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* The protagonist has a nightmare about Ben...and Franchise/MyLittlePony. During the end of the sequence, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Pinkie Pie]] turns out to be evil and Ben teams up with her, saying "Pinkie...leave him to me...". Ben also calls the Player "him" even if you chose the female protagonist, which kinda makes it obvious that the male protagonist is the canon one.

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* The protagonist has a nightmare about Ben...and Franchise/MyLittlePony. During the end of the sequence, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Pinkie Pie]] turns out to be evil and Ben teams up with her, saying "Pinkie...leave him to me...". Ben also calls refers to the Player as "him" even if you chose the female protagonist, which kinda makes it obvious that the male protagonist is the canon one.
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* The protagonist has a nightmare about Ben...and Franchise/MyLittlePony. During the end of the sequence, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Pinkie Pie]] turns out to be evil and Ben teams up with her, saying "Pinkie...leave him to me...". Ben also calls the Player "him" even if you chose the female protagonist, which kinda makes it obvious that the male protagonist is the canon one.
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* It probably goes without saying that the grammar killed any chance the game had at being scary. For others, the concept of the game itself made it not scary, because a lot of [[{{Creepypasta}} creepypastas]] have a reputation for not being of the highest quality.

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* It probably goes without saying that the grammar killed any chance the game had at being scary. For others, the concept of the game itself made it not scary, scary because a lot of [[{{Creepypasta}} creepypastas]] have a reputation for not being of the highest quality.
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* The kids meeting Fanfic/SonicExe (who was posing as the actual [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]]) in the mountains and Ben having a {{Fanboy}} moment is funny, yet also [[NarmCharm cute]] in a way:

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* The kids meeting Fanfic/SonicExe (who was posing as pretending to be the actual real [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]]) in the mountains and Ben having a {{Fanboy}} moment is funny, yet also [[NarmCharm cute]] in a way:
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* One possible game over sequence has Ben gain [[BlackEyesOfCrazy black bleeding eyes]] and stab the Player because [[DisproportionateRetribution they said they thought he was a monster]]. It's understandable to feel hurt if someone you thought was your friend said that about you, but proceeding to stab them whilist [[LaughingMad laughing maniacally]] wouldn't really help you look like less of a monster:
-->'''Ben''': [''Player Name''], you like creepypastas...Do you think that I'm a monster??
-->['''Yes''']
-->'''Ben''': ..........I'm not a monster I swear I am a normal person like you...I thought that you were my friend...would you drown me???
-->['''Yes''']
-->'''Ben''': ....OH MY GOD YOU ARE ONE OF THAT CREEPYPASTA DEMONS TOO!!!! THERE'S JUST ONE THING THAT I CAN DO...I WILL KILL YOU DEMON!!
-->'''[Ben picked up a knife...Ben is acting strange, he's laughing...]'''
-->'''Ben''': I THOUGHT THAT YOU WERE MY FRIEND YOU YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LIED TO ME!!! [[WebVideo/BenDrowned YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT]]!!!
-->'''Ben''': YOU'VE MET WITH A TERRIBLE FATE HAVEN'T YOU!!
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* One possible game over sequence has Ben gain black bleeding eyes and stab the Player because [[DisproportionateRetribution they said they thought he was a monster]]. It's understandable to feel hurt if someone you thought was your friend said that about you, but proceeding to stab them whilist [[LaughingMad laughing maniacally]] wouldn't really help you look like less of a monster.:

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* One possible game over sequence has Ben gain [[BlackEyesOfCrazy black bleeding eyes eyes]] and stab the Player because [[DisproportionateRetribution they said they thought he was a monster]]. It's understandable to feel hurt if someone you thought was your friend said that about you, but proceeding to stab them whilist [[LaughingMad laughing maniacally]] wouldn't really help you look like less of a monster.:monster:
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-->'''Ben picked up a knife...Ben is acting strange, he's laughing...'''

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-->'''Ben -->'''[Ben picked up a knife...Ben is acting strange, he's laughing...''']'''
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* One possible game over sequence has Ben gain black bleeding eyes and stab the Player because [[DisproportionateRetribution they said they thought he was a monster]]. It's understandable to feel hurt if someone you thought was your friend said that about you, but proceeding to stab them whilist [[LaughingMad laughing maniacally]] wouldn't really help you look like less of a monster.:
-->'''Ben''': [''Player Name''], you like creepypastas...Do you think that I'm a monster??
-->['''Yes''']
-->'''Ben''': ..........I'm not a monster I swear I am a normal person like you...I thought that you were my friend...would you drown me???
-->['''Yes''']
-->'''Ben''': ....OH MY GOD YOU ARE ONE OF THAT CREEPYPASTA DEMONS TOO!!!! THERE'S JUST ONE THING THAT I CAN DO...I WILL KILL YOU DEMON!!
-->'''Ben picked up a knife...Ben is acting strange, he's laughing...'''
-->'''Ben''': I THOUGHT THAT YOU WERE MY FRIEND YOU YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LIED TO ME!!! [[WebVideo/BenDrowned YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT]]!!!
-->'''Ben''': YOU'VE MET WITH A TERRIBLE FATE HAVEN'T YOU!!
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* It probably goes without saying that the grammar killed any chance the game had at being scary. For others, the concept of the game itself made it not scary, because most [[{{Creepypasta}} creepypastas]] are notorious for not being of the highest quality.

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* It probably goes without saying that the grammar killed any chance the game had at being scary. For others, the concept of the game itself made it not scary, because most a lot of [[{{Creepypasta}} creepypastas]] are notorious have a reputation for not being of the highest quality.
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* It probably goes without saying that the grammar killed any chance the game had at being scary.

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* It probably goes without saying that the grammar killed any chance the game had at being scary.
scary. For others, the concept of the game itself made it not scary, because most [[{{Creepypasta}} creepypastas]] are notorious for not being of the highest quality.
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who jumpscares the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who jumpscares the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:through. Listen to the "[[https://youtu.be/_Qr2T1az1Ck?feature=shared Song of Unhealing]]" while you read for the full effect:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns jumpscares the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns jumpscares the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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Due to the [[SoBadItsGood nature of the game]], it provides many [[{{Narm}} unintentionally]] hilarious moments.

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Due to the [[SoBadItsGood nature of the game]], it provides many [[{{Narm}} unintentionally]] hilarious moments.[[note]]Any grammar mistakes made on this page are intentional.[[/note]]
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-->'''Sonic.exe''': Because [[CharacterCatchphrase I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!

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-->'''Sonic.exe''': Because BECAUSE [[CharacterCatchphrase I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!
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-->'''Sonic.exe''': [[{{Catchphrase}} BECAUSE I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!

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-->'''Sonic.exe''': [[{{Catchphrase}} BECAUSE Because [[CharacterCatchphrase I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!
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-->'''Sonic.exe''': [[Catchphrase BECAUSE I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!

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-->'''Sonic.exe''': [[Catchphrase [[{{Catchphrase}} BECAUSE I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!
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-->'''Sally''': What is happening here???? look he is a hedgehog and walks like a human and talks, I should be in a dream sonic can't be real just look at him!!!

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-->'''Sally''': [[ArbitrarySkepticism What is happening here???? look he is a hedgehog and walks like a human and talks, I should be in a dream sonic can't be real just look at him!!!him]]!!!



-->'''Sally''': [[ArbitrarySkepticism That can't be the truth your stupid!!! why we have never seen something about this in the news or on the internet this is probably a hologram of Sonic!!]]

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-->'''Sally''': [[ArbitrarySkepticism That can't be the truth your stupid!!! why we have never seen something about this in the news or on the internet this is probably a hologram of Sonic!!]]Sonic!!
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* The kids meeting fanfic/SonicExe (who was posing as the actual [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]]) in the mountains and Ben having a {{Fanboy}} moment is funny, yet also [[NarmCharm cute]] in a way:

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* The kids meeting fanfic/SonicExe Fanfic/SonicExe (who was posing as the actual [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]]) in the mountains and Ben having a {{Fanboy}} moment is funny, yet also [[NarmCharm cute]] in a way:
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* The kids meeting fanfic/SonicExe (who was posing as the actual [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]]) in the mountains and Ben having a {{Fanboy}} moment is funny, yet also [[NarmCharm cute]] in a way:
-->'''Sonic''': Hi guys!!!!what are you doing here it's pretty dangerous here!!!
-->'''Ben''': ha ha ha ha ha I can't believe it!!!! Sonic I am a big fan of you!!!! I played all your games since the [[Platform/SegaGenesis sega genesis]]!!!
-->'''Sally''': What is happening here???? look he is a hedgehog and walks like a human and talks, I should be in a dream sonic can't be real just look at him!!!
-->'''Ben''': c'mon Sally you believe in ghost and in creepy things I believe in my hero he is here with us and he's very cool!!!!
-->'''Sally''': I thought that your hero was [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda link]]...
-->'''Sonic''': ha ha ha ha that's nice guys!!! I acted in many games but I'm real like each character from ficticional series!!! that's cool isn't It???
-->'''Ben''':yes!!!! I always believed that all my heroes were real, guy I really need to meet the [[Franchise/SpiderMan spider-man]]!!!
-->'''Sally''': [[ArbitrarySkepticism That can't be the truth your stupid!!! why we have never seen something about this in the news or on the internet this is probably a hologram of Sonic!!]]
-->'''Sonic''': You're smart girl!!! I mean I am real but I can only be real in this town!! like the others!!!
-->'''Ben''': The others...like that creepy Tails Doll who scared me!!!
-->'''Sonic''': So you've meet the Tails Doll...this is sad but Tails was used to be my best friend in the old times!! and one day he was killed...
-->'''Sally''': And you're the one who killed him right?? Ben already showed me a game that you kill Tails...[[SuddenlyShouting YOU KILLED HIM...WHY DID YOU DO THAT????]]
-->'''Sonic.exe''': [[Catchphrase BECAUSE I AM GOD]]!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!
-->'''Ben''': OH MY GOD THE SONIC.EXE LET''S RUN RUN RUN!!!!
-->'''Sonic.exe''':YOU CAN''T RUN!!!!!!!!!

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* Sally threatening to kill Ben slowly and drink his blood because he suggested they kill the Tails Doll (who just attacked them not too long ago). It's such an over the top threat that she comes off as an edgy tryhard.
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to jumpscares the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The confrontation with Jeff and the Devil on day 6 is a complete narm-fest:

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* The confrontation with Jeff and the Devil on day 6 during the good ending is a complete narm-fest:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the reverse.[[note]]the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). WebVideo/BenDrowned[[/note]] When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on at the top of the screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them the characters were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] flat]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you walk go outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (which is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of the WebVideo/BenDrowned creepypasta). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (which (the Song of Healing reversed is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of the WebVideo/BenDrowned creepypasta).WebVideo/BenDrowned). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD". The [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (which is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of the WebVideo/BenDrowned creepypasta). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD". The YAD" and the [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (which is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of the WebVideo/BenDrowned creepypasta). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:
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* The bad ending equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD". The [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (which is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of the WebVideo/BenDrowned creepypasta). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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* The bad ending is equally hilarious. After waking up, the text on the top screen reading "DAY 6" briefly changes to "[[NumberOfTheBeast 666]] YAD". The [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Song of Healing]] begins playing in reverse (which is commonly referred to as the "[[FanNickname Song of Unhealing]]" and is a {{Leitmotif}} of the WebVideo/BenDrowned creepypasta). When you walk outside you find [[EverybodyDiesEnding everyone dead]], but majority of them were either [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] or [[WeHardlyKnewYe had little screentime before they died]] so it's hard for most players to care. Then you go to the lake and find Ben, who turns to the player with a poorly-edited blood splatter on his face. What follows is the highlight of the game. The overusage of DramaticEllipsis make the whole thing ridiculous to read through:

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