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--> '''Artie:''' I'll help you get him Jim.
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--> '''Artie:''' I'll help you get him him, Jim.
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* Minor moment- Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death, but later subverted as he got over it, implying that he didn't care for her loss.
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* Minor moment- moment; Loveless did does seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was is sent falling to her death, but later subverted as he got gets over it, implying that he didn't care for much about her loss.
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* Also a TearJerker, in an AlasPoorVillain way. General "Bloodbath" [=McGrath=]'s heartbroken reaction to Loveless [[spoiler: murdering his men]] while testing out his newest weapon. Even referring to his men as "[[AFatherToHisMen his' boys]]".
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* Also a TearJerker, in an AlasPoorVillain way. General "Bloodbath" [=McGrath=]'s heartbroken reaction to Loveless [[spoiler: murdering his men]] while testing out his newest weapon. Even referring to his men as "[[AFatherToHisMen his' boys]]". Even Jim himself shows nothing but mere pity for the dying [=McGrath=] after learning the truth.
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* Minor moment- Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death.
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* Minor moment- Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death.death, but later subverted as he got over it, implying that he didn't care for her loss.
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* Also a TearJerker, in an AlasPoorVillain way. General "Bloodbath" McGrath's heartbroken reaction to Loveless [[spoiler: murdering his men]] while testing out his newest weapon. Even referring to his men as "[[AFatherToHisMen his' boys]]".
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* Also a TearJerker, in an AlasPoorVillain way. General "Bloodbath" McGrath's [=McGrath=]'s heartbroken reaction to Loveless [[spoiler: murdering his men]] while testing out his newest weapon. Even referring to his men as "[[AFatherToHisMen his' boys]]".
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* Minor moment, Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death.
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* Minor moment, moment- Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death.
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* Also a TearJerker, in an AlasPoorVillain way. General "Bloodbath" McGrath's heartbroken reaction to Loveless [[spoiler: murdering his men]] while testing out his newest weapon. Even referring to his men as "[[AFatherToHisMen his' boys]]".
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--> '''Artie:''' I'll help you get him Jim.
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--> '''Artie:''' I'll help you get him Jim.Jim.
* Minor moment, Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death.
* Minor moment, Loveless did seem genuinely horrified when Munitia was sent falling to her death.
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* The Desert scene when Jim and Artie talk about Jim's past [[spoiler: specifically regarding his parent's death at at the hands of Loveless New Liberty.]] Artie had this to say in response.
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* The Desert scene when Jim and Artie talk about Jim's past [[spoiler: specifically regarding his parent's death at at the hands of Loveless at New Liberty.]] Artie had this to say in response.
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* The Desert scene when Jim and Artie talk about Jim's past [[spoiler: specifically regarding his parent's death at at the hands of Loveless New Liberty.]] Artie had this to say in response.
--> '''Artie:''' I'll help you get him Jim.
--> '''Artie:''' I'll help you get him Jim.
