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* FiveManBand: After Feyf joins the party, Sal's group rounds out to this:
** TheLeader: Sal, by virtue of being the primary factor tying the group together and inciting the journey to begin with.
** TheLancer: Feyf, the most experienced and bold of the group.
** TheSmartGuy: Ransa, the most intelligent and practical of the group.
** TheBigGuy: Quine, the most active and physical of the group.
** TheChick: Fitch, the most passive and [[NonActionGuy non-action]] of the group.
** SixthRanger: Soot, the odd fellow who tags along the journey for reasons known only to him, then later Ramus, the [[RailEnthusiast Anorak]] Soot pays to look after them for a while.
** TheLeader: Sal, by virtue of being the primary factor tying the group together and inciting the journey to begin with.
** TheLancer: Feyf, the most experienced and bold of the group.
** TheSmartGuy: Ransa, the most intelligent and practical of the group.
** TheBigGuy: Quine, the most active and physical of the group.
** TheChick: Fitch, the most passive and [[NonActionGuy non-action]] of the group.
** SixthRanger: Soot, the odd fellow who tags along the journey for reasons known only to him, then later Ramus, the [[RailEnthusiast Anorak]] Soot pays to look after them for a while.
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** Downplayed with Fitch. She's less of a "jerk" and more just stressed out of her mind throughout the journey, which comes through as constant snark and sometimes lashing out at her friends.
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** Downplayed with Fitch. She's less of a "jerk" and more just stressed out of her mind throughout the journey, which comes through as constant snark and sometimes lashing out at her friends. When she's in a more level mood, she's as much of a sweetheart as Sal is--the worst that can be consistently said about her is [[BrutalHonesty she's blunt]].
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* MortalityPhobia: [[spoiler:One of Mr. Hive's chief motivational and largely the reason why he [[UsedToBeASweetKid degenerated from a naive xeno like Sal into a self-serving, hypocritical monster]]. Mr. Hive is psychotically obsessed with staving off his own death at the hands of the rot-flies, to the point he's in conscious denial of his own impending demise even a series his guts hang out of his suit and Fitch matter-of-factly tells him YouAreAlreadyDead. All the lives Mr. Hive has wasted is ultimately for the purpose of fulfilling his desire to not die in the KE.]]
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* MortalityPhobia: [[spoiler:One of Mr. Hive's chief motivational motives and largely the reason why he [[UsedToBeASweetKid degenerated from a naive xeno like Sal into a self-serving, hypocritical monster]]. Mr. Hive is psychotically obsessed with staving off his own death at the hands of the rot-flies, to the point he's in conscious denial of his own impending demise even a series as his guts hang out of his suit and Fitch matter-of-factly tells him YouAreAlreadyDead. All the lives Mr. Hive has wasted is ultimately for the purpose of fulfilling his desire to not die in the KE.]]
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* MortalityPhobia: [[spoiler:One of Mr. Hive's chief motivational and largely the reason why he [[UsedToBeASweetKid degenerated from a naive xeno like Sal into a self-serving, hypocritical monster. Mr. Hive is psychotically obsessed with staving off his own death at the hands of the rot-flies, to the point he's in conscious denial of his own impending demise even a series his guts hang out of his suit and Fitch matter-of-factly tells him YouAreAlreadyDead. All the lives Mr. Hive has wasted is ultimately for the purpose of saving his own.]]
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* MortalityPhobia: [[spoiler:One of Mr. Hive's chief motivational and largely the reason why he [[UsedToBeASweetKid degenerated from a naive xeno like Sal into a self-serving, hypocritical monster.monster]]. Mr. Hive is psychotically obsessed with staving off his own death at the hands of the rot-flies, to the point he's in conscious denial of his own impending demise even a series his guts hang out of his suit and Fitch matter-of-factly tells him YouAreAlreadyDead. All the lives Mr. Hive has wasted is ultimately for the purpose of saving fulfilling his own.desire to not die in the KE.]]
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* MortalityPhobia: [[spoiler:One of Mr. Hive's chief motivational and largely the reason why he [[UsedToBeASweetKid degenerated from a naive xeno like Sal into a self-serving, hypocritical monster. Mr. Hive is psychotically obsessed with staving off his own death at the hands of the rot-flies, to the point he's in conscious denial of his own impending demise even a series his guts hang out of his suit and Fitch matter-of-factly tells him YouAreAlreadyDead. All the lives Mr. Hive has wasted is ultimately for the purpose of saving his own.]]
