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*** On the ''Birthright'' side of things, there's Hayato's daughter Rhajat, a Dark Mage fond of curses and actively stalks the Avatar (regardless of gender, unless she's her mother). She's said ([[{{Bowdlerize}} in the American version anyway]]) to have the darkest thoughts. If you noticed the similarities to Tharja, that's not a coincidence. [[spoiler: Rhajat and Tharja are hinted to be part of the same reincarnation cycle, though who reincarnates into who is up for debate.]] Like Noire, though, she only qualifies if she has a dark-haired mother, as her hair color is determined by her mother. [[spoiler: And yes, Tharja's hair color is an option, but only on the ''Revelations'' route where Nyx can marry Hayato.]] Her 'default' appearance (and the one she uses in ''VideoGame/FireEmblemHeroes'') also has dark hair.
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*** On the ''Birthright'' side of things, there's Hayato's daughter Rhajat, a Dark Mage fond of curses and actively stalks the Avatar (regardless of gender, unless she's her mother). She's said ([[{{Bowdlerize}} in the American version anyway]]) to have the darkest thoughts. If you noticed the similarities to Tharja, that's not a coincidence. [[spoiler: Rhajat and Tharja are hinted to be part of the same reincarnation cycle, though who reincarnates into who is up for debate.]] Like Noire, though, she only qualifies if she has a dark-haired mother, as her hair color is determined by her mother. [[spoiler: And yes, Tharja's hair color is an option, but only on the ''Revelations'' ''Revelation'' route where Nyx can marry Hayato.]] Her 'default' appearance (and the one she uses in ''VideoGame/FireEmblemHeroes'') also has dark hair.
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* ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' has pure white skin and black hair. Combined with his unnaturally wide open eyes, lack of a nose, and GlasgowGrin, he is very creepy. He's also a serial killer.
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* ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' ''DerivativeWorks/JeffTheKiller'' has pure white skin and black hair. Combined with his unnaturally wide open eyes, lack of a nose, and GlasgowGrin, he is very creepy. He's also a serial killer.
