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* NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist: Corien does genuinely want to restore his brethern, the angels, to flesh and blood. However, the reason he's doing this isn't entirely selfless: he views humanity as an inferior species and yet is also jealous of their power over the elementals- something that the ancient angels cannot even claim. As such, he'll happily kill all humans to make room for the angels. It's also suggested, if not outright stated, that he's angry with God and will move heaven and earth to go against Him in any way he can.

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* NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist: Corien does genuinely want to restore his brethern, brethren, the angels, to flesh and blood. However, the reason he's doing this isn't entirely selfless: he views humanity as an inferior species and yet is also jealous of their power over the elementals- something that the ancient angels cannot even claim. As such, he'll happily kill all humans to make room for the angels. It's also suggested, if not outright stated, that he's angry with God and will move heaven and earth to go against Him in any way he can.


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* OmnicidalManiac: Corien is an exceptionally strong angel who holds a deep hatred for the Saints, mainly due to a deception that led to him and his fellow angels being ripped of their physicality. This hatred extends to ''all'' of humankind, and he has taken it upon himself to use kill every last one of them.


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* TranslationConvention: There are several languages mentioned throughout the series with many characters stated to be speaking a specific one; one character may be speaking Celdarian at first before switching to Common, for instance. Everything the characters say, regardless of which language they're speaking, is completely legible to the reader.


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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: In ''Kingsbane'', after Eliana is abducted by Harkan, Remy insists on going with Simon to find her. Simon mentions a plan, but it isn't stated what this plan is. Whatever it was succeeds for not only does Simon find Eliana, he manages to get her to use her powers in a constructive way for the first time. Later in that same novel, Eliana and a few members of Red Crown discuss ways in which to defeat the Undying Empire. The one plan that gets any detail is Simon's suggestion of going back in time to convince Rielle to kill Corien, the angel who created the Empire centuries ago. Naturally, this plan fails.


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* WhatTheHellHero: Eliana goes to an angelic commander, wanting to exchange the information she gathered about a nearby Red Crown hangout for her family's safety. The next morning, Red Crown ambushes the facility that Eliana went to, killing every prisoner they can find. Simon informs Eliana that the ambush they originally planned would've been to rescue those very same prisoners, but Red Crown can't let anyone who's seen Eliana live. Simon says all of this while the sound of shotguns go off in the background, forcing her to listen as each prisoner is killed.
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* UnwantedRescue: After the Queen of Celdaria tumbles off a balcony and dies, Rielle manages to resurrect her. Upon being revived, Queen Genoveve weeps, wishing she had been left for dead so she could see her recently deceased husband again.

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* UnwantedRescue: After the Queen of Celdaria tumbles off a balcony and dies, Rielle manages to resurrect her. Upon being revived, Queen Genoveve weeps, wishing she had been left for dead so she could see her recently deceased husband again. %%stopped here



* VoidBetweenTheWorlds: The Deep is an empty pocket of nothing that exists between the world of Avitas and all other dimensions. Only the truly powerful can enter it and keep their physicality, something even the angels couldn't achieve.
* WasOnceAMan: Fidelia's crawlers were once women who have been mutated through experiments so as in to create monstrous soldiers for the Empire.

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* VoidBetweenTheWorlds: The Deep is an empty pocket of nothing darkness, made of raw empirium, that exists between the world of Avitas and all other dimensions.worlds. Only the truly powerful can enter it and keep their physicality, something even the angels couldn't achieve.
* WasOnceAMan: Fidelia's crawlers were once women who have been were mutated through experiments so as in to create monstrous soldiers for the Empire.



** Each element is closely associated with a particular weapon or armory: windsingers have arrows, sunspinners have swords, earthshakers use staffs, etc. Most elementals tend to create their castings in the shape of those weapons, though alternative castings can be made.

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** Each element is closely associated with a particular weapon or armory: windsingers have arrows, sunspinners have swords, earthshakers use staffs, etc. Most elementals tend to create their castings in the shape of those weapons, though alternative castings can be made.aren't unheard of.



* WellIntentionedExtremist: In the Prophet's mind, the deaths of thousands of people pale in comparison to bringing an end Corien and, by extension, the Undying Empire.

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: In the Prophet's mind, the deaths of thousands of people pale in comparison to bringing an end to Corien and, by extension, the Undying Empire.



--> "He had retrieved his gun and was shouting something at the angels still on the shore. Not in Venteran, nor in the common tongue, but in one of the angelic languages. [...] Lissar. He was speaking Lissar. [[spoiler:And the angels on the shore were listening to him]]."
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: ''Lightbringer'''s epilogue [[spoiler:jumps forward five years after Corien's defeat and Rielle's death. Celdaria is still picking up the pieces from its battle with the angels. An alliance between wraiths and humans have been established. Audric adores his daughter, Eliana, and is taking pains to teach her that her powers are neither inherently evil nor inherently good. Ilmaire's stopped running away from his responsibility of being king, and now rules Borsvall alongside his husband, Leevi]].
* WildChild: Simon turns into a feral child after spending a year on the desolate mountain he was transported to. He quickly learns how to kill and skin animals in order to feed himself.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: At twelve-years-old, Obritsa is able to perfectly act the part of the "stoic orphan turned sudden queen" while secretly being an agent for the human revolution. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] since she's been raised practically since birth for this role.
* WorstWeddingEver: Soon after his coronation, Audric marries Rielle. Everything seems to be going perfectly, and Rielle can't imagine being any happier. Then Corien takes over Ludivine's mind and reveals to the whole assembly exactly what happened to the former king, Audric's father. The wedding quickly devolves into chaos, coming to a head when Audric takes Rielle aside to question her about the lies she's told.
* WouldHurtAChild: Corien kidnaps elemental children and forces them to be his soldiers.
* WouldntHurtAChild: The main reason Corien is stealing elemental children to use them as soldiers is specifically to weaponize this ideology: he knows that many people would balk at killing a child which gives his army an advantage on the battlefield.
* WritersCannotDoMath: Remy's age and the subsequent age gap between him and Eliana changes a couple times throughout the series. The first flashback into Eliana's past we get in ''Furyborn'' says she made her first kill when she was twelve and Remy was five, meaning there should be an eight year age gap. However, another flashback in the same novel explains she was ten when her father disappeared and the text states Remy was an infant when that happened, in other words less than a year old, making their age gap about ten years.

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--> "He had retrieved his gun and was shouting something at the angels still on the shore. Not in Venteran, nor in the common tongue, but in one of the angelic languages. [...] Lissar. He was speaking Lissar. [[spoiler:And the angels on the shore were listening to him]]."
him.]]"
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: ''Lightbringer'''s epilogue [[spoiler:jumps forward five years after Corien's defeat and Rielle's death. Celdaria is still picking up the pieces from its battle with the angels. An alliance between wraiths and humans have been established. Audric adores his daughter, Eliana, and is taking pains to teach her that her powers are neither inherently evil nor inherently good. Ilmaire's stopped running away from his responsibility of being king, responsibilities, and now rules Borsvall alongside his husband, Leevi]].
* WildChild: Simon turns into a feral child after spending a year on the desolate mountain he was transported to. He quickly learns how to kill and skin animals in order to feed himself.
himself. By the time Corien finds him, Simon is so starved for any kind of interaction that he doesn't mind much that the man giving it is the leader of the angels.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: At twelve-years-old, Obritsa is able to perfectly act the part role of the "stoic orphan turned sudden suddenly picked to be queen" while secretly being an agent for the human revolution. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] since she's been raised practically since birth for this role.
to play that part without giving anything away.
* WorstWeddingEver: Soon after his coronation, Audric marries Rielle.and Rielle host a huge wedding. Everything seems to be going perfectly, and Rielle can't imagine being any happier. Then Corien takes over Ludivine's mind and reveals to the whole assembly exactly what happened to the that their former king, Audric's father. king died due to Rielle's actions. The wedding quickly devolves into chaos, coming to a head when Audric takes Rielle aside to question her about the all lies she's told.
told/been forced to keep.
* WouldHurtAChild: Corien kidnaps elemental children and forces them their powers to be his soldiers.
emerge prematurely. He then has these children forge castings, both for themselves and for the beasts he's crafted in order to better utilize their elemental abilities during battle.
* WouldntHurtAChild: The main reason Corien is stealing elemental children to use them as soldiers is specifically to weaponize this ideology: he knows that many people would balk at killing a child which gives some of his army an advantage on the battlefield.
* WritersCannotDoMath: Remy's age and the subsequent age gap between him and Eliana changes a couple times throughout the series. The first flashback into Eliana's past we get in ''Furyborn'' says she made her first kill when she was twelve and Remy was five, meaning there should be an eight year age gap. which means they're seven years apart in age. However, another flashback in the same novel explains she was ten when her father disappeared and the text states Remy was an infant infant- a baby, in other words- when that happened, in other words less than a year old, making which makes their age gap about ten years.
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* LiarRevealed: During the reception for Rielle's wedding, Corien shows everyone a vision that exposes the truth behind their previous king's death as well as his commander's: afraid that Corien would kill them, Rielle unleashed a ton of power that did end up burning Corien, but also killed the king and his commander. When Audric found her shortly thereafter, she lied to him, too scared of losing him and his love to tell him the truth. The effect this reveal has on Audric momentarily turns him against Rielle, leading the two to argue which culminates in Rielle running away from Baingarde to seek out Corien.


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* NotSoDifferentRemark: After capturing Obritsa and torturing Artem, Corien states that he and Obritsa are both motivated by the love they each have for their people.
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* MedievalEuropeanFantasy: The setting of the Second Age includes kingdoms ruled by some form of monarchy, swords and their various accoutrements for weapons, and most- if not everybody- seem to be heavily rebellious. By the time of the Third Age, some technological advancements regarding weaponry have been invented and clothes tend to more resemble 20th century clothing.
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* IHaveManyNames:
** Corien was Kalmaroth before being banished to the Deep along with his kin. After escaping, he renamed himself to Corien and began building an empire with him on top. By the Third Age, he's only known as the Undying Emperor to all humans and most- if not all- of his underlings.
** When they first contact Eliana, the Prophet states that they have many names before giving her their more well known moniker.


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* KissingCousins: Double subverted with Audric and Ludivine, who are a pair of engaged cousins at the beginning of the series. The engagement was arranged by their parents as part of a political move, and Audric is in love with Rielle, not Ludivine. That said, Ludivine states in ''Kingsbane'' that she'd have no issue having a threesome with Audric and Rielle, something that Audric agrees with.


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* MagicalSensoryEffect: Each type of elemental magic has its own distinct scent; firebrand magic smells like smoke, windsinger magic smells like alpine, etc.
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%% TheirFirstTime: After a heart-to-heart discussion about each of their powers, Rielle and Audric begin having sex, but are interupted before they get very far.

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%% * TheirFirstTime: After a heart-to-heart discussion about each of their powers, Three days before the fire trial, Audric sneaks into Rielle's rooms to discuss his personal fears as to what becoming Sun Queen would mean to them both. The conversation culminates with Rielle and Audric begin having sex, but are interupted before they get very far. making love on her bed.
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%% TheirFirstTime: After a heart-to-heart discussion about each of their powers, Rielle and Audric begin having sex, but are interupted before they get very far.


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* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The trilogy follows the lives of Rielle and Eliana as they come to grips with their powers and the expectations that come with them. Rielle's story is about her rise as the Sun Queen and the events that caused her to turn into the Blood Queen. Eliana's story is about her learning the truth behind her powers and heritage, all while trying to figure out how to bring the Undying Empire to its knees. Their stories eventually intersect towards the end of the trilogy.

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* HealingFactor: Any wounds Eliana incurs automatically heal within minutes. This trait goes away once her powers are unleashed.

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Eliana incurs automatically heal within minutes. can jump 100 feet off of one dock onto another and only feel a bit of pain. This invulnerability is what earned her the nickname the "Dread of Orline". However, this trait goes away once she's unlocked her powers are unleashed.powers. Remy suggests her super fast healing ability was only because her power had nothing else to do.
** In ''Lightbringer'', Rielle incurs bad burns while opening the Gate. She's able to heal them within seconds with a mere thought, so in tuned she is with the empirium at this point.
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* TimeSkip: There is a five year gap between the final chapter of ''Lightbringer'' and its epilogue.


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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: ''Lightbringer'''s epilogue [[spoiler:jumps forward five years after Corien's defeat and Rielle's death. Celdaria is still picking up the pieces from its battle with the angels. An alliance between wraiths and humans have been established. Audric adores his daughter, Eliana, and is taking pains to teach her that her powers are neither inherently evil nor inherently good. Ilmaire's stopped running away from his responsibility of being king, and now rules Borsvall alongside his husband, Leevi]].


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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: At twelve-years-old, Obritsa is able to perfectly act the part of the "stoic orphan turned sudden queen" while secretly being an agent for the human revolution. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] since she's been raised practically since birth for this role.
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* FourthDateMarriage: Towards the end of ''Kingsbane'', Rielle marries Audric despite only officially being a couple with him for a few months and a bit more than that privately. This is partly because he wants to show his people that the crown of Celdaria still has faith in their Sun Queen and partly because he genuinely loves Rielle and wants to spend the rest of their lives together.


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* HeroesPreferSwords: Audric is the most powerful sunspinner to be seen in decades, if not centuries, and his main casting- Illumenor- is a sword. In ''Lightbringer'', he uses Illumenor in order to drive off a Gate-induced storm from destroying Quelbani, the capital of Mazabat.


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* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: One of the main themes of the series is just how much being the subject of a prophecy messes with your life. Having incredible powers don't mean much if you can't use them freely, and everyone has different ideas about how they should and shouldn't applied.
** Despite how much grief her father gives her for being powerful, Rielle takes pride in being able to summon split the sea, control a shadow dragon, and summon fireballs all without the need of a casting, but everyone expects her to use these abilities to protect crown and country. She would love to reveal in her abilities as much as she wants, but she can't without potentially destroying someone or something. It's why Corien's words of devotion and his promise that ''he'' will never fear her are so appealing.
** Before finding out about her heritage, Eliana had an incredibly useful healing ability, but deep down it always worried her. After learning that she's the daughter of the infamous Blood Queen, she comes to hate and fear her powers. Unfortunately, the world ''needs'' her now more than ever and a big part of that is accepting who she really is, up to and including her powers.
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* BigBad: Corien harbors a deep hatred for humanity, especially the Saints due to their deception cutting off his kin's physicality. He uses Rielle's own fears and desires to seduce her to his side, that way he can have the most powerful being aid him in his quest for vengeance. He puts himself at the top of a new rule, the Undying Empire, and- after Rielle's death- makes it so that humanity will live in constant fear and paranoia if they don't join in his regime, or obedient adoration if they do. Despite living centuries apart, both Rielle and Eliana are forced to fight against him in their own ways.


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* ElectiveMute: Remy stops speaking after escaping Orline and seemingly leaving Harkan to his death. It takes Navi several tries of gentle coaxing before he speaks again.


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* HeroOfAnotherStory: After Rielle and company split ways with Ilmaire and his companions, Ilmaire doesn't make a further reappearance but he isn't fully out of the picture; excerpts from the letters he sends to Audric, and from his journal, are placed at the beginning of several chapters in both ''Kingsbane'' and ''Lightbringer''. The excerpts show his own personal journey as he tries to fit into the crown his recently deceased father left, deal with Merovec, and eventually strike out on his own to find a way to aid Audric and his kingdom with the angelic threat.
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* ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl: The Blood and Sun Queen are human girls who can manipulate each available element, as well as a few other powers no elemental can claim.
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* GoldAndWhiteAreDivine: The colors for Rielle's Sun Guard are gold and white, and those that support her tend to use those colors. Though Rielle isn't a goddess, she is ''the'' most powerful elemental around; there doesn't seem to be any limit to her power, seeing as she was able to bring back the Queen of Celdaria from death.


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* HalfIdenticalTwins: The male Ilmaire and the female Ingrid are a pair of twins, born to the King of Borsvall. They both sport the Borsvallic blond eyes and hair and are similarly pale skinned. In terms of personality, though, they're quite different.


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* HarmfulToMinors: Life isn't easy for children regardless of time period: if you're an elemental child living in the Second Age, you could be kidnapped and forced to become a soldier for an despotic angel. If you live in the Third Age, you could be forced to become a killer for your own survival and that of your family's (assuming they're still alive).
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* FaceHealTurn: Rielle wanted to become the long awaited Sun Queen, hero to country and crown. However, her overwhelming amount of power attracted Corien, who saw her as a way to return his brethren to their former glory. He dredges up her deepest fears- such as her ability to easily cause destruction, and how once everyone finds out what she is truly capable of, they'll turn against her- in order to further distance her from her loved ones. When these fears seem to be proven true, she ditches Audric, Ludivine, and everyone else and joins Corien.

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* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Both of Rielle's parents were kind and loving, but until her mother's death. This event turned her still-living father against her; from then on, he'd become emotionally distant and even verbally abusive by repeatedly telling her she's a dangerous monster.



* ExactEavesdropping: During Eliana and Harkan's discussion of Blood Queen Rielle, her legacy, and what it means to Eliana, she mentions how she [[spoiler:killed her and Remy's mother]]. Their conversation comes to a grinding halt when she hears Remy let out a soft cry of despair. He had just been arriving with a large stack of books.



* FaceHeelTurn: Rielle's story details her turn from a heroic icon for her country into the ally the angels have been waiting centuries for.

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* FaceHeelTurn: Rielle's story details her turn from a heroic icon for her FaceHealTurn: Rielle wanted to become the long awaited Sun Queen, hero to country and crown. However, her overwhelming amount of power attracted Corien, who saw her as a way to return his brethren to their former glory. He dredges up her deepest fears- such as her ability to easily cause destruction, and how once everyone finds out what she is truly capable of, they'll turn against her- in order to further distance her from her loved ones. When these fears seem to be proven true, she ditches Audric, Ludivine, and everyone else and joins Corien.
* FaceMonsterTurn: [[spoiler:Eliana's mother]] was a genuinely good parent who only wanted to keep her children safe from the Undying Empire. Upon being abducted by Fidelia, though, she underwent a transformation
into a crawler, a not-quite-human beast. She manages to retain a bit of her humanity at the ally the angels have been waiting centuries for.last minute when she asks Eliana to kill her.
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* BrokenBird: Eliana was raised by loving parents, but had to watch as the Undying Empire overtook her hometown and- as far she knows- kill her father. She was taught how to be a bounty hunter by her mother, and continues her work after her mother becomes permanently injured. Eliana hates what she does, but can't see any other alternative to both earning money and keeping her family safe under the Empire's reign. Furthermore, her unique healing powers scares her and separates her from those she loves most. In order to keep from being overwhelmed by all of this, she thinks of herself as an unfeeling monster with a mask. It takes becoming friends with the kind but firm Navi and falling in love with Simon before she softens.
--> "Rozen’s mouth thinned. 'Eliana, don’t play coy with me. I can see right through that smile of yours. I ''taught'' you that smile.'"


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* AChildShallLeadThem: Though she's only twelve, Obritsa was declared the Queen of Kirvaya by the Magisterial Council. Justified in that the vote was rigged in favor of Obritsa, who had been raised by the human revolution to become the next queen.


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* {{Conlang}}: There are several languages mentioned throughout the series: Celdaria, Old Celdaria, Borsvallic, Lissar (one of the angelic languages), Common, and so on.


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* CostumePorn: The outfits Rielle wears for the Sun Queen trials, as well as her wedding dress, are all lovingly described whereas all other forms of clothing are given basic descriptions.
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* AnachronicOrder: Each book begins with a prologue that shows what happened to Simon after being separated from the newborn princess. The first book in particular starts with Queen Rielle's last moments before jumping back two years. The rest of Rielle's story shows what she was like before she became the Blood Queen and how that
* {{Anaphora}}: A couple of Eliana's chapters in ''Lightbringer'' repeat the phrase "When Eliana awoke..." to accentuate the repetitive nature of her mind-speak induced dreams-turned-nightmares at the hands of Corien.happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with most chapters alternating between these two eras.

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* AnachronicOrder: Each book begins with a prologue that shows what happened to Simon after being separated from the newborn princess. The first book in particular starts with Queen Rielle's last moments before jumping back two years. The rest of Rielle's story shows what she was like before she became the Blood Queen and how that
that happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with most chapters alternating between these two eras.
* {{Anaphora}}: A couple of Eliana's chapters in ''Lightbringer'' repeat the phrase "When Eliana awoke..." to accentuate the repetitive nature of her mind-speak induced dreams-turned-nightmares at the hands of Corien.happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with most chapters alternating between these two eras.
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* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into some preconceived notion of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover, etc. will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into the unattainable ideal of the Sun Queen, the worse her mental state becomes. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and has some extraordinary powers.

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* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into some preconceived notion of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover, etc. will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into the unattainable ideal of the Sun Queen, the worse her mental state becomes. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; monster, and she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people a legendary couple and has some extraordinary powers.

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* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into some preconceived notion of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover, etc. will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into the unattainable ideal of the Sun Queen, the worse her mental state becomes. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and has some extraordinary powers.



* AnachronicOrder: Each book begins with a prologue that shows what happened to Simon after being separated from the newborn princess. The first book in particular starts with Queen Rielle's last moments before jumping back two years. The rest of Rielle's story shows what she was like before she became the Blood Queen and how that happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with most chapters alternating between these two eras.
* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into some preconceived notion of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover, etc. will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into the unattainable ideal of the Sun Queen, the worse her mental state becomes. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and has some extraordinary powers.

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* AnachronicOrder: Each book begins with a prologue that shows what happened to Simon after being separated from the newborn princess. The first book in particular starts with Queen Rielle's last moments before jumping back two years. The rest of Rielle's story shows what she was like before she became the Blood Queen and how that that
* {{Anaphora}}: A couple of Eliana's chapters in ''Lightbringer'' repeat the phrase "When Eliana awoke..." to accentuate the repetitive nature of her mind-speak induced dreams-turned-nightmares at the hands of Corien.
happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with most chapters alternating between these two eras.
* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into some preconceived notion of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover, etc. will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into the unattainable ideal of the Sun Queen, the worse her mental state becomes. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and has some extraordinary powers.
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* AndShowItToYou: One of the stories about Queen Rielle that survived the centuries is how she ripped out her own husband's heart.



* ArrangedMarriage: Royal House Courverie and noble House Sauvillier have planned the marriage of Audric to Ludivine since each of their childhoods. Audric and Ludivine have known each other since birth and are close friends (and cousins), but neither of them are particularly eager to get married: Audric is in love with Rielle and Ludivine doesn't want to come between them. The arrangement eventually breaks down and Audric ends up marrying Rielle. %%stopped here

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* ArrangedMarriage: Royal House Courverie and noble House Sauvillier have planned the marriage of Audric to Ludivine since each of their childhoods. Audric and Ludivine have known each other since birth and are close friends (and cousins), but neither of them are particularly eager to get married: Audric is in love with Rielle and Ludivine doesn't want to come between them. The arrangement eventually breaks down and Audric ends up marrying Rielle. %%stopped here


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* BookEnds: The series beings with a prologue titled "An End and a Beginning" which tells of Queen Rielle's death, the end of the elemental age, and the beginning of the newborn princess' life. The series ends with [[spoiler:Queen Rielle's death and an epilogue titled "A Beginning and an End" which shows how the major and supporting characters are fairing in the aftermath of the battle with Corien]].
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* TwoPartTrilogy: While the series was always intended to be three parts, ''Furyborn'' has a more definitive ending despite the fact that there's obviously still a lot more story to tell. It's plot mainly concerns itself with Rielle participating in the Sung Queen trials and Eliana discovering her powers and heritage, giving both of them more conclusive arcs. ''Kingsbane'' ends on a cliffhanger, something that ''Lightbringer'' directly picks up.

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* TwoPartTrilogy: While the series was always intended to be three parts, ''Furyborn'' has a more definitive ending despite the fact that there's obviously still a lot more story to tell. It's plot mainly concerns itself with Rielle participating in the Sung Sun Queen trials and Eliana discovering her powers and heritage, giving both of them more conclusive arcs. ''Kingsbane'' ''Kingsbane'', however, ends on a cliffhanger, something that cliffhanger which ''Lightbringer'' directly picks up.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Starting with ''Kingsbane'', other characters get chapters where they're front and center. This includes Corien, Simon, Navi, Ludivine, Jessamyn, Harkan, Audric, and Taliesin. %%stopped here

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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Starting with ''Kingsbane'', other characters get chapters where they're front and center. This includes Corien, Simon, Navi, Ludivine, Jessamyn, Harkan, Audric, and Taliesin. %%stopped here



* AntiHumanAlliance: Angels hate humans due to them claiming land that, they feel, was rightfully theirs. They banded together in order to kill them off, starting the Angelic Wars. During Rielle's time, their anger shifted to hating humans because their Saints tricked them into an endless void that stripped them of their physicality.

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* AntiHumanAlliance: Angels hate humans due to them claiming land that, they feel, was rightfully theirs. They Corien stoked those particular flames until most of his brethren banded together in order to kill them off, starting the Angelic Wars. During Rielle's time, their the angels' anger shifted to hating humans because their Saints tricked them into an endless void that stripped them of their physicality.



* ApocalypseHow: The Undying Emperor hopes to bring about a [[ApocalypseHow/Class3A Class 3a]] apocalypse, specifically wiping out all of humanity and restoring the angels to their former glory. It's later suggested that not even other ''worlds'' are safe from him.
* ApocalypseMaiden: The Blood Queen was able to break the Gate, bringing the angels back and effectively restarting the Angelic Wars. She was also responsible for ending the age of elementals as her last powerful act of magic stifled any connection to the empirium elementals once had.
* ArrangedMarriage: The Courverie's and Sauvillier's have planned to marry Audric to Ludivine; the two of them are already engaged at the start of the series. Audric and Ludivine have known each other since childhood and are close friends (and cousins), but neither of them are particularly eager to get married: Audric is in love with Rielle and Ludivine doesn't want to come between them. The arrangement eventually breaks down and Audric ends up marrying Rielle.

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* ApocalypseHow: The Undying Emperor hopes to bring about a [[ApocalypseHow/Class3A Class 3a]] apocalypse, specifically wiping out all of humanity and restoring the angels to their former glory.glory by stitching their consciousnesses to a human body. It's later suggested that not even other ''worlds'' are safe from him.
* ApocalypseMaiden: The Blood Queen Rielle was able to break the Gate, bringing the angels back and effectively restarting the Angelic Wars. She was also responsible for ending the age of elementals as her last powerful act of magic stifled any connection to the empirium elementals once had.
had. This allowed Corien and his followers to grow strong, ushering in the Undying Empire and human oppression.
* ArrangedMarriage: The Courverie's Royal House Courverie and Sauvillier's noble House Sauvillier have planned to marry the marriage of Audric to Ludivine; the two Ludivine since each of them are already engaged at the start of the series. their childhoods. Audric and Ludivine have known each other since childhood birth and are close friends (and cousins), but neither of them are particularly eager to get married: Audric is in love with Rielle and Ludivine doesn't want to come between them. The arrangement eventually breaks down and Audric ends up marrying Rielle. %%stopped here
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* AilmentInducedCruelty: The bedridden King of Borsvall treated his son, Ilmaire, horribly, calling him weak and unworthy of the throne. However, considering he was [[spoiler:possessed by an angel]] at the time, its ambiguous how much of his verbal abuse was him and how much of it was from [[spoiler:the angel]].
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* OnePersonOnePower: Each elemental is restricted to one element: windsingers can only control air, sunspinners can only control light, earthshakers can only control earth, etc. The Queens of Prophecy are the only exceptions to this rule.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: Remy's age and the subsequent age gap between him and Eliana changes a couple times throughout the series. The first flashback into Eliana's past we get in ''Furyborn'' says she made her first kill when she was twelve and Remy was five, meaning there should be an eight year age gap. However, another flashback in the same novel explains she was ten when her father disappeared and the text states Remy was an infant when that happened, in other words less than a year old, making their age gap about ten years.
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* AbusiveParents: Rielle's father was once a [[GoodParents good parent]] before his wife's (unintentional) death at the hands of Rielle. After this event, he began to treat Rielle incredibly coldly either by not showing her any affection or ignoring her entirely. Throughout her childhood, she was constantly reminded by him that she's a "murderer" and dangerous, as well as bringing her to the lower parts of the castle and forcibly drugging her whenever a storm came through. Rielle believes that he would keep her locked in a room for the rest of her life if he could get away with it.
* AccidentalTimeTravel: Simon uses his marque magic to create a portal to Borsvall, hoping to hide the newborn princess among the Borsvall people. Rielle's final act of magic ends up changing his spell from jumping space to jumping time, which thrusts both him and the newborn 1,000 years into the future.

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* AbusiveParents: Rielle's father was once a [[GoodParents good parent]] before his wife's (unintentional) death at the hands of Rielle. After this event, he began to treat Rielle incredibly coldly either by not showing her any affection or ignoring her entirely. Throughout her childhood, she was constantly reminded by him that she's a "murderer" and dangerous, as well as bringing her to the lower parts of the castle and forcibly drugging her whenever a storm came through. Rielle believes that he would keep her locked in a room for the rest of her life if he could get away with it.
it, something that her mentor doesn't deny.
* AccidentalTimeTravel: Simon uses his marque magic to create a portal to Borsvall, hoping to hide the newborn princess among the Borsvall people. Queen Rielle's final act of magic ends up changing his spell from jumping space to jumping time, which thrusts both him and the newborn 1,000 years into the future.



* AllYourPowersCombined: While the average elemental has access to only one element, the Queens of Prophecy have power over all seven. The Sun Queen is a heroic version whereas the Blood Queen is a villainous variant.

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* AllYourPowersCombined: While the average elemental has access to only one element, the Queens of Prophecy have power over all seven. The Sun Queen is hailed as a heroic version figure whereas the Blood Queen is a seen as her villainous variant.counterpart.



** In ''Kingsbane'', Eliana's brief trip to the Second Age altered the pasts of various characters and events of future-Ventera and not for the better.
** In ''Lightbringer'', after [[spoiler: successfully convincing Rielle to destroy Corien, Remy and future-Eliana disappear. The epilogue shows a new timeline in which Audric and his daughter are living happily in a slowly recuperating Celdaria]].

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** In ''Kingsbane'', Eliana's brief trip to the Second Age altered the pasts of various characters and events of future-Ventera and not for the better.
better: their evacuation mission is now the next day instead of a few days from then, and one of Eliana's allies now works for the Empire.
** In ''Lightbringer'', after [[spoiler: after successfully convincing Rielle to destroy Corien, Remy and future-Eliana disappear. The epilogue shows a new timeline in which Audric and his daughter are living happily in a slowly recuperating Celdaria]].



* AmbiguousSituation: [[spoiler:When Rielle defeats Corien, future-Eliana and Remy disappear since their timeline no longer came to pass. The epilogue only focuses on the aftermath of the battle with Corien, leaving it unclear what became of Navi, Harkan, and all the other Third Age characters.]]
* AmplifierArtifact: Eliana forges a casting in the hopes that it'll help her tap into the empirium more easily. It doesn't work that well at first, but as she slowly accepts her abilities, she obtains more control over them.
* AnachronicOrder: Each book begins with a prologue that shows what happened to Simon after being separated from the newborn Eliana. The first book in particular starts with Rielle's last moments before jumping back two years. The rest of Rielle's story shows what she was like before she became the Blood Queen and how that happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with each chapter alternating between these two eras.
* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into your preconceived notions of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover and so on will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into this unattainable ideal, the worse off she feels. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and with one of their extraordinary powers.

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* AmbiguousSituation: [[spoiler:When Rielle defeats Corien, Remy and future-Eliana and Remy disappear since their timeline no longer came to pass. The epilogue only focuses on the aftermath of the battle with Corien, Rielle's decision, leaving it unclear what became of Navi, Harkan, and all the other Third Age characters.]]
* AmplifierArtifact: Eliana forges a casting in the hopes that it'll help her tap into the empirium more easily. easily and thus give her more control over her powers. It doesn't work that well at first, but as she slowly accepts her abilities, abilities and practices with them, she obtains more control over them.
begins unable to think of taking it off.
* AnachronicOrder: Each book begins with a prologue that shows what happened to Simon after being separated from the newborn Eliana. princess. The first book in particular starts with Queen Rielle's last moments before jumping back two years. The rest of Rielle's story shows what she was like before she became the Blood Queen and how that happened. There is a 1,020 year time difference between Rielle and Eliana's plotlines, with each chapter most chapters alternating between these two eras.
* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into your some preconceived notions notion of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover and so on lover, etc. will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into this the unattainable ideal, ideal of the Sun Queen, the worse off she feels. her mental state becomes. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and with one of their has some extraordinary powers.



* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Starting with ''Kingsbane'', other characters get chapters where they're front and center. This includes Corien, Simon, Navi, Ludivine, Jessamyn, Harkan, Audric, and Taliesin.

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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Starting with ''Kingsbane'', other characters get chapters where they're front and center. This includes Corien, Simon, Navi, Ludivine, Jessamyn, Harkan, Audric, and Taliesin. %%stopped here
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[[caption-width-right:350:Sometimes being the Chosen One isn't all it's cracked up to be...]]

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%% FeministFantasy: The series features two female leads that drive their own stories. %%Flesh out later

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%% * FeministFantasy: The series features two female leads that drive who have to deal with the unrealistic expectations forced upon them by their own stories. %%Flesh friends, family, and peers. Most of the characters, both named and not, are woman or girls, most of whom can dish out laterpunishment as good as or better than their male counterparts. There's also no such thing as homophobia- there's a lot of queer characters, some of whom are married, and ''no one'' suggests that their love is unnatural.



* SocietyOfImmortals: Angels are a race of immortals who existed long before humans did. %%flesh out later

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* SocietyOfImmortals: Angels are a race of immortals who existed long before humans did. %%flesh out later



* SpeciesLoyalty: Both humans and angels look down on those that sympathize with the other, to the point that [[HalfHumanHybrid marques]] are their only mutual enemy. %%flesh out later

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* SpeciesLoyalty: Both humans and angels look down on those that sympathize with the other, to the point that [[HalfHumanHybrid marques]] are their only mutual enemy. %%flesh out later



* WouldHurtAChild: Corien kidnaps elemental children and forces them to be his soldiers. %%flesh out later
%% WouldntHurtAChild: The main reason Corien is stealing elemental children to use them as soldiers is specifically to weaponize this ideology: he knows that many people would balk at killing a child which gives his army an advantage on the battlefield.

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* WouldHurtAChild: Corien kidnaps elemental children and forces them to be his soldiers. %%flesh out later\n%%
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WouldntHurtAChild: The main reason Corien is stealing elemental children to use them as soldiers is specifically to weaponize this ideology: he knows that many people would balk at killing a child which gives his army an advantage on the battlefield.



%% YouMonster: Remy says this to Eliana upon finding out that she killed [[spoiler: their mother]].

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%% * YouMonster: Remy says this to calls Eliana a monster upon finding out that she killed [[spoiler: their mother]].
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* TheChosenOne: The Sun Queen is stated to be a human girl who has access to all seven elements. She will be the one to save the world from the Blood Queen, another human girl with the same or similiar powers who is destined to destroy the world. When Rielle reveals that she can control not just fire, but earth and air, people wonder which of the two queens she might be.
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* AnAesop: Forcing someone to fit into your preconceived notions of what makes the right kind of savior, child, lover and so on will never end well. Ever since the prophecy stating the rise of the Sun and Blood Queens, people have built up the Sun Queen as this flawless being who epitomizes all things good and pure. Rielle wants to live up to that, but she inherently can't because, well, she's human: she's got flaws and feelings that can be inconvenient to herself and those around her. The more she struggles to fit into this unattainable ideal, the worse off she feels. Eliana doesn't even bother trying because she sees herself as a monster; she chafes at the idea that she's somehow supposed to save everyone from what seems to be an unstoppable threat just because she's the daughter of some important people and with one of their extraordinary powers.
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* ThatPersonIsDead: Corien loathes being called by his angelic name, Kalmaroth. He views that version of himself as an embarrassing failure and would love to forget that he was ushered into the Deep like the rest of his brethren.

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* ThatPersonIsDead: ThatManIsDead: Corien loathes being called by his angelic name, Kalmaroth. He views that version of himself as an embarrassing failure and would love to forget that he was ushered into the Deep like the rest of his brethren.
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* DramaticIrony: ''Furyborn'' makes it clear from the get go that Rielle will become the Blood Queen. This makes her struggles during the Sun Queen trials all the more tragic: she's desperate to believe that she's a savoir but the audience knows that she will wind up believing the worst of herself.


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* ThatPersonIsDead: Corien loathes being called by his angelic name, Kalmaroth. He views that version of himself as an embarrassing failure and would love to forget that he was ushered into the Deep like the rest of his brethren.

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