrucible, and at one point Yami Bakura takes over mid-reading.
* Tea accidentally sends the group to the Shadow Realm, where a shadow demon finds them and preys on their worst fears. It almost tames Yami Bakura until he's able to snap out of it, and the descriptions of what it does and what the experience feels like are horrifying.
-->Bakura bristled and threw his shoulders back, but even the small movement took effort-so much effort. His arms felt heavy; his head felt like it was cast iron. His body was a limp noodle, a scrawny strand of cooked, cold, spaghetti, flopping about uselessly in the darkness. It was utterly impossible that he could support his own weight. Any instant now, he was going to collapse in a heap, crushed by his own head. It would be better to lie down now. Get it over with.\\
The cold was in his blood now. He could hardly even feel it. He could hardly feel anything. There was just numbness, and heaviness, and darkness.
* Dealing with the shadow demon causes Yami Bakura to revert to a more Zorc-like form, which ''severely'' freaks Tea out when he returns.
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* Yami Bakura first makes his presence known to Ryou in the first chapter, scrawling ''You can't escape'' onto his school notes. It disturbs him so much that he crumples the whole page up.
* The play Tea and Ryou were assigned was Theatre/TheCrucible, and at one point Yami Bakura takes over mid-reading.
* Tea accidentally sends the group to the Shadow Realm, where a shadow demon finds them and preys on their worst fears. It almost tames Yami Bakura until he's able to snap out of it, and the descriptions of what it does and what the experience feels like are horrifying.
-->Bakura bristled and threw his shoulders back, but even the small movement took effort-so much effort. His arms felt heavy; his head felt like it was cast iron. His body was a limp noodle, a scrawny strand of cooked, cold, spaghetti, flopping about uselessly in the darkness. It was utterly impossible that he could support his own weight. Any instant now, he was going to collapse in a heap, crushed by his own head. It would be better to lie down now. Get it over with.\\
The cold was in his blood now. He could hardly even feel it. He could hardly feel anything. There was just numbness, and heaviness, and darkness.
* Dealing with the shadow demon causes Yami Bakura to revert to a more Zorc-like form, which ''severely'' freaks Tea out when he returns.
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