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* HowDadMetMom: Hiroshi's grandmother tells him this story when he asks her about a memorial tablet on the family altar, dedicated to a man he doesn't know. The man in question is Shinichi Kotani, his mother's first husband, who met Hiroshi's father in the army and saved his life. Shinichi was killed in action and Yoshio made it his sworn duty to bring his remains back home to his family. He and Shinichi's widow became very close friends, eventually falling in love.
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* HowDadMetMom: Hiroshi's grandmother tells him this story when he asks her about a memorial tablet on the family altar, dedicated to a man he doesn't know. The man in question is Shinichi Kotani, his mother's first husband, who met Hiroshi's father in the army and saved his life. Shinichi was killed in action and Yoshio made it his sworn duty to bring his remains back home to his family. He and Shinichi's widow became very close friends, eventually falling in love.bonded over their grief, and fell into something that somewhat resembled love.
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* AnAesop: [[spoiler: The past needs to be left in the past, and getting caught up in what you could have or should have done then will only prevent you from appreciating what you have in the present.]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: Hiroshi gives in to thirty years of pent up resentment and sadness by giving his father quite the verbal dressing down when he intercepts him at the station, detailing exactly how things are going to be when he's gone.]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: Hiroshi gives in to thirty years of pent up resentment and sadness by giving his father quite the verbal dressing down when he intercepts him at the station, detailing exactly how things are going to be when after he's gone.gone and just how selfish he is for abandoning his wife and children.]]
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* StrugglingSingleMother: [[spoiler: Kazue becomes this after Yoshio disappears from her and the children's lives, working herself to the bone to keep the family afloat, never remarrying, never complaining about her situation, to the point where her already dodgy health ends up drastically declining, and she dies at only 48 years old.]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: Hiroshi gives in to thirty years of pent up resentment and sadness by giving his father quite the verbal dressing down when he intercepts him at the station, detailing exactly how things are going to be when he's gone.]]
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* UmbrellaOfTogetherness: Hiroshi and Tomoko share an umbrella when he walks her home under the rain, which hints to the RomanceArc he has unintentionally set in motion.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's daughter Akiko looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's older daughter Ayako looks a lot like his mother Kazue, while his younger daughter Akiko looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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* OrWasItADream: When Hiroshi at last gets back to 1998, he checks his watch to realize that it has only been a couple of minutes since he collapsed, despite the fact that [[YearInsideHourOutside five months went by]] during his involuntary time travel; this leads him to wonder if he just fell asleep. [[spoiler: Daisuke's gift at the end, which is addressed to "the time traveller", hints that it may not have all been a dream.]]
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* TheAlcoholic: In his forties, Hiroshi is frequently derided by his family for being a drunk, and being hungover is actually what causes him to board the wrong train.
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* TheAlcoholic: In his forties, Hiroshi is frequently derided by his family for being a drunk, and being hungover is actually what causes him to board the wrong train. It is hinted at that Hiroshi drinks to cope with the grief of his mother's untimely death, and his father's disappearance.
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* TheAlcoholic: In his forties, Hiroshi is frequently derided by his family as being a drunk, and being hungover is actually what causes him to board the wrong train.
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* TheAlcoholic: In his forties, Hiroshi is frequently derided by his family as for being a drunk, and being hungover is actually what causes him to board the wrong train.
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* MissedHimByThatMuch: [[spoiler: Hiroshi gets his train to Tokyo but bumps into an old man. He absent-mindedly apologizes before it hits him that the old man looks quite a bit like his father. The train door closes before he can do anything about it, however.]]
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* MissedHimByThatMuch: [[spoiler: Hiroshi gets accidentally bumps shoulders with an old man as he's boarding his train to Tokyo but bumps into an old man.Tokyo. He absent-mindedly apologizes before it hits him that the old man looks quite a bit like his father. The train door closes before he can do anything about it, however.however, and he can only watch his father disappear again as the train rolls out of the station.]]
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* LikesOlderWomen: Good grief, Daisuke. He takes seemingly no notice of girls his own age, but is quick to comment on beautiful older women like Kazue or Tamiko, and he even takes his mother's employee out on a "date". He seems to think he and Hiroshi have this in common, which [[TrappedInThePast technically isn't inaccurate]].
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* LikesOlderWomen: Good grief, Daisuke. He takes seemingly no notice of girls his own age, but is quick to comment on beautiful older women like Kazue or Tamiko, and he even takes his mother's employee barmaid out on a "date". He seems to think he and Hiroshi have this in common, which [[TrappedInThePast technically isn't inaccurate]].
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* TimeTravelRomance: Meshed together with AgeDownRomance. Hiroshi travels back to his teenage years and accidentally attracts the interest of Tomoko Nagase, a beautiful and studious girl who in his original timeline had never even spoken to him. Tomoko soon falls for him, and while Hiroshi doesn't properly reciprocate, he doesn't dissuade her from pursuing him, either. That said, he is also quite attracted to Mrs Shimada's pretty employee, who of course thinks he's just a kid and pays him no mind.
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* TimeTravelRomance: Meshed together with AgeDownRomance. Hiroshi travels back to his teenage years and accidentally attracts the interest of Tomoko Nagase, a beautiful and studious girl who in his original timeline had never even spoken to him. Tomoko soon falls for him, and while Hiroshi doesn't properly reciprocate, he doesn't dissuade her from pursuing him, either. That said, he is also quite attracted to Mrs Shimada's pretty employee, barmaid, who of course thinks he's just a kid and pays him no mind.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Hiroshi's newfound interest in his studies and particular ease with foreign languages sparks the interest of Tomoko, the prettiest girl in his year, who is no slouch in the language department herself.
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** Tomoko eventually married a dimplomat, and now lives abroad.
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** Tomoko eventually married a dimplomat, diplomat, and now lives abroad.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's daughter Ayako looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's daughter Ayako Akiko looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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** Masao was tragically killed in a motorcycle accident during his first year of college.
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** Masao was tragically killed in a motorcycle accident during his first year of college.when he was 16.
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* PrecociousCrush: Little Kyoko has an instant one on Daisuke, who is eight years older than she is.
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* PrecociousCrush: Little Kyoko has an instant one on Daisuke, who is eight three years older than she is.
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** Hiroshi's little sister Kyoko went to business school before joining a insurance firm in Tottori, where she eventually met her future husband. She's now a 45 year old housewife with two children.
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** Hiroshi's little sister Kyoko went to business school before joining a insurance firm in Tottori, where she eventually met her future husband. She's now a 45 year old housewife with two three children.
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* WhenYouComingHomeDad: Present-day Hiroshi uses work to distance himself from his family in spite of himself. His wife Yuko points this out to him and he brushes it off. [[HeelRealization He grows out of it.]]
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* WhenYouComingHomeDad: Present-day Hiroshi uses work to distance himself from his family in spite of himself. His wife Yuko points this out to him and he brushes it off. [[HeelRealization He grows out of it.]]
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: [[ZigZaggedTrope Zig-zagged]] in that Hiroshi gives the reader a running commentary of what happened to his family and old schoolfriends in the original timeline, which does count as an epilogue on ''their'' side of the story.
** Hiroshi's little sister Kyoko went to business school before joining a insurance firm in Tottori, where she eventually met her future husband. She's now a 45 year old housewife with two children.
** Tomoko eventually married a dimplomat, and now lives abroad.
** Takashi turned his love of manga into a profession, and his works are enjoyed by schoolchildren all over Japan.
** Masao was tragically killed in a motorcycle accident during his first year of college.
** [[spoiler: Daisuke became a respected novelist under the pen name Daizaburo Horie.]]
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: [[ZigZaggedTrope Zig-zagged]] in that Hiroshi gives the reader a running commentary of what happened to his family and old schoolfriends in the original timeline, which does count as an epilogue on ''their'' side of the story.
** Hiroshi's little sister Kyoko went to business school before joining a insurance firm in Tottori, where she eventually met her future husband. She's now a 45 year old housewife with two children.
** Tomoko eventually married a dimplomat, and now lives abroad.
** Takashi turned his love of manga into a profession, and his works are enjoyed by schoolchildren all over Japan.
** Masao was tragically killed in a motorcycle accident during his first year of college.
** [[spoiler: Daisuke became a respected novelist under the pen name Daizaburo Horie.]]
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* PrecociousCrush: Little Kyoko has an instant one on Daisuke, who is eight years older than she is.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: The more time Hiroshi spends in 1963, the more he acts and thinks like a teenage boy. He realizes this and worries that he might forget his adult life altogether.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: The more time Hiroshi spends in 1963, the more he acts and thinks like a teenage boy. He realizes this and worries that he might forget his adult life altogether.
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* MissedHimByThatMuch: [[spoiler: Hiroshi gets his train to Tokyo but bumps into an old man. He absent-mindedly apologizes before it hits him that the old man looks quite a bit like his father. The train door closes before he can do anything about it, however.]]
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* WhenAreYouComingHomeDad: Present-day Hiroshi uses work to distance himself from his family in spite of himself. His wife Yuko points this out to him and he brushes it off. [[HeelRealization He grows out of it.]]
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* WhenAreYouComingHomeDad: WhenYouComingHomeDad: Present-day Hiroshi uses work to distance himself from his family in spite of himself. His wife Yuko points this out to him and he brushes it off. [[HeelRealization He grows out of it.]]
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* WarIsHell: Hiroshi's father Yoshio is a UsefulNotes/WorldWarII vet and went through hell during Japan's Burma campaign, including a bout of malaria that would have killed him had it not been for Shinichi.
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* WarIsHell: Hiroshi's father Yoshio is a UsefulNotes/WorldWarII vet and went through hell during Japan's Burma campaign, including a bout of malaria that would have killed him had it not been for Shinichi.Shinichi.
* WhenAreYouComingHomeDad: Present-day Hiroshi uses work to distance himself from his family in spite of himself. His wife Yuko points this out to him and he brushes it off. [[HeelRealization He grows out of it.]]
* WhenAreYouComingHomeDad: Present-day Hiroshi uses work to distance himself from his family in spite of himself. His wife Yuko points this out to him and he brushes it off. [[HeelRealization He grows out of it.]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's daughter Akiko looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's daughter Akiko Ayako looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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* SoreLoser: [[JerkJock Toru Onishi]] doesn't take kindly to Hiroshi beating him at endurance in P.E and later taunts him when he catches wind that Hiroshi is considering getting into sports.
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* SoreLoser: [[JerkJock Toru Onishi]] doesn't take kindly to Hiroshi beating him at endurance in P.E a foot race and later taunts him when he catches wind that Hiroshi is considering getting into sports.
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* SoreLoser: [[JerkJock Toru Onishi]] doesn't take kindly to Hiroshi overtaking him in a track and later taunts him when he catches wind that Hiroshi is considering getting into sports.
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* SoreLoser: [[JerkJock Toru Onishi]] doesn't take kindly to Hiroshi overtaking beating him at endurance in a track P.E and later taunts him when he catches wind that Hiroshi is considering getting into sports.
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* SoreLoser: [[JerkJock Toru Onishi]] doesn't take kindly to Hiroshi overtaking him in a track and later taunts him when he catches wind that Hiroshi is considering getting into sports.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Hiroshi's daughter Akiko looks quite a bit like his younger sister Kyoko, even down to the haircut.
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* ButterflyOfDeathAndRebirth: A butterfly can be seen the first time Hiroshi loses consciousness in the cemetary, and a second time when he's sent back to 1998.
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** When he remembers [[BusCrash what happened]] to his old friend Masao just as he's getting reacquainted with him.
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* MirrorReveal: Hiroshi doesn't fully realize what's happened to him until he spots his reflection in a shop window and screams.