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'''Creator:''' American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple but also founded other companies like [=NeXT=] and Creator/{{Pixar}}.
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'''Creator:''' American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple Creator/{{Apple}} but also founded other companies like [=NeXT=] and Creator/{{Pixar}}.
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'''Creator:''' American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple but also founded other companies like [=NeXT=] and Pixar.
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'''Film:''' The biopic on Creator/SteveJobs, albeit focusing on what was going on before three of the biggest events in his life.
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'''Film:''' The biopic on Creator/SteveJobs, the titular Apple co-founder, albeit focusing on what was going on before three of the biggest events in his life.
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'''Creator:''' American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple but also founded other companies like {{NeXT}} [=NeXT=] and Pixar.
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'''Creator:''' American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple but also founded other companies like NeXT and Pixar.
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'''Creator:''' American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple but also founded other companies like NeXT {{NeXT}} and Pixar.
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'''Creator:''' One of the co-founders of Apple, one of the biggest technological companies in the world
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'''Creator:''' One American entrepreneur most famous for being one of the co-founders of Apple, one of the biggest technological Apple but also founded other companies in the world
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'''Creator:''' One of the co-founders of Apple, one of the biggest technological companies in the world
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'''Film:''' The biopic on Creator/SteveJobs, albeit focusing on what was going on before three of the biggest events in his life.
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'''Film:''' The biopic on Creator/SteveJobs, albeit focusing on what was going on before three of the biggest events in his life.
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-->[-Visit his creator page [[Creator/SteveJobs HERE]] or the unabridged version of the film [[Film/SteveJobs HERE]].-]
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The eccentric, abrasive, innovative and hugely successful co-founder and CEO of Creator/{{Apple}}.
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The eccentric, abrasive, innovative and hugely successful co-founder and CEO of Creator/{{Apple}}.
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The eccentric, abrasive, innovative and hugely successful co-founder and CEO of Apple.Creator/{{Apple}}.
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-->[-Visit the Unabridged Version, of the person [[Creator/SteveJobs HERE]] and the movie [[Film/SteveJobs HERE]].-]
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