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** [[spoiler:Katakuri's mouth aside from his massive [[ScaryTeeth fangs]] has two asymmetrical stitches on his cheeks. Katakuri [[BerserkButton ''really'']] doesn't take kindly to his mouth being seen or talked about. As he kills the three chefs who see his face.]]
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** [[spoiler:Katakuri's [[spoiler:Katakuri]]'s mouth aside from his massive [[ScaryTeeth fangs]] has two asymmetrical stitches on his cheeks. Katakuri He [[BerserkButton ''really'']] doesn't take kindly to his mouth being seen or talked about. As he kills the about, killing three chefs who see his face.]]face. The stitches have been there since childhood, and are implied to be from overstuffing his mouth with food so badly [[TooDumbToLive he ripped his cheeks open]].
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This almost feels like Schmuck Bait, encouraging the reader to look it up; it's best not to have such a note at all and just describe what happened.
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* The body of Elizabeth Short[[note]]better known as "The Black Dahlia"[[/note]] was found with a Glasgow Grin carved into her face. (Don't go looking for pictures unless you have a strong stomach; it is disturbingly easy to find ''incredibly'' gruesome crime scene photos of Short.)
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* The body of Elizabeth Short[[note]]better known as "The Black Dahlia"[[/note]] was found with a Glasgow Grin carved into her face. (Don't go looking for pictures unless you have a strong stomach; it is disturbingly easy to find ''incredibly'' gruesome crime scene photos of Short.)
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* ''anfic/{{DNMC}}'': Rabca Tiburon has one that makes his [[LittleBitBeastly shark]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth]] that much more prominent. This also serves to emphasize how he's PracticallyJoker.
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* ''anfic/{{DNMC}}'': ''Fanfic/{{DNMC}}'': Rabca Tiburon has one that makes his [[LittleBitBeastly shark]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth]] that much more prominent. This also serves to emphasize how he's PracticallyJoker.
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* Fanfic/{{DNMC}}: Rabca Tiburon has one that makes his [[LittleBitBeastly shark]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth]] that much more prominent. This also serves to emphasize how he's PracticallyJoker.
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* Fanfic/{{DNMC}}: ''anfic/{{DNMC}}'': Rabca Tiburon has one that makes his [[LittleBitBeastly shark]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth]] that much more prominent. This also serves to emphasize how he's PracticallyJoker.
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* Fanfic/{{DNMC}}: Rabca Tiburon has one that makes his [[LittleBitBeastly shark]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth]] that much more prominent. This also serves to emphasize how he's PracticallyJoker.
