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* 'Devastatingly' intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever. He starts using the name all the time, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was. The fans have picked up the habit as well. [[/labelnote]]
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* 'Devastatingly' intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever. He starts using the name word all the time, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was. The fans have picked up the habit as well. [[/labelnote]]
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* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors, and then proceed to alter every instance of 'Machinist' in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references, to refer to the Engineer instead.[[/labelnote]]
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* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist 'the Machinist' several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors, and then proceed to alter every instance of 'Machinist' in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references, to refer to the Engineer 'the Engineer' instead.[[/labelnote]]
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* Fray the GodzillaThreshold. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[TheChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. So far, she is responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, and creating a plan which involved the creation of primordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for [[ThePlague the Red Plague]] as well).[[/labelnote]]
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* Fray the GodzillaThreshold. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[TheChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. So far, she is responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, and creating a plan which involved the creation of primordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for [[ThePlague the Red Plague]] as well).[[/labelnote]] People joked that if you see her, that probably means you're passing yet another GodzillaThreshold[[/labelnote]]
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* [=Helen × Cake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being a raised-from-scratch non-human experiment, has a value system that differentiates from the human one in many ways. One of the few things that humans and Helen both agree on being good is food. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
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* [=Helen × Cake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being a raised-from-scratch non-human experiment, has a value system that which differentiates from the human one in many ways. One of the few things that humans and Helen both agree on being good is food. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
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I think describing Helen as 'catlike' is quite misleading (and not in a fun way).
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* [=Helen × Cake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
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* [=Helen × Cake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than raised-from-scratch non-human experiment, has a human, loves few things, and food is at value system that differentiates from the top human one in many ways. One of the list.few things that humans and Helen both agree on being good is food. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
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* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]] After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyvern formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the Wordpress comments. [[/labelnote]]
* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or exceed's Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. It later turns out that Sy had *intentionally* disabled his libido in order to avoid dealing with Jamie's feelings towards him.[[/labelnote]]
* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or exceed's Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. It later turns out that Sy had *intentionally* disabled his libido in order to avoid dealing with Jamie's feelings towards him.[[/labelnote]]
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* Fans getting character's characters' names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]] After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyvern formula, his memory gets worse worse, and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the Wordpress comments. [[/labelnote]]
* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals orexceed's exceeds Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvernformula and sometimes formula. Sometimes he displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently frequently, and Sy seems to realize there's a joke joke, but doesn't get it. [[spoiler: It later turns out that Sy had *intentionally* ''intentionally'' disabled his libido in order to avoid dealing with Jamie's feelings towards him.[[/labelnote]]]][[/labelnote]]
* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or
* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern
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* Fray the GodzillaThreshold. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[TheChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. So far, she is responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, and making a plan which involved the creation of primordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for [[ThePlague the Red Plague]] as well).[[/labelnote]]
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* Fray the GodzillaThreshold. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[TheChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. So far, she is responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, and making creating a plan which involved the creation of primordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for [[ThePlague the Red Plague]] as well).[[/labelnote]]
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* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and for the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]]
* Goddamn Birds. [[labelnote:Explanation]]One of Sy and the Lambs' most difficult types of enemy to defeat are anything that flies because they can't easily use the terrain to trip them up and control them like they do to regular, earthbound creatures and people. The setting being what it is, this usually means some sort of aggressive, bird-based mad science experiment. It has happened often enough that Sy has noticed what a pain they are to him-- "Lords-suckling mother-cunting birds!" [[/labelnote]]
* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]]
* Goddamn Birds. [[labelnote:Explanation]]One of Sy and the Lambs' most difficult types of enemy to defeat are anything that flies because they can't easily use the terrain to trip them up and control them like they do to regular, earthbound creatures and people. The setting being what it is, this usually means some sort of aggressive, bird-based mad science experiment. It has happened often enough that Sy has noticed what a pain they are to him-- "Lords-suckling mother-cunting birds!" [[/labelnote]]
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* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and for the readers. Invoked Coined by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed thoseerrors errors, and altered then proceed to alter every instance of Machinist 'Machinist' in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references references, to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]]
instead.[[/labelnote]]
* Goddamn Birds. [[labelnote:Explanation]]One ofSy Sylvester's and the Lambs' most difficult types of enemy to defeat are anything that flies because they can't easily use the terrain to trip them up and control them like they do to regular, earthbound creatures and or people. The setting being what it is, this usually means some sort of aggressive, bird-based mad science experiment. It has happened often enough that Sy has noticed what a pain they are to him-- him: "Lords-suckling mother-cunting birds!" [[/labelnote]]
* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those
* Goddamn Birds. [[labelnote:Explanation]]One of
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* [[StarWars Mary threw the knife first.]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Mary threw the knife first.]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, beforehand, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
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* “Mary threw the knife first”. [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
** “When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''[[RussianReversal you]]''.”
** “When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''[[RussianReversal you]]''.”
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* “Mary [[StarWars Mary threw the knife first”. first.]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
**“When When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''[[RussianReversal you]]''.”
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* [=Sy × Misery=] [[labelnote:Explanation]] People, both in-story and among the readers, frequently noticed a self-destructive trend in Sylvester's behaviour: whatever he does, he ends up cold, dirty, wounded and in pain, loses pieces of his clothing (probably because he'd used them as impromptu bandages), and so on. Jamie, [[PhotographicMemory to whom it can't be more obvious]], speculated that Sy has an unconscious complusion to get as miserable as humanly possible.[[/labelnote]]
* Fray the [[GodzillaThreshold]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[theChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story so far, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. She is directly responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, making a plan which involved the creation of priomordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for the Red Plague as well).[[/labelnote]]
* "Mary threw the knife first" [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
** [[RussianReversal "When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''you''".]]
* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and to the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
* Fray the [[GodzillaThreshold]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[theChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story so far, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. She is directly responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, making a plan which involved the creation of priomordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for the Red Plague as well).[[/labelnote]]
* "Mary threw the knife first" [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
** [[RussianReversal "When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''you''".]]
* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and to the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
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* [=Sy × Misery=] Misery=]. [[labelnote:Explanation]] People, both in-story and among the readers, frequently noticed a self-destructive trend in Sylvester's behaviour: whatever he does, he ends up cold, dirty, wounded and in pain, loses pieces of his clothing (probably because he'd used them as impromptu bandages), and so on. Jamie, [[PhotographicMemory to whom it can't be more obvious]], speculated that Sy has an unconscious complusion to get as miserable as humanly possible.[[/labelnote]]
* Fray the[[GodzillaThreshold]] GodzillaThreshold. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[theChessmaster [[TheChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story so far, story, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. She So far, she is directly responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, and making a plan which involved the creation of priomordial primordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for [[ThePlague the Red Plague Plague]] as well).[[/labelnote]]
*"Mary “Mary threw the knife first" first”. [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
**[[RussianReversal "When “When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''you''".]]
''[[RussianReversal you]]''.”
* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe andto for the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
* Fray the
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* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and
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* [=Sy × Misery=] [[labelnote:Explanation]] People, both in-story and among the readers, frequently noticed a self-destructive trend in Sylvester's behaviour: whatever he does, he ends up cold, dirty, wounded and in pain, loses pieces of his clothing (probably because he'd used them as impromptu bandages), and so on. Jamie, [[PhotographicMemory to whom it can't be more obvious]], speculated that Sy has an unconscious complusion to get as miserable as humanly possible.[[/labelnote]]
*Fray the [[GodzillaThreshold]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[theChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story so far, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. She is directly responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, making a plan which involved the creation of priomordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for the Red Plague as well).[[/labelnote]]
*"Mary threw the knife first" [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
**[[RussianReversal "When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''you''".]]
*Fray the [[GodzillaThreshold]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] Fray, the most influential [[theChessmaster Chessmaster]] of the story so far, is prone to directly escalate the story's plot by her actions. She is directly responsible for starting the civil war, giving the Academy's biotechnological knowledge to the common people, making a plan which involved the creation of priomordial life (which makes her indirectly responsible for the Red Plague as well).[[/labelnote]]
*"Mary threw the knife first" [[labelnote:Explanation]] During Sylvester's defection, one step of his plan involved shooting an unsuspecting Mary in the knee when her back was turned. However, Mary noticed oddities in his behaviour beforehad, and was quick enough to turn around and throw a knife at him before he pressed the trigger.[[/labelnote]]
**[[RussianReversal "When you try to backstab Mary, Mary stabs ''you''".]]
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* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
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* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. It later turns out that Sy had *intentionally* disabled his libido in order to avoid dealing with Jamie's feelings towards him.[[/labelnote]]
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* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]]
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* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]]instead[[/labelnote]]
* Goddamn Birds. [[labelnote:Explanation]]One of Sy and the Lambs' most difficult types of enemy to defeat are anything that flies because they can't easily use the terrain to trip them up and control them like they do to regular, earthbound creatures and people. The setting being what it is, this usually means some sort of aggressive, bird-based mad science experiment. It has happened often enough that Sy has noticed what a pain they are to him-- "Lords-suckling mother-cunting birds!" [[/labelnote]]
* Goddamn Birds. [[labelnote:Explanation]]One of Sy and the Lambs' most difficult types of enemy to defeat are anything that flies because they can't easily use the terrain to trip them up and control them like they do to regular, earthbound creatures and people. The setting being what it is, this usually means some sort of aggressive, bird-based mad science experiment. It has happened often enough that Sy has noticed what a pain they are to him-- "Lords-suckling mother-cunting birds!" [[/labelnote]]
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* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually crush people to death. With her altered phsychology, she enjoys it. [[/labelnote]]
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* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually crush people to death. With her altered phsychology, psychology, she enjoys it. [[/labelnote]]
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* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]instead[[/labelnote]]
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* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and to the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
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* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and to the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]][[/labelnote]]
* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]
* The Engineer was called The Engineer [[labelnote:Explanation]]The Engineer was referred to as the Machinist several times during their first appearance. Wildbow then fixed those errors and altered every instance of Machinist in the comments going forward, including editing coded or indirect references to refer to the Engineer instead[[/labelnote]
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* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
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* What innuendo? [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and to the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
* Poor Duncan. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Duncan, a latter addition to the Lambs, found himself in a unique position of being {{the Chew Toy}} ''both'' In-Universe and to the readers. Invoked by Helen.[[/labelnote]]
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* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[lablenote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or exceed's Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[lablenote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[lablenote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
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* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[lablenote:Explanation]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or exceed's Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo?[[lablenote:Explanation]] [[labelnote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo?
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* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off. [[/labelnote]]
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* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off.crush people to death. With her altered phsychology, she enjoys it. [[/labelnote]]
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* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]] After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyvern formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the Wordpress comments. [[/labelnote]]
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* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]] After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyvern formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the Wordpress comments. [[/labelnote]]
* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[lablenote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or exceed's Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[lablenote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
* Everyone has a mancrush on Mauer. [[lablenote:Explanation]] Mauer (aka The Shepherd) has a talent for leadership and social manipulation that rivals or exceed's Sy's ability. Sy admires him so much that his commentary reads like someone praising their crush. [[/labelnote]]
* What innuendo? [[lablenote:Explanation]] Despite being extremely socially astute, Sy's psychological development has been somewhat altered by the Wyvern formula and sometimes displays an incredible obliviousness to obviously sexual situations and phrasings, especially when they're directed at him. Jamie makes jokes about this at Sy's expense frequently and Sy seems to realize there's a joke but doesn't get it. [[/labelnote]]
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* [=Helenxcake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
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* [=Helenxcake=] [=Helen × Cake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
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* *Devastatingly* intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was. [[/labelnote]]
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* *Devastatingly* 'Devastatingly' intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]] Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, ever. He starts using the name all the time, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was.was. The fans have picked up the habit as well. [[/labelnote]]
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As with [[Creator/Wildbow/ Wildbow's]] other works, Literature/Twig readers love memes, almost as much as Helen loves cake.
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As with [[Creator/Wildbow/ [[Creator/{{Wildbow}} Wildbow's]] other works, Literature/Twig Literature/{{Twig}} readers love memes, almost as much as Helen loves cake.
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* HelenxCake [[OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off as well.[[/labelnote]
* *Devastatingly* intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was.[[/lablenote]]
* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]]After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyrven formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the wordpress comments.
* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off as well.[[/labelnote]
* *Devastatingly* intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was.[[/lablenote]]
* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]]After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyrven formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the wordpress comments.
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* HelenxCake [[OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen, [=Helenxcake=] OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
* She just wants to give him a hug![[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen [[labelnote:Explanation]] Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off as well.[[/labelnote]
off. [[/labelnote]]
* *Devastatingly* intelligent.[[labelnote:Explanation]]Sy [[labelnote:Explanation]] Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was.[[/lablenote]]
was. [[/labelnote]]
* Fans getting character's names wrong.[[labelnote:Explanation]]After [[labelnote:Explanation]] After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyrven formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the wordpress comments. [[/labelnote]]
* She just wants to give him a hug!
* *Devastatingly* intelligent.
* Fans getting character's names wrong.
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As with [[Creator/Wildbow/ Wildbow's]] other works, Literature/Twig readers love memes, almost as much as Helen loves cake.
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* HelenxCake [[OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off as well.[[/labelnote]
* *Devastatingly* intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was.[[/lablenote]]
* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]]After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyrven formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the wordpress comments.
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* HelenxCake [[OTP! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen, being psychologically more like a cat than a human, loves few things, and food is at the top of the list. Cake is her favorite.[[/labelnote]]
* She just wants to give him a hug! [[labelnote:Explanation]]Helen frequently desires to hug people. A lot. To death. With her altered physiology, she can actually pull it off as well.[[/labelnote]
* *Devastatingly* intelligent. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Sy was described like this in a wanted poster, and thought it was the coolest thing ever, even if his shoddy memory means he has to keep asking Jamie which word it was.[[/lablenote]]
* Fans getting character's names wrong. [[labelnote:Explanation]]After Sy stops being able to get high-quality Wyrven formula, his memory gets worse and he constantly gets the names of the people he meets wrong. Readers then intentionally misname everyone in the wordpress comments.
