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* TheParalyzer: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board the ''Liover'']].
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* StunGuns: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board the ''Liover'']].
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* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: The one or two planets they visit are pretty much just like earth. Mark worries about how he can breath the air, but Tirt brushes it off with, ‘Air’s air.’
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* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: The one or two planets they visit are pretty much just like earth.Earth. Mark worries about how he can breath the air, but Tirt brushes it off with, ‘Air’s air.’
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* StealthInSpace: Tirt has the [=''SkyGuardian''=] cloak itself while they drift into the Ondoog system.
* StunGuns: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board the Liover]].
* TalkLikeAPirate: The literally only pirate lines used in the entire story are variations on ‘Arr!’.
* StunGuns: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board the Liover]].
* TalkLikeAPirate: The literally only pirate lines used in the entire story are variations on ‘Arr!’.
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* StealthInSpace: Tirt has the [=''SkyGuardian''=] ''[=SkyGuardian=]'' cloak itself while they drift into the Ondoog system.
* StunGuns: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board theLiover]].
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* WretchedHive: Mark quotes the line ‘a wretched hive of scum and villainy at the Ongood system. Considering it’s home to a spaceyard that specifically caters to criminals, he probably has a point.
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* WretchedHive: Mark quotes qoutes the line ‘a wretched hive of scum and villainy villainy' at the Ongood system. Considering it’s home to a spaceyard that specifically caters to criminals, he probably has a point.
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* CharacterNameAndTheNounPhrase: Mark Delewen and the Space Pirates obviously fits.
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--> '''Officer Tirt:''' You have the right to remain silent, but not to throw things, scream, beat your hands against the floor or in any other way make a fuss. Anything you do after this point will be regarded with severity, especially any attempt to resist the arrest! Should you at any time feel you require a lawyer, we will provide one to sue you! You cannot do or say anything that hasn’t been authorized by your arresting offier!
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--> '''Officer Tirt:''' You have the right to remain silent, but not to throw things, scream, beat your hands against the floor or in any other way make a fuss. Anything you do after this point will be regarded with severity, especially any attempt to resist the arrest! Should you at any time feel you require a lawyer, we will provide one to sue you! You cannot do or say anything that hasn’t been authorized by your arresting offier!officer!
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* StealthInSpace: Tirt has the [=SkyGuardian=] [=''SkyGuardian''=] cloak itself while they drift into the Ondoog system.
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An online short story by [[http://www.amazon.com/Mark-Delewen-Space-Pirates-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DMLQWBK/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_17?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1396216686&sr=1-17 Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle]], [[ Mark Delewen and the Space Pirates]] starts off with Mark investigating the forest, where he had seen something fall the previous night. He wasn't prepared to encounter a Space Patrolman there, though, hot on the trail of a group of pirates! There is no ''way'' Mark is going to let an adventure like ''this'' slip away!
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An online short story by [[Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle]], [[http://www.amazon.com/Mark-Delewen-Space-Pirates-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DMLQWBK/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_17?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1396216686&sr=1-17 Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle]], [[ com/Mark-Delewen-Space-Pirates-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DMLQWBK/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_17?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1396216686&sr=1-17 Mark Delewen and the Space Pirates]] starts off with Mark investigating the forest, where he had seen something fall the previous night. He wasn't prepared to encounter a Space Patrolman there, though, hot on the trail of a group of pirates! There is no ''way'' Mark is going to let an adventure like ''this'' slip away!
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An online short story by [[http://www.amazon.com/Mark-Delewen-Space-Pirates-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DMLQWBK/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_17?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1396216686&sr=1-17 Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle]], [[ Mark Delewen and the Space Pirates]] starts off with Mark investigating the forest, where he had seen something fall the previous night. He wasn't prepared to encounter a Space Patrolman there, though, hot on the trail of a group of pirates! There is no ''way'' Mark is going to let an adventure like ''this'' slip away!
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!!Mark Delewn and the Space Pirates contains examples of:
* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Subverted for language, as translators have to be used. But played straight for numbers; apparently, all aliens use regular Arabic numerals.
* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: The one or two planets they visit are pretty much just like earth. Mark worries about how he can breath the air, but Tirt brushes it off with, ‘Air’s air.’
* BottomlessMagazines: Played with: The guns have a lot of power, enough for a hundred shots, and a reload of the same, but Mark and Tirt do in fact run through their first magazines and presumably a good bit of their back-ups. [[spoiler: And guess what happens to Officer Tirt ''just'' when he was about to shoot the pirate captain...]]
* HatDamage: Mark accidentally shoots off [[spoiler:the pirate captain’s very large hat.]]
* CharacterNameAndTheNounPhrase: Mark Delewen and the Space Pirates obviously fits.
* JumpedAtTheCall: Mark is not only perfectly happy to go on an adventure, he specifically gets Tirt to take him along, even though the space patrolman would’ve left him behind otherwise.
* {{Parody}}: Zig-zags being a straight ‘kid space adventure’ and a parody of one.
* RayGun: Mark and Tirt use a pair of guns that can stun or kill, although, of course, only the former is used.
* ReadingYourRights: At the end Officer Tirt pulls a hilarious version:
--> '''Officer Tirt:''' You have the right to remain silent, but not to throw things, scream, beat your hands against the floor or in any other way make a fuss. Anything you do after this point will be regarded with severity, especially any attempt to resist the arrest! Should you at any time feel you require a lawyer, we will provide one to sue you! You cannot do or say anything that hasn’t been authorized by your arresting offier!
* ShootOutTheLock: Lampshaded by Tirt after he does just that and the door opens.
--> '''Tirt:''' Didn’t expect ''that'' to work...
* SpacePirates: The ones mentioned in the title, usually referred to as the ''Liover'' pirates.
* SpacePolice: Officer Tirt and the organization he belongs to; the Space Patrol.
* SpaceSailing: Despite being in outer space, the pirates’ ships look just like old style pirate ships from the cannon and sails days, with some modifications. Officer Tirt and Mark even lampshade this:
--> '''Tirt:''' Of course it is! What else were you expecting? [''And yeah, he’s being serious.'']
--> '''Mark:''' This is ''ridiculous''...
* StealthInSpace: Tirt has the [=SkyGuardian=] cloak itself while they drift into the Ondoog system.
* StunGuns: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board the Liover]].
* TalkLikeAPirate: The literally only pirate lines used in the entire story are variations on ‘Arr!’.
* WallCrawl: The gravity belts Mark and Tirt use allow the user to walk on the ceiling and presumably on the walls as well. Mark uses the trick a few times, most notably to [[spoiler:throw himself around a corner to shoot at some guards.]]
* WretchedHive: Mark quotes the line ‘a wretched hive of scum and villainy at the Ongood system. Considering it’s home to a spaceyard that specifically caters to criminals, he probably has a point.
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!!Mark Delewn and the Space Pirates contains examples of:
* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Subverted for language, as translators have to be used. But played straight for numbers; apparently, all aliens use regular Arabic numerals.
* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: The one or two planets they visit are pretty much just like earth. Mark worries about how he can breath the air, but Tirt brushes it off with, ‘Air’s air.’
* BottomlessMagazines: Played with: The guns have a lot of power, enough for a hundred shots, and a reload of the same, but Mark and Tirt do in fact run through their first magazines and presumably a good bit of their back-ups. [[spoiler: And guess what happens to Officer Tirt ''just'' when he was about to shoot the pirate captain...]]
* HatDamage: Mark accidentally shoots off [[spoiler:the pirate captain’s very large hat.]]
* CharacterNameAndTheNounPhrase: Mark Delewen and the Space Pirates obviously fits.
* JumpedAtTheCall: Mark is not only perfectly happy to go on an adventure, he specifically gets Tirt to take him along, even though the space patrolman would’ve left him behind otherwise.
* {{Parody}}: Zig-zags being a straight ‘kid space adventure’ and a parody of one.
* RayGun: Mark and Tirt use a pair of guns that can stun or kill, although, of course, only the former is used.
* ReadingYourRights: At the end Officer Tirt pulls a hilarious version:
--> '''Officer Tirt:''' You have the right to remain silent, but not to throw things, scream, beat your hands against the floor or in any other way make a fuss. Anything you do after this point will be regarded with severity, especially any attempt to resist the arrest! Should you at any time feel you require a lawyer, we will provide one to sue you! You cannot do or say anything that hasn’t been authorized by your arresting offier!
* ShootOutTheLock: Lampshaded by Tirt after he does just that and the door opens.
--> '''Tirt:''' Didn’t expect ''that'' to work...
* SpacePirates: The ones mentioned in the title, usually referred to as the ''Liover'' pirates.
* SpacePolice: Officer Tirt and the organization he belongs to; the Space Patrol.
* SpaceSailing: Despite being in outer space, the pirates’ ships look just like old style pirate ships from the cannon and sails days, with some modifications. Officer Tirt and Mark even lampshade this:
--> '''Tirt:''' Of course it is! What else were you expecting? [''And yeah, he’s being serious.'']
--> '''Mark:''' This is ''ridiculous''...
* StealthInSpace: Tirt has the [=SkyGuardian=] cloak itself while they drift into the Ondoog system.
* StunGuns: Tirt orders Mark to set his gun to stun [[spoiler:when they board the Liover]].
* TalkLikeAPirate: The literally only pirate lines used in the entire story are variations on ‘Arr!’.
* WallCrawl: The gravity belts Mark and Tirt use allow the user to walk on the ceiling and presumably on the walls as well. Mark uses the trick a few times, most notably to [[spoiler:throw himself around a corner to shoot at some guards.]]
* WretchedHive: Mark quotes the line ‘a wretched hive of scum and villainy at the Ongood system. Considering it’s home to a spaceyard that specifically caters to criminals, he probably has a point.
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