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A sweetheart suffers a terrible experience.
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[[TheCutie A sweetheart sweetheart]] suffers a terrible experience.
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I don't think this has to be traumatic. Also, I tried making this more laconic, though I'm still working on that.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character suffers from a traumatic experience.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character sweetheart suffers from a traumatic terrible experience.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character suffers a traumatic experience.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character suffers from a traumatic experience.
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A sweetheart gets put through hell, leaving their innocence shattered.
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A sweetheart gets put through hell, leaving their innocence shattered.sweet, lovable and innocent character suffers a traumatic experience.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character is put through hell, leaving their innocence shattered.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character is sweetheart gets put through hell, leaving their innocence shattered.
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A sweet, lovable character is put through hell.
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A sweet, lovable and innocent character is put through hell.hell, leaving their innocence shattered.
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Grammar.
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-->[-Oh, God, why did the unabridged version went [[BreakTheCutie HERE]]!?-]
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-->[-Oh, God, why did the unabridged version went go [[BreakTheCutie HERE]]!?-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[BreakTheCutie HERE]]-]
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