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* ScoldedByAStranger: Ryan decides to end his relationship with Jennifer Yang while [[DinnerAndABreakUp out at a classic tea house]]. He ends up regretting it when she causes a scene. As he tries to drag her out kicking and screaming, an onlooker calls him a {{sadist}}. Jennifer yells back that she wishes he was.
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** Amanda is fascinated with Scandinavian crime novels, has read the ''[[Literature/MillenniumSeries Millenium]]'' trilogy[[note]]the novel takes place after Stieg Larsson's death and before his publisher hired another writer to continue with the series.[[/note]] and the ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' book series.
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** Amanda is fascinated with Scandinavian crime novels, has read the ''[[Literature/MillenniumSeries Millenium]]'' trilogy[[note]]the novel takes place after Stieg Larsson's death and before his publisher hired another writer to continue with the series.[[/note]] and the ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' book series.
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeFashionable: Alan often buys elegant clothes for Indiana, who usually buys her clothes on thrift shops. She only wears them to please him, like a little black dress, a color she normally avoids for its negative energy.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Indiana is the Archie. Wealthy, sophisticated Alan Keller, a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob and a fear of commitment is the Veronica. The athletic veteran Ryan Miller is the Betty; despite his own traumas, he is her friend, comes to Amanda's rescue when she calls him for help, and is there for her.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Indiana is the Archie. Wealthy, sophisticated Alan Keller, a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob and an IdleRich man with a fear of commitment is the Veronica. The athletic veteran Ryan Miller is the Betty; despite his own traumas, he is her friend, comes to Amanda's rescue when she calls him for help, and is there for her.
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* CallingCard: It's all about wolves. The widow of one of the victims receives a copy of Creator/HermannHesse's novel ''Steppenwolf''. Another victim, who collected glass figurines, receives one after her death that is at first mistaken for a dog but it's really a wolf.
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* CallingCard: It's all about wolves. The widow of one of the victims receives a copy of Creator/HermannHesse's novel ''Steppenwolf''.''Literature/{{Steppenwolf}}''. Another victim, who collected glass figurines, receives one after her death that is at first mistaken for a dog but it's really a wolf.
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* CommitmentIssues: Alan has been dating Indiana for several years now and is happy keeping things casual. It is not until she breaks up with him and he loses his wealth that he finally proposes to her.
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* CommitmentIssues: Alan has been dating Indiana for several years now and is happy keeping things casual. It is not until she breaks up with him and [[RichesToRags he loses his wealth wealth]] that he finally proposes to her.
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* NailedToTheWagon: How Ryan Miller got sober: he was entitled to accept help from a program from the Veterans Administration, but he was too proud or too macho for that. A like-minded neighbor had him strip naked and left him by himself in his apartment without any of his clothes, his phone or his computer for three days. He is absolutely miserable and even contemplates breaking out the window. But when she comes to get him, he is clean and manages to stay clean for years.
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* NailedToTheWagon: How Ryan Miller got sober: he was entitled is too proud to accept help from a program he would have been entitled to get from the Veterans Administration, but he was too proud or too macho for that. Administration. A like-minded neighbor had has him strip naked and left leaves him by himself in his apartment without any of his clothes, his phone or his computer for three days. He is absolutely miserable and even contemplates breaking out the window. But when she comes to get him, he is clean and manages to stay clean for years.
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* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist is electrocuted, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die from carbon monoxide poisoning in an improvised gas chamber.]]
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* UnconventionalFormatting: Most of the book is written on a third-person POV. The only exception is a portion of the text that appears in italics, written in first-person POV, representing the perspective Indiana's abductor , as they explain why they did what they did.
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* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist is electrocuted, electrocuted in a chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die from carbon monoxide poisoning in an improvised gas chamber.]]
* UnconventionalFormatting: Most of the book is written on a third-person POV. The only exception is a portion of the text that appears in italics, written in first-person POV, representing the perspective Indiana'sabductor , abductor, as they explain why they did what they did.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Amanda is incredibly intelligent but seems to have trouble with social skills and fitting in, is downright obsessive with her interests, is averse to the smells of the other girls in her dorm. It is mentioned that she was taken to a child psychiatrist when she was younger, but nobody mentions any formal diagnosis. She is just written off as quirky.
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* DinnerAndABreakup: Ryan decides to end his relationship with Jennifer Yang, as they are sexually incompatible (she is into S&M and he is a rather vanilla guy) in a classic tea house. He ends up regretting it when she causes a scene. As he tries to drag her out, an onlooker calls him a sadist. Jennifer yells back that she wishes he was.
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* DinnerAndABreakup: Ryan decides to end his relationship with Jennifer Yang, as they are sexually incompatible (she is into S&M and he is a rather vanilla guy) in a classic tea house. He ends up regretting it when she causes a scene. As he tries to drag her out, an onlooker calls him a sadist.{{sadist}}. Jennifer yells back that she wishes he was.
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* NailedToTheWagon: How Ryan Miller got sober: he was entitled to accept help from a program from the Veterans Administration, but he was too proud or too macho for that. A like-minded neighbor had him strip naked and left by himself in his apartment without his phone or his computer for three days. He is absolutely miserable and even contemplates breaking out the window. But when she comes to get him, he is clean and manages to stay clean for years.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Ayani, the widow of one of the murder victims, is a former top model and activist against FGM (female genital mutilation). Her character bears a strong resemblance to that of former top model and UN Ambassador (1997-2003) [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waris_Dirie Waris Dirie]], whose autobiography ''Desert Flower'' was adapted into a [[Film/DesertFlower film]].
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Amanda Martin is fascinated by crime. She is currently obsessed with a game called “Ripper” which she plays online with players from around the world. With the assistance of her beloved grandfather, she guides the group (Sherlock, Esmeralda, Colonel Paddington, and Abatha) in their objective of solve crimes inspired by those of Jack the Ripper. When a series of grisly murders starts taking place in the San Francisco area where she leaves, she is fascinated by then and finds herself steering the group toward solving these real life murders.
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Amanda Martin is fascinated by crime. She is currently obsessed with a game called “Ripper” "Ripper" which she plays online with players from around the world. With the assistance of her beloved grandfather, she guides the group (Sherlock, Esmeralda, Colonel Paddington, and Abatha) in their objective of solve crimes inspired by those of Jack the Ripper. When a series of grisly murders starts taking place in the San Francisco area where she leaves, she is fascinated by then and finds herself steering the group toward solving these real life murders.
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* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
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* CoolOldLady: Denise, Denise West, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.Pedro. When Ryan is on the run, she offers her home as a place to stay.
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* TraumaCongaLine: The killer's early life. In infancy, he was abused by his biological parents. A nurse kidnaps him [[spoiler:and raises him [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender ''as her daughter'']], teaching "Lee" that "girls are good, boys are bad". One day the nurse dies but her ID is stolen. By the time authorities identify her and find her child, "Lee Galespi" is close to death by starvation. And that is before Child Protective Service intervenes.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: The killer's early life. In infancy, he was abused by his biological parents. A nurse kidnaps him [[spoiler:and raises him [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender ''as her daughter'']], teaching "Lee" that "girls are good, boys are bad". One day the nurse dies but her ID is stolen. By the time authorities identify her and find her child, "Lee Galespi" has been left alone for weeks and is close to death by starvation. And that is before Child Protective Service intervenes.]]
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* BettyAndVeronica: Indiana is the Archie. Wealthy, sophisticated Alan Keller, a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob and a fear of commitment is the Veronica. The athletic veteran Ryan Miller is the Betty; despite his own traumas, he is her friend, comes to Amanda's rescue when she calls him for help, and trains for the Ironman Triathlon.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Indiana is the Archie. Wealthy, sophisticated Alan Keller, a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob and a fear of commitment is the Veronica. The athletic veteran Ryan Miller is the Betty; despite his own traumas, he is her friend, comes to Amanda's rescue when she calls him for help, and trains is there for the Ironman Triathlon.her.
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* HandicappedBadass: Despite losing his leg during a mission, Ryan still practices at the gun range, trains his dog (who was his partner in Afghanistan) and is a triathlete. [[spoiler: When the identity of Indiana's abductor is found, he and Attila break into the location where she is being kept. Not even being mortally wounded stops him from saving her.]]
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* HandicappedBadass: Despite losing his leg during a mission, Ryan still practices at the gun range, continues with Attila's training and trains his dog (who was his partner in Afghanistan) and is daily for triathlons. Attila, who survived a triathlete. mine explosion that left him missing an ear, also qualifies. [[spoiler: When the identity of Indiana's abductor is found, he Ryan and Attila Atilla break into the location where she is being kept. Not even being mortally wounded stops him from saving her.]]
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** Ryan's dog used to be work with him his partner while he was stationed in Afghanistan. He The dog was trained to kill upon command, which he can do thanks to assisted by his titanium fangs.fangs; [[ChekhovsSkill Ryan keeps up his training]]. His name? Attila, as in UsefulNotes/AttilaTheHun.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Amanda's group of ''Ripper'' players. Sherlock Holmes is an African-American boy genius age 12, Abatha is a teenaged girl from Montreal who has been hospitalized several times for her eating disorder, Esmeralda is a paraplegic teenage boy from Auckland, New Zealand, and Col. Paddington is an agoraphobic teenager from New Jersey who has not left his home in ages.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Carol Drinkwater, the cancer patient, is not real; "she" is a persona created by the killer, Gary Brunswick/Lee Galespi/Anton Farkas in order to get closer to Indiana]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Carol Drinkwater, the cancer patient, is not real; "she" is a persona created by the killer, Gary Brunswick/Lee Galespi/Anton Farkas in order to get closer to Indiana]]
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Amanda's group of ''Ripper'' players. Sherlock Holmes is an African-American boy genius age 12, Abatha is a teenaged girl from Montreal who has been hospitalized several times for her eating disorder, Esmeralda is a paraplegic teenage boy from Auckland, New Zealand, and Col. Paddington is an [[TheShutIn agoraphobic teenager teenager]] from New Jersey who has not left his home in ages.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Carol Drinkwater, the cancer patient, is not real; "she" is a persona created by the killer, Gary Brunswick/Lee Galespi/Anton Farkas in order to get closer toIndiana]]Indiana. The cancer was made up in order to compel's Indiana's compassion]]
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* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder is based upon the electric chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die from carbon monoxide poisoning in an improvised gas chamber.]]
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* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder psychiatrist is based upon the electric chair, electrocuted, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die from carbon monoxide poisoning in an improvised gas chamber.]]
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* BettyAndVeronica: With wealthy, sophisticated Alan as the Veronica, and war veteran Ryan as the Betty.
* BittersweetEnding: The serial killer is found and [[spoiler: killed, but both Alan and Ryan are dead. Indiana is still traumatized but she decides to travel to Afghanistan to provide aid to the village children from Ryan's past. Amanda is all set to start her first semester at MIT but that means leaving the nest.]]
* BittersweetEnding: The serial killer is found and [[spoiler: killed, but both Alan and Ryan are dead. Indiana is still traumatized but she decides to travel to Afghanistan to provide aid to the village children from Ryan's past. Amanda is all set to start her first semester at MIT but that means leaving the nest.]]
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* BettyAndVeronica: With wealthy, Indiana is the Archie. Wealthy, sophisticated Alan as Keller, a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob and a fear of commitment is the Veronica, and war Veronica. The athletic veteran Ryan as Miller is the Betty.
Betty; despite his own traumas, he is her friend, comes to Amanda's rescue when she calls him for help, and trains for the Ironman Triathlon.
* BittersweetEnding: The serial killer is found and [[spoiler: killed, butboth he managed to murder Alan and Ryan are dead. Keller just after Indiana had taken him back. Indiana miscarries during her captivity and is still traumatized left traumatized. Ryan is killed trying to rescue her, but she decides he succeeds. A heartbroken Indiana travels to travel Afghanistan, to Afghanistan to provide aid to seek out the village orphaned children from Ryan's past.mission. Amanda is all set to start her first semester at MIT but that means leaving the nest.]]
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: The first murder reported; all other victims are killed and later found at home.
* DesecratingTheDead: Ed Staton is found dead from a gunshot in the middle of his forehead at a school gym, sprawled on a vaulting horse, pants around his ankles, and a baseball bat inserted where the sun don’t shine.
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: The first murder reported; reported is found at a school gym by a class of fourth-graders about to start P.E.; all other victims are killed and later found at home.
* DesecratingTheDead: Ed Staton is found dead from a gunshot in the middle of his forehead at a school gym, sprawled on a vaulting horse, pants around his ankles, and a baseball bat [[AssShove insertedwhere the sun don’t shine.for maximum humiliating effect]].
* DesecratingTheDead: Ed Staton is found dead from a gunshot in the middle of his forehead at a school gym, sprawled on a vaulting horse, pants around his ankles, and a baseball bat [[AssShove inserted
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Amanda's group of ''Ripper'' players. Sherlock Holmes is an African-American boy genius age 12, Abatha is a teenaged girl from Montreal who has been hospitalized several times for her eating disorder, Esmeralda is a paraplegic teenage boy from Auckland, New Zealand, and Col. Paddington is an agoraphobic teenager from New Jersey who has not left his home in ages.
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* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and a scarf.
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* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles consist of pieces bought at thrift shops. They are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and a scarf.
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** References are made to ''Literature/MillenniumSeries'',
** Amanda is mentioned to have an obsession with [[Literature/{{Twilight}} books about vampires and werewolves]].
* TraumaCongaLine: The killer's early life. In infancy, he was abused by his biological parents. A nurse kidnaps him [[spoiler:and raises him [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender ''as her daughter'']], teaching that "girls are good, boys are bad". One day the nurse dies but her ID is stolen. By the time authorities identify her and find her child, "Lee Galespi" is close to death by starvation. And that is before he enters the foster care system.]]
* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder is based upon the electric chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die in an improvised gas chamber.]]
** Amanda is mentioned to have an obsession with [[Literature/{{Twilight}} books about vampires and werewolves]].
* TraumaCongaLine: The killer's early life. In infancy, he was abused by his biological parents. A nurse kidnaps him [[spoiler:and raises him [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender ''as her daughter'']], teaching that "girls are good, boys are bad". One day the nurse dies but her ID is stolen. By the time authorities identify her and find her child, "Lee Galespi" is close to death by starvation. And that is before he enters the foster care system.]]
* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder is based upon the electric chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die in an improvised gas chamber.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: The killer's early life. In infancy, he was abused by his biological parents. A nurse kidnaps him [[spoiler:and raises him [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender ''as her daughter'']], teaching "Lee" that "girls are good, boys are bad". One day the nurse dies but her ID is stolen. By the time authorities identify her and find her child, "Lee Galespi" is close to death by starvation. And that is before
* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder is based upon the electric chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die from carbon monoxide poisoning in an improvised gas chamber.]]
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* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
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* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who CommitmentIssues: Alan has been dating Indiana for several years now and is friends happy keeping things casual. It is not until she breaks up with Ryan him and Pedro.he loses his wealth that he finally proposes to her.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Ryan is haunted by one of his missions: he entered a village home in Afghanistan, kills a woman who comes at him with a knife, and finds her two children, a little girl and an infant, hiding in a hole in the ground.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Ryan is haunted by one of his missions: he entered a village home in Afghanistan, kills a woman who comes at him with a knife, and finds her two children, a little girl and an infant, hiding in a hole in the ground.
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* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder is based upon the electric chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die in an improvised gas chamber.]]
* UnconventionalFormatting: Most of the book is written on a third-person POV. The only exception is a portion of the text that appears in italics, written in first-person POV, representing Indiana's abductor, as they explain why they did what they did.
* ThemeSerialKiller: The killer chooses to "execute" his victims with variations on the death penalty: one is shot execution style, the foster parents are killed via an overdose (lethal injection), the psychiatrist's murder is based upon the electric chair, and the judge is garroted to death. [[spoiler:His first victims die in an improvised gas chamber.]]
* UnconventionalFormatting: Most of the book is written on a third-person POV. The only exception is a portion of the text that appears in italics, written in first-person POV, representing Indiana's abductor, as they explain why they did what they did.
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: The first murder reported; all other victims are killed and later found at home.
* DesecratingTheDead: Ed Staton is found dead from a gunshot in the middle of his forehead at a school gym, sprawled on a vaulting horse, pants around his ankles, and a baseball bat inserted where the sun don’t shine.
* DesecratingTheDead: Ed Staton is found dead from a gunshot in the middle of his forehead at a school gym, sprawled on a vaulting horse, pants around his ankles, and a baseball bat inserted where the sun don’t shine.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Judge Rachel Rosen's body is found by the house cleaners... whose mother is the housekeeper at Blake Jackson's home ... who still happens to have an amicable relationship with his former son-in-law ... who is in charge of the Homicide Unit of the Police Department.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Judge Rachel Rosen's body is How the police department learns about the newest victim of a serial killer: the owners of her housecleaning service went to her home and found by her. They are undocumented and afraid of going to the house cleaners... whose police. Fortunately, their mother is the a housekeeper at Blake Jackson's home ... to a pharmacist who still happens to have has an amicable relationship with his former son-in-law ...son-in-law... who is in charge of the Homicide Unit of the Police Department.
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** The abusive foster parents are found with letters burned on their buttocks: A on one, F on the others.
** The psychologist is found with the shape of a swastika cut on his chest.
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** Amanda is mentioned to have an obsession with [[Literature/{{Twilight}} books about vampires and werewolves]].
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Gary, one of Indiana's patients at the holistic clinic is very interested in her, but she finds him boring as hell.
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** [[spoiler:And the first victims: his biological parents, who were abusive to him ''as an infant'' and killed his sister.]]
*AbhorrentAdmirer: Gary, AbhorrentAdmirer:
** Gary Brunswick, one of Indiana's patients at the holistic clinic is very interested in her, but she finds him boring ashell.hell. She finally has to dismiss him as a patient.
** Celeste Roko, famous astrologer and Amanda's godmother, has the hots for Blake Jackson, Amanda's grandfather. He arranges for the housekeeper to warn him if Celeste is coming so he can disappear.
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** Gary Brunswick, one of Indiana's patients at the holistic clinic is very interested in her, but she finds him boring as
** Celeste Roko, famous astrologer and Amanda's godmother, has the hots for Blake Jackson, Amanda's grandfather. He arranges for the housekeeper to warn him if Celeste is coming so he can disappear.
* AnimalMotif: Wolves. They serve as the killer's CallingCard.
* CallingCard: It's all about wolves. The widow of one of the victims receives a copy of Creator/HermannHesse's novel ''Steppenwolf''. Another victim, who collected glass figurines, receives one after her death that is at first mistaken for a dog but it's really a wolf.
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* HandicappedBadass: Despite losing his leg during a mission, Ryan still practices at the gun range, trains his dog (who was his partner in Afghanistan) and is a triathlete. [[spoiler: When the identity of Indiana's abductor is found, he and Indiana break into the location where she is being kept. Not even mortally wounded stops him from saving her.]]
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* HandicappedBadass: Despite losing his leg during a mission, Ryan still practices at the gun range, trains his dog (who was his partner in Afghanistan) and is a triathlete. [[spoiler: When the identity of Indiana's abductor is found, he and Indiana Attila break into the location where she is being kept. Not even being mortally wounded stops him from saving her.]]
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* PickyEater: Amanda eats a vegetarian diet (she is repulsed by meat) but hates vegetables and has a SweetTooth. At dinner with her family and friends, she orders three desserts and a Coke.
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* BittersweetEnding: The serial killer is found and [[spoiler: killed, but both Alan and Ryan are dead. Indiana is still traumatized but she decides to travel to Afghanistan to provide aid to the village children from Ryan's past. Amanda is all set to start her first semester at MIT but that means leaving the nest.]]
* CampGay: Indiana's friend Danny, a server at the cafe. He invites her and her friends to see him perform at a gay bar as Whitney Houston.
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* HandicappedBadass: Despite losing his leg during a mission, Ryan still practices at the gun range, trains his dog (who was his partner in Afghanistan) and is a triathlete. [[spoiler: When the identity of Indiana's abductor is found, he and Indiana break into the location where she is being kept. Not even mortally wounded stops him from saving her.]]
* HandicappedBadass: Despite losing his leg during a mission, Ryan still practices at the gun range, trains his dog (who was his partner in Afghanistan) and is a triathlete. [[spoiler: When the identity of Indiana's abductor is found, he and Indiana break into the location where she is being kept. Not even mortally wounded stops him from saving her.]]
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* PoeticSerialKiller: The killer had been abused as an infant and [[DepartmentOfChildDisservices mistreated through the foster care system]]. He is later victimized via the juvenile court system. All the people he murders later on (with one exception) were all directly involved in his TraumaCongaLine.
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Amanda Martin is fascinated by crime. She is currently obsessed with a game called “Ripper” which she plays online with players from around the world. With the assistance of her beloved grandfather, she guides the group (Sherlock, Esmeralda, Colonel Paddington, and Abatha) in their objective of solve crimes inspired by those of Jack the Ripper. She finds herself steering her group toward solving real life murders taking place around the San Francisco area where she lives.
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Amanda Martin is fascinated by crime. She is currently obsessed with a game called “Ripper” which she plays online with players from around the world. With the assistance of her beloved grandfather, she guides the group (Sherlock, Esmeralda, Colonel Paddington, and Abatha) in their objective of solve crimes inspired by those of Jack the Ripper. She finds herself steering her group toward solving real life When a series of grisly murders starts taking place around in the San Francisco area where she lives.
leaves, she is fascinated by then and finds herself steering the group toward solving these real life murders.
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** A psychologist who was a DomesticAbuser and once prescribed electroshock.
** A HangingJudge from Juvenile Court, known as The Butcher, who is a tightwad and who is constantly late in paying for her cleaning service.
** A HangingJudge from Juvenile Court, known as The Butcher, who is a tightwad and who is constantly late in paying for her cleaning service.
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** A famed child psychologist who was a DomesticAbuser and once prescribed electroshock.
was fond of prescribing shock treatment.
** A HangingJudge from Juvenile Court, known as The Butcher,who is a tightwad and who is constantly late in paying for her cleaning service.
** A HangingJudge from Juvenile Court, known as The Butcher,
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* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and a scarp.
* ShotgunWedding: Bob and Indiana marry as a result of her becoming pregnant as a teenager. Since he was a DumbJock with a HairTriggerTemper, their marriage didn't last too long. Oddly enough, their relationship is very friendly and kind by the time the novel takes place.
* ShotgunWedding: Bob and Indiana marry as a result of her becoming pregnant as a teenager. Since he was a DumbJock with a HairTriggerTemper, their marriage didn't last too long. Oddly enough, their relationship is very friendly and kind by the time the novel takes place.
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* IfICantHaveYou: Indiana is kidnapped on account of not returning the affections of [[spoiler:Gary, one of the serial killer's personas.]]
* KnownOnlyByTheirNickname: The Ripper players are only known by the name of their personas: Sherlock Holmes, the streetwise Romani Esmeralda, the psychic Abatha, and old-fashioned Colonel Paddington.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast:
** Ryan's dog used to be work with him while he was stationed in Afghanistan. He was trained to kill upon command, which he can do thanks to his titanium fangs. His name? Attila, as in UsefulNotes/AttilaTheHun.
** The HangingJudge Rachel Rosen has been given the name "The Butcher" for imposing overly harsh sentences, not out of a sense of justice but for the bonuses paid to her by for-profit detention centers.
* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and ascarp.
scarf.
* ShotgunWedding: Bob and Indianamarry married as a result of her becoming pregnant as a teenager. Since he was a DumbJock with a HairTriggerTemper, their marriage didn't last too long. Oddly enough, their relationship is very friendly and kind by the time the novel takes place.
* KnownOnlyByTheirNickname: The Ripper players are only known by the name of their personas: Sherlock Holmes, the streetwise Romani Esmeralda, the psychic Abatha, and old-fashioned Colonel Paddington.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast:
** Ryan's dog used to be work with him while he was stationed in Afghanistan. He was trained to kill upon command, which he can do thanks to his titanium fangs. His name? Attila, as in UsefulNotes/AttilaTheHun.
** The HangingJudge Rachel Rosen has been given the name "The Butcher" for imposing overly harsh sentences, not out of a sense of justice but for the bonuses paid to her by for-profit detention centers.
* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and a
* ShotgunWedding: Bob and Indiana
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* AssholeVictims: The victims of the serial killer:
** A security worker who used to work at a youth detention center and had a file full of complaints about his brutality towards the youths.
** A couple who served as foster parents to troubled youth and were abusive.
** A psychologist who was a DomesticAbuser and once prescribed electroshock.
** A HangingJudge from Juvenile Court, known as The Butcher, who is a tightwad and who is constantly late in paying for her cleaning service.
** A security worker who used to work at a youth detention center and had a file full of complaints about his brutality towards the youths.
** A couple who served as foster parents to troubled youth and were abusive.
** A psychologist who was a DomesticAbuser and once prescribed electroshock.
** A HangingJudge from Juvenile Court, known as The Butcher, who is a tightwad and who is constantly late in paying for her cleaning service.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Indiana is constantly losing her phone, her keys, and appears oblivious to things going around. But when it comes to her work as a holistic healer, she is a consummate professional.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Indiana is constantly losing her phone, her keys, and appears oblivious to things going around. But when it comes to her work as a holistic healer, healer and her side gig as a seller of aromatherapy products, she is a consummate professional.
takes those very seriously.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: One of Indiana's patients at the holistic clinic is very interested in her, but she finds him boring as hell.
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Amanda Martin is fascinated by crime. She is currently obsessed with a game called “Ripper” which she plays online with players from around the world. With the assistance of her beloved grandfather, she guides the group (Sherlock, Esmeralda, Colonel Paddington, and Abatha) in their objective of solve crimes inspired by those of Jack the Ripper. She finds herself steering her group toward solving real life murders taking place around the San Francisco area where she lives.
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Amanda is a Game Master for an group of young people playing "Ripper", a role-playing game where they are trying to solve murders. She finds it easy to convince her group to switch to try solving real life murders taking place around the San Francisco area where she lives. But the game stops being fun when her free-spirited mother goes missing.
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Amanda Martin is fascinated by crime. She is currently obsessed with a Game Master for an game called “Ripper” which she plays online with players from around the world. With the assistance of her beloved grandfather, she guides the group (Sherlock, Esmeralda, Colonel Paddington, and Abatha) in their objective of young people playing "Ripper", a role-playing game where they are trying to solve murders. crimes inspired by those of Jack the Ripper. She finds it easy to convince herself steering her group to switch to try toward solving real life murders taking place around the San Francisco area where she lives. lives.
But the game stops being fun when her mother, free-spiritedmother Indiana Jackson, goes missing.
But the game stops being fun when her mother, free-spirited
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Not to be confused with Creator/MichaelSlade's 1994 novel, ''Ripper''.
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''El juego de Ripper'' (published in English simply as ''Ripper'') is a 2014 novel by Creator/IsabelAllende.
Amanda is a Game Master for an group of young people playing "Ripper", a role-playing game where they are trying to solve murders. She finds it easy to convince her group to switch to try solving real life murders taking place around the San Francisco area where she lives. But the game stops being fun when her free-spirited mother goes missing.
!!Tropes present in this work
* AbhorrentAdmirer: One of Indiana's patients at the holistic clinic is very interested in her, but she finds him boring as hell.
* AmbiguousDisorder: Amanda is incredibly intelligent but seems to have trouble with social skills and fitting in, is downright obsessive with her interests, is averse to the smells of the other girls in her dorm. It is mentioned that she was taken to a child psychiatrist when she was younger, but nobody mentions any formal diagnosis. She is just written off as quirky.
* BettyAndVeronica: With wealthy, sophisticated Alan as the Veronica, and war veteran Ryan as the Betty.
* BondageIsBad: Ryan goes out with Jennifer, a big fan of BDSM, even though he is put off by it. When he breaks up, she makes a big scene in public. She blames Indiana and later threatens her.
* BrattyTeenageDaughter: Amanda can sometimes come across like that, being openly contemptuous about her dad's most recent love interest, and passing judgment on her mother's life choices.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Indiana is constantly losing her phone, her keys, and appears oblivious to things going around. But when it comes to her work as a holistic healer, she is a consummate professional.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and a scarp.
* ShotgunWedding: Bob and Indiana marry as a result of her becoming pregnant as a teenager. Since he was a DumbJock with a HairTriggerTemper, their marriage didn't last too long. Oddly enough, their relationship is very friendly and kind by the time the novel takes place.
* ShoutOut:
** Ryan mentions [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey a book about shades of grey or beige]] ... or something like that.
** References are made to ''Literature/MillenniumSeries'',
** Amanda is mentioned to have an obsession with [[Literature/{{Twilight}} books about vampires and werewolves]].
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''El juego de Ripper'' (published in English simply as ''Ripper'') is a 2014 novel by Creator/IsabelAllende.
Amanda is a Game Master for an group of young people playing "Ripper", a role-playing game where they are trying to solve murders. She finds it easy to convince her group to switch to try solving real life murders taking place around the San Francisco area where she lives. But the game stops being fun when her free-spirited mother goes missing.
!!Tropes present in this work
* AbhorrentAdmirer: One of Indiana's patients at the holistic clinic is very interested in her, but she finds him boring as hell.
* AmbiguousDisorder: Amanda is incredibly intelligent but seems to have trouble with social skills and fitting in, is downright obsessive with her interests, is averse to the smells of the other girls in her dorm. It is mentioned that she was taken to a child psychiatrist when she was younger, but nobody mentions any formal diagnosis. She is just written off as quirky.
* BettyAndVeronica: With wealthy, sophisticated Alan as the Veronica, and war veteran Ryan as the Betty.
* BondageIsBad: Ryan goes out with Jennifer, a big fan of BDSM, even though he is put off by it. When he breaks up, she makes a big scene in public. She blames Indiana and later threatens her.
* BrattyTeenageDaughter: Amanda can sometimes come across like that, being openly contemptuous about her dad's most recent love interest, and passing judgment on her mother's life choices.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Indiana is constantly losing her phone, her keys, and appears oblivious to things going around. But when it comes to her work as a holistic healer, she is a consummate professional.
* CoolOldLady: Denise, a woman in her sixties who is friends with Ryan and Pedro.
* RummageSaleReject: Amanda. Her ensembles are not guided by trends or even common sense. When she goes out to breakfast with her dad and he points out that she is in flip-flops when it's rainy out, she just puts on a Peruvian wool hat and a scarp.
* ShotgunWedding: Bob and Indiana marry as a result of her becoming pregnant as a teenager. Since he was a DumbJock with a HairTriggerTemper, their marriage didn't last too long. Oddly enough, their relationship is very friendly and kind by the time the novel takes place.
* ShoutOut:
** Ryan mentions [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey a book about shades of grey or beige]] ... or something like that.
** References are made to ''Literature/MillenniumSeries'',
** Amanda is mentioned to have an obsession with [[Literature/{{Twilight}} books about vampires and werewolves]].