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* AsianAirhead: Miss Himiko talks like a [[spoiler:Subverted when she's shown to be more cunning and cynical
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* AsianAirhead: Miss Himiko talks like a ditzy Asian woman, similar to that of a little Anime girl. [[spoiler:Subverted when she's shown to be more cunning and cynicalcapable of speaking perfect English behind the curtain.]]
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Pinot Noir is a psychopathic assassin inhabiting a town populated by cutthroat murderers, a cannibalistic organ harvester, and a child trafficking preacher.
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* DeconstructiveParody: Of dark action movies and video games. The main character isn't a selfless hero or vigilante, but a psychopath who wants some sleep and is willing to take down everybody in order to do so. Action tropes are constantly being questioned and lampooned by either the narration, or the characters. However, a lot of things are played for laughs due to how over-the-top they are.
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* DeconstructiveParody: Of dark action movies B-movies and WideOpenSandbox video games. The main character isn't a selfless hero or vigilante, but a psychopath who wants some sleep and is willing to take down everybody in order to do so. Action tropes are constantly being questioned and lampooned by either the narration, or the characters. characters, even Pinot's more dumber decisions are mocked by the narrator. At one point, Pinot even questions on whether or not he's murdering these people for fun, or because he actually wants some rest. However, a lot most of things are played the humor involves amping up the insanity of certain action tropes for laughs due to how over-the-top they are.comedy.
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* {{Expy}}: Big D is one toward [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]].
* FatBastard: Greta has a large beer gut containing mainly the remains of human organs.
* FatBastard: Greta has a large beer gut containing mainly the remains of human organs.
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* {{Expy}}: Big D is one toward [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]].
Fisk]], specifically the one played by Creator/MichaelClarkeDuncan.
*FatBastard: FatBastard:
** Greta has a large beer gut containing mainly the remains of humanorgans.organs.
** [[spoiler:Himiko is revealed to be more selfish and greedy than she lets on, as well as more fatter than she appears.]]
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** Greta has a large beer gut containing mainly the remains of human
** [[spoiler:Himiko is revealed to be more selfish and greedy than she lets on, as well as more fatter than she appears.]]
* MadDoctor: Greta could count as one, except she doesn't have a [=PhD=], what with her obsession with human experimentation and her knowledge of collecting organs from corpses.
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*** The name of the chapter is a play-on of the WebAnimation/RWBY WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} song, "Armed and Ready."
* VillainousRescue: The mysterious cyborg ninja has saved Pinot from death twice. Pinot himself even asks the ninja on whether or not he actually wants to kill him.
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** Crank Gibson not only keeps the child Maggie to act as his pet, but is also willing to kill her in front of Pinot when he invades his headquarters.
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** Crank Gibson not only keeps the child Maggie around his office to act as his pet, but is also willing to kill her in front of Pinot when he invades his headquarters.
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* {{Gorn}}: The story doesn't shy away from the amount bloodshed and carnage committed by everybody.
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* {{Gorn}}: The story doesn't shy away from the amount bloodshed and carnage committed by everybody. Especially prominent in Chapter 5 when Pinot [[spoiler:transforms into a beast that slays countless goons in creatively violent ways, painting most of the room with blood.]]
* KnightTemplar: Kleetus' public persona is this, advocating the brutal murders of all criminals or people who look like they could be a criminal. Ironic considering he's a criminal himself.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Subverted for laughs. After Pinot [[spoiler:transforms back into a human after his time as a muscular murderer,]] he glances at his blood-stained hands in horror... only to realize who awesome [[spoiler:his new form]] is and how much fun he had killing those people.
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* OfCorsetsFunny: In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Himiko's svelte figure is actually covered by the large corset, hiding the facing that she's actually quite obese.]]
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* OfCorsetsFunny: In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Himiko's svelte figure is actually covered by the large corset, hiding the facing fact that she's actually quite obese.]]
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* RealityEnsues:RealityEnsues: Quite a bit for a story that's ludicrously over the top.
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* SelfImposedChallenge: InUniverse. Pinot, while fighting Red and her goons at an arcade, decides to intentionally kill them without using bullets so that he may save his ammunition for a fight that actually matters to him.
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* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: We get a brief insight as to how Big Daddy Donny views the world. He sees Pinot as a frightening tentacle creature that must be destroyed, which is probably how he sees everybody else.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: [[spoiler:Miss Himiko is not only revealed to be an overweight woman behind the scenes, but an overweight women capable of rapid punches, backflips, and high kicks.]]
* AsianAirhead: Miss Himiko talks like a [[spoiler:Subverted when she's shown to be more cunning and cynical
* {{Kevlard}}: Pinot couldn't properly punch [[spoiler:Himiko in the stomach due to his fist bouncing off her flab.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity: From Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Miss Himiko's innocent, dough eyed, Japanese {{Moe}} girl personality she shows off as the announcer is far from the more cynical, swearing, American accented personality that is truly hers.
* OfCorsetsFunny: In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Himiko's svelte figure is actually covered by the large corset, hiding the facing that she's actually quite obese.]]
* OfCorsetsFunny: In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Himiko's svelte figure is actually covered by the large corset, hiding the facing that she's actually quite obese.]]
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** After Crank detonates his employees' heart bombs, he suddenly realizes that he would need to hire over 100 more people, which would end up costing him more money and time, meaning that his business would be affected by this.
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** After Crank detonates his employees' heart bombs, he suddenly realizes that he would need to hire over 100 more people, which would end up costing him more money and time, meaning that his business would be heavily affected by this.
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* AffectionateParody: Of over-the-top action films, vigilante stories, and B-grade exploitation flicks.
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* AffectionateParody: Of over-the-top action films, video games, vigilante stories, and B-grade exploitation flicks.
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* AlliterativeName: '''K'''leetus '''K'''lamenting.'''K'''lementine.
* ButtMonkey: Poor Schultz gets no respect with Greta, constantly enduring her pain, which includes verbal abuse, threats of gutting him for the slightest failure, strangling him for interrupting her experimentation of Pinot, and even [[spoiler:castrating him for letting Pinot go.]]
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* DeconstructiveParody: Of dark action movies and video games. The main character isn't a selfless hero or vigilante, but a psychopath who wants some sleep and is willing to take down everybody in order to do so. Tropes are constantly being questioned and lampooned by either the narration, or the characters. However, a lot of things are played for laughs due to how over-the-top they are.
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* DeconstructiveParody: Of dark action movies and video games. The main character isn't a selfless hero or vigilante, but a psychopath who wants some sleep and is willing to take down everybody in order to do so. Tropes Action tropes are constantly being questioned and lampooned by either the narration, or the characters. However, a lot of things are played for laughs due to how over-the-top they are.
* HellIsThatNoise: People under the affects of Pleasure who have not taken another dose of it will experience an ongoing, horrifying siren noise that drives them insane until they take another dose.
* KarmicDeath: Crank is injected with his own doses of Pleasure, and killed by his own child sex slave while experiencing the nightmares he put his customers through.
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* KnockoutGas: Junior is gets a whiff of this ''twice''.
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* KnockoutGas: Junior is gets a whiff of this ''twice''.
* WomanInWhite: The little Maggie, Crank Gibson's former sex slave.
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** Kleetus Klementine and his child trafficking operation. Really speaks for itself.
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** Kleetus Klementine and his child trafficking operation. Really It really speaks for itself.
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* RuleOfCool: 50% of the story runs on this logic.
* RuleOfFunny: The other 50% runs on this.
* RuleOfFunny: The other 50% runs on this.
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* AlliterativeName: '''K'''leetus '''K'''lementine.
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* AlliterativeName: '''K'''leetus '''K'''lementine.'''K'''lamenting.
* AmbiguouslyGay: It's heavily implied that Mr. Pow and Blam are in some kind of relationship. [[spoiler:Mr. Pow's death proceeds to break Mr. Blam, the narration showing that he ''really'' cared for his partner in crime.]]
* AmbiguouslyGay: It's heavily implied that Mr. Pow and Blam are in some kind of relationship. [[spoiler:Mr. Pow's death proceeds to break Mr. Blam, the narration showing that he ''really'' cared for his partner in crime.]]
* BigNo: [[spoiler:Mr. Blam]] screams this after [[spoiler:Mr. Pow gets stabbed by Kleetus]].
* ExplosiveLeash: Somewhat. Crank sews explosives in his employees'--both the chemists and dealers--hearts, detonating them should they give away his location or fail at their jobs.
* FriendToAllChildren: Downplayed. While Pinot couldn't give a shit about children, as the ones he comes across who end up in danger are just nobodies he doesn't care about, it's his conscience that makes him start caring for the children in distress, becoming one of these in the process.
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* KnockoutGas: Junior is gets a whiff of this ''twice''.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Mr. Pow and Blam talk in a very stoic way, with both referring to each other and others as "Mr. X" at the end of every sentence. [[spoiler:So when all Mr. Blam could say while watching the death of Mr. Pow is a loud "No!", then that means his death hit him ''hard''.]]
* ShotToTheHeart: Pinot does this whenever he takes coffee scotchka. As tonight's the first time he had ever done this technique, it ends up hurting him.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: While he doesn't come right out and say it, [[spoiler:Kleetus killing Mr. Pow and preventing Mr. Blam from going to comfort him as his partner dies]] is essentially this.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: While he doesn't come right out and say it, [[spoiler:Kleetus killing Mr. Pow and preventing Mr. Blam from going to comfort him as his partner dies]] dying partner]] is essentially this.
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* ActionGirl: "Red", an assassin in Kaos who is tasked by D's men to take out Pinot.
* AffectionateParody: Of over-the-top action films, vigilante stories, and B-grade exploitation flicks.
* AffectionateParody: Of over-the-top action films, vigilante stories, and B-grade exploitation flicks.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Timmy wears a dashing suit, and can kick ass.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: BadassInANiceSuit:
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** "Red" also wears one, and can too kick ass.
** Timmy wears a dashing suit, and can kick ass.
** "Red" also wears one, and can too kick ass.
* FrameUp: Greta does this to Pinot by [[spoiler:brutally murdering Junior]], pinning the blame on him and allowing D to become both broken and willing to bend to her every will. That, and it allowed her to have an excuse to bring Pinot back to her and continue experimenting on him.
* {{Gorn}}: The story doesn't shy away from the amount bloodshed and carnage committed by everybody.
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* KilledOffscreen: Melon [=LaMar=], though it's at least implied that he was shot in the head.
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* KilledOffscreen: KilledOffscreen:
** Melon [=LaMar=], though it's at least implied that he was shot in thehead.head.
** Poor [[spoiler:Junior]] is brutally murdered by Greta offscreen. However, we see the remains what what she did to him, and they aren't pretty to say the least.
* KnockoutGas:
** Melon [=LaMar=], though it's at least implied that he was shot in the
** Poor [[spoiler:Junior]] is brutally murdered by Greta offscreen. However, we see the remains what what she did to him, and they aren't pretty to say the least.
* KnockoutGas:
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** From the same chapter, we have ''Unleash the Rat'', a show that tried to turn the lovable ''Happy Rat'' gang into a dark and edgy action show, mocking not only poor attempts at making darker kids shows, but also ''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed''.
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** From the same chapter, we have A more lighthearted example, also from Chapter 4, is ''Unleash the Rat'', a show that tried to turn the lovable ''Happy Rat'' gang into a dark and edgy action show, mocking not only poor attempts at making darker kids shows, shows based on cuter franchises, but also ''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed''.''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed''. Granted, ''Happy Rat'' wasn't exactly "soft" to begin with given the songs they sing.
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* PetTheDog: Pinot may be a crazed hitman, but [[spoiler:protecting Maggie and giving her to Penelope for protection]] shows that he's not ''totally'' uncaring.
** Crank is racist towards D, not helped by the fact that D is an enemy of his.
* RealityEnsues:
** Pinot's constant vomiting thanks to a combination of coffee scotchka and the fact that all the adrenaline is building up is ruining his body, combined with his lack of sleep.
** After Crank detonates his employees' heart bombs, he suddenly realizes that he would need to hire over 100 more people, which would end up costing him more money and time, meaning that his business would be affected by this.
** Once Pinot kills Red and aims his weapon at the final three members of her posse, [[spoiler:the three gunmen just throw their weapons down on the floor and call it quits, as they have no longer have a leader, and Pinot had already killed nine of their own, so why bother trying to fight him?]]
** Pinot's constant vomiting thanks to a combination of coffee scotchka and the fact that all the adrenaline is building up is ruining his body, combined with his lack of sleep.
** After Crank detonates his employees' heart bombs, he suddenly realizes that he would need to hire over 100 more people, which would end up costing him more money and time, meaning that his business would be affected by this.
** Once Pinot kills Red and aims his weapon at the final three members of her posse, [[spoiler:the three gunmen just throw their weapons down on the floor and call it quits, as they have no longer have a leader, and Pinot had already killed nine of their own, so why bother trying to fight him?]]
* StupidEvil: Deconstructed with Crank Gibson. He thinks that rather than send his men out to kill Pinot when he invades his factory and releases his employees from their collars, that it would be a better idea to just blow every single one of his employees up in hopes that one of those explosions would kill Pinot. Instead, the whole thing results in everybody in the factory dying except Pinot. Crank realizes what a colossal mistake he made and thinks about how his actions just affected his business operation. Even the narration points out how stupid he was.
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** Crank Gibson is one towards Creator/JohnKricfalusi. Both are selfish Canadian businessmen who run their businesses like tyrants, have very short tempers, work their employees to the bone, and are disturbing child groomers.
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** Crank Gibson is one towards Creator/JohnKricfalusi. Both are selfish selfish, racist Canadian businessmen who run their businesses like tyrants, have very short tempers, work their employees to the bone, and are disturbing child groomers.groomers.
** From the same chapter, we have ''Unleash the Rat'', a show that tried to turn the lovable ''Happy Rat'' gang into a dark and edgy action show, mocking not only poor attempts at making darker kids shows, but also ''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed''.
** From the same chapter, we have ''Unleash the Rat'', a show that tried to turn the lovable ''Happy Rat'' gang into a dark and edgy action show, mocking not only poor attempts at making darker kids shows, but also ''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed''.
* TorsoWithAView: During Pinot's battle with the assassin Red, [[spoiler:Pinot defeats her by launching a foam bitch fist through her stomach, creating a clean hole that ends up killing her.]]
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* BadBoss: Crank Gibson is a major example of this. He carelessly kills off his entire factory staff in order to kill Pinot, and even had one of his drug dealers killed for labeling this action as "horrible."
* CanadaEh: Crank Gibson hails from Calgary, Alberta, Canada, and is very proud of his heritage, to the point where he has a Calgary city flag hanging in his office.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Crank runs Pleasure Island like a sweatshop, forcing people to create the deadly drug Pleasure to be sold on the streets of Kaos, having their hearts detonated if they make a mistake. If that wasn't enough, the families of his workers are secretly murdered to make them continue working, his drug dealers also have explosives attached to their hearts, and Crank later on decides that it's better to just detonate his entire factory just because he wasn't thinking straight. Plus, [[spoiler:Crank is secretly assisting Greta in a plan that would involve world domination, having been promised money and co-ownership of the world should her plan succeed.]]
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* TakeThat: [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't take criticism.
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* TakeThat: TakeThat:
** [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't takecriticism.criticism.
** Crank Gibson is one towards Creator/JohnKricfalusi. Both are selfish Canadian businessmen who run their businesses like tyrants, have very short tempers, work their employees to the bone, and are disturbing child groomers.
** [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't take
** Crank Gibson is one towards Creator/JohnKricfalusi. Both are selfish Canadian businessmen who run their businesses like tyrants, have very short tempers, work their employees to the bone, and are disturbing child groomers.
* VillainousBreakdown: Crank, after realizing that he had just killed everybody in his factory and had failed to kill Pinot, while also thinking about what he must do now that he had stupidly killed off everyone working in his factory, goes on a rampage, bashing his desk in, snorting a lot of cocaine, and even threatening to kill the little Maggie.
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* CurbStompBattle: Timmy's battle with Richie's gang in Chapter 3. Four dangerous, armed criminals against one butler with a gun and a knife. [[spoiler:Timmy wins.]]
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* AssholeVictim:
** Jerrel, who gets killed in a prolonged, painful manor, is a smug rapist who tried to hand over D's resources to a lesser gang. Even the gang's leader tries to kill Jerrel for being dishonest.
** Richie Sallinger is brutally murdered by Timmy, but since he's a pedophilic necrophiliac, nobody complains.
** Jerrel, who gets killed in a prolonged, painful manor, is a smug rapist who tried to hand over D's resources to a lesser gang. Even the gang's leader tries to kill Jerrel for being dishonest.
** Richie Sallinger is brutally murdered by Timmy, but since he's a pedophilic necrophiliac, nobody complains.
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* BodyHorror: Greta's experiments, from what Pinot glimpses at, are this, with limbs growing from one woman's mouth, a man's eyes and lips being sewn shut, and a human blob with two faces.
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* ArmsDealer: Melon [=LaMar=], one of, if not ''the'' most famous arms dealers in all of Kaos.
* BaldBlackLeaderGuy: Big D is one towards not only his gang, but also Kaos as a whole.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Greta thinks that D should treat her with more respect and credibility after pitching the idea of Purge Night to him.
* {{Expy}}: Big D is one toward [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]].
* FrickinLaserBeams: Both Melon's Fabricator gun and [[spoiler:his own laser dong]] from Chapter 3.
* KilledOffscreen: Melon [=LaMar=], though it's at least implied that he was shot in the head.
* ThePigPen: Due to working next to dead bodies and refusing to bathe or clean herself, Greta is seen by many as repulsive.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain:
** Jerrel is implied to be racist, as he accidentally refers to D as a "Nigger".
** Melon is also not fond of Canada.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain:
** Jerrel is implied to be racist, as he accidentally refers to D as a "Nigger".
** Melon is also not fond of Canada.
* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Junior gives one to D in Chapter 3.
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*** Melon's [[spoiler:laser penis canon]] is a nod to the J-sploitation films like Film/TokyoGorePolice ''Film/TokyoGorePolice'' that inspired the story.
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* YourHeadAsplode: YouNeedABreathMint: Pinot tells Greta this when he meets her for the first time.
* YourHeadAsplode:
** Jerrel's head explodes after D shootsit.it.
** Jacky, one of Richie's men, has this happen to him courtesy of Timmy.
** Implied with what happened to Melon [=LaMar=].
* YourHeadAsplode:
** Jerrel's head explodes after D shoots
** Jacky, one of Richie's men, has this happen to him courtesy of Timmy.
** Implied with what happened to Melon [=LaMar=].
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Pinot Noir is a psychopathic assassin inhabiting a town populated by cutthroat murderers, a cannibalistic organ harvester, and a child trafficking preacher.
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** Pinot prefers using twopistols.pistols.
** Melon [=LaMar=] takes this up a notch by being able to dual wield ''every weapon''.
** Pinot prefers using two
** Melon [=LaMar=] takes this up a notch by being able to dual wield ''every weapon''.
* FanDisservice: Greta, from her grotesque appearance, her personality, and her eating habits/diet.
* {{Fingore}}:
** Jerrel's hand is blown off by Pinot's shotgun.
** Timmy slices the fingers off of Richie's hand before killing him.
* {{Fingore}}:
** Jerrel's hand is blown off by Pinot's shotgun.
** Timmy slices the fingers off of Richie's hand before killing him.
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* {{Fingore}}: Jerrel's hand is blown off by Pinot's shotgun.
* HyperspaceArsenal: Melon is a non-video game example. Within his coat, he's somehow able to carry two uzis, two short-range shotguns, two revolvers, and two [[spoiler:rocket launchers]].
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* ImStandingRightHere: D says that he values his son's life over his own follower's lives, even that of Timmy. Timmy, who was standing right next to him. He even lets out a loud sigh of annoyance.
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* ImStandingRightHere: D says that he values his son's life over his own follower's lives, even that of Timmy. Timmy, who was standing right next to him. He even him, lets out a loud sigh of annoyance.
* ManlyTears: Deconstructed. D starts shedding a few tears after his son gives him a ReasonYouSuckSpeech. One of D's bodyguards starts chuckling at the picture of his hardened boss crying. D notices and murders him by bashing and scraping his head against the wall.
* ShotgunsAreJustBetter: One of Pinot's weapons is a shotgun, which proves quite useful at points.
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* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: Pinot says a variation of this when he sees Melon [[spoiler:pull out two rocket launchers from his jacket]].
* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: Pinot says a variation of this when he sees Melon [[spoiler:pull out two rocket launchers from his jacket]].
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*** Melon namedrops ''Film/{{Versus}}'' when bringing up his new laser rifles.
*** Melon's ability to dodge bullets is a parody of GunKata, with Pinot calling it "[[Film/{{Equilibrium}} Kurt Wimmer]] bullshit."
*** Melon namedrops ''Film/{{Versus}}'' when bringing up his new laser rifles.
*** Melon's ability to dodge bullets is a parody of GunKata, with Pinot calling it "[[Film/{{Equilibrium}} Kurt Wimmer]] bullshit."
*** Melon announcing his [[spoiler:"Super Laser Dick"]] is very similar to [[Webvideo/RealTimeFandub Alfred's]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A45CznHpEzk&pbjreload=10 Eggman rant]]
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* TakeThat: [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't take criticism.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam, assassins for hire who work for Kleetus in his child trafficking operation.
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* StuffBlowingUp: Pinot's attack on Melon's meet-up in Chapter 3 involves loads of explosions, and loads of gibs.
* TakeThat: [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't take criticism.
* ThoseTwoGuys: Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam, assassins for hire who work for Kleetus in his child trafficking operation.
* TakeThat: [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't take criticism.
* ThoseTwoGuys: Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam, assassins for hire who work for Kleetus in his child trafficking operation.
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* AlliterativeName: '''K'''leetus '''K'''lementine.
* BerserkButton: Do ''NOT'' call Greta a "Doctor," as she hasn't gotten her degree. Pinot learned that the hard way.
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* CrapsackWorld: With a town called "Kaos", one isn't expecting sunshine and rainbows. Murder, crime, rapists, organ harvesting, and a special night where all of that and more commences.
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* CrapsackWorld: With a town called "Kaos", one isn't expecting sunshine and rainbows. Murder, crime, rapists, organ harvesting, child trafficking, and a special night where all of that and more commences.
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* CripplingCastration: [[spoiler:Greta castrates Schultz after he lets Pinot escape her lab.]]
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* ImStandingRightHere: D says that he values his son's life over his own follower's lives, even that of Timmy. Timmy, who was standing right next to him. He even lets out a loud sigh of annoyance.
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* NewJobAsThePlotDemands: Parodied with Penelope. She mainly works as a bartender, but she's also a professional doctor, audiobook narrator, dry cleaner, ammunitions marketer, telemarketer, bomb disposer, and contract painter.
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* OrphanageOfFear: The Mother's Keep Orphanage, a dark, abandoned place where Richie Sallinger and his gang hang out, murdering children.
* PapaWolf: Big D is ''very'' protective of his son, Junior.
* PapaWolf: Big D is ''very'' protective of his son, Junior.
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*** Penelope wears a [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Buffy]] wristwatch.
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* SinisterMinister: Kleetus is one in two ways. He encourages his followers to act violently around supposed criminals, making him a vicious KnightTemplar to the public. Behind the scenes, he's a child trafficker who has children kidnapped and sold for money.
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* SleevesAreForWimps: Penelope says this word-for-word when describing why her lab coat doesn't have sleeves.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam, assassins for hire who work for Kleetus in his child trafficking operation.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Richie lasts only one scene before getting killed by Timmy.
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* AmbiguousTimePeriod: The time period isn't stated, yet has cell phones, tape recorders, cassettes, boom boxes, high tech cybernetic weaponry, and phone booths being seen as outdated.
* BadassLongcoat: Pinot wears a black one, while Melon wears a brown one.
* BadassLongcoat: Pinot wears a black one, while Melon wears a brown one.
* DeathByIrony: Melon's Death. "He's gonna pop that sucker's head open like a-"
* HumanTraffickers: Kleetus Klementine secretly runs a child trafficking operation where children are kidnapped and sold to various people.
* ILoveTheDead: Richie Sallinger, a pedophile who loves having sex with deceased children.
* ILoveTheDead: Richie Sallinger, a pedophile who loves having sex with deceased children.
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*** The name of the chapter is a play-on of the WebAnimation/RWBY song, "Armed and Ready."
*** K-Diddy is named after [[Film/ReservoirDogs K-Billy]], right down to being a dry, bored man playing nostalgic songs on the radio.
*** Melon [=LaMar=]'s ability to dodge bullets is a parody of GunKata, with Pinot calling it "[[Film/{{Equilibrium}} Kurt Wimmer]] bullshit."
*** Melon's [[spoiler:laser penis canon]] is a nod to the J-sploitation films like Film/TokyoGorePolice that inspired the story.
*** The wordplay surrounding Melon's death is very similar to [[ComicBook/{{Gear}} Big Tomato's]] death.
*** At one point, Pinot runs into a gang called [[Literature/PeterPan The Lost Teenz]], who wear animal hats.
*** The french Pornomancer's real name, Luc Reno, is a combination of Creator/LucBesson and Creator/JeanReno.
*** The name of the chapter is a play-on of the WebAnimation/RWBY song, "Armed and Ready."
*** K-Diddy is named after [[Film/ReservoirDogs K-Billy]], right down to being a dry, bored man playing nostalgic songs on the radio.
*** Melon [=LaMar=]'s ability to dodge bullets is a parody of GunKata, with Pinot calling it "[[Film/{{Equilibrium}} Kurt Wimmer]] bullshit."
*** Melon's [[spoiler:laser penis canon]] is a nod to the J-sploitation films like Film/TokyoGorePolice that inspired the story.
*** The wordplay surrounding Melon's death is very similar to [[ComicBook/{{Gear}} Big Tomato's]] death.
*** At one point, Pinot runs into a gang called [[Literature/PeterPan The Lost Teenz]], who wear animal hats.
*** The french Pornomancer's real name, Luc Reno, is a combination of Creator/LucBesson and Creator/JeanReno.
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* WouldHurtAChild:
** Kleetus Klementine and his child trafficking operation. Really speaks for itself.
** Richie Sallinger loves murdering children and having sex with their corpses.
** Kleetus Klementine and his child trafficking operation. Really speaks for itself.
** Richie Sallinger loves murdering children and having sex with their corpses.
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*** The ninja is a direct reference to [[Videogame/METALGEARSOLID Gray Fox]].
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*** The ninja is a direct reference to [[Videogame/METALGEARSOLID [[Videogame/MetalGearSolid Gray Fox]].
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*** The ninja is a direct reference to [[Videogame/METALGEARSOLID Gray Fox]].
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* SuckECheeses: Happy Rat's Magical Funland of Fun is a pretty gross place, with broken down animatronics who sing songs with disturbing titles, a disgusting ball pit, a tube maze area that tells children how to finish it, children being repeatedly captured by Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam, [[ArsonMurderJaywalking and a character named Penis Pete.]]
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* SuckECheeses: Happy Rat's Magical Funland of Fun is a pretty gross place, with broken down animatronics who sing songs with disturbing titles, a disgusting ball pit, a tube maze area that tells children how to finish it, children being repeatedly captured by Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam, [[ArsonMurderJaywalking [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and a character named Penis Pete.]]
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* DuelWielding: Pinot prefers using two pistols.
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* DuelWielding: DualWielding: Pinot prefers using two pistols.
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* TheAlcoholic: Implied with Jerrel, who shows up to his meeting for the Gangrew gang with an ankle bracelet.
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* BareYourMidriff: Greta is an unintentional example. Her stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her gut getting in the way.
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* BadassLongcoat: Pinot wears a black one.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Timmy wears a dashing suit, and can kick ass.
* BareYourMidriff: Greta is anunintentional unintentional, non-fanservice example. Her stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her gut getting in the way.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Timmy wears a dashing suit, and can kick ass.
* BareYourMidriff: Greta is an
* DuelWielding: Pinot prefers using two pistols.
* {{Fingore}}: Jerrel's hand is blown off by Pinot's shotgun.
* GunsAkimbo: One of Pinot's preferred methods of attacking are firing his two pistols.
* GunsAkimbo: One of Pinot's preferred methods of attacking are firing his two pistols.
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* SkullForAHead: Kind of. Mr. Blam's wears a large skull mask over his face.
* SmugSnake: Jerrel likes to think he's hot shit, but once he crosses paths with Pinot, and messes with Timmy and Big D, he constantly cries and begs for forgiveness.
* SmugSnake: Jerrel likes to think he's hot shit, but once he crosses paths with Pinot, and messes with Timmy and Big D, he constantly cries and begs for forgiveness.
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* SkullForAHead: Kind of. Mr. Blam's Blam wears a large skull mask over his face.
* SmugSnake: Jerrel likes to think he's hot shit, but once he crosses paths withPinot, Pinot and messes with Timmy and Big D, he constantly cries and begs for forgiveness.
* SmugSnake: Jerrel likes to think he's hot shit, but once he crosses paths with
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* StylisticSuck: [=CrunkFam=]'s music, which contains way too many music genres into one mixtape, and their lyrics aren't exactly creative, either.
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* SuckECheeses: Happy Rat's Magical Funland of Fun is a pretty gross place, with broken down animatronics who sing songs with disturbing titles, a disgusting ball pit, and a tube maze area that tells children how to finish it. On top of all of that, it, children are being repeatedly captured by Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam.
Blam, [[ArsonMurderJaywalking and a character named Penis Pete.]]
* StylisticSuck: [=CrunkFam=]'s music, which contains way too many music genres crammed into one mixtape, and their lyrics aren't exactly creative, either.
* StylisticSuck: [=CrunkFam=]'s music, which contains way too many music genres crammed into one mixtape, and their lyrics aren't exactly creative, either.
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* YourHeadAsplode: D kills Jerrel by shooting him in the head and causing it to explode.
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* YourHeadAsplode: D kills Jerrel by shooting him in the Jerrel's head and causing it to explode.explodes after D shoots it.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: While D may be a ruthless mob boss, he does ''not'' tolerate rapists in his gang. Especially ones who rape his own members.
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* CrapsackWorld: With a town called "Kaos", one isn't expecting sunshine and rainbows. Murder, crime, rapists, organ harvesting, and a special night where all of that and more commences.
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*** The band playing at The Johnson is called WesternAnimation/FrankensteinJr "WesternAnimation/FrankensteinJr and WesternAnimation/TheImpossibles.WesternAnimation/TheImpossibles".
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* TakeThat: [=CrunkFam=] is meant as an attack on egotistical, horrendous white rappers who can't take criticism.
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* BareYourMidriff: Greta is an unintentional example. Her stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her gut getting in the way.
* ChubbyChaser: Implied with Schultz. He would've found Greta's physique more appealing had she not been a disgusting person with a belly full of human flesh.
* FatBastard: Greta has a large beer gut containing mainly the remains of human organs.
* HerrDoktor: Greta Ludwig von Hertz is a German woman who harvests organs for a living.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Jerrel is clearly based on Andy Dick, right down to looks, personality, alcoholism, and his sexual assault accusations.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Jerrel is clearly based on Andy Dick, right down to looks, personality, alcoholism, and his the various sexual assault accusations.
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* SacrificialLamb: Jerrel exists surely mainly to showcase Big D's ruthlessness and Greta's position of harvesting organs.
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** Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam are clearly based on [[Film/DiamondsAreForever Mr. Wint and Mr. Kidd.]]
** Billy and Lime are named after Let's Players [[LetsPlay/BillyMC BillyMC and TheLimePopsicle.]]
** Both Billy and Lime talk about the movie ''Film/ThatThingYouDo''.
** Schultz is named after a character from ''WesternAnimation/DaffyTheCommando'', right down to having Greta call him over using his name.
** Billy and Lime are named after Let's Players [[LetsPlay/BillyMC BillyMC and TheLimePopsicle.]]
** Both Billy and Lime talk about the movie ''Film/ThatThingYouDo''.
** Schultz is named after a character from ''WesternAnimation/DaffyTheCommando'', right down to having Greta call him over using his name.
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*** During Pinot's dream sequence, "[[Film/WildAtHeart Love Me]]" supposedly plays in the background.
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*** Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam are clearly based on [[Film/DiamondsAreForever Mr. Wint and Mr. Kidd.]]
** *** Billy and Lime are named after Let's Players [[LetsPlay/BillyMC BillyMC and TheLimePopsicle.]]
** *** Both Billy and Lime talk about the movie ''Film/ThatThingYouDo''.
** *** Schultz is named after a character from ''WesternAnimation/DaffyTheCommando'', right down to having Greta call him over using by shouting his name.name.
*** Greta taking a bite out of Jerrel's small intestine is referred to as if she were "[[Wrestling/RandySavage snapping into a Slim Jim.]]"
*** The band playing at The Johnson is called WesternAnimation/FrankensteinJr and WesternAnimation/TheImpossibles.
*** During Pinot's dream sequence, "[[Film/WildAtHeart Love Me]]" supposedly plays in the background.
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*** Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam are clearly based on [[Film/DiamondsAreForever Mr. Wint and Mr. Kidd.]]
*** Greta taking a bite out of Jerrel's small intestine is referred to as if she were "[[Wrestling/RandySavage snapping into a Slim Jim.]]"
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* SmugSnake: Jerrel likes to think he's hot shit, but once he crosses paths with Pinot, and messes with Timmy and Big D, he constantly cries and begs for forgiveness.
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* SuckECheese: Happy Rat's Magical Funland of Fun is a pretty gross place, with broken down animatronics who sing songs with disturbing titles, a disgusting ball pit, and a tube maze area that tells children how to finish it. On top of all of that, children are repeatedly captured by Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam.
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* SuckECheese: SuckECheeses: Happy Rat's Magical Funland of Fun is a pretty gross place, with broken down animatronics who sing songs with disturbing titles, a disgusting ball pit, and a tube maze area that tells children how to finish it. On top of all of that, children are repeatedly captured by Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam.
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* AmbiguouslyJewish: Timmy, whose last name is Coen, and is a practitioner in UsefulNotes/KravMaga.
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* CreepyMonotone: Both Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam talk like this.
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* GroinAttack:
** Pinot shoots one of Carl Gangrew's members in the groin point blank with a shotgun.
** Big D shoots Jerrel in the groin with his solid gold desert eagle.
* ImAHumanitarian: Greta, to the point where often she often eats brains as a light snack, and devours organs deemed unsellable.
** Pinot shoots one of Carl Gangrew's members in the groin point blank with a shotgun.
** Big D shoots Jerrel in the groin with his solid gold desert eagle.
* ImAHumanitarian: Greta, to the point where often she often eats brains as a light snack, and devours organs deemed unsellable.
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* LightIsNotGood: Big D wears a white suit, but he rules the city from his criminal underground, and is one of the reasons Purge Night was created.
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* ShoutOut: Several.
** Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam are clearly based on [[Film/DiamondsAreForever Mr. Wint and Mr. Kidd.]]
** Billy and Lime are named after Let's Players [[LetsPlay/BillyMC BillyMC and TheLimePopsicle.]]
** Both Billy and Lime talk about the movie ''Film/ThatThingYouDo''.
** Schultz is named after a character from ''WesternAnimation/DaffyTheCommando'', right down to having Greta call him over using his name.
* SkullForAHead: Kind of. Mr. Blam's wears a large skull mask over his face.
** Mr. Pow and Mr. Blam are clearly based on [[Film/DiamondsAreForever Mr. Wint and Mr. Kidd.]]
** Billy and Lime are named after Let's Players [[LetsPlay/BillyMC BillyMC and TheLimePopsicle.]]
** Both Billy and Lime talk about the movie ''Film/ThatThingYouDo''.
** Schultz is named after a character from ''WesternAnimation/DaffyTheCommando'', right down to having Greta call him over using his name.
* SkullForAHead: Kind of. Mr. Blam's wears a large skull mask over his face.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Jerrel is an unpleasant man who not only insults everybody around him, but he's also a racist rapist.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Jerrel is clearly based on Andy Dick, right down to looks, personality, alcoholism, and his sexual assault accusations.
* RasputinianDeath: Jerrel, throughout Chapter 2, gets his hand blown off, his other hand run over by a limousine, gets one of his arm bones snapped, gets kicked so hard in the torso that his ribs shatter, gets his dick shot off, before finally culminating in his head exploding via a bullet to the brain.
* SacrificialLamb: Jerrel exists surely to showcase Big D's ruthlessness and Greta's position of harvesting organs.
* TheStoic: Timmy, one of D's most loyal henchmen, hides his feelings behind his sunglasses and a stone cold frown.
* SacrificialLamb: Jerrel exists surely to showcase Big D's ruthlessness and Greta's position of harvesting organs.
* TheStoic: Timmy, one of D's most loyal henchmen, hides his feelings behind his sunglasses and a stone cold frown.
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* YourHeadAsplode: D kills Jerrel by shooting him in the head and causing it to explode.
* YourHeadAsplode: D kills Jerrel by shooting him in the head and causing it to explode.
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* CantTakeCriticism: [=CrunkFam=], who would rather bust their critics' heads open than actually take advice for their music.
* CrazyPrepared: Pinot knew that [=CrunkFam=] would be coming after him after he threw the brick at their boombox, so he grabbed his shotgun and waited for them to arrive at the front door.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Pinot decides to kill everybody he can find in town simply because he can't get some rest.
* DreadfulMusician: [=CrunkFam=] are described as such by Pinot and everybody else.
* OrganTheft: Said to be one of Big D's main sources of income.
* PrettyFlyForAWhiteGuy: The boys who comprise [=CrunkFam=], who make rap mishmash albums and talk like black people, right down to saying the N-word.
* StylisticSuck: [=CrunkFam=]'s music, which contains way too many music genres into one mixtape, and their lyrics aren't exactly creative, either.
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3338283/1/Pinot-Noir Pinot Noir]]'' is an ongoing action/comedy/horror/sci-fi/supernatural story written by Tropers/{{Therealjackieboy}} on Fictionpress.
Pinot Noir is an assassin working in Kaos city, a crime-ridden hellhole that really comes alive on Purge Night, where criminals, gangsters, and other violent miscreants are allowed to commit any sort of debauchery they can. Pinot however, chooses tonight to instead get some rest, as he hasn't been able to get any for a few weeks. But when things get too hectic outside, and Pinot realizes that he can't get any sleep at all, he decides to grab his weapons and trenchcoat and gun down every criminal organization in town in order to acquire the shuteye he needs. It's going to be a rocky night.
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Pinot Noir is an assassin working in Kaos city, a crime-ridden hellhole that really comes alive on Purge Night, where criminals, gangsters, and other violent miscreants are allowed to commit any sort of debauchery they can. Pinot however, chooses tonight to instead get some rest, as he hasn't been able to get any for a few weeks. But when things get too hectic outside, and Pinot realizes that he can't get any sleep at all, he decides to grab his weapons and trenchcoat and gun down every criminal organization in town in order to acquire the shuteye he needs. It's going to be a rocky night.
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