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* BerserkButton: Matsuo has a few, most notably when someone stares at him. Fu as well, when people ignore her especially when she gives direct orders.
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* BerserkButton: Matsuo has a few, most notably when someone stares at him. Fu as well, when people ignore her especially when she gives direct orders. Ōkibo pushes one of Matsuo's newfound ones when he threatens Fu.
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* [[spoiler: BackStab]]
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: In a prison full of juvenile criminals with crimes ranging from theft to assault, it's hard to really cheer for anyone.
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* [[spoiler: KarmicDeath]]: Sasoku kills [[spoiler: Ōkibo in the same [[NeckSnap manner that he killed Takeshi]]]]
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Granted [[spoiler: Ōkibo]] [[KarmicDeath deserved it]]...but it is a little much.
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* BreakTheCutie: Happens to [[spoiler: Sasoku]] and is starting to happen to [[spoiler: Fu]]
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*OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Fu's being quiet and serious...yeah, that's definitely not good.
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* TranquilFury: Fu has been this since the end of chapter 4.
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*BreakTheHaughty: The entire story thus far has served to do this to Matsuo. He enters in confident that his plans will work and he's smarter than everyone inside, then promptly is shown how unprepared he is.
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*ArchEnemy: Ōkibo and the Jocks are this to the Emo group.
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*[[spoiler: NeckLift / NeckSnap: The way that Ōkibo kills Takeshi]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: The Emo gang dress primarily, but their leader and members thus far are actually fairly nice people. Netamu, [[{{Jerkass}} however]]...
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* DarkIsNotEvil: The Emo gang dress primarily, primarily in black, but their leader and members thus far are actually fairly nice people. Netamu, [[{{Jerkass}} however]]...
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* WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter:WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter: Matsuo wields the wooden bokken that his older brother used in his kendo classes. Serves as a TearJerker of sorts.
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*[[ChoiceOfTwoWeapons Choice of Many Weapons]]: Apparently, Matsuo's packed for a war.
*InnocentBlueEyes: Fu has these.
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* TheSilentBob: HeizenHeizen
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*CrazyPrepared: Deconstructed and lampshaded by Fu. Though Matsuo is incredibly smart and a great thinker, his lack of knowledge about the specifics of The Facility cause most of the confidence he has in his plans to falter and his plans to fail.
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The page is under construction.
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* HeroesLoveDogs
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*[[spoiler: PreciousPuppy: Matsuo finds one after Netamu kills its parents.]]
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*AntiHero: Everyone inside The Facility, or at least the Emo, are.
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* Jerkass: {{Jerkass}}: Netamu.
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* Bond One-Liner: After [[spoiler: beating Netamu in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way Netamu scarred his earlier that day]], Matsuo issues this one.
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*[[BigDamnHeroes Big Damn Hero]]: Fu arrives just in time to save Matsuo from the Jock patrollers.
*Bond One-Liner: BondOneLiner: After beating [[spoiler: beating Netamu Netamu]] in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way [[spoiler: Netamu scarred his earlier that day]], Matsuo issues this one.
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*GreyAndGrayMorality: In a prison full of juvenile criminals with crimes ranging from theft to assault, it's hard to really cheer for anyone.
*Jerkass: Netamu.
*Jerkass: Netamu.
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* Bond One-Liner: After [[spoiler: beating Netamu in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way Netamu scarred his earlier that day]], he issues this one.
--> I turn my eyes to [[spoiler: Netamu]], who's finally getting up. I walk over to him and drop his metal pipe at his feet and pick up the bokken. I look him in the face and smirk. "An eye for an eye."
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*BerserkButton: Matsuo has a few, most notably when someone stares at him. Fu as well, when people ignore her especially when she gives direct orders.
* Bond One-Liner: After [[spoiler: beating Netamu in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way Netamu scarred his earlier that day]],he Matsuo issues this one.
--> I turn my eyes to [[spoiler: Netamu]], who's finally getting up. I walk over to him and drop his metal pipe at his feet and pick up the bokken. I look him in the face and smirk. "An eye for an eye.""
*Cloudcuckoolander: Fu comes off as one at times.
*CurbStompBattle: The first time Matsuo and Netamu square off, Netamu sweeps him easily and [[spoiler: cuts him above his left eye]].
*DarkIsNotEvil: The Emo gang dress primarily, but their leader and members thus far are actually fairly nice people. Netamu, [[{{Jerkass}} however]]...
* TheSilentBob: Heizen
* Bond One-Liner: After [[spoiler: beating Netamu in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way Netamu scarred his earlier that day]],
--> I turn my eyes to [[spoiler: Netamu]], who's finally getting up. I walk over to him and drop his metal pipe at his feet and pick up the bokken. I look him in the face and smirk. "An eye for an eye.
*Cloudcuckoolander: Fu comes off as one at times.
*CurbStompBattle: The first time Matsuo and Netamu square off, Netamu sweeps him easily and [[spoiler: cuts him above his left eye]].
*DarkIsNotEvil: The Emo gang dress primarily, but their leader and members thus far are actually fairly nice people. Netamu, [[{{Jerkass}} however]]...
* TheSilentBob: Heizen
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* BeneathTheMask: Fu deduces that Matsuo is a sweet and caring person, despite his [[TheCynic cynical]]
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* BeneathTheMask: Fu deduces that Matsuo is a sweet and caring person, despite his [[TheCynic cynical]]cynical]] and [[InsufferableGenius genius planner]] attitude after he shows compassion to [[spoiler: starving, white puppy]]
* Bond One-Liner: After [[spoiler: beating Netamu in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way Netamu scarred his earlier that day]], he issues this one.
--> I turn my eyes to [[spoiler: Netamu]], who's finally getting up. I walk over to him and drop his metal pipe at his feet and pick up the bokken. I look him in the face and smirk. "An eye for an eye."
* Bond One-Liner: After [[spoiler: beating Netamu in a combat test by scarring his eye the same way Netamu scarred his earlier that day]], he issues this one.
--> I turn my eyes to [[spoiler: Netamu]], who's finally getting up. I walk over to him and drop his metal pipe at his feet and pick up the bokken. I look him in the face and smirk. "An eye for an eye."
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* AAfraidOfBlood: Matsuo, big time. However, [[AgeAppropriateAngst seeing your older brother impaled on a fence when you were four]] might do that to you.
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* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].firearms]].
* BeneathTheMask: Fu deduces that Matsuo is a sweet and caring person, despite his [[TheCynic cynical]]
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''[[http://fantasticmrmacthinks.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-facility.html The Facility]]'' is an ongoing WebSerialNovel written by [[Tropers/FringeBenefits LykaiosTheSpartan]] under an alternative pseudonym, Fantastic Mr. Mac The chapters are uploaded every other day.
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''[[http://fantasticmrmacthinks.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-facility.html The Facility]]'' is an ongoing WebSerialNovel written by [[Tropers/FringeBenefits LykaiosTheSpartan]] under an alternative pseudonym, a young blogger called Fantastic Mr. Mac Mac. The chapters are uploaded every other day.
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* ActionGirl: Fu...without a doubt.
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* {{Badass}}: Netamu is heralded as the Emo's best fighter and Matsuo has some shades of this trope but the award really goes to Fu. Not only has she scarred the BigBad, but she beats three of his [[BadassArmy patrollers]] that are practically the most skilled fighters in a group and twice her size, but does this in her ''first'' appearance.
* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].
!!This work contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Fu...without a doubt.
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* {{Badass}}: Netamu is heralded as the Emo's best fighter and Matsuo has some shades of this trope but the award really goes to Fu. Not only has she scarred the BigBad, but she beats three of his [[BadassArmy patrollers]] that are practically the most skilled fighters in a group and twice her size, but does this in her ''first'' appearance.
* BadFuture / CrapsackWorld: It is implied that this hellhole of a world is one. Children committing "crimes" are forced to be placed in this [[HellholePrison free roaming juvenile detention center where the only things that are illegal are escape and firearms]].
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The story follows a sixteen year old boy named Matsuo Kōdaina who after he [[DisproportionateRetribution beats a person nearly to death just for talking too much in school]] is sent to
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''[[http://fantasticmrmacthinks.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-facility.html The Facility'' Facility]]'' is an ongoing WebSerialNovel written by blogger [[Tropers/FringeBenefits LykaiosTheSpartan]] under an alternative pseudonym, Fantastic Mr. Mac. Mac The chapters are uploaded every other day.
The story follows a sixteen year old boy named Matsuo Kōdaina who after he [[DisproportionateRetribution beats a person nearly to death just for talking too much in school]] is senttoto an abandoned high school converted into a maximum security prison for juveniles known simply as The Facility. Inside, Matsuo must survive for an undetermined amount of time before being released. Obviously, this is a real CrapsackWorld to live in.
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