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* In District Two, the Capitol has established a rather powerful military fortress filled with soldiers and weapons. The fortress's name? The Nut.[[note]]In fairness, the Nut is a nickname ''the Rebels'' (and Suzanne Collins) gave it not the actual fortress itself.[[\note]]
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* In District Two, the Capitol has established a rather powerful military fortress filled with soldiers and weapons. The fortress's name? The Nut.[[note]]In fairness, the Nut is a nickname ''the Rebels'' (and Suzanne Collins) gave it not the actual fortress itself.[[\note]][[/note]]
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* In District Two, the Capitol has established a rather powerful military fortress filled with soldiers and weapons. The fortress's name? The Nut.[[note]]In fairness, the Nut is a nickname ''the Rebels'' (and Suzanne Collins) gave it not the actual fortress itself.
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* In District Two, the Capitol has established a rather powerful military fortress filled with soldiers and weapons. The fortress's name? The Nut.[[note]]In fairness, the Nut is a nickname ''the Rebels'' (and Suzanne Collins) gave it not the actual fortress itself.[[\note]]
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* In District Two, the Capitol has established a rather powerful military fortress filled with soldiers and weapons. The fortress's name? The Nut.
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* In District Two, the Capitol has established a rather powerful military fortress filled with soldiers and weapons. The fortress's name? The Nut.[[note]]In fairness, the Nut is a nickname ''the Rebels'' (and Suzanne Collins) gave it not the actual fortress itself.
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* Rue's screaming for Katniss to save her while she's trapped under the net. It's especially egregious because she had previously been established as a stealthy, rational and reasonably intelligent character, and it would her panicking, screaming and flailing seem tailor-made to draw Marvel in and get her killed (and give Katniss more angst).
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* Rue's screaming for Katniss to save her while she's trapped under the net. It's especially egregious because she had previously been established as a stealthy, rational and reasonably intelligent character, and it would her panicking, screaming and flailing seem tailor-made to draw Marvel in and get her killed (and and give Katniss more angst).angst (in the books, Rue only screams once - when the trap is originally sprung - and Marvel is right there, stabbing her almost immediately, with Katniss arriving too late).
