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* TooDumbToLive: Donal’s reaction when he discovers Anea wants to destroy her Contract. Not only is a person’s contract made from a nearly indestructible material, but attempting to destroy one is carries a death sentence everywere. Even more shocking is that Anea is a Select of Kultis, the height of Exotic genetic engineering and training – she should be more controlled and logical than that.
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* TooDumbToLive: Donal’s reaction when he discovers Anea wants to destroy her Contract. Not only is a person’s contract made from a nearly indestructible material, but attempting to destroy one is carries a death sentence everywere. Even more shocking is that Anea is a Select of Kultis, the height of Exotic genetic engineering and training – she should be more controlled and logical than that. Living with William seems to have unhinged her completely.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Eileen Olyn rejects her nihilistic uncle and her destructive elder brother in favor of identifying completely as a member of her husband's family even after that husband's death. Tam is heartbroken by her rejection and completely fails to understand it is not out of anger or hatred but simply to protect Eileen's new family from her old one.
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* TheHecateSisters: The three Amanda Morgans. The first was the Crone; the second the Maiden; and the third is Mother, Hal Mayne's DistaffCounterpart and eventual mate.
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* TheObstructiveLoveInterest: Anea Marlivana from ''Dorsai'' and Melissa Khan from ''Tactics of Mistake''
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* TheObstructiveLoveInterest: Anea Marlivana from ''Dorsai'' and Melissa Khan from ''Tactics of Mistake''Mistake''. Anea realizes that William must be stopped but is totally clueless about how to do it and won't listen to Donal who does have a plan. Melissa has an agenda of her own that Cletus' activities is derailing.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Anea keeps calling Donal a '''Mercenary''' in trying to insult him. However, he points out that the term doesn't mean what she thinks (A selfish, unscrupulous hireling). The term in-universe generally refers to any solider hired to fight, and as the Dorsai prove can just be as honorable as regular soldiers.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Anea keeps calling Donal a '''Mercenary''' in trying to insult him. However, he points out that the term doesn't mean what she thinks (A selfish, unscrupulous hireling). The term in-universe generally refers to any solider hired to fight, and as the Dorsai prove can just be as honorable as regular soldiers.soldiers.
* YouMakeMeSic: In arguably a real-life example, EVERY edition of ''Dorsai!'' was printed with the chapter heading "Part-Maran" (referring to Donal's ancestry) changed to "Part-Moron", finally provoking Dickson to wonder aloud if Bleys was hexing him from the future.
* YouMakeMeSic: In arguably a real-life example, EVERY edition of ''Dorsai!'' was printed with the chapter heading "Part-Maran" (referring to Donal's ancestry) changed to "Part-Moron", finally provoking Dickson to wonder aloud if Bleys was hexing him from the future.
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* RetCon: The original versions of ''Dorsai!'' and ''Necromancer'' listed Newton orbiting Arcturus. This was revised to have the planet located in the Alpha Centauri system.
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* RetCon: The original versions of ''Dorsai!'' and ''Necromancer'' listed Newton orbiting Arcturus. This was revised to have the planet located in the Alpha Centauri system. Also, Dunnin's World was at Vega.
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* TheChessmaster: William of Ceta, Donal Graeme, Tam Olyn
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* TheChessmaster: William of Ceta, Donal Graeme, Tam Olyn Olyn, Bleys
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* TropeCodifier: With ''Literature/StarshipTroopers'' and HBeamPiper's ''Uller Uprising'', ''Dorsai!'' helped shape the modern conception of MilitaryScienceFiction. ''Dorsai!'' in particular introduced cunning and hyper-aware military commanders, psychopathic aides, religious-focused fanatics, and space mercenaries. Donal traits can be seen in [[Literature/CoDominium Col. Falkenberg]] and [[Literature/TheThrawnTrilogy Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. Lee serves as the seed for the psychopathic [[Literature/HammersSlammers Joachim Steuben]]. The Friendlies tend to invoke the fanatical [[VideoGame/CommandAndConquerTiberianSeries Brotherhood of Nod]].
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* TropeCodifier: With ''Literature/StarshipTroopers'' and HBeamPiper's Creator/HBeamPiper's ''Uller Uprising'', ''Dorsai!'' helped shape the modern conception of MilitaryScienceFiction. ''Dorsai!'' in particular introduced cunning and hyper-aware military commanders, psychopathic aides, religious-focused fanatics, and space mercenaries. Donal traits can be seen in [[Literature/CoDominium Col. Falkenberg]] and [[Literature/TheThrawnTrilogy Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. Lee serves as the seed for the psychopathic [[Literature/HammersSlammers Joachim Steuben]]. The Friendlies tend to invoke the fanatical [[VideoGame/CommandAndConquerTiberianSeries Brotherhood of Nod]].
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* MilitaryScienceFiction: The stories focusing on the Dorsai tend to be this, however GordonRDickson was less concerned about the particulars of military conflict that he was advancing his larger MythArc.
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* MilitaryScienceFiction: The stories focusing on the Dorsai tend to be this, however GordonRDickson Creator/GordonRDickson was less concerned about the particulars of military conflict that he was advancing his larger MythArc.
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* HyperspeedAmbush: Donal Graeme stages a daring raid against an enemy planet in ''Dorsai!''. He uses multiple swift hyperspace jumps to simulate a huge armada attacking his enemy, even though it drives him and his crew to the edge of collapse, with each jump leaving them more and more in pain and disorientation.
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* HyperspeedAmbush: Donal Graeme stages a daring raid against an enemy planet in ''Dorsai!''. He uses multiple swift hyperspace jumps to simulate a huge armada attacking his enemy, even though it drives him and his crew to the edge of collapse, with each jump leaving them more and more in pain and disorientation.disorientation.
* InformedAttribute: In ''Dorsai!'' we are constantly being told how special Anea the Select of Kultis, a genetically designed superwoman, is but she acts like a standard dimwit Pulp heroine. Donal actually advises her to stop trying to do things and just sit there looking lovely and desirable.
* InformedAttribute: In ''Dorsai!'' we are constantly being told how special Anea the Select of Kultis, a genetically designed superwoman, is but she acts like a standard dimwit Pulp heroine. Donal actually advises her to stop trying to do things and just sit there looking lovely and desirable.
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* LoveIsAWeakness: William uses this to his advantage, using Anea as a pawn to get others to do what he wants.
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* LoveIsAWeakness: William uses this to his advantage, using Anea as a pawn bait to get others bind men like Hugh Killien and Ardel Montor to him and make them do what he wants.
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* LonersAreFreaks:
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* LonersAreFreaks: And those who isolate themselves from the rest of humanity are actively dangerous.
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** Bleys Ahrens suffers from an extreme and self imposed case of this trope. His antagonist Hal Mayne must actively learn to connect with ordinary people.
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* MetalPoorPlanet: Most of the Younger Worlds in the cycle, save for Coby and Cassida. It plays an impact on the economics in what they export.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Dow deCastries leads an invasion of the Dorsai in the climax of ''Tactics of Mistake''. He even occupies Grahamehouse with Melissa and her father. [[spoiler: It turns out to be the final mistake for deCastries. Donal has spent years forcing Dow into this position, so his Alliance-Coalition Troops would be easily defeated by the elderly, young, and sick of the Dorsai.]]
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Dow deCastries leads an invasion of the Dorsai in the climax of ''Tactics of Mistake''. He even occupies Grahamehouse with Melissa and her father. [[spoiler: It turns out to be the final mistake for deCastries. Donal Cletus has spent years forcing Dow into this position, so his Alliance-Coalition Troops would be easily defeated by the elderly, young, and sick of the Dorsai.]]
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: ''The Tactics of Mistake''. The title comes from the hero's tactical doctrine, which calls for a series of feints, that gradually draw the enemy into an untenable position, at which point he attacks, and demolishes them. In fact, his later decedents will use this to great effect.
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: ''The Tactics of Mistake''. The title comes from the hero's tactical doctrine, which calls for a series of feints, that gradually draw the enemy into an untenable position, at which point he attacks, and demolishes them. In fact, his later decedents descendents will use this to great effect.
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* ''Amanda Morgan'': Set in the later half of ''Tactics of Mistake'', it tells of the defense of the Dorsai from the titular character.
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* ''Amanda Morgan'': Set in the later half of ''Tactics of Mistake'', it tells of the defense of the Dorsai from the perspective of the titular character.
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* ''Lost Dorsai'': Set during the time of ''Dorsai!'', it tells of a Dorsai who has turned to pacifism.
* "Warrior": Tells of Ian Graeme (Uncle of Donal), as he confronts a gangster over an officer's death.
* "Warrior": Tells of Ian Graeme (Uncle of Donal), as he confronts a gangster over an officer's death.
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* ''Lost Dorsai'': Set during the time of ''Dorsai!'', it tells Tells of a Dorsai who has turned to pacifism.pacifism caught in the middle of a revolt.
* "Warrior":Tells of Ian Graeme (Uncle of Donal), as he confronts a gangster over an officer's death.
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Morgan'': Set in the later half of ''Tactics of Mistake'', it tells of the defense of the Dorsai from the titular character.
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"Brothers": As a result of the events of ''Soldier, Ask Not'', Ian Graeme must find who murdered his twin brother.
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!!Stories of the Cycle
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# ''Dorsai!'' (1959)
# ''Necromancer'' (1962)
# ''Soldier, Ask Not'' (1967)
# ''Tactics of Mistake'' (1971)
# ''Necromancer'' (1962)
# ''Soldier, Ask Not'' (1967)
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# ''Dorsai!'' (1959)
(1959): The career of Donal Graeme, a Dorsai Mercenary who matches wits with the ambitious Prince William of Ceta.
# ''Necromancer''(1962)
(1962): Set in the late 21st Century, it follows Paul Formaine as he deals with the mysterious Chantry Guild and its war against a supercomputer.
# ''Soldier, Ask Not''(1967)
(1967): Tam Olyn's quest for revenge against the puritanical Friendlies. Set around the same time as Dorsai!
# ''Tactics of Mistake''(1971)(1971): Cletus Grahame, ancestor of Donal, begins to revolutionize warfare on the newly settled Younger Worlds.
# ''Necromancer''
# ''Soldier, Ask Not''
# ''Tactics of Mistake''
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# ''Childe'' - unfinished
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* "Lost Dorsai" (novella) and "Warrior" (short story), published together in ''Lost Dorsai'' (1981)
* "Amanda Morgan" (novella) and "Brothers" (short story), published together in ''The Spirit of Dorsai'' (1979)
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* "Lost Dorsai" (novella) and "Warrior" (short story), published together in ''Lost Dorsai'' (1981)
* "Amanda Morgan" (novella) and "Brothers" (short story), published together in ''The Spirit of Dorsai'' (1979)
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# ''Childe'' - unfinished
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[[folder: Short''Childe'': Dickson's unfinished work, probably meant to be the climax of the Cycle.
!!Short Stories /Novellas]]
* "Lost Dorsai" (novella) and "Warrior" (short story),Novellas
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*"Amanda Morgan" (novella) and "Brothers" (short story), published ''Lost Dorsai'': Set during the time of ''Dorsai!'', it tells of a Dorsai who has turned to pacifism.
* "Warrior": Tells of Ian Graeme (Uncle of Donal), as he confronts a gangster over an officer's death.
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* AllThereInTheManual: ''The New Dorsai Companion'' by David W. Wixon. Based on details from Dickson, it provides information on the universe of the Cycle not provided in the novels.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: Tam and William play this straight - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wants to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
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* TheAlliance: The Western Alliance and Eastern Coalition.
* AllThereInTheManual: ''The New Dorsai Companion'' by David W. Wixon. Based on details from Dickson, it provides information on the universe of the Cycle not provided in the novels.
* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Dow deCastries leads an invasion of the Dorsai in the climax of ''Tactics of Mistake''. He even occupies Grahamehouse with Melissa and her father. [[spoiler: It turns out to be the final mistake for deCastries. Donal has spent years forcing Dow into this position, so his Alliance-Coalition Troops would be easily defeated by the elderly, young, and sick of the Dorsai.]]
* AmbitionIsEvil:Tam Tam, William, and William deCastries play this straight - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain.gain. deCastries is power hungry, and wants all the worlds under him. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wants to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, the previous examples, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
* AllThereInTheManual: ''The New Dorsai Companion'' by David W. Wixon. Based on details from Dickson, it provides information on the universe of the Cycle not provided in the novels.
* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Dow deCastries leads an invasion of the Dorsai in the climax of ''Tactics of Mistake''. He even occupies Grahamehouse with Melissa and her father. [[spoiler: It turns out to be the final mistake for deCastries. Donal has spent years forcing Dow into this position, so his Alliance-Coalition Troops would be easily defeated by the elderly, young, and sick of the Dorsai.]]
* AmbitionIsEvil:
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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Ships are sometimes lost through phase shift travel
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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Ships are sometimes lost through phase shift travel travel.
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* ItsRainingMen: Military troops drop from their ships onto a planet.
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* ItsRainingMen: ItsRainingMen:
** In ''Dorsai!'', Military troops drop from their ships onto aplanet. planet.
** In ''Tactics of Mistake'', the Dorsai mercenaries are trained as jump troops - men using jet belts to deploy from aircraft into a landing zone.
** In ''Dorsai!'', Military troops drop from their ships onto a
** In ''Tactics of Mistake'', the Dorsai mercenaries are trained as jump troops - men using jet belts to deploy from aircraft into a landing zone.
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* NietzscheWannabe: Mathias, Tam's Uncle, who raised him and his sister Eileen.
** AbusiveParent: Mathias isn't physically violent nor neglectful, providing his home with his niece and nephew. The problem is his nihilistic attitude - it discourages Tam and Eileen severely.
** AbusiveParent: Mathias isn't physically violent nor neglectful, providing his home with his niece and nephew. The problem is his nihilistic attitude - it discourages Tam and Eileen severely.
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* SpaceNavy: The major powers have their own permanent space navies.
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* SpaceNavy: The major powers have their own permanent space navies.navies by the time of ''Dorsai!''.
* StrawNihilist: Mathias, Tam's Uncle, who raised him and his sister Eileen.
** AbusiveParent: Mathias isn't physically violent nor neglectful, providing his home with his niece and nephew. The problem is his nihilistic attitude - it discourages Tam and Eileen severely.
** AbusiveParent: Mathias isn't physically violent nor neglectful, providing his home with his niece and nephew. The problem is his nihilistic attitude - it discourages Tam and Eileen severely.
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* VillainProtagonist: Tam Olyn in ''Soldier, Ask Not''. He doesn't care who gets used or hurt in his manipulations. Worse, his plots may negatively affect the future of mankind.
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* VillainProtagonist: Tam Olyn in ''Soldier, Ask Not''. He doesn't care who gets used or hurt in his manipulations. Worse, his plots may could negatively affect the future of mankind.
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* TropeCodifier: With ''Literature/StarshipTroopers'' and HBeamPiper's ''Uller Uprising'', ''Dorsai!'' helped shape the modern conception of MilitaryScienceFiction. ''Dorsai!'' in particular introduced cunning and hyper-aware military commanders, psychopathic aides, religious-focused fanatics, and space mercenaries. Donal traits can be seen in [[CoDominium Col. Falkenberg]] and [[TheThrawnTrilogy Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. Lee serves as the seed for the psychopathic [[HammersSlammers Joachim Steuben]]. The Friendlies tend to invoke the fanatical [[CommandAndConquerTiberium Brotherhood of Nod]].
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* TropeCodifier: With ''Literature/StarshipTroopers'' and HBeamPiper's ''Uller Uprising'', ''Dorsai!'' helped shape the modern conception of MilitaryScienceFiction. ''Dorsai!'' in particular introduced cunning and hyper-aware military commanders, psychopathic aides, religious-focused fanatics, and space mercenaries. Donal traits can be seen in [[CoDominium [[Literature/CoDominium Col. Falkenberg]] and [[TheThrawnTrilogy [[Literature/TheThrawnTrilogy Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. Lee serves as the seed for the psychopathic [[HammersSlammers [[Literature/HammersSlammers Joachim Steuben]]. The Friendlies tend to invoke the fanatical [[CommandAndConquerTiberium [[VideoGame/CommandAndConquerTiberianSeries Brotherhood of Nod]].
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* GambitPileup: The real politics of the Fourteen Worlds are handled by individual power brokers, each one dealing with each other, making plans with one person, and planning another thing with someone else behind their back. Donal takes advantage of this [[spoiler:during the Venus peace conference. ]]
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** Dicussed between Donal and William. After ruining one of his plans, the Prince demands what protects the Dorsai from being in his presence. Donal replies “public opinion.” William then notes that “I know that type of armor from personal experience.”
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** Dicussed Discussed between Donal and William. After ruining one of his plans, the Prince demands what protects the Dorsai from while being in his presence. Donal replies “public "public opinion.” " William then notes that “I "I know that type of armor from personal experience.” "
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** Conversed between Donal and William. After ruining one of his plans, the Prince demands what protects the Dorsai from being in his presence. Donal replies “public opinion.” William then notes that “I know that type of armor from personal experience.”
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** Conversed Dicussed between Donal and William. After ruining one of his plans, the Prince demands what protects the Dorsai from being in his presence. Donal replies “public opinion.” William then notes that “I know that type of armor from personal experience.”
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Anea keeps calling Donal a '''Mercenary''' in trying to insult him. However, he points out that the term doesn't mean what she thinks (A selfish, unscrupulous hireling). The term in-universe generally refers to any solider hired to fight, and as the Dorsai prove can just be as honorable.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Anea keeps calling Donal a '''Mercenary''' in trying to insult him. However, he points out that the term doesn't mean what she thinks (A selfish, unscrupulous hireling). The term in-universe generally refers to any solider hired to fight, and as the Dorsai prove can just be as honorable.honorable as regular soldiers.
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** Conversed between Donal and William. After ruining one of his plans, the Prince demands what protects the Dorsai from being in his presence. Donal replies “public opinion.” William then notes that “I know that type of armor from personal experience.”
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* HonorBeforeReason: In "Warrior", Ian looks like this - risking his life for duty.
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* HonorBeforeReason: In "Warrior", Ian looks like this - risking risks his life for his duty.
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* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: Though energy weapons do exist, many directed energy weapons and chemical weapons can be stopped by long range jamming. In the field, the best weapon is Spring Rifle - [[FlechetteStorm a needle-gun like weapon]] that is designed to resist such countermeasures.
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* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: Though energy weapons do exist, many directed energy weapons and chemical chemical-propelled weapons can be stopped by long range jamming. In the field, the best weapon is Spring Rifle - [[FlechetteStorm a needle-gun like weapon]] that is designed to resist such countermeasures.
* LoveIsAWeakness: William uses this to his advantage, using Anea as a pawn to get others to do what he wants.
* LoveMakesYouDumb: Hugh Killien [[spoiler: leaves his command to spend time with Anea alone. As a result, most of his men die in an attack, and Donal has him executed.]]
* LoveMakesYouDumb: Hugh Killien [[spoiler: leaves his command to spend time with Anea alone. As a result, most of his men die in an attack, and Donal has him executed.]]
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Minor example when Donal stages a raid on Newton [[spoiler: disguising it as a full attack]], that it gets that planet off from blackmailing the Sirius system.
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Minor example when Donal stages a raid on Newton [[spoiler: disguising it as a full attack]], that attack]]. The shock is so great, it gets that planet Newton off from blackmailing the Sirius system.
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* {{Workaholic}}: William's major trait - when he's not at a party to help influence interstellar affairs, he's alone at his desk hard at work.
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* {{Workaholic}}: William's major trait - when he's not at a party to help influence interstellar affairs, he's alone at his desk hard at work.
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** TheEeyore: Poor Montor is so depressed in his lot in life.
* AmbitionIsEvil: Tam and William play this straight - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wishes to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
* AmbitionIsEvil: Tam and William play this straight - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wishes to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
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** TheEeyore: Poor Montor is so depressed in his lot in life.
such a depressing fellow.
* AmbitionIsEvil: Tam and William play this straight- - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wishes wants to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
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* CasualInterstellarTravel: Thanks to the Phase Shift Drive, ships can go through a series of jumps to get to different star systems. However, trade between the stars tends to expensive, but people can take a spahceship as if traveling on a boat or an aircraft.
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* CasualInterstellarTravel: Thanks to the Phase Shift Drive, ships can go through a series of jumps to get to different star systems. However, trade between the stars tends to be expensive, but people can take a spahceship spaceship as if traveling on a boat or an aircraft.
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* TheCoup: ''Dorsai'' and ''Soldier Ask Not'' has these as part of background events, usually part of some larger plan.
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* PeaceConference: One of the key events in ''Dorsai!'', were the planetary leaders attempt to discuss a resolution to the Contract issue.
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* VeteranInstructor: During Donal's time as Protector of Procyon and Commander In Chief, Ian helps trains his ground forces to becoming excellent troopers.
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* VeteranInstructor: During Donal's time as Protector of Procyon and Commander In Chief, later as Commander-In-Chief, Ian helps trains his nephews' ground forces to becoming become excellent troopers. troopers.
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** TheEeyore: Poor Montor is so depressed in his lot in life.
* AmbitionIsEvil: Tam and William play this straight - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wishes to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
* AmbitionIsEvil: Tam and William play this straight - Tam wishes to be free from the contract system, and uses his powers for selfish gain. William seems to be motivated purely by his ambitions. Inverted with Donal, who wishes to become "the greatest general that ever was!" [[SelfMadeMan and proceeds to do just that]]. But unlike Tam or William, Donal isn't self serving and is does plenty of good along the way.
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* CasualInterstellarTravel: Thanks to the Phase Shift Drive, ships can go through a series of jumps to get to different star systems. However, trade between the stars tends to expensive, but people can take a spahceship as if traveling on a boat or an aircraft.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Prince William may seem like a polite old businessman. But under that, he's very cunning and ruthless.
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* HonorBeforeReason: In "Warrior", Ian looks like this - risking his life for duty.
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* ManipulativeBastard:
** William displays this, using people's feelings as part of his schemes.
** Once he discovers his potential, Tam immediately uses his powers to manipulate the emotions to his gain - even his own sister.
** William displays this, using people's feelings as part of his schemes.
** Once he discovers his potential, Tam immediately uses his powers to manipulate the emotions to his gain - even his own sister.
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* {{Workaholic}}: William's major trait - when he's not at a party to help influence interstellar affairs, he's alone at his desk hard at work.
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* BadassAbnormal: Donal Graeme, arguably. He can travel through time by shear force of will, for example.
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* TheAlcoholic: Montor ArDell, a brilliant Newtonian who got stuck working for William of Ceta. He despises the Prince so much that he drinks... a lot.
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* TheAlcoholic: Montor ArDell, [=ArDell=], a brilliant Newtonian who got stuck working for William of Ceta. He despises the Prince so much that he drinks... a lot.
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* TheAlcoholic: Montor ArDell, a brilliant Newtonian who got stuck working for William of Ceta. He despises the Prince so much that he drinks... a lot.
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* TooDumbToLive: Donal’s reaction when he discovers Anea wants to destroy her Contract. Not only is a person’s contract made from a nearly indestructible material, but attempting to destroy one is carries a death sentence everywere. Even more shocking is that Anea is a Select of Kultis, the height of Exotic genetic engineering and training – she should be more controlled and logical than that.