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* Alyssa Storm, full stop. Her WeaponOfChoice causes people to [[BloodFromEveryOrifice bleed out from every orifice in their body.]] The first person we see her do this to? Her grandmother. EnfantTerrible doesn't even begin to cover this kid.
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* Alyssa Storm, full stop. Her WeaponOfChoice weapon causes people to [[BloodFromEveryOrifice bleed out from every orifice in their body.]] The first person we see her do this to? Her grandmother. EnfantTerrible doesn't even begin to cover this kid.
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* Some very, very nasty AdultFear for Kyoji and Mikan inbound: Maverick knows that Mikan is pregnant. There's no doubt that he's going to use that baby to hurt Kyoji in some way.
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* Some very, very nasty AdultFear fears for Kyoji and Mikan inbound: Maverick knows that Mikan is pregnant. There's no doubt that he's going to use that baby to hurt Kyoji in some way.
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* Maverick activating nano-machines to rip apart Jataro from the INSIDE. Poor kid had to have a new liver made for him and Showered Mikan in blood
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* Maverick activating nano-machines to rip apart Jataro from the INSIDE. Poor kid had to have a new liver made for him and Showered showered Mikan in bloodblood.
* The creatures during The Rescue Arc.
* While it's hard to say it's undeserved, Shinobu stomps on Kazuya's chest until her foot hits the floor.
* The creatures during The Rescue Arc.
* While it's hard to say it's undeserved, Shinobu stomps on Kazuya's chest until her foot hits the floor.
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* Maverick activating Nanomachines to rip apart Jataro from the INSIDE. Poor Kid Had to have a new liver made for him and Showered Mikan in blood
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* Maverick activating Nanomachines nano-machines to rip apart Jataro from the INSIDE. Poor Kid Had kid had to have a new liver made for him and Showered Mikan in blood
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** Speaking of beatdowns, the fight between Nine and Rogue is a CurbStompBattle where the kid doesn't stop '''after''' being blasted by lightning and scratched with a shuriken.
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** Speaking of beatdowns, the fight between Nine and Rogue is a CurbStompBattle where the kid doesn't stop '''after''' being blasted by lightning and scratched with a shuriken.shuriken.
* Maverick activating Nanomachines to rip apart Jataro from the INSIDE. Poor Kid Had to have a new liver made for him and Showered Mikan in blood
* Maverick activating Nanomachines to rip apart Jataro from the INSIDE. Poor Kid Had to have a new liver made for him and Showered Mikan in blood
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** It gets worse with TheReveal that Nagisa was to be the ninth subject of the project. And that there was [[AbusiveParents parental consent]] given.
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* Junko's ghost's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Monaca. There are even sprites for her battered appearance after the beatdown.
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* Junko's ghost's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Monaca. There are even sprites for her battered appearance after the beatdown.beatdown.
** Speaking of beatdowns, the fight between Nine and Rogue is a CurbStompBattle where the kid doesn't stop '''after''' being blasted by lightning and scratched with a shuriken.
** Speaking of beatdowns, the fight between Nine and Rogue is a CurbStompBattle where the kid doesn't stop '''after''' being blasted by lightning and scratched with a shuriken.
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* TheReveal that Kaede is Junko's reincarnation is this
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* TheReveal that Kaede is Junko's reincarnation is thisthis both InUniverse and out of universe.
* Junko's ghost's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Monaca. There are even sprites for her battered appearance after the beatdown.
* Junko's ghost's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Monaca. There are even sprites for her battered appearance after the beatdown.
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--> '''Makoto Naegi will die before year's end.'''
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--> '''Makoto Naegi will die before year's end.''''''
* [[EvilKnockoff Nine]], a clone of Nagisa Shingetsu who underwent the Izuru Kamukura project. We don't know much about him, but his apathetic attitude and seeming lack of caring is terrifying in of it's own.
* TheReveal that Kaede is Junko's reincarnation is this
* [[EvilKnockoff Nine]], a clone of Nagisa Shingetsu who underwent the Izuru Kamukura project. We don't know much about him, but his apathetic attitude and seeming lack of caring is terrifying in of it's own.
* TheReveal that Kaede is Junko's reincarnation is this
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--> [[WhamLine I am far away from you.]]
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--> [[WhamLine I am far away from you.]]]]
** During a strange, unexplained fit, Akio sees, and touches Satoru-kun. Things go to shit for her fast, and she ends up in what is apparently hell, BuriedInAPileOfCorpses, [[WoundThatWillNotHeal with a bullet in her heart. Her heart that is still pumping.]]
** Some of Satoru-kun's predictions are also full of ParanoiaFuel, namely these three:
--> '''Civil war will brew between two incarnations of Junko Enoshima'''
--> '''At least one member of Class 77-B will succumb to despair again'''
--> '''Mikan Tsumiki will disappear from Hope's Peak Academy'''
*** And the worst?
--> '''Makoto Naegi will die before year's end.'''
** During a strange, unexplained fit, Akio sees, and touches Satoru-kun. Things go to shit for her fast, and she ends up in what is apparently hell, BuriedInAPileOfCorpses, [[WoundThatWillNotHeal with a bullet in her heart. Her heart that is still pumping.]]
** Some of Satoru-kun's predictions are also full of ParanoiaFuel, namely these three:
--> '''Civil war will brew between two incarnations of Junko Enoshima'''
--> '''At least one member of Class 77-B will succumb to despair again'''
--> '''Mikan Tsumiki will disappear from Hope's Peak Academy'''
*** And the worst?
--> '''Makoto Naegi will die before year's end.'''
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* After the mess with Kanon and Munakata, Kyoji decides to try and learn about the future. How does he plan to do this? By summoning Satoru-Kun, a ghost who can answer any question you might have. He performs the ritual to summon him[[note]] You need to call your own cellphone number on a coin-operated payphone, then say "Satoru-Kun, Satoru-Kun, please come here. Satoru, Satoru, please show yourself. Satoru, Satoru, please answer me if you are there."[[/note]] He does a call...only for it to be Ryouko playing a joke on him. He's about ready to write it off as a dumb idea and head back to the school. Then he gets another call.
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* After the mess with Kanon and Munakata, Kyoji decides to try and learn about the future. How does he plan to do this? By summoning Satoru-Kun, a ghost who can answer any question you might have. He performs the ritual to summon him[[note]] You need to call your own cellphone number on a coin-operated payphone, then say "Satoru-Kun, Satoru-Kun, please come here. Satoru, Satoru, please show yourself. Satoru, Satoru, please answer me if you are there."[[/note]] He and does a call...only for it to be Ryouko playing a joke on him. He's about ready to write it off the whole thing as a dumb idea and head back to the school. Then he gets another call.
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** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa.", who is hinted to be the name of Akio's birth mother, who was hinted to be abusive before.
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** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa.", who is hinted to be the name of Akio's birth mother, who was hinted to be abusive before.before.
* After the mess with Kanon and Munakata, Kyoji decides to try and learn about the future. How does he plan to do this? By summoning Satoru-Kun, a ghost who can answer any question you might have. He performs the ritual to summon him[[note]] You need to call your own cellphone number on a coin-operated payphone, then say "Satoru-Kun, Satoru-Kun, please come here. Satoru, Satoru, please show yourself. Satoru, Satoru, please answer me if you are there."[[/note]] He does a call...only for it to be Ryouko playing a joke on him. He's about ready to write it off as a dumb idea and head back to the school. Then he gets another call.
--> [[WhamLine I am far away from you.]]
* After the mess with Kanon and Munakata, Kyoji decides to try and learn about the future. How does he plan to do this? By summoning Satoru-Kun, a ghost who can answer any question you might have. He performs the ritual to summon him[[note]] You need to call your own cellphone number on a coin-operated payphone, then say "Satoru-Kun, Satoru-Kun, please come here. Satoru, Satoru, please show yourself. Satoru, Satoru, please answer me if you are there."[[/note]] He does a call...only for it to be Ryouko playing a joke on him. He's about ready to write it off as a dumb idea and head back to the school. Then he gets another call.
--> [[WhamLine I am far away from you.]]
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** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa."
*** Which seems to be the name of when of Akio's parents, which were hinted to be abusing before.
*** Which seems to be the name of when of Akio's parents, which were hinted to be abusing before.
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** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa."
*** Which seems", who is hinted to be the name of when of Akio's parents, which were birth mother, who was hinted to be abusing abusive before.
*** Which seems
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** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa."
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** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa.""
*** Which seems to be the name of when of Akio's parents, which were hinted to be abusing before.
*** Which seems to be the name of when of Akio's parents, which were hinted to be abusing before.
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* The first SadisticChoice: Shuuichi could either shoot Munakta or get arrested. Bad enough as it is, let us remember that he is a thirteen years old boy that currently had a huge fight with his twin sister and all of his friends.
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* The first SadisticChoice: Shuuichi could either shoot Munakta or get arrested. Bad enough as it is, let us remember that he is a thirteen years year old boy that currently had a huge fight with his twin sister and all of his friends.friends.
* Kaede's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Karma. It gets so bad that it reminds Karma of her [[AbusiveParent abusive father]] and sends her into a panic attack. The dialogue that ensues is disturbing, to say the least.
--> '''Karma''': I'M SORRY! JUST MAKE IT STOP! I'M SORRY! I KNOW I'VE MADE MISTAKES! I KNOW EVERYTHING IS MY FAULT! I KNOW EVERYONE HATES ME! I KNOW MOM SHOULD HAVE LIVED! I KNOW IT'S MY FAULT WE MY TWIN AND I ARE COMBINED! I KNOW I DESERVED TO BE TOUCHED BY ALL THOSE PEOPLE THAT WERE BROUGHT HOME! I KNOW I SHOULD STILL BE IN THE BASEMENT! I AM SORRY! I AM SORRY!
** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa."
* Kaede's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Karma. It gets so bad that it reminds Karma of her [[AbusiveParent abusive father]] and sends her into a panic attack. The dialogue that ensues is disturbing, to say the least.
--> '''Karma''': I'M SORRY! JUST MAKE IT STOP! I'M SORRY! I KNOW I'VE MADE MISTAKES! I KNOW EVERYTHING IS MY FAULT! I KNOW EVERYONE HATES ME! I KNOW MOM SHOULD HAVE LIVED! I KNOW IT'S MY FAULT WE MY TWIN AND I ARE COMBINED! I KNOW I DESERVED TO BE TOUCHED BY ALL THOSE PEOPLE THAT WERE BROUGHT HOME! I KNOW I SHOULD STILL BE IN THE BASEMENT! I AM SORRY! I AM SORRY!
** Kaede doesn't stop until Akio tells her that she's acting like "Rui Takagawa."
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* The first SadisticChoice: Shuuichi could either shoot Munakta or let him escape. Bad enough as it is, let us remember that he is a thirteen years old boy that currently had a huge fight with his twin sister and all of his friends.
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* The first SadisticChoice: Shuuichi could either shoot Munakta or let him escape.get arrested. Bad enough as it is, let us remember that he is a thirteen years old boy that currently had a huge fight with his twin sister and all of his friends.
