Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* TheVamp: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]]; Cora visits Halloran's room for an impromptu liaison - but confesses Kline to have pressured the arrangement, seemingly as a malicious test.
Deleted line(s) 85 (click to see context) :
* TheVamp: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]]; Cora visits Halloran's room for an impromptu liaison - but confesses Kline to have pressured the arrangement, seemingly as a malicious test.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Don't know the work. I assume that "aide" is the word intended, since "aid" makes no sense here.
Changed line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) from:
At Neath, Kline’s secluded Surrey estate, Halloran, while shown irrefutable evidence of Kline’s abilities, is disturbed by the mansion’s minimal security, and bemused by the forlorn, masochistic advances of Cora Redmile, Kline’s aid.
to:
At Neath, Kline’s secluded Surrey estate, Halloran, while shown irrefutable evidence of Kline’s abilities, is disturbed by the mansion’s minimal security, and bemused by the forlorn, masochistic advances of Cora Redmile, Kline’s aid.aide.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 42 (click to see context) from:
* GoodIsNotSoft: While trained to deter violence, Halloran's traumatic past has immunised him to fear and mercy - those who threaten him or his charges can expect a swift, violent end.
to:
* GoodIsNotSoft: While trained to deter prevent violence, Halloran's traumatic past has immunised him to fear and mercy - those who threaten him or his charges can expect a swift, violent end.
