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* OrphanedSeries: See the trivia page for an explanation of this.
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On May 24th, the sequel was officially discontinued.
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* OnlyChildSyndrome: Cemented here. Only Mike and Mara have siblings out of the main cast.
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* OnlyChildSyndrome: Cemented here. Only Mike and Mara have siblings out of the main cast.
cast, but the others don't seem to have issues that majorly stemmed from it. Eliza and Matthew are probably the best examples, seeing as how they're both a bit disconnected from those around them (albeit for different reasons).
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* AdultFear: Your child [[spoiler: hiding a SelfHarm habit and a possible eating disorder]].
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* ArcVillain:
** Jack Nakamura, Mara's ArchnemesisDad, with her BigBrotherBully Xavier as TheDragon.
** Mason West, a ManipulativeBastard [[spoiler: and one of Jordan's exes]].
** [[spoiler: A mysterious entity of possible ghostly origins who's more of an AntiVillain]].
** Jack Nakamura, Mara's ArchnemesisDad, with her BigBrotherBully Xavier as TheDragon.
** Mason West, a ManipulativeBastard [[spoiler: and one of Jordan's exes]].
** [[spoiler: A mysterious entity of possible ghostly origins who's more of an AntiVillain]].
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* AllTakeAndNoGive: Dianna's and Jack's marriage in a nutshell.
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* AllForNothing: After [[TookALevelInJerkass Evelyn]] has a brief argument with Asher, Matthew talks to him privately and apologizes on her behalf, then he asks Asher if he would've still [[LoveTriangle fought with him over her]] [[Literature/{{Intertwined}} last year]] had she been a jerk. Asher answers no and thus, Matt concludes that it was a case of this trope.
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* CrossReferencedTitle: This sequel has a chapter titled "The Aftermath", just like the first book. Both of them are about characters dealing with a major event in the story.
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* CrossReferencedTitle: CrossReferencedTitles: This sequel has a chapter titled "The Aftermath", just like the first book. Both of them are about characters dealing with a major event in the story.
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* NeatFreak: The story offhandedly mentions that whenever he invites his friends over and they make a mess in his room, Matthew always makes sure to clean it afterwards.
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** One in title form. Written notes served as a catalyst in the first book, and a chapter here is titled "Notes Again?".
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** "Where's Evelyn?"Evelyn?". Doubles as ProtagonistTitle.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Mike thinks this way of Zach and Austin.
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* ContinuityNod: Mike shares a story with Mara, the same one Matt tells to Evelyn in the first book about the NoodleIncident where Mike and Matt got dirt stuck in their shoes for a week.
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* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
** Mike shares a story with Mara, the same one Matt tells to Evelyn in the first book about the NoodleIncident where Mike and Matt got dirt stuck in their shoes for a week.
** Mike shares a story with Mara, the same one Matt tells to Evelyn in the first book about the NoodleIncident where Mike and Matt got dirt stuck in their shoes for a week.
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** The phrase "boys are stinky" was mentioned by Mara way back in the first book. It becomes a RunningGag here.
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* ArcHeroine: Eliza who becomes a the SixthRanger of the main cast.
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''Intertwined II: The Lost Spirits'' is the {{sequel}} to ''{{Literature/Intertwined}}'' written once again by [[Tropers/IAmHoussem17 iamhoussem17]] and Watermelon Caticorn. It follows the group a year after the events of the first book. Things from the past start popping up and new problems show up.
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''Intertwined II: The Lost Spirits'' is the {{sequel}} to ''{{Literature/Intertwined}}'' written once again by [[Tropers/IAmHoussem17 iamhoussem17]] Tropers/{{IAmHoussem17}} and Watermelon Caticorn. It follows the group a year after the events of the first book. Things from the past start popping up and new problems show up.
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An [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/295572340-intertwined-art-book art book]] was published as well, showing off character art done by co-creator Watermelon Caticorn and Your Pet Cactus (who authored ''Literature/WakingUpSomewhereElse'' and ''Literature/KittenCatastrophe''), though it was privated later due to a falling out.
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* WorldOfSnark: With Evelyn finally joining the snark train by becoming more of a {{Jerkass}}, this trait becomes common between the protagonists, save for [[NiceGirl Eliza]]. Lampshaded in this conversation.
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* WorldOfSnark: With Evelyn finally [[TookALevelInSmartass joining the snark train train]] by becoming more of a {{Jerkass}}, this trait becomes common between the protagonists, save for [[NiceGirl Eliza]]. Lampshaded in this conversation.
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[[caption-width-right:296: There was no space to put "Written By", unfortunately. [[note]] From left to right: [[ShrinkingViolet Mara]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]], [[NiceGuy Mike]], [[DeadpanSnarker Matt]], [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold Evelyn]], but what could that thing on the far left be...?[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:296: There was no space to put "Written By", unfortunately. [[note]] From left to right: [[ShrinkingViolet Mara]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]], [[NiceGuy Mike]], Michael]], [[DeadpanSnarker Matt]], Matthew]], [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold Evelyn]], but what could that thing on the far left be...?[[/note]]]]
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* DetectEvil: Jordan gains this ability as a ghost, hence why she becomes Eliza's bodyguard more or less.
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''[[TheStinger Boys are stinky]].''
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** Boys are stinky.
** Mike is not short. He's average height.
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''[[TheStinger Boys are stinky]].''
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* BarredFromTheAfterlife: [[spoiler: Jordan was revealed to have been this]].
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->''"No matter what, life goes on. Things keep getting tangled together, whether you want them to or not. You cannot change the past, and you can't see what the future holds. That's the lesson five friends are about to learn when something from their past comes back, and new problems start to pop up."''
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-->'''Mason:''' [[spoiler: And before I go, say hi to Jordi for me]].
** "Why Do You Do That To Yourself?" is a triple:
-->'''Mike:''' Mara, we finally found out what you have been doing.
-->'''[[spoiler: Jordan]]:''' [[spoiler: [Mason]'s, well...He's my ex]].
-->'''Daniel/Lizzie:''' It's about [[spoiler: Mara]]...
** "Why Do You Do That To Yourself?" is a triple:
-->'''Mike:''' Mara, we finally found out what you have been doing.
-->'''[[spoiler: Jordan]]:''' [[spoiler: [Mason]'s, well...He's my ex]].
-->'''Daniel/Lizzie:''' It's about [[spoiler: Mara]]...
