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* UngratefulBastard: Done out of ignorance, yet nevertheless. For generations, Holo blessed the inhabitants of Pasloe with one good harvest after another with only the occasional bad one to let the soil rest. The villagers, though having no knowledge of this balance, went from worshiping her out of respect to hating and fearing her for the rare bad year. By the time she leaves, the villagers had abandoned her for a new religion. One villager even tries to turn both Lawrence and Holo over to the church to advance their own career.
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* UngratefulBastard: Done out of ignorance, yet nevertheless. For generations, Holo blessed the inhabitants of Pasloe with one good harvest after another with only the occasional bad one to let the soil rest. The villagers, though villagers however, having no knowledge of this balance, went from worshiping her out of respect to hating and fearing her for the rare bad year. By the time she leaves, the villagers had abandoned her for a new religion. One villager even tries to turn both Lawrence and Holo over to the church to advance their own career.
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* FreakOut: Holo has a nasty one when she learns that Yoitsu was destroyed long ago by the Moon-Hunting Bear. In her despair, she pleads with Lawrence to impregnate her, so she can have a living reminder of her home. Lawrence manages to snap her out of it and gives her a shoulder to cry on.
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* FreakOut: Holo has a nasty one when she learns that Yoitsu was destroyed long ago by the Moon-Hunting Bear. In her despair, she pleads with Lawrence to impregnate her, so she can have a living reminder of her home. Lawrence manages to snap her home, then lashes out of it and gives her a shoulder to cry on. at him for knowingly keeping this news from her.
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* CaughtTheHeartOnHisSleeve: After one of her drinking sessions, Holo is recovering in her bed when she goes to grab Lawerence's sleeve.
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* CaughtTheHeartOnHisSleeve: After one of her drinking sessions, Holo is recovering in her bed when she goes to grab Lawerence's Lawrence's sleeve.
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* FreakOut: Holo has a nasty one when she learns that Yoitsu was destroyed long ago by the Moon-Hunting Bear. In her despair, she pleads with Lawerence to impregnate her, so she can have a living reminder of her home. Lawerence manages to snap her out of it and gives her a shoulder to cry on.
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* FreakOut: Holo has a nasty one when she learns that Yoitsu was destroyed long ago by the Moon-Hunting Bear. In her despair, she pleads with Lawerence Lawrence to impregnate her, so she can have a living reminder of her home. Lawerence Lawrence manages to snap her out of it and gives her a shoulder to cry on.
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* HandsomeLech: Weiz, one of Lawerence's business associates, is a fairly easy-looking man who flirts with Holo soon after meeting her.
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* HandsomeLech: Weiz, one of Lawerence's Lawrence's business associates, is a fairly easy-looking man who flirts with Holo soon after meeting her.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Official merch and advertising has made it no secret that Holo and Lawerence [[spoiler:get married and have a child together]].
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Official merch and advertising has made it no secret that Holo and Lawerence Lawrence [[spoiler:get married and have a child together]].
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* InconsistantSpelling: Due to the vast differences between the Japanese and English languages, there are a ''lot'' of names that could be spelled any number of ways. Horo/Holo, Kraft/Craft, Diana/Dianna/Deanna, Eve/Abe, Col/Cole, the list goes on.
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the vast differences between the Japanese and English languages, there are a ''lot'' of names that could be spelled any number of ways. Horo/Holo, Kraft/Craft, Diana/Dianna/Deanna, Eve/Abe, Col/Cole, the list goes on.
