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* HeroesWantRedheads: The fighter Baltek is smitten with his new ally the redhaired thief Lydia. Jaimie finds her beautiful, but he's too young to be thinking much about that kind of thing.
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* RedheadsAreRavishing: The fighter Baltek is smitten with his new ally the redhaired thief Lydia. Jaimie finds her beautiful, but he's too young to be thinking much about that kind of thing.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: The fighter Baltek is smitten with his new ally the redhaired thief Lydia. As for Jaimie, he finds her beautiful, but he's too young to be thinking much about that kind of thing.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: The fighter Baltek is smitten with his new ally the redhaired thief Lydia. As for Jaimie, he Jaimie finds her beautiful, but he's too young to be thinking much about that kind of thing.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason why a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party of seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie deciding which plan to go with results in it getting two votes and breaking the tie.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason why a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party of seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie deciding which plan to go with results in it getting two votes votes, and breaking the tie.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason why a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party of seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie's vote usually ends up being the tiebreaker when they consider what to do.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason why a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party of seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie's vote usually ends up being Jamie deciding which plan to go with results in it getting two votes and breaking the tiebreaker when they consider what to do.tie.
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* LukeIAmYourFather: Jaimie is Pentegarn's great-grandson, which explains how he can talk to animals.
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* KidSidekick: Jamie's basically one to the whole party.
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* IneptMage: Losing his kingdom and the source of his former power haven't been kind to Pentegarn, who goofs his magic as often as he lands it on this quest.
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* TheOwlKnowingOne: Jaimie's owl buddy is portrayed as the wiser, more patient one.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: The fighter Baltek is smitten with his new ally the redhaired thief Lydia. As for Jaimie, it's mentioned he finds her beautiful, but he's still too young to be thinking much about that kind of thing.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: The fighter Baltek is smitten with his new ally the redhaired thief Lydia. As for Jaimie, it's mentioned he finds her beautiful, but he's still too young to be thinking much about that kind of thing.
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* FighterMageThief: The make-up of Pentegarn's party, excepting Jaime and the animals. Baltak's the fighter, Pentegarn himself is the mage, and the elven Lydia is the thief.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason why a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party a of seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom, kingdom and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie's vote usually ends up being the tiebreaker when they consider what to do.
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* KidHero: Jaimie's a child with no appreciable skills that'd help on a dangerous quest, but he still gets to make all the important decisions for the adult adventurers.
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* NonHumanSidekick: Jaimie has a pair of animal friends, a talking fox and a talking owl ([[ADogNamedDog named Fox and Owl]]). They're even friends with a talking ''tree'' at the very beginning of the book, but obviously it doesn't get to go on the adventure with them.
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* NonHumanSidekick: Jaimie has a pair of animal friends, a talking fox and a talking owl ([[ADogNamedDog named Fox and Owl]]). They're even friends with a talking ''tree'' at the very beginning of the book, but obviously it doesn't get to go on the adventure with them.them.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party a seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom, and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie's vote usually ends up being the tiebreaker when they consider what to do.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The reason a kid with no appreciable skills ends up making the major decisions for a party a seasoned adult adventurers. This quest is Pentegarn's last desperate attempt to regain his kingdom, and his companions are the best he could do, so there's no real cohesion in the party. Jamie's vote usually ends up being the tiebreaker when they consider what to do.
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* NonHumanSidekick: Jaimie has a pair of animal friends, a talking fox and a talking owl ([[ADogNamedDog named fox Fox and owl]]).Owl]]). They're even friends with a talking ''tree'' at the very beginning of the book, but obviously it doesn't get to go on the adventure with them.
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* NonHumanSidekick: Jaimie has a pair of animal friends, a talking fox and a talking owl.owl ([[ADogNamedDog named fox and owl]]). They're even friends with a talking ''tree'' at the very beginning of the book, but obviously it doesn't get to go on the adventure with them.
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* GenericDoomsdayVillain: The villain of the book's just called "the Evil One", and nothing's revealed about him except being a powerful evildoer.
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* GenericDoomsdayVillain: The villain of the book's just called "the Evil One", and nothing's revealed about him except being a powerful evildoer. The book can't even settle on what he's called, and refers to him as the Evil Master once or twice too.
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* FountainOfYouth: Finding the two magic treasures needed to take on the Evil One makes Pentegarn younger and more powerful.
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* MagicStaff: The party's main goal is to get the mighty Staff of Kings away from the Evil One.
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* FighterMageThief: The make-up of Pentegarn's party, excepting Jaime and the animals. Baltak's the fighter, Pentegarn himself is the mage, and the elven Lydia is the thief.
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* NonHumanSidekick: Jaime has a pair of animal friends, a talking fox and a talking owl.
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''Pillars of Pentegarn'' is the third book in the ''Literature/EndlessQuest'' {{Gamebook}} series.
A young child named Jaime happens upon a party of adventurers on a quest to take back the ancient castle of Pentegarn (the wizard leading the expedition) from the control of the Evil One.
Was one of the few books in the series to get a direct sequel, ''Literature/RevengeOfTheRainbowDragons''
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A young child named Jaime happens upon a party of adventurers on a quest to take back the ancient castle of Pentegarn (the wizard leading the expedition) from the control of the Evil One.
Was one of the few books in the series to get a direct sequel, ''Literature/RevengeOfTheRainbowDragons''
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