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* YoungerThanTheyLook: The protagonists discover that [[spoiler:Olivia]] is much younger than expected while dealing with [[spoiler:John Doe]].
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: The protagonists discover that [[spoiler:Olivia]] is much younger than expected while dealing with [[spoiler:John Doe]].Doe]].
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* {{Fantastic Racism}}: Olivia has to deal with quite a bit of this due to the fact that she's a Feral.
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* {{Roaring Rampage of Revenge}}: Olivia leaves a pretty impressive trail of destruction during one of these.
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In a dark, damp and dirty alleyway, a girl wakes up. Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she has to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice. Along the way she makes both friends and enemies. In the process creating a home and a team, nearly a family for herself. Did we mention that she's part dragon
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In a dark, damp and dirty alley way, alleyway, a girl wakes up. Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she has to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice. Along the way she makes both friends and enemies. In the process creating a home and a team, nearly a family for herself.
herself. Did we mention that she's part dragon
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[[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/ Stone Burners]] updates weekly.
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[[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/ Stone Burners]] updates weekly. Mostly on Mondays.
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Implied, when the protagonist meets a metahuman capable of experiencing his foes pasts.
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Implied, when the protagonist meets a metahuman capable of experiencing his foes pasts.pasts.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: The protagonists discover that [[spoiler:Olivia]] is much younger than expected while dealing with [[spoiler:John Doe]].
* YoungerThanTheyLook: The protagonists discover that [[spoiler:Olivia]] is much younger than expected while dealing with [[spoiler:John Doe]].
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It felt incomplete, and sort of darker than the story actually is.
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In a dark, damp and dirty alley way, a girl wakes up. Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she has to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice. \n Along the way she makes both friends and enemies. In the process creating a home and a team, nearly a family for herself.
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* BrokenBird: Miya has shades of this, considering what Overlord had done.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Olivia is almost an exact copy of a dragon, however she's missing the fire breathing.
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* MindScrew: [[spoilers:John Doe does this to the main cast]]
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* MindScrew: [[spoilers:John [[spoiler: John Doe does this to the main cast]]
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* MonsterModesty: Despite being a two meter tall dragon girl, one of the first points on Olivia's agenda after she regains consciousness is to find clothing.
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* HumanoidAbomination: John Doe. He's harder to make out the more you concentrate on him, he's vaguely humanoid and his powers are a mix of PerceptionFilter and MindRape.
* MindScrew: [[spoilers:John Doe does this to the main cast]]
* MonsterModesty: Despite being a two meter tall dragon girl, one of the first points on Olivia's agenda after she regains consciousness is to find clothing.
* MindScrew: [[spoilers:John Doe does this to the main cast]]
* MonsterModesty: Despite being a two meter tall dragon girl, one of the first points on Olivia's agenda after she regains consciousness is to find clothing.
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* GentleGiant: Olivia is a quiet, meek girl ... who happens to be about seven feet tall plus wings and tail, and strong enough to break down a metal door with one hit.
-->'''Skulker:''' [[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2014/03/31/contract-decentralize/ She picked a fight with Olivia? Tha's like pickin' a fight with a teddy bear. Except it's an actual bear in disguise. Why would she do that?]]
-->'''Skulker:''' [[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2014/03/31/contract-decentralize/ She picked a fight with Olivia? Tha's like pickin' a fight with a teddy bear. Except it's an actual bear in disguise. Why would she do that?]]
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* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Implied, when the protagonist meets a metahuman capable of experiencing his foes pastspasts.
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In a dark, damp and dirty alley way, a girl wakes up. Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she have has to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice.
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In a dark, damp and dirty alley way, a girl wakes up.
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Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she have to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice.
Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she have to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice. \n
Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she have to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice.
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Olivia have been shot, pummeled, thrown through a wall and suffered through broken bones. She got better.
* HerosFirstRescue: The first time Olivia comes across a thug mugging a woman in a shady part of town, she doesn't even hesitate before leaping to rescue her.
* MonsterModesty: Despite being a two meter tall dragon girl, one of the first points on Olivia's agenda after she regains consciousness is to find clothing.
* QuestForIdentity: The story starts in dark alley with the protagonist having no memory of her circumstance.
* TraumaInducedAmnesia: Implied, when the protagonist meets a metahuman capable of experiencing his foes pasts
* HerosFirstRescue: The first time Olivia comes across a thug mugging a woman in a shady part of town, she doesn't even hesitate before leaping to rescue her.
* MonsterModesty: Despite being a two meter tall dragon girl, one of the first points on Olivia's agenda after she regains consciousness is to find clothing.
* QuestForIdentity: The story starts in dark alley with the protagonist having no memory of her circumstance.
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* FightsLikeANormal: A number of characters without abilities that lead themselves to direct combat.
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* AlliterativeName: Freedom Fighter and his organisation, the Freedom Fighters.Fighters.
* DifferentlyPoweredIndividual: Both metahuman, superhuman and parahuman shows up.
* DifferentlyPoweredIndividual: Both metahuman, superhuman and parahuman shows up.
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[[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/ Stone Burners]] updates weekly.
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Bereft of her memories and saddled with a unfamiliar body that brings along stigma, she have to relearn to live in world filled with metahumans and prejudice.
[[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/ Stone Burners]] updates weekly.
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