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* . BlackAndGrayMortality: Acidalia is the good guy, but she also has a violent cult of personality (and a few actual cults!), regularly produces propaganda that she knows has zero truth to it, uses her beauty and satus to manipulate people in order to get what she wants, and commits war crimes on the regular to ensure a win. The Revolution itself makes frequent use of biological and chemical weapons and breaks the Geneva conventions constantly. But the Nova does all of the above, plus genocide of the lower castes and torturing their prisoners. Their crimes are usually less "war crimes" and more "crimes against humanity."

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* . * BlackAndGrayMortality: Acidalia is the good guy, but she also has a violent cult of personality (and a few actual cults!), regularly produces propaganda that she knows has zero truth to it, uses her beauty and satus to manipulate people in order to get what she wants, and commits war crimes on the regular to ensure a win. The Revolution itself makes frequent use of biological and chemical weapons and breaks the Geneva conventions constantly. But the Nova does all of the above, plus genocide of the lower castes and torturing their prisoners. Their crimes are usually less "war crimes" and more "crimes against humanity."

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* AcademicAlphaBitch: Cressida was a complete jerk before her CharacterDevelopment, but she still got really good grades.



* ActionFashionista: Acidalia.



** After the reboot, this was changed to an incomprehensible, vaguely Elvish-sounding language.
* AlphaBitch: Cressida was apparently one of these on Mars. She even mentions dating a guy to get with his cuter friend, then callously breaks up with him over text when she realizes she won't be going home any time soon. She also has a massive superiority complex at first.



* AnArmAndALeg: Acidalia started out with metal bones after she was crippled from being forced to do some type of messed up future ballet as a child. After she's captured by the Nova and badly injured, she just has her feet replaced with cybernetics.



* ArtificialLimbs: Andromeda is half-artificial due to a factory accident when she was 11. She caught on fire and presumably lost her left leg and arm (and face.)

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* ArtificialLimbs: Andromeda is half-artificial due to a factory accident when she was 11. She caught on fire and presumably lost her left leg and arm (and face.)) Acidalia also has cybernetic legs.



* BetaBitch: Aleskynn's friend Amelyx, Cressida's friend Tetra.



* . BlackAndGrayMortality: Acidalia is the good guy, but she also has a violent cult of personality (and a few actual cults!), regularly produces propaganda that she knows has zero truth to it, uses her beauty and satus to manipulate people in order to get what she wants, and commits war crimes on the regular to ensure a win. The Revolution itself makes frequent use of biological and chemical weapons and breaks the Geneva conventions constantly. But the Nova does all of the above, plus genocide of the lower castes and torturing their prisoners. Their crimes are usually less "war crimes" and more "crimes against humanity."



* BrainlessBeauty: Aleskynn's girl posse: Raveri, Amelyx, Velia and Hera. The only thing they ever do is tell Leski how pretty and smart she is in the hopes of winning her favor to boost their own statuses.



* DaddysGirl: Cressida is this to a T. She loudly complains to David whenever something goes wrong and is shocked when he doesn't immediately give her what she wants. When she realizes that she's surrounded by authority figures who have more power than her father, she's shocked that she has to actually respect them.



* DramaQueen: Cressida was this on Mars.



* FreeRangeChildren: Acidalia apparently joined the Revolution at 14; Alestra didn't seem to notice or care. Athena somehow got anthrax three times as a kid because she was allowed to wander around BSL-3 laboratories completely unsupervised. Rune and his crew were put on a ship and sent out to space when the oldest among them was 12, resulting in a crash that killed the majority of them. And the less that can be said about Lyra's childhood, the better.



* FiveManBand: The main characters:
** TheLeader is Acidalia, the most experienced and the oldest hero of the group.
** TheLancer is Andromeda, the less girly but more physically strong and violent.
** TheSmartGuy is Carina, who is brilliant but not very strong.
** TheBigGuy is Athena, who has very little common sense.
** TheChick is Lyra, the most inexperienced and idealistic.



* GenderIsNoObject: Rae mentions that South Cirya is like this.



* GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke: Acidalia singlehandedly recaptures Appalachia City by creating a sort of SyntheticPlague that destroys the DNA of her enemy soldiers, killing them all rather nastily.



* Aleskynn and Cressida are this in a more childish, immature way.
* GirlPosse: Amelyx, Raveri, Velia, and Hera to Aleskynn. They basically only serve as BrainlessBeauty idiots who only hang out with Aleskynn to boost their own social statuses. Even Aleskynn gets sick of them after a while, calling their interactions "hollow" when she realizes they've been mindlessly complimenting her the entire conversation instead of actually ''talking'' to her,



* GracefulInTheirElement: The Mira look like gangly, awkward, vaguely fishy people on land, but become beautiful and indescribable creatures in the water.



* HandicappedBadass: Acidalia is an epileptic amputee by the end of the series, and she still kicks ass.



* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Lyra's past occupations have never been described in detail, but it's clear that they were . something she isn't proud of, and when you take into account her former home and her desperation for money, she was probably this.



* IdiotSavant: Alpha-24 has knowledge of pretty much all of Terran history, but other than that he's mostly useless. One of his first appearances has him sticking his finger into a piece of lab equipment to watch the sparks fly.



* InspirationallyDisadvantaged: Acidalia makes fun of tabloids for portraying her as this after she escapes the Nova.
** It's somewhat ironic, as the Revolution perpetuated that stereotype itself in-universe for a while for propaganda purposes, which also annoyed Acidalia.



* LongHairIsFeminine: Upper-class women usually have full-on RapunzelHair.



** Averted entirely with Aleskynn and her friends; their names mean nothing, but were deliberately created to sound "as annoying as possible."



* {{Microts:}} Cycle, sol, et cetera are used when talking about non-Earth planets.



* NoNewFashionsInTheFuture: Most of the clothing is just historical clothing with shiny holographic material instead of normal fabric. Martian kids wear a variation of ClassicLolita, Eleutherians wear normal but monotonous clothes that match the color of their caste, and aristocrats usually wear modern-ish ball gowns and evening gowns.



** This happens repeatedly in the series. Most of the main cast are scientists, but somehow never the one they actually need at the moment.
-->'''Lyra''': You're a Ciencia, do something!
-->'''Rina''': I'm an ''astrophysicist,'' I have no idea how anatomy works!
-->'''Athena''': Isn't Acidalia a doctor?
-->'''Acidalia''': I'm a geneticist, not a trauma surgeon!
-->'''Rune''': I think they're already dead.



* RoyalBrat: Aleskynn. Oh, God, Aleskynn.



* SkyscraperCity: Eleutheria, Faraday, and urban parts of Hirani.

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* SkyscraperCity: Eleutheria, Faraday, The Iron City, and urban parts of Hirani.Hirani.
* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Or at least some bizzare VariantChess version.



* SpoiledBrat: Aleskynn, who demands special treatment and surrounds herself with less advantaged girls so she'll always be the one on top.
** To a lesser extent, Cressida.



* TheUnpronouncable: Raeilya and Cadé. Dalia notes that the vowels in Raeilya are too fast and fluid for her- or any other human- to reproduce, and the C in Cadé has a "guttural" sound. Raeilya is happy with the nickname Rae, but Cadé has yet to offer an alternative. Likewise, the Mira can say Acidalia and Andromeda... but not the letter T, resulting in them calling Atlas "add-lass."

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* TheUnpronouncable: TheUnpronounceable: Raeilya and Cadé. Dalia notes that the vowels in Raeilya are too fast and fluid for her- or any other human- to reproduce, and the C in Cadé has a "guttural" sound. Raeilya is happy with the nickname Rae, but Cadé has yet to offer an alternative. Likewise, the Mira can say Acidalia and Andromeda... but not the letter T, resulting in them calling Atlas "add-lass."


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* TranslationConvention: The Eleutherians all speak some mostly gibberish Latin-like language, but of course, all the dialogue is written in English. The only time you hear what they're actually saying is when the chapter is written from Cressida's perspective, as she barely understands Terran Latin.

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Aleskynn to pretty much everyone else, though Dalia is pretty forgiving. [[spoiler: She stops being annoying and starts being murderous when she joins the Movement.]]

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Aleskynn to pretty much everyone else, though Dalia is pretty forgiving. [[spoiler: She stops being annoying Acidalia, Cressida to Estella, and starts being murderous when she joins the Movement.]]Rune and Rae's unnamed younger brothers.



* ArmorPiercingResponse: "I may be an illegitimate bastard child, but at least my family tree doesn't looklike a Möbius strip."

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* ArmorPiercingResponse: "I may be an illegitimate bastard child, but at least my family tree doesn't looklike look like a Möbius strip."



* ArtisticLicenseGunSafety: Most characters are ''extremely'' careless with their firearms. Lyra mentions that she's witnessed multiple accidents that resulted in fatalities due to people not being safe with guns.



* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: The Leaders of the Revolution. Dalia and Artemis swap around with beauty and brains, while Andromeda is unquestioningly Brawn.

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* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: The Leaders leaders of the Revolution. Dalia and Artemis swap around with beauty and brains, while Andromeda is unquestioningly Brawn.


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* BlueBlood: The Imperial family and the Dictatorum, as well as extremely high-ranking soldiers. Martians with very . high Points could also be considered this.


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* CulturedBadass: The majority of the cast.


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* GemEncrusted: The Imperials have gemstone motifs; Alestra's is malachite, and Acidalia's is lapis lazuli. It's on practically everything they own.
** Also the Miran ships and buildings—they are ''very'' attracted to sparkly things.


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* NoWomansLand: Based on the way characters speak about it, the long-dead country the Arcadian Republic was this.


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* PennyAmongDiamonds: Athena and Carina are middle-class and Lyra is an impoverished street urchin, while Acidalia and the rest of the people around them are incredibly wealthy (to the tune of owning entire planets.)


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*PimpedOutDress: Acidalia's clothing is almost always like this.


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* RagsToRiches: Rae and Rune when they were adopted; Lyra, Carina and Athena when they became involved in the Revolution; Estella and Theodora when they were reunited with David and Cressida.
* RebelliousPrincess: Acidalia, though technically ''not'' a princess, is still the child of the reigning monarch.


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* SelfMadeMan: David Seren, who started as a poor immigrant and a single teenage parent and eventually became wealthy enough to be an advisor to the President.

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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Most Eleutherian girls, seeing as names are mostly celestial or mythologically themed and include Latinized caste names. Dalia's full name is ''Acidalia Planitia e Alestra, Cipher et Aquilifer, e Eleutheria Terra.'' Cipher et Aquilifer mean that she's one of the most powerful beings in Eleutheria, can manipulate DNA to her whim and she "carries the eagle," or is the figurehead of, the Revolution. This isn't limited to the upper classes, either: Rina's name is ''Carina Nebula e Julia Maxima, Ciencia Astronomica" in full.
** Averted with the soldiers; all their names are taken from serial numbers, so are usually short or just nicknames like Ace and Tee.

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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Most Eleutherian girls, seeing as names women are mostly named after celestial objects (Acidalia, Estella, Carina, Andromeda, Cassiopeia, et cetera) or mythologically themed mythical figures (Artemis, Athena, Cassandra, et cetera.) This also extends to the names chosen by defected male soldiers (Atlas, Kronos, etc.) Because of preexisting naming conventions, most of these people have OverlyLongNames consisting entirely of mythical figures, heavenly bodies, and include Latinized caste ancient goddesses.
** Taken UpToEleven with the Miran child soldiers who were later adopted out and given the chance to choose their own
names. Dalia's full name is ''Acidalia Planitia e Alestra, Cipher et Aquilifer, e Eleutheria Terra.'' Cipher et Aquilifer mean that she's one of They were quite young at the most powerful beings in Eleutheria, can manipulate DNA to her whim and she "carries time, so the eagle," majority have names like Wolfgang Deathridge or is the figurehead of, the Revolution. This isn't limited Septimius Justinian in order to the upper classes, either: Rina's name is ''Carina Nebula e Julia Maxima, Ciencia Astronomica" in full.
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** Averted with the old Eleutherian soldiers; all their names are taken from serial numbers, so are usually short or just nicknames like Ace and Tee.



** Aleskynn deliberately sounds like "less kin," emphasizing her status as a lesser family member. The beginning also resembled Alestra's, because she is the favorite daughter regardless.

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** Aleskynn deliberately sounds like "less kin," emphasizing her status as a lesser family member. The beginning also resembled Alestra's, because she is the favorite daughter regardless.literallu means "smaller Aleskynn."



** Cassiopeia is named after a notoriously vain and selfish queen; Cassia mean's "empty headed."

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** Cassiopeia is named after a notoriously vain and selfish queen; Cassia mean's means "empty headed.""
* MeaningfulRename: Every time soldiers ditch their serial numbers in exchange for names. TB-0125 became Kronos, AX-C240 became Ace, and other men like Rune and David presumably had numbers before as well.



* MulticoloredHair: Prominent, since genetic modification makes it easy to make your hair bright colors without having to dye it constantly. It's also a symbol of the upper-classes to have unnatural hair and skin tones. Dalia sports blue and purple, Athena black and red, Carina varying shades of gray and Aleskynn bright red-oranges (though this is the result of a botched mod. She originally wanted black with red tips.)

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* MulticoloredHair: Prominent, since genetic modification makes it easy to make your hair bright colors without having to dye it constantly. It's also a symbol of the upper-classes upper class to have unnatural hair and skin tones. Dalia sports blue and purple, Athena black and red, Carina varying shades of gray and Aleskynn bright red-oranges (though this is the result of a botched mod. She originally wanted black with red tips.)



* OverlyLongName: The way the naming system works means that this happens quite frequently. If your given name is a two-parter like Acidalia Planitia or Carina Nebula, and your mother is also a two parter like Luna Minora or Julia Maxima, and your caste has subcastes, possibly multiple, and if you have titles, that all gets added onto your name. Carina Nebula e Julia Maxima, Ciencia Astronomica is the name of an ordinary middle-class scientist. Nicknames are used frequently.
-->Athena: Like if you work in viruses, it'd be Ciencia Biologica Virii. And then you have people with double names, like Acidalia Planitia, I guess. So it gets long fast. I knew someone named Ametista Margarita e Seraphina Minora, Ciencia Quantistica Theorica Astrophysica. We called her Amé.
* ParentalBetrayal: Alestra.

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* OverlyLongName: The way the naming system works means that this happens quite frequently. If your given Given name is a two-parter like Acidalia Planitia or Carina Nebula, and your mother followed . by the mother's given name, then the grandmother's name is also a two parter like Luna Minora or Julia Maxima, and your added on for formality, then the caste, then any caste has subcastes, possibly multiple, and if you have titles, that all gets added onto your name. Carina Nebula e Julia Maxima, Ciencia Astronomica is the specifications. Names can be six or seven words long without titles—Carina's full name of an ordinary is ''Carina-Nebula Julia-Maxima Scientia Astrophysica,'' and she's just a middle-class scientist. Acidalia's full name and title would be ''Imperatrix Acidalia-Planita Alestra Harmonia Cipher-Sagan.'' Nicknames are used frequently.
-->Athena: Like if you work in viruses, it'd be Ciencia Biologica Virii. And then you have people with double names, like Acidalia Planitia, I guess. So it gets long fast. I knew someone named Ametista Margarita e Seraphina Minora, Ciencia Quantistica Theorica Astrophysica. We called her Amé.
* ParentalBetrayal: Alestra.Alestra and possibly Elijah.


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* StellarName: Most of the main cast are named this way.
**Acidalia's name comes from Acidalia Planitia, a geographic area on Mars.
**Andromeda's name comes from the Andromeda Galaxy.
**Carina is named after the Great Nebula in Carina, which is fitting, considering that she's an astrophysicist like her mother before her.
**Cassiopeia is named after a constellation shaped like a famously vain queen.
**Principessa Celestia Cipher's name means "sky."
**Estella's name means "star."
**The last name Seren also means "star," meaning Estella's name literally translates to "Star Star."

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* BizarreAlienBiology: According to a post on r/worldbuilding, the Mira breathe through their backs.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Averted in that nearly every Cipher is a blonde woman.

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* BizarreAlienBiology: According to a post on r/worldbuilding, the The Mira breathe through their backs.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Averted in that nearly BloodSplatteredWeddingDress: [[spoilers: Acidalia's actual wedding goes without a hitch]], but every Cipher is a blonde woman.time she kills someone it comes across like this because she wears Imperial white everywhere.



* CoolBigSis: Dalia, biologically to Aleskynn, but in spirit for everyone else in the main cast.
* CoolShip: Dalia's ship is a luxury cruiser, so it doesn't have many military shields or weapons, but what it does have is a lot of fancy bedrooms and suites.

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* CoolBigSis: Dalia, biologically to Aleskynn, Aleskynn and T, but in spirit for everyone else in the main cast.
* CoolShip: Dalia's Acidalia's ''Revelation'' is a combinatiomn stealth ship is a and luxury cruiser, so it doesn't have many military shields or weapons, but what it does have is a lot cruiser. She also has an entire fleet of fancy bedrooms personal luxury starships from when she was a princess and suites. another ''separate'' fleet of Revolutionary battleships.
* CoolOldGuy: Atlas.



* FourStarBadass: Praetors Atlas and Andromeda.



* GorgeousGreek: Dalia deliberately tries to invoke this trope when she meets the Mira for the first time by wearing an elaborate Greco-Roman toga.



* LoveDodecahedron: Mostly averted. Romance plots are generally resolved extremely quickly, and the main characters all have such different tastes that they rarely chase the same people. Despite the massive cast and huge ship potential, the only love triangle has been slight jealousy on Rina's part over Rune.
* LowCultureHighTech: Arcadian border towns.

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* LostTechnology: Pretty much everything the Precursors left behind. The galaxy has a bunch of futuristic technology but no idea how any of it works, and ''re''discovering how it functions is an achievement in and of itself. LoveDodecahedron: Mostly averted. Romance plots are generally resolved extremely quickly, and the main characters all have such different tastes that they rarely chase the same people. Despite the massive cast and huge ship potential, the only love triangle has been slight jealousy on Rina's part over Rune.
* LowCultureHighTech: Arcadian border towns.towns and Mars.


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* NoPeriodsPeriod: Taken literally. In a society where DNA mods are ubiquitous and pretty much every mild complaint can be cured with future tech, people just don't ''get'' periods, ever.

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* CloseCallHaircut: At the very beginning when the Movement tries to kill Dalia, she feels the lasers singe her hair. Happens again to Lyra when the soldiers find her as a stowaway.

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* CloseCallHaircut: At the very beginning when the Movement Nova tries to kill Dalia, she feels the lasers singe her hair. Happens again hair.
* ChocolateBaby: Alestra and her partner were white. Acidalia is vaguely South Asian and is rumoured
to Lyra when be the soldiers find her as daughter of a stowaway.Martian farmer. Apparently nobody thought to do a DNA test.



* EldritchLocation: Faraday and the Iron City come across to the cast as this, but it's just because all of their architecture consists of force fields and holograms. It's translucent, barely visible, and can change completely in seconds, leading the main cast to think they've stumbled into something horrifying.



* HeroicBastard: Under Eleutheria's definition of what makes a bastard, Lyra is definitely one. It's also implied that Acidalia is illegitimate.



* InSeriesNickname: Many, since the names are so long. Acidalia Planitia is Dalia, Aleskynn is Leski, Dalia calls Andromeda "Andy" at one point, and Athena calls Carina "Rina."
* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: No two societies have the same gender roles, so a lot of the male cast are this. Notably, Rune likes his girlfriend's glittery bath bombs, and Seven, Leo, Ajax, and the rest of the Miran squad avert Ciryan gender roles simply but not murdering people on the regular.

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* InSeriesNickname: Many, since the names are so long. Acidalia Planitia is Dalia, Planitia, Carina-Nebula, Raeilya Aeshiel, Rune Archer-Sagan, and Aleskynn is are Dalia, Rina, Rae, Ru, and Leski, Dalia calls respectively.
* InterClassFriendship: Acidalia is rich enough that this could count in ''all'' of her relationships, but it's most evident with
Andromeda "Andy" at one point, and Athena calls Carina "Rina."
Lyra, who are from the two lowest castes on the planet.
** Also Rae and Rune, with Rune being a middle-class soldier and Rae being a plague orphan.
* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: No two societies have the same gender roles, so a lot of the male cast are this. Notably, Rune likes his girlfriend's glittery bath bombs, and Seven, Leo, Ajax, and the rest of the Miran squad avert Ciryan gender roles simply but by not murdering people on the regular.



* LawOfAlienNames: Averted- Cadé's name is Cadé Maru, and Rae's full name is Raeilya Aliah Æishel. They have meanings, too: Cadé's roughly translates to "warrior of the sea," and Rae's mean's "light-bringer."

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* LawOfAlienNames: Averted- Cadé's name is The Northern Mira, generally being more violent, have harsher names and a more guttural language. The Southern Mira generally have sweeter, more vowel-heavy names. Northern Mira include Cadé Maru, Maru and Rae's full name is Raeilya Aliah Æishel. They Jahin Svare, while Southern Mira include Raeilya, Chiramel, and Ararien Æshiel. The Southerners are closer allies to Eleutheria.
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have meanings, too: Cadé's roughly translates to "warrior a blend of the sea," and Rae's mean's "light-bringer."several different names.


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* UptownGirl: Acidalia is much wealthier than Rune.
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It's slated for several sequels and prequels. The books featuring Acidalia and the rest of the crew are ''On the Edge of Eureka, Quantum Entanglement, Theories of Space-Time, The Nemesis Star,'' and ''The Transcension Hypothesis.'' Prequels include ''Enlightenment, Illuminatarion, Atomic Bonds, Beyond Arcadia,'' and several others. Work on ''Enlightenment'' has already begun, and the first draft is reportedly halfway done. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' has since been removed from Wattpad for editing, but the first draft has been completed, and the edited version is near;y done. Thus far, the changes have been minimal.

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It's slated for several sequels and prequels. The books featuring Acidalia and the rest of the crew are ''On the Edge of Eureka, Quantum Entanglement, Theories of Space-Time, The Nemesis Star,'' and ''The Transcension Hypothesis.'' Prequels include ''Enlightenment, Illuminatarion, Atomic Bonds, Beyond Arcadia,'' and several others. Work on ''Enlightenment'' has already begun, and the first draft is reportedly halfway done. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' has since been removed from Wattpad for editing, but the first draft has been completed, and the edited version is near;y nearly done. Thus far, the changes have been minimal.

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* ArmorPiercingResponse: "I may be an illegitimate bastard child, but at least my family tree doesn't look like a
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On the Edge of Eureka is a science fiction novel posted by Wattpad user strange-quark, also known as "Karen Elizabeth Anne," but most often called Rennie or literally any derivative of Elizabeth. She also sometimes goes by Angelica Kirk, which is presumably another pseudonym, as she refuses to release her real name. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' is mostly SpeculativeFiction, with bits and pieces of modern-day technology taken UpToEleven. Set in a grim, dark, CyberPunk MegaCity called Eleutheria, one of its chief themes is the ethics of CRISPR-Cas9 DNA modification as the planet plunges itself into a civil war over eugenics. In the background, DNA data storage, supercomputers, artificial intelligence, and nuclear bombs all come into play, while the backstory seems to hint at a smallpox pandemic that happened far into the past. ''Enlightenment,'' a prequel presumably discussing this more, is in the works.

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On the Edge of Eureka is a science fiction novel posted by Wattpad user strange-quark, also known as "Karen Elizabeth Anne," but most often called Rennie or literally any derivative of Elizabeth. She also sometimes goes by Angelica Kirk, which Wren (which is presumably another pseudonym, as she refuses to release her real name. probably short for Karen.) ''On the Edge of Eureka'' is mostly SpeculativeFiction, with bits and pieces of modern-day technology taken UpToEleven. Set in a grim, dark, CyberPunk MegaCity called Eleutheria, one of its chief themes is the ethics of CRISPR-Cas9 DNA modification as the planet plunges itself into a civil war over eugenics. In the background, DNA data storage, supercomputers, artificial intelligence, and nuclear bombs all come into play, while the backstory seems to hint at a smallpox pandemic that happened far into the past. ''Enlightenment,'' a prequel presumably discussing this more, is in the works.



It's slated for several sequels and prequels. The books featuring Acidalia and the rest of the crew are ''On the Edge of Eureka, Quantum Entanglement, Theories of Space-Time, The Nemesis Star,'' and ''The Transcension Hypothesis.'' Prequels include ''Enlightenment, Illuminatarion, Atomic Bonds, Beyond Arcadia,'' and several others. Work on ''Enlightenment'' has already begun, with the first draft reportedly on chapter 9. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' has since been removed from Wattpad for editing, but the first draft has been completed, and draft 2 is on chapter 11. Thus far, it has a very similar plot, with the only changes being minor or closing plot holes.

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It's slated for several sequels and prequels. The books featuring Acidalia and the rest of the crew are ''On the Edge of Eureka, Quantum Entanglement, Theories of Space-Time, The Nemesis Star,'' and ''The Transcension Hypothesis.'' Prequels include ''Enlightenment, Illuminatarion, Atomic Bonds, Beyond Arcadia,'' and several others. Work on ''Enlightenment'' has already begun, with and the first draft is reportedly on chapter 9. halfway done. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' has since been removed from Wattpad for editing, but the first draft has been completed, and draft 2 the edited version is on chapter 11. near;y done. Thus far, it has a very similar plot, with the only changes being minor or closing plot holes.
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Averted in that nearly every Cipher is a blonde woman.



* FirstContact: First ''peaceful'' contact, at least. The Mira and the Eleutherians have been at war for decades, but so much time has elapsed between peaceful meetings that neither of the generations that began the war is still around. Dalia, Andromeda and Atlas meeting Rae and Cadé is the first civil discussion in decades, and it's been so long since the last one that both species have never seen the other before and are bemused by each other.
* FlowerInHerHair: Acidalia wears dahlias.
* FutureSlang: "Stars!" is a popular one (or "astra!" or "stellae!," seemingly with no distinction between the two.) "Kyrie Eleison" (meaning "lord have mercy") is used frequently by Athena, though the characters have no idea what it means or the religious connotation. At one point, Dalia thinks "Christ," a phrase she heard from her grandmother, then notes she doesn't know what it references, but it feels like a stronger expression than "stars."



* GirlyGirl: Acidalia may be a revolutionary leader, but she still likes elaborate ballgowns, fancy crystal tiaras, and makeup.



* FirstContact: First ''peaceful'' contact, at least. The Mira and the Eleutherians have been at war for decades, but so much time has elapsed between peaceful meetings that neither of the generations that began the war is still around. Dalia, Andromeda and Atlas meeting Rae and Cadé is the first civil discussion in decades, and it's been so long since the last one that both species have never seen the other before and are bemused by each other.
* FutureSlang: "Stars!" is a popular one (or "astra!" or "stellae!," seemingly with no distinction between the two.) "Kyrie Eleison" (meaning "lord have mercy") is used frequently by Athena, though the characters have no idea what it means or the religious connotation. At one point, Dalia thinks "Christ," a phrase she heard from her grandmother, then notes she doesn't know what it references, but it feels like a stronger expression than "stars."



* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: No two societies have the same gender roles, so a lot of the male cast are this. Notably, Rune likes his girlfriend's glittery bath bombs, and Seven, Leo, Ajax, and the rest of the Miran squad avert Ciryan gender roles simply but not murdering people on the regular.



* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: So far, we have Acidalia, Aleskynn, Alestra, Athena, Carina, Cressida, Cassiopeia, Tee, Ace, David, TB, Estella, Thea, Atlas, Andromeda, Artemis, Cadé, and Raeilya.
** Counting the characters from other works in the universe, we also have Kate, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Tim, Rebecca, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Kallie, Eva, Jace, and Cosette.
* LoveDodecahedron: Averted. Despite the immense number of characters and ship potential, the only romances thus far are between Thea and David, and Raeilya and Cadé. Ace and Lyra are teased. No one is fighting over relationships, and despite Dalia's status and implied beauty, no one is asking her out, and she doesn't seem to be seeking a boyfriend.
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*LightFeminineAndDarkFeminine: Acidalia and Andromeda, respectively (when Andy decides to dress up.)
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: So far, we have Acidalia, Aleskynn, Alestra, Athena, Carina, Cressida, Cassiopeia, Tee, Ace, David, TB, Estella, Thea, Atlas, Andromeda, Artemis, Cadé, Raeilya, Alpha-24, Rune, Seven, Kalyn, Wolfgang, Leo, Ajax, and Raeilya.Lyra, and all of their respective families.
** Counting the characters from other works in the universe, we also have Kate, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Tim, Rebecca, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Kallie, Eva, Jace, Trinity, Remembrance, Emmanuel, Patience, the Faiths, Hope, and Cosette.
* LoveDodecahedron: Averted. Mostly averted. Romance plots are generally resolved extremely quickly, and the main characters all have such different tastes that they rarely chase the same people. Despite the immense number of characters massive cast and huge ship potential, the only romances thus far are between Thea and David, and Raeilya and Cadé. Ace and Lyra are teased. No one is fighting love triangle has been slight jealousy on Rina's part over relationships, and despite Dalia's status and implied beauty, no one is asking her out, and she doesn't seem to be seeking a boyfriend.
* Though, to be fair, author notes indicate she'll get one in the future.
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*AndroidsArePeopleToo: It never even occurs to anyone to treat Alpha-24 as something other than sentient. Though it is mentioned that sentient androids have been outlawed because the ethical qualms outweighed the few benefits of human-like intelligence.



* TheCasino: Hirani, for some reason.



* DavidVsGoliath: David versus the Eleutherian army.



* OrganTheft: There's an entire black market for organs, which are frequently stolen frpm Cantatores and Labora, expendable "dancers" and laborers. The kicker is that people don't even ''need'' transplant organs; cybernetics are ubiquitous. The upper classes just like "organic" organs better and are willing to pay for them.

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* OrganTheft: There's an entire black market for organs, which are frequently stolen frpm from Cantatores and Labora, Laborum, expendable "dancers" and laborers. The kicker is that people don't even ''need'' transplant organs; cybernetics are ubiquitous. The upper classes just like "organic" organs better and are willing to pay for them.



*{{Precursors}}: No one really knows anything about them, but apparently they exist.



* SaveThePrincess: In a nonromantic way. Tee tries to save Dalia, who's essentially a princess in all but name. She makes it out alive, but [[spoiler: he dies in the struggle.]]

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* SaveThePrincess: In a nonromantic way. Tee tries to save Dalia, Acidalia, who's essentially a princess in all but name. She makes it out alive, but [[spoiler: he dies in the struggle.]]



** The city of Eleutheria is based on [[StarWars Coruscant.]]
** The author seems to be doing [[MythologyGag in-universe shout-outs]] to the prequel, Enlightenment. The district of Katharos is named after Katherine Davis, Acidalia and Aleskynn's relationship is a foil to Anna and Cosette's, and Esmeralda (Cosette's middle name) is one of the names mentioned by Cressida when she's trying to find Thea.

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** The city cities of Eleutheria is and Faraday are based on [[StarWars Coruscant.]]
** The author seems to be doing [[MythologyGag in-universe shout-outs]] to the prequel, Enlightenment. The district of Katharos is named after Katherine Davis, Acidalia and Aleskynn's relationship is a foil to Anna and Cosette's, and Esmeralda (Cosette's middle name) is one of the names mentioned by Cressida when she's trying to find Thea.
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* SkyscraperCity: Eleutheria.

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* SkyscraperCity: Eleutheria.Eleutheria, Faraday, and urban parts of Hirani.



* StarshipLuxurious: Dalia's ''Revelation''.

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* StarshipLuxurious: Dalia's ''Revelation''. Also Andromeda's ''Scorpio.''
*SymbolicWings: The little holographic wings on Acidalia's ankles when she gets cybernetic implants.



**Lyra to an extent, because despite being older than Aleskynn, she has almost none of the experiences that the rest of the cast has had. She's uneducated and can't do basic math and reading, speaks vulgar Latin, and generally knows a lot less than the others.



**Most Mira names are like this. All of Rune's siblings' names are completely unpronounceable to Acidalia.



* VagueAge: Alestra. According to basic maths, she's middle-aged, but other characters consistantly describe her as looking as young as her 20 year old daughter. Carina says that if she didn't know who it was, she'd assume Alestra was twenty-something. Justified, considering the easy access the rich have to DNA mods and anti-aging therapy.

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* VagueAge: Alestra. According to basic maths, she's middle-aged, but other characters consistantly consistently describe her as looking as young as her 20 year old daughter. Carina says that if she didn't know who it was, she'd assume Alestra was twenty-something. Justified, considering the easy access the rich have to DNA mods and anti-aging therapy.



* WretchedHive: The CyberPunk slums of Appalachia are basically this. Gangs rule everything, there's a massive stim problem, Labora regularly work themselves to death, abandoned orpans are practically as common as air, pollution makes the white buildings gray, and it's not explicitly mentioned (this ''is'' a YA book) but it can be assumed that prostitutes are everywhere.

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* WretchedHive: The CyberPunk slums of Appalachia are basically this. Gangs rule everything, there's a massive stim problem, Labora regularly work themselves to death, abandoned orpans orphans are practically as common as air, pollution makes the white buildings gray, and it's not explicitly mentioned (this ''is'' a YA book) but it can be assumed that prostitutes are everywhere.



* UterineReplicator: Dalia mentions those who can afford it passing on their DNA in this way. A rare example in that it's not ubiquitous and no downfalls to it are shown- it's just another option for women who don't want to potentially die in childbirth. (It may be a futuristic society, but medical care and general opinions on the value of human life are not the best.)

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* UterineReplicator: Dalia mentions those who can afford it passing on their DNA in this way. A rare example in How most of the characters were "born." Acidalia is the notable exception, being that it's not ubiquitous she's [[spoiler: technically illegitimate royalty]] and no downfalls to it are shown- it's just another option for women who don't want to potentially die in childbirth. (It may be a futuristic society, but medical care and general opinions on the value of human life are not the best.)her conception was an accident.


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* ApocalypseHow: A class 2, brought about via a pandemic of bioweaponized smallpox.


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''Eureka's'' plot kicks off with an assassination attempt on recently-crowned Imperatrix Acidalia Planitia by the eugenicist group the Novagenetica, intending to force her mother back on to the throne; her mother Alestra supports the Nova, while Acidalia is part of another Revolutionary party that opposes their ideals. She escapes and sends her soldier brother on a wild goose chase to get the right data to a spy in the Revolution, and eventually another leader on Mars. On the way, Immunus AX-C240 ("Ace"), scientists Athena and Carina, the dancer Lyra, and a number of other people from all walks of life get swept into high-stakes political games as Acidalia tries to run a rebellion while keeping the planet from descending into chaos. Eleutheria soon breaks out in a civil war, with everyone stranded in the middle of it. Meanwhile, the Mira, a semi-alien civilization from the same roots as humans, take advantage of the mess to land, seemingly seeking Eleutheria's alliance in an intergalactic conflict and leaving Acidalia forced to choose between a planet of her people and a galaxy of aliens she's never met.

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''Eureka's'' plot kicks off with an assassination attempt on recently-crowned Imperatrix Acidalia Planitia by the eugenicist group the Novagenetica, intending to force her mother back on to the throne; her mother Alestra supports the Nova, while Acidalia is part of another Revolutionary party that opposes their ideals. She escapes and sends her soldier brother on a wild goose chase to get the right data to a spy in the Revolution, and eventually another leader on Mars. On the way, Immunus AX-C240 ("Ace"), scientists Athena and Carina, the dancer Lyra, and a number of other people from all walks of life get swept into high-stakes political games as Acidalia tries to run a rebellion while keeping the planet from descending into chaos. Eleutheria soon breaks out in a civil war, with everyone stranded in the middle of it. Meanwhile, the Mira, a semi-alien civilization from the same roots as humans, take advantage of the mess to land, seemingly seeking Eleutheria's alliance in an intergalactic conflict and leaving Acidalia forced to choose between a planet of her people and a galaxy of aliens she's never met.



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* BadassBookworm: In spades. Athena and Carina are both scientists, Dalia is a "programmer," and Ace and Tee are tech specialists. They manage to hold their own.

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*BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: The Leaders of the Revolution. Dalia and Artemis swap around with beauty and brains, while Andromeda is unquestioningly Brawn.



* FamilyFriendlyStripper: Lyra pretty obviously works at a strip club or brothel, but Viola is called an "exotice dancer," the actual term "brothel" is replaced with the Latin "lustris," and she doesn't get called a "whore," but a "meretrix." Actual sex is never mentioned or even hinted at despite the fact that it's clearly happening.

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*FalseUtopia: Read the above.
* FamilyFriendlyStripper: Lyra pretty obviously works at a strip club or brothel, but Viola is called an "exotice "exotic dancer," the actual term "brothel" is replaced with the Latin "lustris," and she doesn't get called a "whore," but a "meretrix." Actual sex is never mentioned or even hinted at despite the fact that it's clearly happening.



* Counting the characters from other works in the universe, we also have Kate, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Tim, Rebecca, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Kallie, Eva, Jace, and Cosette.

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* ** Counting the characters from other works in the universe, we also have Kate, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Tim, Rebecca, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Kallie, Eva, Jace, and Cosette.



* Cassiopeia is named after a notoriously vain and selfish queen; Cassia mean's "empty headed."

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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: The modern Eleutherian caste system. Loyalists hate it because they feel that the "genetically superior" people are stagnant and not allowed to move up to take the control they deem rightfully theirs, while Revolutionaries hate it because of its inequality, abuse and genocidal tendencies.

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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: The modern Eleutherian caste system. Loyalists hate it because they feel that the "genetically superior" people are stagnant and not allowed to move up to take the control they deem rightfully theirs, while Revolutionaries hate it because of its inequality, abuse and genocidal tendencies.tendencies.

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On the Edge of Eureka is a science fiction novel posted by Wattpad user strange-quark, also known as "Karen Elizabeth Anne," but most often called Rennie or literally any derivative of Elizabeth. She also sometimes goes by Angelica Kirk, which is presumably another pseudonym, as she refuses to release her real name. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' is mostly SepculativeFiction, with bits and pieces of modern-day technology taken UpToEleven. Set in a grim, dark, CyberPunk MegaCity called Eleutheria, one of its chief themes is the ethics of CRISPR-Cas9 DNA modification as the planet plunges itself into a civil war over eugenics. In the background, DNA data storage, supercomputers, artificial intelligence, and nuclear bombs all come into play, while the backstory seems to hint at a smallpox pandemic that happened far into the past. ''Enlightenment,'' a prequel presumably discussing this more, is in the works.

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On the Edge of Eureka is a science fiction novel posted by Wattpad user strange-quark, also known as "Karen Elizabeth Anne," but most often called Rennie or literally any derivative of Elizabeth. She also sometimes goes by Angelica Kirk, which is presumably another pseudonym, as she refuses to release her real name. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' is mostly SepculativeFiction, SpeculativeFiction, with bits and pieces of modern-day technology taken UpToEleven. Set in a grim, dark, CyberPunk MegaCity called Eleutheria, one of its chief themes is the ethics of CRISPR-Cas9 DNA modification as the planet plunges itself into a civil war over eugenics. In the background, DNA data storage, supercomputers, artificial intelligence, and nuclear bombs all come into play, while the backstory seems to hint at a smallpox pandemic that happened far into the past. ''Enlightenment,'' a prequel presumably discussing this more, is in the works.

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On the Edge of Eureka is a science fiction novel posted by Wattpad user strange-quark, also known as "Karen Eliza" or "Rennie," in 2017. According to its description on the site, it has made it up to #210 in the rankings of sci-fi, won quarterfinals in a contest called The Perfect Prose Awards, and was the genre winner in The Dawn Awards.

Thus far, it has 20 chapters and is ongoing. The novel follows the story of a woman named Acidalia in a post-cyberpunk Earth called "Eleutheria" as a cold war breaks out between two rival political parties, both of whom oppose the caste system but have different perspectives on how best to change it. "The Loyalist Movement" wants to use the readily-available and ubiquitous genetic modification to elevate themselves and their allies over the common people even more so than the upper-class already is, and the Revolution wants some sort of democracy or republic, with the people having control over the government. Acidalia is part of the Revolution, but is also a Cipher in the old Eleutherian caste system, which is essentially royalty. Her mother and best friend are members of the Movement, which proves disastrous when they plan an assassination attempt against Dalia.

In the mix are the Mira, an alien race Eleutheria has been fighting for decades, who land while the military is busy controlling the riots begun by the cold war. Dalia and several others thrown into the adventure try to evade the Movement and their lackeys, make peace with the Mira, and establish a fairer political system on Earth.

Several sequels and a prequel called ''Literature/{{Enlightenment}}'' are in the works. The story can be read here: [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/106724609-on-the-edge-of-eureka]]

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On the Edge of Eureka is a science fiction novel posted by Wattpad user strange-quark, also known as "Karen Eliza" or "Rennie," in 2017. According to its description on the site, it has made it up to #210 in the rankings of sci-fi, won quarterfinals in a contest Elizabeth Anne," but most often called The Perfect Prose Awards, Rennie or literally any derivative of Elizabeth. She also sometimes goes by Angelica Kirk, which is presumably another pseudonym, as she refuses to release her real name. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' is mostly SepculativeFiction, with bits and was the genre winner in The Dawn Awards.

Thus far, it has 20 chapters and is ongoing. The novel follows the story
pieces of a woman named Acidalia modern-day technology taken UpToEleven. Set in a post-cyberpunk Earth grim, dark, CyberPunk MegaCity called "Eleutheria" as a cold war breaks out between two rival political parties, both Eleutheria, one of whom oppose its chief themes is the caste system but have different perspectives on how best to change it. "The Loyalist Movement" wants to use the readily-available and ubiquitous genetic ethics of CRISPR-Cas9 DNA modification to elevate themselves and their allies as the planet plunges itself into a civil war over eugenics. In the common people even more so than background, DNA data storage, supercomputers, artificial intelligence, and nuclear bombs all come into play, while the upper-class already is, and backstory seems to hint at a smallpox pandemic that happened far into the Revolution wants some sort of democracy or republic, with the people having control over the government. Acidalia past. ''Enlightenment,'' a prequel presumably discussing this more, is part of the Revolution, but is also a Cipher in the old Eleutherian caste system, which is essentially royalty. Her mother and best friend are members of the Movement, which proves disastrous when they plan works.

''Eureka's'' plot kicks off with
an assassination attempt against Dalia.

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on recently-crowned Imperatrix Acidalia Planitia by the mix are eugenicist group the Mira, an alien race Novagenetica, intending to force her mother back on to the throne; her mother Alestra supports the Nova, while Acidalia is part of another Revolutionary party that opposes their ideals. She escapes and sends her soldier brother on a wild goose chase to get the right data to a spy in the Revolution, and eventually another leader on Mars. On the way, Immunus AX-C240 ("Ace"), scientists Athena and Carina, the dancer Lyra, and a number of other people from all walks of life get swept into high-stakes political games as Acidalia tries to run a rebellion while keeping the planet from descending into chaos. Eleutheria has been fighting soon breaks out in a civil war, with everyone stranded in the middle of it. Meanwhile, the Mira, a semi-alien civilization from the same roots as humans, take advantage of the mess to land, seemingly seeking Eleutheria's alliance in an intergalactic conflict and leaving Acidalia forced to choose between a planet of her people and a galaxy of aliens she's never met.

It's slated
for decades, who land while several sequels and prequels. The books featuring Acidalia and the military is busy controlling rest of the riots begun by crew are ''On the cold war. Dalia Edge of Eureka, Quantum Entanglement, Theories of Space-Time, The Nemesis Star,'' and ''The Transcension Hypothesis.'' Prequels include ''Enlightenment, Illuminatarion, Atomic Bonds, Beyond Arcadia,'' and several others thrown into the adventure try to evade the Movement and their lackeys, make peace others. Work on ''Enlightenment'' has already begun, with the Mira, first draft reportedly on chapter 9. ''On the Edge of Eureka'' has since been removed from Wattpad for editing, but the first draft has been completed, and establish a fairer political system draft 2 is on Earth.

Several sequels and
chapter 11. Thus far, it has a prequel called ''Literature/{{Enlightenment}}'' are in very similar plot, with the works. The story can be read here: [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/106724609-on-the-edge-of-eureka]]
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*{{Arcadia}}: The Republic of Arcadia, obviously. At least, before it was [[spoiler: destroyed by nuclear bombs.]]



* FamilyFriendlyStripper: Lyra pretty obviously works at a strip club or brothel, but Viola is called an "exotice dancer," the actual term "brothel" is replaced with the Latin "lustris," and she doesn't get called a "whore," but a "meretrix." Actual sex is never mentioned or even hinted at despite the fact that it's clearly happening.



* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: All the swear words people would normally say are just translated into Latin. "Meretrix," "lupa," and all the other things Lyra is called basically just mean whore or slut. When she says she was abandoned in a ''lustris,'' she means a brothel. ''Mori in igni'' means "die in a fire."

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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: A villanous example. Alestra basically tells this to Cassiopeia when she tries shooting Acidalia in the head for no reason.
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: All the swear words people would normally say are just translated into Latin. "Meretrix," "lupa," and all the other things Lyra is called basically just mean whore whore, prostitute or slut. When she says she was abandoned in a ''lustris,'' she means a brothel. ''Mori in igni'' means "die in a fire."



* FirstContact: First peaceful contact, at least. The Mira and the Eleutherians have been at war for decades, but so much time has elapsed between peaceful meetings that neither of the generations that began the war is still around. Dalia, Andromeda and Atlas meeting Rae and Cadé is the first civil discussion in decades, and it's been so long since the last one that both species have never seen the other before and are bemused by each other.
* FutureSlang: "Stars!" is a popular one. "Kyrie Eleison" (meaning "lord have mercy") is used frequently by Athena, though the characters have no idea what it means or the religious connotation. At one point, Dalia thinks "Christ," a phrase she heard from her grandmother, then notes she doesn't know what it references, but it feels like a stronger expression than "stars."

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* FirstContact: First peaceful ''peaceful'' contact, at least. The Mira and the Eleutherians have been at war for decades, but so much time has elapsed between peaceful meetings that neither of the generations that began the war is still around. Dalia, Andromeda and Atlas meeting Rae and Cadé is the first civil discussion in decades, and it's been so long since the last one that both species have never seen the other before and are bemused by each other.
* FutureSlang: "Stars!" is a popular one. one (or "astra!" or "stellae!," seemingly with no distinction between the two.) "Kyrie Eleison" (meaning "lord have mercy") is used frequently by Athena, though the characters have no idea what it means or the religious connotation. At one point, Dalia thinks "Christ," a phrase she heard from her grandmother, then notes she doesn't know what it references, but it feels like a stronger expression than "stars."



* Counting the characters from other works in the universe, we also have Kate, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Tim, Rebecca, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Kallie, Eva, Jace, and Cosette.



* LowCultureHighTech: Arcadian boarder towns.

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* LowCultureHighTech: Arcadian boarder border towns.



* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: Eleutherian leadership. It used to be strong and powerful, but as time marched on, it became incompetent. Castes meant the proletariat no longer had a voice in the government, the military meant that all men- even political leaders- were drafted, and low live expectancy made the government entirely teenagers and twenty-somethings. By the events of the book, they're relying of genetic modification and propaganda to control an unruly people, the planet it split between two rebel factions, and aliens are on the brink of landing, but no one has any idea what to do about it. The leadership is: Cassiopeia, who's obsessed with TB's approval and gaining power, and nothing else. Alestra, who pretty openly supports one of the rebel groups and is one hundred percent willing to kill her own people over it. And Acidalia: the only ReasonableAuthorityFigure, who still can't get any reforms done because everyone else is trying to kill her.

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* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: Eleutherian leadership. It used to be strong and powerful, but as time marched on, it became incompetent. Castes meant the proletariat no longer had a voice in the government, the military meant that all men- even political leaders- were drafted, and low live life expectancy made the government entirely teenagers and twenty-somethings. By the events of the book, they're relying of genetic modification and propaganda to control an unruly people, the planet it split between two rebel factions, and aliens are on the brink of landing, but no one has any idea what to do about it. The leadership is: Cassiopeia, who's obsessed with TB's approval and gaining power, and nothing else. Alestra, who pretty openly supports one of the rebel groups and is one hundred percent willing to kill her own people over it. And Acidalia: the only ReasonableAuthorityFigure, who still can't get any reforms done because everyone else is trying to kill her.her.
* OddCouple: Platonically, Acidalia and Andromeda. Dalia's a classy, eloquent royal with a deep understanding of politics but clueless about military strategy, while Andromeda is a cyborg bruiser Labora who couldn't give less of a damn about nuance and respect in favor of punching stuff. They're best friends. Obviously.



*OpenHeartDentistry: When Dalia escapes an assassination attempt, she winds up wounded and on the floor with only two teenage Scientia. She assumes they know what they're doing when they reach for the first aid kid, but there's a problem- by scientists, they mean ''astrophysicists.'' She winds up with several large scars up her legs and on her back.



* [[SceneryPorn Scenery Description Overload]]: Eleutheria's massive buildings, neon signs, gritty slums and utopian penthouses are described in immense detail. This becomes [[FridgeHorror unnerving]] when it's described by Tee, Ace, Atlas or David, because they are implied to have undergone genetic modification during their training as a soldier that resulted in increased nationalism and patriotism.

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* [[SceneryPorn Scenery Description Overload]]: [[SceneryPorn]]: Eleutheria's massive buildings, neon signs, gritty slums and utopian penthouses are described in immense detail. This becomes [[FridgeHorror unnerving]] when it's described by Tee, Ace, Atlas or David, because they are implied to have undergone genetic modification during their training as a soldier that resulted in increased nationalism and patriotism.
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*AllDeathsFinal: Cybernetics and genetic mods only work on living people. Once you die, you're gone for good.



*BrokenAce: Dalia is supposed to be the Imperatrix and a Revolutionary leader, but she's cracking from the pressure. And the fact that she witnessed her brother get shot to death, her little sister taken away groomed by a guy with ambiguous morals, and one of her closest friends dying from poison gas in the span of about a week might have something to do with it too.



*CityPlanet: Eleutheria.



*DangerousWorkplace: The factories and anything in the Underground.



*MegaCity: Eleutheria.



*SkyscraperCity: Eleutheria.



*VagueAge: Alestra. According to basic maths, she's middle-aged, but other characters consistantly describe her as looking as young as her 20 year old daughter. Carina says that if she didn't know who it was, she'd assume Alestra was twenty-something. Justified, considering the easy access the rich have to DNA mods and anti-aging therapy.



* WhiteIsGood: Played with but ultimately not played straight. White represents power; it is both Acidalia's ability to change toe world for better or worse and the power of the Revolution to rebuild the system, and the power of Alestra and the Movement to do the opposite.

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** The insults are mostly in Latin and Greek as well. "Fututus et mori in igni," one of Lyra's favorite phrases, translates roughly to "f*ck off and die in a fire."



* BizarreAlienBiology: Not externally; the Mira are odd-looking and Uncanny Valley level, but not EldrichAbominations. However, on a molecular level, they don't have DNA. They use a different system where instead of adenine, thymine, cytosine and guanine, they evidently use something involving just two bases.

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* BizarreAlienBiology: Not externally; According to a post on r/worldbuilding, the Mira are odd-looking and Uncanny Valley level, but not EldrichAbominations. However, on a molecular level, they don't have DNA. They use a different system where instead of adenine, thymine, cytosine and guanine, they evidently use something involving just two bases.breathe through their backs.



* BrainyBrunette: Athena has black hair and Carina has grayish-brown.

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* BrainyBrunette: Athena has black hair and Carina has grayish-brown. Dalia has black hair, but she could qualify too.



* BystanderSyndrome: When Lyra is hit by a car, no one cares.

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* BystanderSyndrome: When In the rewrite, chapter 2 opens with Lyra is hit getting beat up by a car, no one cares.drug dealer because she looked at him wrong and he was high on some anger-inducing drug. Her fellow Cantatores' response is to tell her to keep her mouth shut next time and clean up the trail of blood. Even when Ace tells her she has a concussion and several broken bones, she gets little sympathy.



* CityNoir: When Athena is looking for Kalyn in the red light district.

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* CityNoir: When Athena is looking for Kalyn in Everything about the red light district.



* ColorCodedPatrician: Ciphers wear pure white, as stated above. This could be a Callback to Kate's love of the color.

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* ColorCodedPatrician: Ciphers wear pure white, as stated above. This could be a Callback to Kate's love of the color.



* {{Cyborg}}: Andromeda. It's implied this is a common treatment for otherwise deadly injuries or diseases: get rid of the sick parts and replace them with robotic versions.

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Author's notes on an upcoming project reveal that Alestra was a middle child who [[spoiler: murdered her younger sister Celeste and framed her older sister Anya for it, which led to Anya's execution and Alestra being able to become a Cipher. Alestra also helped incite a riot and indirectly killed thousands. Oh, and she was 15 when she killed a 7-year-old Celeste and a 19-year-old Anya.]]

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Author's notes on an upcoming project reveal that Alestra According to blog posts/Reddit posts, Alestra. She was a middle child who [[spoiler: murdered raised by an uncaring mother, living in the shadow of her elder sister Avina's crown and her younger sister Celeste and framed her older sister Anya for it, which led to Anya's execution and Alestra being able to become a Cipher. Alestra also helped incite a riot and indirectly killed thousands. Oh, and she was 15 when she killed a 7-year-old Celeste and a 19-year-old Anya.]]Celestia's cult following. She dealt with the problem with murder, naturally.



* DeadlyGas: The ketacyanide bombs released during the riots. [[spoiler: They kill Artemis within minutes.]]
* DividedWeFall: The split in Eleutheria's government into two warring factions, neither of which is really helping anything despite their good intentions,

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* DeadlyGas: The ketacyanide bombs released during the riots. [[spoiler: They [[spoiler:They kill Artemis within minutes.]]
* DividedWeFall: The split in Eleutheria's government into two warring factions, neither of which is really helping anything despite their good intentions, intentions.



** Eleutherians look down on Martians as country hicks and rednecks who don't have a place in the castes.
** Martians see Eleutherians as fake and greedy.
** The upper castes look down on preformers as trashy. Middle-caste groups like Incentor and Sollertia are still seen as better than Cantatores, though. Actually, a major point of the caste system is how those in even minor positions of power act corrupt and horrible to everyone below them, simply because society says they can.
** the UncannyValley has not vanished: people like the Mira and anyone with cybernetics are seen by "normal" characters as kind of odd. Cyborgs are usually seen as cheap, with most preferring home-grown (or stolen) "organic" organs.
** The Miramans have something against the "Southern people," which is evidently a group that encompasses Raeilya.

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** The
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** Martians see Eleutherians as fake and greedy.
uncivilized.
** The upper castes look down on preformers as trashy. Middle-caste groups like Incentor and Sollertia are still seen as better than Cantatores, though. Actually, a major point of the caste system is how those in even minor positions of power act corrupt and horrible to everyone below them, simply because society says they can.
** the UncannyValley has not vanished: people like the
Mira and anyone with cybernetics are seen by "normal" characters as kind of odd. Cyborgs are usually seen as cheap, with most preferring home-grown (or stolen) "organic" organs.
** The Miramans have something against
dislike the "Southern people," Southerners, which is evidently a group that encompasses encompassing Raeilya.



* FreedomFromChoice: How TB views the rest of the world- innocent but dumb sheep who need to be told what to do by someone smarter and more powerful.

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* {{Gendercide}}: Played with. There's no specific effort to kill off all the men, but they are the only ones (other than the mostly obsolete Generalis women) forced to fight the Mira in what's obviously a losing battle. A rare variant where this is not used to focus on a romantic relationship primarily; it mostly develops Dalia's relationship with her little brother TB-2115 or "Tee."

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* FutureFoodIsArtificial: Only some of it. The rich get real food.
* {{Gendercide}}: Played with. There's no specific effort to kill off all the men, but they are the only ones (other than the mostly obsolete Generalis women) forced to fight the Mira in what's obviously a losing battle. A rare variant where this is not used to focus on a romantic relationship primarily; it mostly develops Dalia's relationship with her little brother TB-2115 or "Tee."T."



* GenreBusting: A {{Cyberpunk}} setting with SpeculativeFiction science and a cast made up of: a princess in all but name, two scientists, a low-class stripper in all but name, a tech-specialist soldier, and a cyborg Rebellion leader. Also, there's social commentary. Lots of social commentary.
* ettingCrapPastTheRadar: Some of the GratutiousLatin translates to somewhat inappropriate things. Meretrix isn't a title, agnus isn't a name, and lupa means something other then she-wolf in this context.

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* GenreBusting: A {{Cyberpunk}} setting with SpeculativeFiction science and a cast made up of: a princess in all but name, an Imperatrix, two scientists, a low-class stripper in all but name, a tech-specialist soldier, and a cyborg Rebellion leader. Also, there's social commentary. Lots of social commentary.
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* ettingCrapPastTheRadar: Some of GettingCrapPastTheRadar: All the GratutiousLatin translates to somewhat inappropriate things. Meretrix isn't a title, agnus isn't a name, swear words people would normally say are just translated into Latin. "Meretrix," "lupa," and lupa all the other things Lyra is called basically just mean whore or slut. When she says she was abandoned in a ''lustris,'' she means something other then she-wolf a brothel. ''Mori in this context.igni'' means "die in a fire."



* LawOfAlienNames: Averted- Cadé's name is Cadé Maru, and Rae's full name is Raeilya Aminia Aalyah Imé. This is possibly due to cultural differences among the Mira- Southerners like Rae have more flowery names, spelled like Arabic but pronounced in a fluid, impossible-to-reproduce way.
** [[spoiler: They're similar to humans, because humans and the Mira come from the same origins (according to Word of God, at least.)]

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* LawOfAlienNames: Averted- Cadé's name is Cadé Maru, and Rae's full name is Raeilya Aminia Aalyah Imé. This is possibly due to cultural differences among the Mira- Southerners like Rae Aliah Æishel. They have more flowery names, spelled like Arabic but pronounced in a fluid, impossible-to-reproduce way.
** [[spoiler: They're similar
meanings, too: Cadé's roughly translates to humans, because humans "warrior of the sea," and the Mira come from the same origins (according to Word of God, at least.)]Rae's mean's "light-bringer."



*LowCultureHighTech: Arcadian boarder towns.



** Aleskynn deliberately sounds like "less kin," emphasizing her status as a lesser family member.

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** Aleskynn deliberately sounds like "less kin," emphasizing her status as a lesser family member. The beginning also resembled Alestra's, because she is the favorite daughter regardless.



* MirrorChemistry: Whatever genetic system the Mira have is clearly not compatible with humans', seeing as they cannot consume the same food (some, like salt water, is not deadly, but just not tasty and with no value, while the rest is presumably dangerous, as the normally hospitable Rae won't offer Dalia and her companions any.)

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* MirrorChemistry: Whatever genetic system the Mira have is clearly not compatible with humans', seeing as they cannot consume the same food (some, like salt water, is not deadly, but just not tasty ** Raeilya and with no value, while the rest Cadé's names mean things in their own languages. Cadé's is presumably dangerous, as the normally hospitable Rae won't offer Dalia "sea warrior" and her companions any.) Rae's is "light-bringer."
* Cassiopeia is named after a notoriously vain and selfish queen; Cassia mean's "empty headed."



* MulticulturalAlienPlanet: According to tie-ins and bonus stories, Mirama. They even seem to have some form of FantasticRacism going on against the "Southern" people, whoever they are.
* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Averted- ''heavily'' averted, in fact. Not only are humans and Miramans not the same species, they don't even share the same genetic information. Humans have DNA, and whatever the Mira have is some other molecule with 2 bases. For this reason, Acidalia concludes that Eleutherian genetic mods won't work on Rae and Cadé.
** In the food, to a degree. Humans can't stomach the excessively salty water and meals of the Mira, because they lack salt-filtering glands.
* NoOSHACompliance: Most factories in Eleutheria. Child labor is everywhere, and workers are expendable, leading to many industrial accidents. Andromeda was nearly killed.

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* MulticulturalAlienPlanet: According to tie-ins and bonus stories, Mirama. They The Mira's home planet. Evidently, they even seem to have some form a bunch of FantasticRacism going on against the "Southern" people, whoever they are.
* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Averted- ''heavily'' averted, in fact. Not only are humans and Miramans not the same species, they don't even share the same genetic information. Humans have DNA, and whatever the Mira have is some other molecule with 2 bases. For this reason, Acidalia concludes that Eleutherian genetic mods won't work on Rae and Cadé.
** In the food, to a degree. Humans can't stomach the excessively salty water and meals of the Mira, because they lack salt-filtering glands.
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* NoOSHACompliance: Most factories in Eleutheria. Child labor is everywhere, and workers are expendable, leading to many industrial accidents. Andromeda was nearly killed.killed as an eleven year old when she caught fire in an incident, and ultimately lost half her body to burns.



* OffingTheOffspring: Alestra to Dalia.

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* With the soldiers too. Noticably, Tee and TB's names are almost identical: TB-2115 and TB-2116. Since they're all serial numbers, most are extremely similar. Like the girls, they come up with nicknames.



* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Aleskynn, being only 13. That is, until she turns on them.

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* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Aleskynn, being only 13. That is, until she turns on them.



* ThemeNaming: The author likes naming characters after celestial object, gemstones and myths.
** Acidalia Planitia is a plain on Mars, Andromeda, Lyra and Cassiopeia are constellations, and Carina is a nebula. Estella, Seren and Alestra (and therefore Aleskynn) are all derived from stars.
** Artemis and Athena are from the Greek mythos.
** Adamantina is from the Latin adamantum, or diamond. Names like Saphira, Perla, Margarita (also ''pearl''), Esmeralda, etc have gemstone roots.
** Most other names, like Thea, come directly from ancient Roman or Greek names (Theodora/Theodosia in this case) or mean something in one of those languages.

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** Adamantina is from the Latin adamantum, or diamond. Names like Saphira, Perla, Margarita (also ''pearl''), Esmeralda, etc have gemstone roots.
** Most other names, like Thea, come directly from ancient Roman or Greek names (Theodora/Theodosia in this case) or mean something in one of those languages.
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** There was also an Ascentic Movement in the late 2000s to early 3000s focusing on this style.

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*{{Conscription}}: Men are literally drafted at birth.



*DefectorFromDecadance: Acidalia.



*DraftDodging: If you find a single Eleutherian man who isn't actively figting the Mira, they're this. Ace and David included.



*EatTheRich: A sentiment shared by most of the oppressed populace, but exactly which rich person to metaphorically eat differs. The Revolution supports Acidalia because she's on their side, and the Movement supports [[spoiler: Alestra]], and Cassiopeia because they're on this side. No one likes the Dictatorum.



*ExtremeSpeculativeStratification: The differences between the rich and poor are incredibly wide. The Ciphers get luxurious penthouses, beautiful ballgowns, and everything that comes with being royalty- the poor don't even have basic human rights.
*FantasticCasteSystem: It wouldn't be a {{dystopia}}n CrapsackWorld without one. There are 20 castes, ranging from Ciphers to Servum.



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*LadyLand: Men have required military service, leaving women in control of the rest of the planet.
*LayeredMetropolis: The rich on top and the poor below.



**[[spoiler: They're similar to humans, because humans and the Mira come from the same origins (according to Word of God, at least.)]



* RedLightDistrict: Lower Appalachia and Terra, and Lyra's hometown. To innocent soldier boys, it's liberal version. To outsiders like Athena, it's a hostile version, and to natives like Lyra, it's just sad, pitiful, and miserable.

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* ProperLady: Dalia, when she's not leading a revolution. And even then some.
* RedLightDistrict: Lower Appalachia and Terra, and Lyra's hometown. To innocent soldier boys, it's a liberal version. To outsiders like Athena, it's a hostile version, and to natives like Lyra, it's just sad, pitiful, and miserable.


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*AbusiveParents: Alestra straight-up tried to murder Dalia, and Lyra's mother just dumped her daughter in a club (a club that's pretty much a strip club, too- but it's a YA novel so it's never explicitly mentioned as being such.)



*AffablyEvil: TB. He's not evil just to be evil- he genuinely wants a utopian world, his vision of a utopia just happens to involve a lot of morally ambiguous things.
**Alestra could count, too. Imagine having two children and knowing one of them will have to die. She saves Aleskynn (thus, tries to kill Dalia) because [[spoiler: she herself was a younger sister.]]



*AsceticAesthetic: Acidalia and everything she wears, owns or does. The aesthetic practically follows her around, in contrast to everyone else's CyberPunk and IndustrialGhetto. It's synonymous with the upper class.
**There was also an Ascentic Movement in the late 2000s to early 3000s focusing on this style.



*BreadAndCircuses: Mentioned by name- the Dictatorum, Cantatores, and Castes of the Arts pretty much only exist for this purpose. Dictatorum, Auctores, Actorieses, Incentors and Sollertium all manage/create propaganda in the form of movies, books, and art, while Cantatores are pretty much strippers and sex workers.
*BystanderSyndrome: When Lyra is hit by a car, no one cares.



*CityNoir: When Athena is looking for Kalyn in the red light district.
* CloseCallHaircut: At the very beginning when the Movement tries to kill Dalia, she feels the lasers singe her hair. Happens again to Lyra when the soldiers find her as a stowaway.



* CloseCallHaircut: At the very beginning when the Movement tries to kill Dalia, she feels the lasers singe her hair. Happens again to Lyra when the soldiers find her as a stowaway.

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*CrapSaccharineWorld: Eleutheria is a shiny, glitzy, AsceticAesthetic {{Utopia}}n future- but it's actually a CyberPunk crapsack if you get too deep.
* CloseCallHaircut: At the very beginning when the Movement tries to kill Dalia, she feels the lasers singe her hair. Happens again to Lyra when the soldiers find her as CrystalSpiresAndTogas: The Miramans are a stowaway.more organic, ocean-y version of this.


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*TheFuture: Sometime in the early 4000s, according to Alestra's diary. At this point, an apocalypse, a Second Enlightenment (that basically contradicted everything that happened during the ''actual'' Enlightenment), the recreation of the feudal system in midwestern-postapocalyptic America, the rise of several other nations, the subsequent destruction of said nations via nuclear bombs, many art movements, and several civil wars have happened.


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*PowerGlows: To the point where Eleutheria (an eternally dark city because of smog and nuclear winter) is known as the "City of Light," simply because of the neon.
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*WretchedHive: The CyberPunk slums of Appalachia are basically this. Gangs rule everything, there's a massive stim problem, Labora regularly work themselves to death, abandoned orpans are practically as common as air, pollution makes the white buildings gray, and it's not explicitly mentioned (this ''is'' a YA book) but it can be assumed that prostitutes are everywhere.
**Tee explicitly refers to the red-light district, and Lyra basically all but says that plenty of Cantatores turn to sex work because "dancing" doesn't make enough money.
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*AwesomeButImpractical: 90% of cybernetic and gene-modifying technology.
**Athena tells Lyra of experiments they did that gave humans angel-like wings. However, they stopped because not only did angel wings result in tons of unintentional mutations and deaths, wings in a place like Eleutheria are completely useless.
**Cassiopeia's photosynthesis. It sounds cool, but Eleutheria is in an eternal smoggy nuclear winter.
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*OneSteveLimit: Majorly averted. There are so many people in Eleutheria and so few popular names, one can expect to have hundreds of thousands of others with the same exact name. They go by nicknames.
-->Athena: Gemstone names are everywhere. We had six Ametistas. Amé, Missie, Mista, Meti, Ameta, and just Ametista.
*With the soldiers too. Noticably, Tee and TB's names are almost identical: TB-2115 and TB-2116. Since they're all serial numbers, most are extremely similar. Like the girls, they come up with nicknames.



* OverlyLongName: The way the naming system works means that this happens quite frequently. If your given name is a two-parter like Acidalia Planitia or Carina Nebula, and your mother is also a two parter like Luna Minora or Julia Maxima, and your caste has subcastes, possibly multiple, and if you have titles, that all gets added onto your name. Carina Nebula e Julia Maxima, Ciencia Astronomica is the name of an ordinary middle-class scientist. Nicknames are used.
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-->Athena: Like if you work in viruses, it'd be Ciencia Biologica Virii. And then you have people with double names, like Acidalia Planitia, I guess. So it gets long fast. I knew someone named Ametista Margarita e Seraphina Minora, Ciencia Quantistica Theorica Astrophysica. We called her Amé.
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Several sequels and a prequel called ''Enlightenment'' are in the works. The story can be read here: [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/106724609-on-the-edge-of-eureka]]

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Several sequels and a prequel called ''Enlightenment'' ''Literature/{{Enlightenment}}'' are in the works. The story can be read here: [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/106724609-on-the-edge-of-eureka]]
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[[folder:On the Edge of Eureka]]



* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: The modern Eleutherian caste system. Loyalists hate it because they feel that the "genetically superior" people are stagnant and not allowed to move up to take the control they deem rightfully theirs, while Revolutionaries hate it because of its inequality, abuse and genocidal tendencies.

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* AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil: Rebecca is treated as if she's a government dignitary instead of a school leader. That being said, this is The Academy, where students are treated as smaller and easier-to-control grownups. Based on the work Kate does, a highly prestigious position like the President is justified.
* AdultsAreUseless: Kate, Natalie, Taylor, Rich, Dana, Belle and Lucille are the only people in the lab. There is no adult present. Kate's stepfather is a drunk, her mother is neglectful, and the man in charge of "InfecSec" is useless. The CDC and other US government facilities rely on the Academy to an extent, and are implied to be using Kate and co. as "lab rats" for diseases they don't want to deal with themselves.
** Possibly justified by that last point. The reason no adults are present is because the kids are treated as expendable workers. Adults ''could'' be working on the projects, but that would be putting the life of someone valuable in danger. In the government's eyes, why waste important thinkers when clueless and expendable teenagers could be doing the same work for free?
* AgeAppropriateAngst: In between Kate worrying about her scientists slowly dying of a new virus, there's Taylor and Scarlett talking about friendships, relationships and parties.
* AlphaBitch: Penny, with Leila being her Beta. However, not entirely: she seems to have had a difficult home life.
* AmbiguousDisorder: Kate talks a lot about not fitting in and being a social outcaste, past the point of normal teenage angst. She is also obsessed with microorganisms in a way that suggests some form of autism.
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: Class 2 to Class 3a. Nearly all of humanity goes extinct; however, they were able to bounce back. Thousands of years later, they've created Eleutheria.]]
* ArcWords: Eureka, as well as Enlightenment and other similar words (''Lumen''osa, ''illuminate''arion, etc.)
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Plenty of literature nerds would love to be named Anna Karenina or Cosette Esmeralda or any of the other Davis girls' names.
** Averted with Kate: it's even made a point of how many people share her name in the first paragraph.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Joe and Sharon openly cheat on each other, drink, stay out late and emotionally abuse their kids.
* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Anna (and the rest of the cousins) is blonde, Kate's a brunette and Taylor is ginger.
* BoardingSchoolOfHorrors: The Academy is one, when you start to think about it. Kate sees it as a way to escape from her neglectful mother and stepfather and her insane family, but the place uses child labor. Kate's casual reaction to corpses and love for the deadliest diseases just show how indoctrinated she is. She, and all the other lab workers, are treated as (and actually call themselves) "expendables." And this isn't even considered ''abnormal.'' It's just how things work, and the kids don't even see it as bad. Kate enjoys every minute of it.
* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: The Davis triplets. Scarlett is beauty (though they're all described as pretty), Anna is brains and Scout is brawn.
* BrainyBrunette: Kate, and according to the images, also Belle, Rich, Natalie and Lillie Anne.
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: Many times, along with ArsonMurderAndJaywalking.
-->'''Scout:''' That's the ''point'' of Armageddon, Anna! You start riots, shoot zombies, eat beans!
* CheerfulChild: Cosette Davis.
* CoolCar: Kate's mom's Mercedes, her stepfather's truck, Penny's family's arsenal of sports cars...
* ConspiciousConsumption: Penny and her family go to great lengths to really hammer in the idea that they're rich, including excessive luxury cars, all-designer clothes every day, wearing diamond and gold jewels everywhere...
** Averted with Kate: we see in a bonus story that, even at 10, she was frustrated with her life, antisocial and disliked by her peers.
* ColorCodedPatrician: A downplayed example. Kate wears white quite often, usually in the form of lab coats, showing her status as the unchallenged smartest. Penny also wears white, showing hers as the unchallenged most popular RichBitch.
* CreepyChild: Kate is 16, but the other lab workers are in their early teens. They could fit this due to their carefree joking about how expendable they are, how quickly they expect to die, and their casual conversation over corpses.Especially when Kate threatens to stab the next person who calls her Kitty with an infected knife. Sure, she was joking, but does that really make it any better?
* DeadpanSnarker: Kate.
-->'''Scarlett:''' I thought the end of days wasn't supposed to happen until next week.
-->'''Kate:''' Right, let me just mark that down on my calendar. 'Sorry, Satan, I have a dentist appointment on Tuesday. We're going to have to move [the apocalypse] up.'
* EmbarrassingNickname:Played with. People call Kate "Kitty" in a mocking way, and Kitty would normally be a totally acceptable nickname for someone named Katherine. However, Kate associates it with her grade school bullies and her drunken stepfather, making it embarrassing to be called Kitty for her.
* FamilyEyeResemblence: The Davises have blue eyes.
* {{Fangirl}}: Taylor [=McLean=]. She writes fan fiction shipping together characters who have never met and has cried at Mystery Science Theatre 3000.
-->'''Lucille:''' ...I didn't know they ''had'' sad episodes.
-->'''Kate:''' You're right, and they don't.
* FashionDesigner: Scarlett.
* ForScience: Literally everything Kate does, all the time.
* FreeRangeChildren: Enlightenment starts with teenagers doing an autopsy on a (probably) smallpox-infected corpse. Where are their parents? In the case of the main characters, either dead, drunk or don't care.
* FlatWhat: [[spoiler: Kate when Agent Seymour tells her the world is ending, and they're not going to try and save the people with conventional methods- rather, they're going to save the smartest, richest and most powerful, and leave everyone else to die, in the hopes that the "best" will be able to build a better world.]]
* IdiotSavant: In a way, Kate; she's hopeless at anything related to socializing. When she has to make a speech, she just sounds like a moron. When she has to talk to people, she comes across as cold and uncaring. She's awful at sports, music, and getting along with people. The only thing she's good at is academics, and holy ''hell'' is she incredible at academics. She works full-time in a lab alongside adult members of the CDC, is entrusted with diseases from Ebola to smallpox, speaks many languages despite not even being raised in a bilingual family, and can calculate trigonometry problems in her head. But ask her to talk to a peer like a normal person, and she'll sound completely clueless and inept.
* ImprobablyHighIQ: Averted. Taylor and Kate are considered geniuses: Taylor has a realistic IQ of 118, which is above-average but still not outlandish. Kate is brilliant with an IQ of "150-something," which is very above average but not impossible- Einstein's was 160.
* InSeriesNickname: Katherine is Kate (and she gets pissed if you call her Kathy, Katie, or god-forbid ''Kitty''.) Jean-Louise goes by Scout, even though she's never read the book, and Timothy by Tim.
-->'''Kate:''' The next person to call me 'Kitty" gets stabbed with this infected scalpel.
** The sectors of ANEP, too. In all the tie-in stuff, they have nicknames: The Infectious Disease Sector is [=InfecSec=], which is a division of the Medical Sector ([=MedSec=]) which is a division of the Biology sector ([=BioSec=]) which is a division of the Science sector ([=SciSec=].)
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Her intelligence isn't the only cause of Kate's isolation, but it's part of it. Either way, she's a TeenGenius with no friends, a family that (for the most part) doesn't care about or worry about her, and a nonexistent social life. She, in her own words, can relate more to deadly bioweapons than actual people.
** Averted with Taylor. Like Kate, she's a science whiz, but she's peppy, bubbly (even in times of stress) and has a thriving friend group, consisting of many Internet friends, all of the lab workers, many others, and Lillie Anne.
* JustBeforeTheEnd: The book begins [[spoiler: a few days before the apocalypse does.]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: From Tigris, Enlightenment and all of the extra material: Katherine, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Cosette, Tim, Penny, Leila, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Rich, Joe, Sharon, Dana, Belle, Lucille, Rachel, Amanda, and Pi.
* LonelyRichKid: Kate is rich, and completely isolated. Her money isn't the root of it, though.
* NoSocialSkills: Kate is completely inept at talking to others, empathizing or relating to them. This is even more pronounced in ''Tigris,'' when she finds she can't even cry when the world is ending and her friends are being sent to what might be their doom. She tries to give a speech, and fails miserably- not because she's emotional, but she's ''just that bad at it.''
* NextSundayAD: Enlightenment takes place someplace around 2020.
* NewSpeak: The names of various parts of ANEP invoke this. "[=InfecSec=]" and "[=PolitiSec=]" come to mind.
* NotGoodWithPeople: Kate is great with viruses. She actually loves them. People, on the other hand...
* PromotedToParent: Pretty much all of the Davis-McLean kids to those younger than them. Kate is a driving force in keeping the family together, and prevents everyone else from getting into trouble with Joe. Anna is maternal towards everyone, but especially Cosette, and takes on the role of the responsible adult. Tim is a mentor for Kate and his sisters, and everyone raises Cosette collectively.
* ParentalNeglect: Sharon and Joe could not care less about what happens to their children.
* RichBitch: Penny, Leila, and to a lesser extent, Scarlett.
** Averted with the rest of the Davises, who clearly have money (Sharon is an heiress, Joe is a millionaire playboy, they live in a massive house big enough to have at least seven bedrooms) but don't rub it in people's faces. Maybe it's because the rest of their lives is so awful.
* RunningGag: Scarlett citing classic literature without having any idea what she's talking about.
** From ''Tigris'':
-->'''Scarlett''': I want to be like [[TheGreatGatsby Daisy Buchanan.]] Gorgeous, impossibly rich and sought-after-
-->'''Kate''': You beautiful little fool.
-->'''Scarlett''': What?
-->'''Kate''':... you never read the book, did you?
-->'''Scarlett (snorting)''': No.
* ScienceIsBad: Played with, but ultimately averted. The themes of both Enlightenment and Eureka focus on science's applications and what the people who use it choose to do with it, not the technology itself being inherently good or evil.
* ScienceHero: Everything Kate does is for science. ''Everything.''
* SelfFanservice: Canon Kate is an acne-ridden, socially awkward teenager with a lot of personal issues involving the ethics of her career and the dilapidated mess of a family she belongs to. Fanon Kate is TheAce: nerdy but pretty and much more well-adjusted.
* ShoutOut: Mostly to the books the girls are named after. Joe murmers "so stupid, the shit we do," when discussing Cosette.
* SyntheticPlague: [[ThePlague Tigris]] may or may not be one, but it's implied that it was at least partially modified by humans.
* TeenGenius: Kate, Taylor, and everyone else at ANEP.
* TenderTears: Taylor is extremely prone to this.
* TheDitz: Leila. The author says she's the only one truly happy with her life, because she's too stupid to be upset by it.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Sort of. Kate is brilliant but a social outcast, and everyone outside her family/lab team think she's weird and creepy. Taylor is attractive, smart but nowhere near Kate's level, and a social butterfly. However, they do get along quite well, encouraging each other- Taylor says Kate is lucky because she's a genius, and Kate says Taylor is lucky because she's so likable.
** The triplets to an extent, too. Anna is more intellectual and definitely the most mature, while Scarlett is a party girl and more promiscuous and outgoing. Meanwhile, Scout is lazy and doesn't try in school- or, really, much of anything outside video games. They're all described by Kate as beautiful, but Scout tries to hide it, Anna is more cute and Scarlett tries to be sexy (it comes off as cringeworthy to Kate.)
* ThemeNaming: It's a Karen Eliza Anne book. Naturally, it has this in ''spades.''
** The Davis siblings are as follows: Anna Karenina, Scarlett, Jean-Louise "Scout," Timothy Finn and Cosette Esmeralda. Any of those sound familiar?
** Light, and words relating to it, are used as symbols for when something is hiding something. The "Great Elders" are called Luminosa in the sequel, Kate and Dalia both seek "enlightenment" for their family/their people, there's a chapter called Illuminate and a side novella or novel rumored to be called Illuminatarion, etc.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Ultimately, what [[spoiler: the Tigiris virus]] is.
* TheIlluminati: With the frequency the words "luminous," "illuminating," "enlightened" and "brilliant" are used, combined with the New World Order mentality of the government, this comes to mind quite a lot.
* ThePlague: [[spoiler: The Tigris virus.]]
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: A rare inversion: Joe, Rich and Tim are the only males.
** You can see this in ''Eureka'' too: Ace, Atlas, TB, Cadé and Tee were the only men in the main cast. [[spoiler: Tee dies in chapter 7]], and TB is a villain, which leaves Ace, Atlas and Cadé. Possibly justified by this being a world where the genders are kept apart, generally.
* TheUnfavourite: Scout is Joe's unfavorite. He's threatened to send her to "troubled teen camps" or military school multiple times. He also dislikes Kate, but not as much as Scout.
* TitleDrop: You know some symbolism/connections/conspiracies are about to go down when the books make references to one another. Most notably, Raeilya calls Dalia "an enlightened one" in ''Eureka'', and Kate says she feels like the's "on the edge of something incredible."
* TokenMiniMoe: Cosette is notably the youngest.
* UndergroundCity: The apocalypse bunker is implied to be one.



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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: The modern Eleutherian caste system. Loyalists hate it because they feel that the "genetically superior" people are stagnant and not allowed to move up to take the control they deem rightfully theirs, while Revolutionaries hate it because of its inequality, abuse and genocidal tendencies.

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* AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil: Rebecca is treated as if she's a government dignitary instead of a school leader. That being said, this is The Academy, where students are treated as smaller and easier-to-control grownups. Based on the work Kate does, a highly prestigious position like the President is justified.
* AdultsAreUseless: Kate, Natalie, Taylor, Rich, Dana, Belle and Lucille are the only people in the lab. There is no adult present. Kate's stepfather is a drunk, her mother is neglectful, and the man in charge of "InfecSec" is useless. The CDC and other US government facilities rely on the Academy to an extent, and are implied to be using Kate and co. as "lab rats" for diseases they don't want to deal with themselves.
** Possibly justified by that last point. The reason no adults are present is because the kids are treated as expendable workers. Adults ''could'' be working on the projects, but that would be putting the life of someone valuable in danger. In the government's eyes, why waste important thinkers when clueless and expendable teenagers could be doing the same work for free?
* AgeAppropriateAngst: In between Kate worrying about her scientists slowly dying of a new virus, there's Taylor and Scarlett talking about friendships, relationships and parties.
* AlphaBitch: Penny, with Leila being her Beta. However, not entirely: she seems to have had a difficult home life.
* AmbiguousDisorder: Kate talks a lot about not fitting in and being a social outcaste, past the point of normal teenage angst. She is also obsessed with microorganisms in a way that suggests some form of autism.
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: Class 2 to Class 3a. Nearly all of humanity goes extinct; however, they were able to bounce back. Thousands of years later, they've created Eleutheria.]]
* ArcWords: Eureka, as well as Enlightenment and other similar words (''Lumen''osa, ''illuminate''arion, etc.)
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Plenty of literature nerds would love to be named Anna Karenina or Cosette Esmeralda or any of the other Davis girls' names.
** Averted with Kate: it's even made a point of how many people share her name in the first paragraph.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Joe and Sharon openly cheat on each other, drink, stay out late and emotionally abuse their kids.
* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Anna (and the rest of the cousins) is blonde, Kate's a brunette and Taylor is ginger.
* BoardingSchoolOfHorrors: The Academy is one, when you start to think about it. Kate sees it as a way to escape from her neglectful mother and stepfather and her insane family, but the place uses child labor. Kate's casual reaction to corpses and love for the deadliest diseases just show how indoctrinated she is. She, and all the other lab workers, are treated as (and actually call themselves) "expendables." And this isn't even considered ''abnormal.'' It's just how things work, and the kids don't even see it as bad. Kate enjoys every minute of it.
* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: The Davis triplets. Scarlett is beauty (though they're all described as pretty), Anna is brains and Scout is brawn.
* BrainyBrunette: Kate, and according to the images, also Belle, Rich, Natalie and Lillie Anne.
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: Many times, along with ArsonMurderAndJaywalking.
-->'''Scout:''' That's the ''point'' of Armageddon, Anna! You start riots, shoot zombies, eat beans!
* CheerfulChild: Cosette Davis.
* CoolCar: Kate's mom's Mercedes, her stepfather's truck, Penny's family's arsenal of sports cars...
* ConspiciousConsumption: Penny and her family go to great lengths to really hammer in the idea that they're rich, including excessive luxury cars, all-designer clothes every day, wearing diamond and gold jewels everywhere...
** Averted with Kate: we see in a bonus story that, even at 10, she was frustrated with her life, antisocial and disliked by her peers.
* ColorCodedPatrician: A downplayed example. Kate wears white quite often, usually in the form of lab coats, showing her status as the unchallenged smartest. Penny also wears white, showing hers as the unchallenged most popular RichBitch.
* CreepyChild: Kate is 16, but the other lab workers are in their early teens. They could fit this due to their carefree joking about how expendable they are, how quickly they expect to die, and their casual conversation over corpses.Especially when Kate threatens to stab the next person who calls her Kitty with an infected knife. Sure, she was joking, but does that really make it any better?
* DeadpanSnarker: Kate.
-->'''Scarlett:''' I thought the end of days wasn't supposed to happen until next week.
-->'''Kate:''' Right, let me just mark that down on my calendar. 'Sorry, Satan, I have a dentist appointment on Tuesday. We're going to have to move [the apocalypse] up.'
* EmbarrassingNickname:Played with. People call Kate "Kitty" in a mocking way, and Kitty would normally be a totally acceptable nickname for someone named Katherine. However, Kate associates it with her grade school bullies and her drunken stepfather, making it embarrassing to be called Kitty for her.
* FamilyEyeResemblence: The Davises have blue eyes.
* {{Fangirl}}: Taylor [=McLean=]. She writes fan fiction shipping together characters who have never met and has cried at Mystery Science Theatre 3000.
-->'''Lucille:''' ...I didn't know they ''had'' sad episodes.
-->'''Kate:''' You're right, and they don't.
* FashionDesigner: Scarlett.
* ForScience: Literally everything Kate does, all the time.
* FreeRangeChildren: Enlightenment starts with teenagers doing an autopsy on a (probably) smallpox-infected corpse. Where are their parents? In the case of the main characters, either dead, drunk or don't care.
* FlatWhat: [[spoiler: Kate when Agent Seymour tells her the world is ending, and they're not going to try and save the people with conventional methods- rather, they're going to save the smartest, richest and most powerful, and leave everyone else to die, in the hopes that the "best" will be able to build a better world.]]
* IdiotSavant: In a way, Kate; she's hopeless at anything related to socializing. When she has to make a speech, she just sounds like a moron. When she has to talk to people, she comes across as cold and uncaring. She's awful at sports, music, and getting along with people. The only thing she's good at is academics, and holy ''hell'' is she incredible at academics. She works full-time in a lab alongside adult members of the CDC, is entrusted with diseases from Ebola to smallpox, speaks many languages despite not even being raised in a bilingual family, and can calculate trigonometry problems in her head. But ask her to talk to a peer like a normal person, and she'll sound completely clueless and inept.
* ImprobablyHighIQ: Averted. Taylor and Kate are considered geniuses: Taylor has a realistic IQ of 118, which is above-average but still not outlandish. Kate is brilliant with an IQ of "150-something," which is very above average but not impossible- Einstein's was 160.
* InSeriesNickname: Katherine is Kate (and she gets pissed if you call her Kathy, Katie, or god-forbid ''Kitty''.) Jean-Louise goes by Scout, even though she's never read the book, and Timothy by Tim.
-->'''Kate:''' The next person to call me 'Kitty" gets stabbed with this infected scalpel.
** The sectors of ANEP, too. In all the tie-in stuff, they have nicknames: The Infectious Disease Sector is [=InfecSec=], which is a division of the Medical Sector ([=MedSec=]) which is a division of the Biology sector ([=BioSec=]) which is a division of the Science sector ([=SciSec=].)
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Her intelligence isn't the only cause of Kate's isolation, but it's part of it. Either way, she's a TeenGenius with no friends, a family that (for the most part) doesn't care about or worry about her, and a nonexistent social life. She, in her own words, can relate more to deadly bioweapons than actual people.
** Averted with Taylor. Like Kate, she's a science whiz, but she's peppy, bubbly (even in times of stress) and has a thriving friend group, consisting of many Internet friends, all of the lab workers, many others, and Lillie Anne.
* JustBeforeTheEnd: The book begins [[spoiler: a few days before the apocalypse does.]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: From Tigris, Enlightenment and all of the extra material: Katherine, Taylor, Anna, Scout, Scarlett, Cosette, Tim, Penny, Leila, Lillie Anne, Natalie, Rich, Joe, Sharon, Dana, Belle, Lucille, Rachel, Amanda, and Pi.
* LonelyRichKid: Kate is rich, and completely isolated. Her money isn't the root of it, though.
* NoSocialSkills: Kate is completely inept at talking to others, empathizing or relating to them. This is even more pronounced in ''Tigris,'' when she finds she can't even cry when the world is ending and her friends are being sent to what might be their doom. She tries to give a speech, and fails miserably- not because she's emotional, but she's ''just that bad at it.''
* NextSundayAD: Enlightenment takes place someplace around 2020.
* NewSpeak: The names of various parts of ANEP invoke this. "[=InfecSec=]" and "[=PolitiSec=]" come to mind.
* NotGoodWithPeople: Kate is great with viruses. She actually loves them. People, on the other hand...
* PromotedToParent: Pretty much all of the Davis-McLean kids to those younger than them. Kate is a driving force in keeping the family together, and prevents everyone else from getting into trouble with Joe. Anna is maternal towards everyone, but especially Cosette, and takes on the role of the responsible adult. Tim is a mentor for Kate and his sisters, and everyone raises Cosette collectively.
* ParentalNeglect: Sharon and Joe could not care less about what happens to their children.
* RichBitch: Penny, Leila, and to a lesser extent, Scarlett.
** Averted with the rest of the Davises, who clearly have money (Sharon is an heiress, Joe is a millionaire playboy, they live in a massive house big enough to have at least seven bedrooms) but don't rub it in people's faces. Maybe it's because the rest of their lives is so awful.
* RunningGag: Scarlett citing classic literature without having any idea what she's talking about.
** From ''Tigris'':
-->'''Scarlett''': I want to be like [[TheGreatGatsby Daisy Buchanan.]] Gorgeous, impossibly rich and sought-after-
-->'''Kate''': You beautiful little fool.
-->'''Scarlett''': What?
-->'''Kate''':... you never read the book, did you?
-->'''Scarlett (snorting)''': No.
* ScienceIsBad: Played with, but ultimately averted. The themes of both Enlightenment and Eureka focus on science's applications and what the people who use it choose to do with it, not the technology itself being inherently good or evil.
* ScienceHero: Everything Kate does is for science. ''Everything.''
* SelfFanservice: Canon Kate is an acne-ridden, socially awkward teenager with a lot of personal issues involving the ethics of her career and the dilapidated mess of a family she belongs to. Fanon Kate is TheAce: nerdy but pretty and much more well-adjusted.
* ShoutOut: Mostly to the books the girls are named after. Joe murmers "so stupid, the shit we do," when discussing Cosette.
* SyntheticPlague: [[ThePlague Tigris]] may or may not be one, but it's implied that it was at least partially modified by humans.
* TeenGenius: Kate, Taylor, and everyone else at ANEP.
* TenderTears: Taylor is extremely prone to this.
* TheDitz: Leila. The author says she's the only one truly happy with her life, because she's too stupid to be upset by it.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Sort of. Kate is brilliant but a social outcast, and everyone outside her family/lab team think she's weird and creepy. Taylor is attractive, smart but nowhere near Kate's level, and a social butterfly. However, they do get along quite well, encouraging each other- Taylor says Kate is lucky because she's a genius, and Kate says Taylor is lucky because she's so likable.
** The triplets to an extent, too. Anna is more intellectual and definitely the most mature, while Scarlett is a party girl and more promiscuous and outgoing. Meanwhile, Scout is lazy and doesn't try in school- or, really, much of anything outside video games. They're all described by Kate as beautiful, but Scout tries to hide it, Anna is more cute and Scarlett tries to be sexy (it comes off as cringeworthy to Kate.)
* ThemeNaming: It's a Karen Eliza Anne book. Naturally, it has this in ''spades.''
** The Davis siblings are as follows: Anna Karenina, Scarlett, Jean-Louise "Scout," Timothy Finn and Cosette Esmeralda. Any of those sound familiar?
** Light, and words relating to it, are used as symbols for when something is hiding something. The "Great Elders" are called Luminosa in the sequel, Kate and Dalia both seek "enlightenment" for their family/their people, there's a chapter called Illuminate and a side novella or novel rumored to be called Illuminatarion, etc.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Ultimately, what [[spoiler: the Tigiris virus]] is.
* TheIlluminati: With the frequency the words "luminous," "illuminating," "enlightened" and "brilliant" are used, combined with the New World Order mentality of the government, this comes to mind quite a lot.
* ThePlague: [[spoiler: The Tigris virus.]]
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: A rare inversion: Joe, Rich and Tim are the only males.
** You can see this in ''Eureka'' too: Ace, Atlas, TB, Cadé and Tee were the only men in the main cast. [[spoiler: Tee dies in chapter 7]], and TB is a villain, which leaves Ace, Atlas and Cadé. Possibly justified by this being a world where the genders are kept apart, generally.
* TheUnfavourite: Scout is Joe's unfavorite. He's threatened to send her to "troubled teen camps" or military school multiple times. He also dislikes Kate, but not as much as Scout.
* TitleDrop: You know some symbolism/connections/conspiracies are about to go down when the books make references to one another. Most notably, Raeilya calls Dalia "an enlightened one" in ''Eureka'', and Kate says she feels like the's "on the edge of something incredible."
* TokenMiniMoe: Cosette is notably the youngest.
* UndergroundCity: The apocalypse bunker is implied to be one.



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