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Adding examples from the new Arrow chapter.
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* During the second rebellion, every single Settler turns on the Capitol, and it's made clear that they've never forgotten what the Capitol did to Danny and Elena's children.
* After the final battle of District 10, there's a simple yet stirring comment that the Settlers and Anasazi of District 10 go home "Together." It's also notable that the title of the chapter is "District 10 Unites."
* After the final battle of District 10, there's a simple yet stirring comment that the Settlers and Anasazi of District 10 go home "Together." It's also notable that the title of the chapter is "District 10 Unites."
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Two examples from the District 9 chapter, approved by the Get Help with English thread.
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* Evelyn's niece recalling how her aunt bought her an apartment after her parents died and personally came by with groceries every week.
* One of District 9's schoolteachers talks about how, despite all the sacrifice endured, his new students haven't lost siblings to the Games. They don't fear their next birthdays. And they don't use tesserae to learn multiplication tables anymore.
* One of District 9's schoolteachers talks about how, despite all the sacrifice endured, his new students haven't lost siblings to the Games. They don't fear their next birthdays. And they don't use tesserae to learn multiplication tables anymore.
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* The determination Martius feels about saving Vera through sponsorship [[IgnoredEpiphany (even if it turns out to be a just a passing interest in the end)]] and the support he eventually gets from people like his friend and stepmother.
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* The determination Martius feels about saving Vera through sponsorship [[IgnoredEpiphany (even if it turns out to be a just a passing interest in the end)]] and the support he eventually gets from people like his best friend and stepmother.
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* The reveal that the original District 1 Rebellion (Cashmere's brothers, Jade, Whisper, Shilling, etc.) intended to spare the lives of Song and Gleam before the GambitPileUp with the other rebels.
* The sense of gratitude Lyme feels at seeing Abram's shadow next to hers as she goes to try and find survivors of Redfern, having told him it was ok to go back to the trains.
* The sense of gratitude Lyme feels at seeing Abram's shadow next to hers as she goes to try and find survivors of Redfern, having told him it was ok to go back to the trains.
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* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the Victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11 (where she's awestruck by the fruit orchids), 10 (where she gets to ride a horse), 7 (where they comfort her when she's vulnerable out of gratitude for avenging their tributes) and 4 (where she has fun on the beach and is befriended by Mags and her family).
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* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the Victors (and in some cases the people) during the better stops in her victory tour.
** In Districts 11(where she's awestruck by the fruit orchids), orchids that Wren shows her, after having initially been cowed by the District.
** In District 10(where she gets to ride a horse), horse).
** IN District 7(where they both the victors and the District itself show her comfort and encouragement her when she's vulnerable out of gratitude for avenging their tributes) tributes. Evelyn notes they've given her a gift "she can never quite name and will never be able to repay."
** The visit to District 6 gets a nice moment, not because of anything abotu the District or its people, but because Evelyn's normally bossy escort shows a softer side when sitting down and hugging her after seeing how scared she is of the place.
** In District 4(where she has fun on the beach and is befriended by Mags and her family).family while being assured by everyone that they don't hold a grudge against her over the Games. Evelyn considers it the best night of her life.
** In Districts 11
** In District 10
** IN District 7
** The visit to District 6 gets a nice moment, not because of anything abotu the District or its people, but because Evelyn's normally bossy escort shows a softer side when sitting down and hugging her after seeing how scared she is of the place.
** In District 4
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* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the Victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11, 10, 7 and 4.
* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family. She buys a new roof for the babysitter of her younger brother, regular young buys (and over pays for) pies from a woman who gave her mother a shoulder to cry on while Evelyn was in the arena and buys new clothes and shoes for the daughter of a man whipped for helping her trouble-making older brother escape from the peacekeepers.
* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family. She buys a new roof for the babysitter of her younger brother, regular young buys (and over pays for) pies from a woman who gave her mother a shoulder to cry on while Evelyn was in the arena and buys new clothes and shoes for the daughter of a man whipped for helping her trouble-making older brother escape from the peacekeepers.
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* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the Victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11, 10, 11 (where she's awestruck by the fruit orchids), 10 (where she gets to ride a horse), 7 (where they comfort her when she's vulnerable out of gratitude for avenging their tributes) and 4.
4 (where she has fun on the beach and is befriended by Mags and her family).
* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family.
** She buys a new roof for the babysitter of her youngerbrother, regular young brother.
** She regularly buys (and over pays for) pies from awoman young mother who gave her Evelyn's mother a shoulder to cry on while Evelyn was in the arena and arena.
** She buys new clothes and shoes for the daughter of a man whipped for helping her trouble-making older brother escape from the peacekeepers.
* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family.
** She buys a new roof for the babysitter of her younger
** She regularly buys (and over pays for) pies from a
** She buys new clothes and shoes for the daughter of a man whipped for helping her trouble-making older brother escape from the peacekeepers.
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* Bovina being brought out of her depression and feeling like a pariah by her mentor showing her the effect that the food parcels she won for the district are having.
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* Bovina being brought out of her depression and feeling like a pariah by her mentor showing her the effect that the food parcels she won for the district are having.having (a woman whose sick grandson got better from parcel milk, a girl taking tesserae for her family of eleven who now doesn't have to take more before her last reaping etc.).
* The OddFriendship between Raoul and two peacekeepers, and one of those peacekeepers hushing her friend when he's InnocentlyInsensitive about the Games and telling Bovina she did what she had to do.
* The OddFriendship between Raoul and two peacekeepers, and one of those peacekeepers hushing her friend when he's InnocentlyInsensitive about the Games and telling Bovina she did what she had to do.
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* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family.
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* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family. She buys a new roof for the babysitter of her younger brother, regular young buys (and over pays for) pies from a woman who gave her mother a shoulder to cry on while Evelyn was in the arena and buys new clothes and shoes for the daughter of a man whipped for helping her trouble-making older brother escape from the peacekeepers.
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* A lot of Ceceilia and Brutus’s date, and her naming their son after Brutus’s dead favorite brother.
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* A lot of Ceceilia Cecelia and Brutus’s date, and her naming their son after Brutus’s dead favorite brother.
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* Hector, the egotistical stylist crying and apologizing as he gives Ceceilia her final prep.
* Ceceilia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the Victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
* Ceceilia acknowledging that even the careers didn't want this.
* Ceceilia furiously attacking Gloss to save the life of Blight, remembering all he's done for her.
* Ceceilia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the Victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
* Ceceilia acknowledging that even the careers didn't want this.
* Ceceilia furiously attacking Gloss to save the life of Blight, remembering all he's done for her.
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* Hector, the egotistical stylist crying and apologizing as he gives Ceceilia Cecelia her final prep.
*Ceceilia Cecelia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the Victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
*Ceceilia Cecelia acknowledging that even the careers didn't want this.
*Ceceilia Cecelia furiously attacking Gloss to save the life of Blight, remembering all he's done for her.
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* The OneHundredPercentApproval rating Jules has among the Victors talking about him.
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* As much as Gloss falls victim to MurderMakesYouCrazy it is somewhat moving that he manages to fight it. The first time he loses control and stabs a woman he's horrified and races his victim to the hospital even though she might have been able to identify him (fortunately for Gloss it turns out she was too drunk) and afterwards, however much he might hurt people, takes pains to never kill anyone again.
* Evelyn trusting Beetee enough to ask for his help in her standoff with Gloss and Cashmere over knowing their secret.
* Evelyn trusting Beetee enough to ask for his help in her standoff with Gloss and Cashmere over knowing their secret.
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* The simple fact that (although they both suffer some mental scars and a hard time in the arena) two victors (Seeder and Mitt) manage to win without killing a single other tribute.
* The reveal at the beginning that Connor is still alive, followed by the reveal that there are more surviving victors than the seven who voted on the Capitol Games.
* The reveal at the beginning that Connor is still alive, followed by the reveal that there are more surviving victors than the seven who voted on the Capitol Games.
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* The simple fact that (although they both suffer some mental scars and a hard time in the arena) two victors Victors (Seeder and Mitt) manage to win without killing a single other tribute.
* The reveal at the beginning that Connor is still alive, followed by the reveal that there are more survivingvictors Victors than the seven who voted on the Capitol Games.
* The reveal at the beginning that Connor is still alive, followed by the reveal that there are more surviving
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* The OneHundredPercentApproval rating Jules has among the victors talking about him.
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* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11, 10, 7 and 4.
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* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the victors Victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11, 10, 7 and 4.
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* The Christmas party the District 2 victors throw to get Ares out of his PTSD, with plenty of HiddenDepths all around.
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* The Christmas party the District 2 victors Victors throw to get Ares out of his PTSD, with plenty of HiddenDepths all around.
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* ''Lots'' of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window; Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer; Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets; Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother; Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life; Petrum Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot; Cameron O’Neil promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village; The pubs of District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland; Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
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* ''Lots'' of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window; Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer; Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets; Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother; Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life; Petrum Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot; Cameron O’Neil promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village; Victors Village; The pubs of District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland; Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
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* Song receiving an urn containing the ashes of Quintus's contract of duty, allowing him to leave the peacekeepers and marry her. This is especially notable as one of the few times where Snow does [[ThrowTheDogABone throw a victor a bone]] when he could have kept on just dangling that promise over Song without delivering on it.
* Cashmere defying the rest of the District 1 victors and befriending Song the outsider.
* Cashmere defying the rest of the District 1 victors and befriending Song the outsider.
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* Song receiving an urn containing the ashes of Quintus's contract of duty, allowing him to leave the peacekeepers and marry her. This is especially notable as one of the few times where Snow does [[ThrowTheDogABone throw a victor Victor a bone]] when he could have kept on just dangling that promise over Song without delivering on it.
* Cashmere defying the rest of the District 1victors Victors and befriending Song the outsider.
* Cashmere defying the rest of the District 1
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* A lot of the camaraderie at the victor talent show (and Matty getting a rare chance to be in the spotlight with his juggling act).
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* A lot of the camaraderie at the victor Victor talent show (and Matty getting a rare chance to be in the spotlight with his juggling act).
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* Johanna and Gale’s MaybeEverAfter moment and Johanna presenting him the finished book memorializing the victors.
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* Johanna and Gale’s MaybeEverAfter moment and Johanna presenting him the finished book memorializing the victors.Victors.
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* Cecelia's escort is for the most part a smarmy figure implied to take joy in the Games, but she does get a PetTheDog telling Cecelia that not everyone Madame Lucia styles for (she's styling for careers that year) automatically becomes a victor after Cecelia worries about that.
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* Cecelia's escort is for the most part a smarmy figure implied to take joy in the Games, but she does get a PetTheDog telling Cecelia that not everyone Madame Lucia styles for (she's styling for careers that year) automatically becomes a victor Victor after Cecelia worries about that.
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* Cecelia and Andromache telling each other what they’d do with a victor's salary.
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* Cecelia and Andromache telling each other what they’d do with a victor's Victor's salary.
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* 4 finally getting to [[IllegalReligion honor their dead victors, and so many others, the way they want to.]]
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* 4 finally getting to [[IllegalReligion honor their dead victors, Victors, and so many others, the way they want to.]]
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* The memorials District 6 makes for their three victors, each something appropriately honorable.
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* The memorials District 6 makes for their three victors, Victors, each something appropriately honorable.
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* Ceceilia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
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* Ceceilia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the victors Victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
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* It's revealed that the victors, rebels and careers and others, made a pact to give [[TheWoobie Elena]] a painless death.
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* It's revealed that the victors, Victors, rebels and careers and others, made a pact to give [[TheWoobie Elena]] a painless death.
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* The fact that the head of District 4's community home saved her charges.
* 4 finally getting to [[IllegalReligion honor their dead victors, and so many others, the way they want to.]]
* The description of how peacekeeper Tiberias Lockwood assimilated to life in the district and defected out of anger at what was done to Finnick and Annie.
* 4 finally getting to [[IllegalReligion honor their dead victors, and so many others, the way they want to.]]
* The description of how peacekeeper Tiberias Lockwood assimilated to life in the district and defected out of anger at what was done to Finnick and Annie.
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* Hector, the egotistical stylist crying and apologizing as he gives Ceceilia her final prep.
* Ceceilia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
* Ceceilia acknowledging that even the careers didn't want this.
* Ceceilia furiously attacking Gloss to save the life of Blight, remembering all he's done for her.
* It's revealed that the victors, rebels and careers and others, made a pact to give [[TheWoobie Elena]] a painless death.
* Cecelia's alternate persona telling her their children will be safe and being right.
* Ceceilia reflecting on how she and Cashmere have cried on each other's shoulders about the victors trade and Cashmere shouting something half encouraging to her from her pedestal.
* Ceceilia acknowledging that even the careers didn't want this.
* Ceceilia furiously attacking Gloss to save the life of Blight, remembering all he's done for her.
* It's revealed that the victors, rebels and careers and others, made a pact to give [[TheWoobie Elena]] a painless death.
* Cecelia's alternate persona telling her their children will be safe and being right.
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* Liane feeling enough Distirct loyalty not to tell Priam about the rebel actions that got Halibut's parents killed.
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* Liane feeling enough Distirct District loyalty not to tell Priam about the rebel actions that got Halibut's parents killed.
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* Song receiving an urn containing the ashes of Quintus's contract of duty, allowing him to leave the peacekeepers and marry her. This is escapially notable as one of the few times where Snow does [[ThrowTheDogABone throw a victor a bone]] when he could have kept on just dangling that promise over Song without delivering on it.
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* Song receiving an urn containing the ashes of Quintus's contract of duty, allowing him to leave the peacekeepers and marry her. This is escapially especially notable as one of the few times where Snow does [[ThrowTheDogABone throw a victor a bone]] when he could have kept on just dangling that promise over Song without delivering on it.
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* Cecelia's escort is for the most part a smarmy figure implied to take joy in the Games, but she does get a PetTheDog telling Cecelia that not everyone Madame Lucia styles for (she's styling for careers that year) automatically becomes a victor after Cecelia worries about that.
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* What Song goes through for Quintus.
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* What Song goes through for Quintus.Quintus to by the medical treatments to save his life.
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* How good Gleam feels for a moment after the knife throwing act (soaking in how no one got hurt as a result of his skills) before Ahenobarbus tries to kill the avvox. Which just provides another heartwarming moment when Orchus stops him.
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* How good Gleam feels for a moment after the knife throwing act (soaking in how no one got hurt as a result of his skills) before Ahenobarbus tries to kill the avvox.Avox. Which just provides another heartwarming moment when Orchus stops him.
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* Jade’s FriendOrIdolDecision where she choses a chance at saving the life of her fellow prisoner rather than taking revenge on Coin.
* ‘’Lots’’ of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window; Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer; Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets; Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother; Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life; Petrum Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot; Cameron O’Neil promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village; The pubs of District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland; Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
* ‘’Lots’’ of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window; Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer; Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets; Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother; Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life; Petrum Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot; Cameron O’Neil promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village; The pubs of District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland; Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
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* Jade’s FriendOrIdolDecision where she choses chooses a chance at saving the life of her fellow prisoner rather than taking revenge on Coin.
*‘’Lots’’ ''Lots'' of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window; Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer; Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets; Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother; Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life; Petrum Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot; Cameron O’Neil promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village; The pubs of District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland; Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
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* Beetee writing a couple extra zeroes on the tip for the waiter at the restaurant, figuring he might as well give him the mens for some enjoyment in the few days before things go badly.
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* Beetee writing a couple extra zeroes on the tip for the waiter at the restaurant, figuring he might as well give him the mens means for some enjoyment in the few days before things go badly.
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* A lot of the camadrie at the victor talent show (and Matty getting a rare chance to be in the spotlight with his juggling act).
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* A lot of the camadrie camaraderie at the victor talent show (and Matty getting a rare chance to be in the spotlight with his juggling act).
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* Blight meeting his avox mother in the Capitol.
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* The salvation of the District 7 rebels by a calvary charge and the feelings that Blight and Jason’s romance might have been reincarnated in a sense through Blight’s nephew and his boyfriend.
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* The salvation of the District 7 rebels by a calvary cavalry charge and the feelings that Blight and Jason’s romance might have been reincarnated in a sense through Blight’s nephew and his boyfriend.
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* Halibut poising his ally Copper isn't exactly an admirable act, but he makes sure to give him a quick death for the sake of his watching girlfriend, and it's implied that the reason he killed the boy form District 7 himself before turning on Copper was so that the last thing Copper's girlfriend saw him do wasn't killing a helpless kid.
* It's a small moment, but despite the InevitableMutualBetrayal tensions login through the rest of Halibut's alliance, Rarity from 1 does compliment their leader Priam, recognizing that because of him their time in the arena has been a "vacation" compared to some.
* While more preoccupied with Halibut turning on them, Rarity does seem to feel a brief moment of sadness for her dead district partner referring to the faces in the sky as "two young boys" in her inner monologue rather than dehumanizing them like many tributes do.
* Liane reflecting about happier memories with Priam in the arena, moments of affection even when the camera wasn't watching them, before admitting ThatManIsDead.
* Liane feeling enough Distirct loyalty not to tell Priam about the rebel actions that got Halibut's parents killed.
* It's a small moment, but despite the InevitableMutualBetrayal tensions login through the rest of Halibut's alliance, Rarity from 1 does compliment their leader Priam, recognizing that because of him their time in the arena has been a "vacation" compared to some.
* While more preoccupied with Halibut turning on them, Rarity does seem to feel a brief moment of sadness for her dead district partner referring to the faces in the sky as "two young boys" in her inner monologue rather than dehumanizing them like many tributes do.
* Liane reflecting about happier memories with Priam in the arena, moments of affection even when the camera wasn't watching them, before admitting ThatManIsDead.
* Liane feeling enough Distirct loyalty not to tell Priam about the rebel actions that got Halibut's parents killed.
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* Ares and Berenice's bond, specifically Berenice's performance of a song that indicates that she views Ares as a ParentalSubstitute and Ares defending.
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* Ares and Berenice's bond, specifically Berenice's performance of a song that indicates that she views Ares as a ParentalSubstitute and Ares defending.defending her from Cecilia's contempt (Cecilia's anger is justified, but that isn't Berenice's fault).
* Halibut and Crystal befriending Berenice, notably offering her a swig of whiskey and a caramel cube to clear the taste of that whiskey respectively.
* Halibut and Crystal befriending Berenice, notably offering her a swig of whiskey and a caramel cube to clear the taste of that whiskey respectively.
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* Johanna and Gale’s MaybeEverAfter moment and Johanna presenting him the finished book demoralizing the victors.
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* Johanna and Gale’s MaybeEverAfter moment and Johanna presenting him the finished book demoralizing memorializing the victors.
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* The salvation of the District 7 rebels by a calvary charge and the feelings that Blight and Jason’s romance might have been reincarnated in a sense through Blight’s nephew and his boyfriend.boyfriend.
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* Jules stepping in as mentor to send Blight sponsor gifts (including some useful ones) and then being honored as the official mentor at the end.
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* Johanna and her brother thanking Blight after he volunteers (albeit unwilling) and a two year old Johanan telling Blight to win.
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* Johanna and her brother thanking Blight after he volunteers (albeit unwilling) and a two year old Johanan Johanna telling Blight to win.
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* Cecelia’s relationship with her little half-sister, especially the story she tells her during their goodbyes after the reaping.
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* Cecelia’s relationship with her little half-sister, half-sister Kerry, especially the story she tells her during their goodbyes after the reaping.
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* As Katniss's rebel proponents airs in the Capitol, as most of the citizens feel hate or confusion, others simply try to hide relief and happiness that the girl they watched through two games isn't dead.
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* How much Luxe (and to a lesser extent Platinum) look after and try to cheer up a shellshocked Gleam.
* Jules greeting Gleam, Luxe and Platinum in bear hugs and then helping carry a drugged up Gleam out of the club.
* Ahoenobarbus complimenting Gleam's skills and his performance, [[MoodWhiplash before declaring the knife-throwing contest]].
* How good Gleam feels for a moment after the knife throwing act (soaking in how no one got hurt as a result of his skills) before Ahenobarbus tries to kill the avvox. Which just provides another heartwarming moment when Orchus stops him.
* Jules greeting Gleam, Luxe and Platinum in bear hugs and then helping carry a drugged up Gleam out of the club.
* Ahoenobarbus complimenting Gleam's skills and his performance, [[MoodWhiplash before declaring the knife-throwing contest]].
* How good Gleam feels for a moment after the knife throwing act (soaking in how no one got hurt as a result of his skills) before Ahenobarbus tries to kill the avvox. Which just provides another heartwarming moment when Orchus stops him.
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* Bovine being brought out of her depression and feeling like a pariah by her mentor showing her the effect that the food parcels she won for the district are having.
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* Bovine Bovina being brought out of her depression and feeling like a pariah by her mentor showing her the effect that the food parcels she won for the district are having.
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** And Mercutio the waiter saying it's been an honor to serve him for so many years.
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* Beetee writing a couple extra zeroes on the tip for the waiter at the restaurant, figuring he might as well give him the mens for some enjoyment in the few days before things go badly.
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* The reveal that Chevy painted portraits of all the tributes he lost.
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* The simple fact that (although they both suffer some mental scars and a hard time in the arena) two victors (Seeder and Mitt) manage to win without killing a single other tribute.
* The reveal at the beginning that Connor is still alive, followed by the reveal that there are more surviving victors than the seven who voted on the Capitol Games.
* The reveal at the beginning that Connor is still alive, followed by the reveal that there are more surviving victors than the seven who voted on the Capitol Games.
* Beetee and Wiress FinishingEachOthersSentences as he leaves the apartment to meet Cashmere.
* Song letting her erstwhile ally die with dignity.
* Cashmere defying the rest of the District 1 victors and befriending Song the outsider.
* Cashmere defying the rest of the District 1 victors and befriending Song the outsider.
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* Ares and Berenice's bond, specifically Berenice's performance of a song that indicates that she views Ares as a ParentalSubstitute and Ares defending
* Ben duding everything he can to save Abram, especially with the later reveal it’s because he suspects Abram is his son.
* Ben duding everything he can to save Abram, especially with the later reveal it’s because he suspects Abram is his son.
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* Ares and Berenice's bond, specifically Berenice's performance of a song that indicates that she views Ares as a ParentalSubstitute and Ares defending
defending.
* A lot of the camadrie at the victor talent show (and Matty getting a rare chance to be in the spotlight with his juggling act).
* Benduding doing everything he can to save Abram, especially with the later reveal it’s because he suspects Abram is his son.
* A lot of the camadrie at the victor talent show (and Matty getting a rare chance to be in the spotlight with his juggling act).
* Ben
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* luxe’s mothers attempts to help her son move past the games.
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* luxe’s Luxe’s mothers attempts to help her son move past the games.
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* Wheaton volunteering to try and win a pardon for his rebel father, although it ends badly. The line about the boy he volunteered for running back to his mother is still powerful though.
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* Wheaton volunteering to try and win a pardon for his rebel father, although it ends badly.
** The line about the boy he volunteered for running back to his mother is still powerful though.
** The line about the boy he volunteered for running back to his mother is still powerful though.
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* It’s only touched on breifly, but Woof trying to take care of his sisters on the street.
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* It’s only touched on breifly, briefly, but Woof trying to take care of his sisters on the street.
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* The determination Martius feels about saving Vera through sponsorship (even if it turns out to be a just a passing interest in the end) and the support he gets form people like his friend and stepmother.
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* The determination Martius feels about saving Vera through sponsorship [[IgnoredEpiphany (even if it turns out to be a just a passing interest in the end) end)]] and the support he eventually gets form from people like his friend and stepmother.
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* Mannan [[TheDeadHaveNames keeping pictures of his dead tributes]].
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* Mannan Manannan [[TheDeadHaveNames keeping pictures of his dead tributes]].tributes]], especially after Johanna's internal monologue painted him as just another arrogant tribute.
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* The bond between the three cousins as shown in Honorius’s chapter.
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* The bond between the three cousins as shown in Honorius’s Honorius' chapter.
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* Rick summoning up the courage to see his wife and daughter again once his son is reaped.
* The description of Chevy managign to have a happy family ,[[HappyEndingOverride although the events of ‘’Arrow’’ sour this some]].
* The description of Chevy managign to have a happy family ,[[HappyEndingOverride although the events of ‘’Arrow’’ sour this some]].
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* The description of Chevy
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* Seedr;s reaction to the Katniss -Peeta love saga.
* Ahenobarbus’s friendship with Gates.
* Elena and Danny’s whole relationship and story. The first half of it, anyway.
* Mags determination to see justice done for Wheaton.
* Ahenobarbus’s friendship with Gates.
* Elena and Danny’s whole relationship and story. The first half of it, anyway.
* Mags determination to see justice done for Wheaton.
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* Seedr;s Seeder's reaction to the Katniss -Peeta Katniss-Peeta love saga.
*Ahenobarbus’s Ahenobarbus’ friendship with Gates.
* Elena and Danny’s whole relationship and story. [[LoveHurts The first half of it,anyway.
anyway.]]
*Mags Mags' determination to see justice done for Wheaton.Wheaton.
* Mags comforting Cerulea through the pre-games pageantry even after she transfers mentorship of her.
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* Elena and Danny’s whole relationship and story. [[LoveHurts The first half of it,
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* Mags comforting Cerulea through the pre-games pageantry even after she transfers mentorship of her.
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* Mags bringing inner-district rebels tougher after Brilliance wins.
* The description of Brutus’s happy family life.
* The description of Brutus’s happy family life.
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* Mags bringing inner-district rebels tougher together after Brilliance wins.
* The description ofBrutus’s Brutus’ happy family life.
* The description of
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* Brutus’ s trainer telling him he did good after he beats up a bully and the feelings of elation it gives him.
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* Brutus’ s trainer telling him he did good after he beats up a bully and the feelings of elation it gives him.
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* Honorius declaring that if anyone insults Brutus for his decision to volunteer hell kill them with his bare hands.
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* Honorius declaring that if anyone insults Brutus for his decision to volunteer hell he'll kill them with his bare hands.
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* ‘’Lots’’ of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window. Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer. Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets. Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother. Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life. Petrume Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot. Cameron O’Niel promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village. The pubs f District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland. Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
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* ‘’Lots’’ of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window. window; Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer. performer; Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets. regrets; Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother. brother; Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life. Petrume life; Petrum Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot. pilot; Cameron O’Niel O’Neil promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village. village; The pubs f of District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland. Copeland; Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews. interviews.
** The revelation that Cameron kept his promise to his cousin, even posthumously.
** The revelation that Cameron kept his promise to his cousin, even posthumously.
* Professor Tybalt finding Song and Quintus' grave. Also doubles as a Tearjerker in that the last time he saw them he was shoved into a closet.
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* Johanna’s deal with Cashmere to get her tribute a MercyKill.
* Berenice’s song about seeing Ares as a ParentalSubstitute.
* Berenice’s song about seeing Ares as a ParentalSubstitute.
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* Johanna’s deal with Cashmere to get her tribute tributes [[MercyKill mercy killed].
* Ares and Berenice's bond, specifically Berenice's performance of aMercyKill.
* Berenice’ssong about seeing that indicates that she views Ares as a ParentalSubstitute.ParentalSubstitute and Ares defending
* Ares and Berenice's bond, specifically Berenice's performance of a
* Berenice’s
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* Katniss and Boudicca finding out their NotSoDifferent.
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* Katniss and Boudicca finding out their NotSoDifferent.they're NotSoDifferent.
** Katniss defending Boudicca for starting the training academy and convincing Haymitch that as a whole Victors are [[NotSoDifferent just pawns overall.]]
** Katniss defending Boudicca for starting the training academy and convincing Haymitch that as a whole Victors are [[NotSoDifferent just pawns overall.]]
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* Blight meeting his avvox mother in the Capitol.
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* Blight meeting his avvox avox mother in the Capitol.
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* Cecelia and Andromache telling each other what they’d do with a victors salary.
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* Cecelia and Andromache telling each other what they’d do with a victors victor's salary.
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* A lot of Enobaria and Matthos’s scenes.
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* A lot of Enobaria and Matthos’s Matthos’ scenes.
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* Lue sending money to the families of the tributes he killed o keep them clothed and fed.
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* Lue Luxe sending money to the families of the tributes he killed o keep them clothed and fed.
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* While it doesn’t; do any good in the long run, the fact that the girl 5 voted into the Quell’s supervisor was willing to take the blame for the industrial accident rather than blame her.
* Bovina’s seeing Jon Parsons honored after his death.
* Bovina’s seeing Jon Parsons honored after his death.
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* While it doesn’t; doesn’t do any good in the long run, the fact that the girl 5 voted into the Quell’s supervisor was willing to take the blame for the industrial accident rather than blame her.
*Bovina’s Bovina seeing Jon Parsons honored after his death.
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* The reveal that Cashmere tried to drop out of The DAEYD and not fight in the Hunger Games after Gloss's games.
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!! Main story
* luxe’s mothers attempts to help her son move past the games.
* The description of the old man who may have been Orchus being a FriendToAllChildren.
* Wheaton volunteering to try and win a pardon for his rebel father, although it ends badly. The line about the boy he volunteered for running back to his mother is still powerful though.
* The OneHundredPercentApproval rating Jules has among the victors talking about him.
* Camden’s goodbye with his siblings.
* Bovine being brought out of her depression and feeling like a pariah by her mentor showing her the effect that the food parcels she won for the district are having.
* It’s only touched on breifly, but Woof trying to take care of his sisters on the street.
* Woof going more than fifty years without ever losing his temper in honor/guilt for the boy he killed in the arena.
* Luxe mentoring Silk.
* Silk, in her capacity as District 1’s first volunteer, being hugged by the thirteen year old whose life she’s just saved.
* The determination Martius feels about saving Vera through sponsorship (even if it turns out to be a just a passing interest in the end) and the support he gets form people like his friend and stepmother.
* The sheer number of people who come to say goodbye to Gates when he’s reaped, and the description of how Gates was taking tesserae for eleven people, and being prepared in survival strategies by his father.
* Mannan [[TheDeadHaveNames keeping pictures of his dead tributes]].
* The friendship between Wren and Rem even after [[IncompatibleOrientation he finds out she’s gay]].
* A lot of the time Wren thinks about her girl back in 11.
* The bond between the three cousins as shown in Honorius’s chapter.
* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11, 10, 7 and 4.
* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family.
* The friendship that comes between former enemies Rick [=McNulty=] and Eli Parsons once Eli’s son is reaped.
* Rick summoning up the courage to see his wife and daughter again once his son is reaped.
* The description of Chevy managign to have a happy family ,[[HappyEndingOverride although the events of ‘’Arrow’’ sour this some]].
* Seeder’s reunion with Chaff, the first and only tribute she saves.
* Seeder’s getting married in the aftermath of saving Chaff.
* Seedr;s reaction to the Katniss -Peeta love saga.
* Ahenobarbus’s friendship with Gates.
* Elena and Danny’s whole relationship and story. The first half of it, anyway.
* Mags determination to see justice done for Wheaton.
* Ahenobarbus making Boudicca warn Mags and the other 4’s in time to save their lives during the Capitol power struggle.
* While it earned him the first of several beatings, Barty questioning the purpose of the Hunger Games and asking why the careers have to kill people.
* Barty being taken in by the family of a girl he saved from a wild dog, and later the goodbye he gives them after being selected as Tribute.
* Granyte trusting Barty and giving him a chance.
* The Christmas party the District 2 victors throw to get Ares out of his PTSD, with plenty of HiddenDepths all around.
* Ermine being willing to volunteer for the Games to save Esther’s family from retaliation by Luster.
* Justinian’s family being saved from poverty by betting on Chevy.
* Justinian deciding to bet on Maeve to honor his family, even if it becomes HarsherInHindsight.
* Mags bringing inner-district rebels tougher after Brilliance wins.
* The description of Brutus’s happy family life.
* The acts of kindness Beetee and Cerulea show Brutus on their victory tours.
* Brutus’ s trainer telling him he did good after he beats up a bully and the feelings of elation it gives him.
* Brutus helping Blight through his fight with Jason.
* Brutus’s brief moment of bonding with Peeta in training.
* Honorius declaring that if anyone insults Brutus for his decision to volunteer hell kill them with his bare hands.
* Jade’s FriendOrIdolDecision where she choses a chance at saving the life of her fellow prisoner rather than taking revenge on Coin.
* ‘’Lots’’ of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window. Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer. Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets. Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother. Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life. Petrume Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot. Cameron O’Niel promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village. The pubs f District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland. Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
* Lyme being consoled by her fellow rebels over the IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten test she had to do.
* Blight becoming FireForgedFriends with Connor and working so hard to save him despite hating his brother.
* A lot of Ceceilia and Brutus’s date, and her naming their son after Brutus’s dead favorite brother.
* The OddFriendship between Circe and District 5’s escort.
* The amount of trust and loyalty between Gloss and Cashmere (especially as kids).
* The brief, but strong bond Beetee and Cashmere form when she offers her support to the Rebellion.
* What Song goes through for Quintus.
* Song managing to save her sons life during the riots of District 1.
* While one of them does lynch Song in the end, it’s oddly touching seeing multiple members of the mob arguing on Song’s behalf first.
* Blight’s advice to Johanna.
* Johanna being the first to volunteer to protect Peeta, Jason’s cousin.
* Johanna’s deal with Cashmere to get her tribute a MercyKill.
* Berenice’s song about seeing Ares as a ParentalSubstitute.
* Ben duding everything he can to save Abram, especially with the later reveal it’s because he suspects Abram is his son.
* Cotton reflecting on how Virtus and Abram sent her chocolates.
* Honorius leading the HeelFaceTurn of several career mentors.
* Brutus comforting Lupus after the trauma of his Games and then volunteering to save him from having to repeat it.
* Finnick complimenting the cake Peeta made.
* Madge offering to introduce Peeta and Katniss.
* Peeta and his father making a last cake together.
* Katniss telling Peeta she’s pregnant as he presents her a birthday cake.
* Katniss and Boudicca finding out their NotSoDifferent.
* Johanna and Gale’s MaybeEverAfter moment and Johanna presenting him the finished book demoralizing the victors.
!! The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf
* Johanna and her brother thanking Blight after he volunteers (albeit unwilling) and a two year old Johanan telling Blight to win.
* The way Vera offers to be Charlie’s mentor after being asked by her father.
* Blight’s training friendship with Devon.
* Blight meeting his avvox mother in the Capitol.
* After Blight comes out of the closet on the stage, the support he gets, for the first time in his life, form the Capitol crowd and Jason’s feelings watching.
* Johanna, her brother and their friends cleaning the stables for Blight while he’s gone.
* Charlie’s overall sense of friendship and loyalty to her allies.
* The District going from wanting Blight dead to doing what they can to save him.
* The reunion between Mrs. Lourdes and her husband and surviving daughters.
* Blight and Jason letting Johanna live in their house as a LoopholeAbuse of a promise Snow made in order to keep her safe.
* Blight’s goodbye letters.
!! Fall into the River
* Cecelia’s relationship with her little half-sister, especially the story she tells her during their goodbyes after the reaping.
* Woof duding what he can to show Loomer a good time before he goes into the arena.
* Loomer saving Cecelia’s life.
* Cecelia and Andromache telling each other what they’d do with a victors salary.
* Jason telling Cecelia to imagine parcel day.
* The OddFriendship between Spindella and Cora.
!!The Bonds of Blood
* Enobaria’s appeal to Boudicca to let Declan take the trials.
* The description of Enobaria and Maura’s childhood friendship.
* Enobaria being encouraging of Rob as he deals with the stress of being a career ally.
* A lot of Enobaria and Matthos’s scenes.
!! Secrets:
* Ahenobarbus being buried with his mothers shawl.
* Lue sending money to the families of the tributes he killed o keep them clothed and fed.
* Gleam’s dream of seeing his parents circus re-open.
* Camden giving his brother the money to get out of the coal mines.
* Cerulea leaving flowers on the tribute graves.
* Lupus finding comfort in jazz music.
!!Quell:
* While it doesn’t; do any good in the long run, the fact that the girl 5 voted into the Quell’s supervisor was willing to take the blame for the industrial accident rather than blame her.
* Bovina’s seeing Jon Parsons honored after his death.
* The sense of pride and support the District 11 volunteers get from the crowd.
* The District 12 girl feeling some comfort in knowing that at least her cat will miss her.
!!Arrow:
* Lyme and Abram finding almost fifty surviving Redfern residents, mostly women and children, after it looking like everyone was dead.
* The HeelFaceTurn of the District 5 peacekeepers, and the acquittal of their leader after the war.
* The memorials District 6 makes for their three victors, each something appropriately honorable.
* The salvation of the District 7 rebels by a calvary charge and the feelings that Blight and Jason’s romance might have been reincarnated in a sense through Blight’s nephew and his boyfriend.
* luxe’s mothers attempts to help her son move past the games.
* The description of the old man who may have been Orchus being a FriendToAllChildren.
* Wheaton volunteering to try and win a pardon for his rebel father, although it ends badly. The line about the boy he volunteered for running back to his mother is still powerful though.
* The OneHundredPercentApproval rating Jules has among the victors talking about him.
* Camden’s goodbye with his siblings.
* Bovine being brought out of her depression and feeling like a pariah by her mentor showing her the effect that the food parcels she won for the district are having.
* It’s only touched on breifly, but Woof trying to take care of his sisters on the street.
* Woof going more than fifty years without ever losing his temper in honor/guilt for the boy he killed in the arena.
* Luxe mentoring Silk.
* Silk, in her capacity as District 1’s first volunteer, being hugged by the thirteen year old whose life she’s just saved.
* The determination Martius feels about saving Vera through sponsorship (even if it turns out to be a just a passing interest in the end) and the support he gets form people like his friend and stepmother.
* The sheer number of people who come to say goodbye to Gates when he’s reaped, and the description of how Gates was taking tesserae for eleven people, and being prepared in survival strategies by his father.
* Mannan [[TheDeadHaveNames keeping pictures of his dead tributes]].
* The friendship between Wren and Rem even after [[IncompatibleOrientation he finds out she’s gay]].
* A lot of the time Wren thinks about her girl back in 11.
* The bond between the three cousins as shown in Honorius’s chapter.
* The welcomes Evelyn gets from the victors (and in some cases the people) in Districts 11, 10, 7 and 4.
* Evelyn’s acts of kindness to the people who were kind to her and her family.
* The friendship that comes between former enemies Rick [=McNulty=] and Eli Parsons once Eli’s son is reaped.
* Rick summoning up the courage to see his wife and daughter again once his son is reaped.
* The description of Chevy managign to have a happy family ,[[HappyEndingOverride although the events of ‘’Arrow’’ sour this some]].
* Seeder’s reunion with Chaff, the first and only tribute she saves.
* Seeder’s getting married in the aftermath of saving Chaff.
* Seedr;s reaction to the Katniss -Peeta love saga.
* Ahenobarbus’s friendship with Gates.
* Elena and Danny’s whole relationship and story. The first half of it, anyway.
* Mags determination to see justice done for Wheaton.
* Ahenobarbus making Boudicca warn Mags and the other 4’s in time to save their lives during the Capitol power struggle.
* While it earned him the first of several beatings, Barty questioning the purpose of the Hunger Games and asking why the careers have to kill people.
* Barty being taken in by the family of a girl he saved from a wild dog, and later the goodbye he gives them after being selected as Tribute.
* Granyte trusting Barty and giving him a chance.
* The Christmas party the District 2 victors throw to get Ares out of his PTSD, with plenty of HiddenDepths all around.
* Ermine being willing to volunteer for the Games to save Esther’s family from retaliation by Luster.
* Justinian’s family being saved from poverty by betting on Chevy.
* Justinian deciding to bet on Maeve to honor his family, even if it becomes HarsherInHindsight.
* Mags bringing inner-district rebels tougher after Brilliance wins.
* The description of Brutus’s happy family life.
* The acts of kindness Beetee and Cerulea show Brutus on their victory tours.
* Brutus’ s trainer telling him he did good after he beats up a bully and the feelings of elation it gives him.
* Brutus helping Blight through his fight with Jason.
* Brutus’s brief moment of bonding with Peeta in training.
* Honorius declaring that if anyone insults Brutus for his decision to volunteer hell kill them with his bare hands.
* Jade’s FriendOrIdolDecision where she choses a chance at saving the life of her fellow prisoner rather than taking revenge on Coin.
* ‘’Lots’’ of stuff about Haymitch’s fellow second quarter Quell Tributes: Athena Costa feeding the sparrows outside her window. Titania Briss pretending she’s a circus performer. Aeria Whitaker being allowed to do a dance recital in the place of an interview and dying without regrets. Watts Jarofsky volunteering to save his younger brother. Jenna Dunne’s mother staying clean of drugs for sixteen years to try and give her a better life. Petrume Steele being allowed to fly the hovercraft to the arena and live out his dreams of being a pilot. Cameron O’Niel promising his cousin he can live with him in the victors village. The pubs f District 9 having a collection to sponsor local darts champion Armanth Copeland. Adam Stone’s stylist letting him wear a dress for the interviews.
* Lyme being consoled by her fellow rebels over the IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten test she had to do.
* Blight becoming FireForgedFriends with Connor and working so hard to save him despite hating his brother.
* A lot of Ceceilia and Brutus’s date, and her naming their son after Brutus’s dead favorite brother.
* The OddFriendship between Circe and District 5’s escort.
* The amount of trust and loyalty between Gloss and Cashmere (especially as kids).
* The brief, but strong bond Beetee and Cashmere form when she offers her support to the Rebellion.
* What Song goes through for Quintus.
* Song managing to save her sons life during the riots of District 1.
* While one of them does lynch Song in the end, it’s oddly touching seeing multiple members of the mob arguing on Song’s behalf first.
* Blight’s advice to Johanna.
* Johanna being the first to volunteer to protect Peeta, Jason’s cousin.
* Johanna’s deal with Cashmere to get her tribute a MercyKill.
* Berenice’s song about seeing Ares as a ParentalSubstitute.
* Ben duding everything he can to save Abram, especially with the later reveal it’s because he suspects Abram is his son.
* Cotton reflecting on how Virtus and Abram sent her chocolates.
* Honorius leading the HeelFaceTurn of several career mentors.
* Brutus comforting Lupus after the trauma of his Games and then volunteering to save him from having to repeat it.
* Finnick complimenting the cake Peeta made.
* Madge offering to introduce Peeta and Katniss.
* Peeta and his father making a last cake together.
* Katniss telling Peeta she’s pregnant as he presents her a birthday cake.
* Katniss and Boudicca finding out their NotSoDifferent.
* Johanna and Gale’s MaybeEverAfter moment and Johanna presenting him the finished book demoralizing the victors.
!! The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf
* Johanna and her brother thanking Blight after he volunteers (albeit unwilling) and a two year old Johanan telling Blight to win.
* The way Vera offers to be Charlie’s mentor after being asked by her father.
* Blight’s training friendship with Devon.
* Blight meeting his avvox mother in the Capitol.
* After Blight comes out of the closet on the stage, the support he gets, for the first time in his life, form the Capitol crowd and Jason’s feelings watching.
* Johanna, her brother and their friends cleaning the stables for Blight while he’s gone.
* Charlie’s overall sense of friendship and loyalty to her allies.
* The District going from wanting Blight dead to doing what they can to save him.
* The reunion between Mrs. Lourdes and her husband and surviving daughters.
* Blight and Jason letting Johanna live in their house as a LoopholeAbuse of a promise Snow made in order to keep her safe.
* Blight’s goodbye letters.
!! Fall into the River
* Cecelia’s relationship with her little half-sister, especially the story she tells her during their goodbyes after the reaping.
* Woof duding what he can to show Loomer a good time before he goes into the arena.
* Loomer saving Cecelia’s life.
* Cecelia and Andromache telling each other what they’d do with a victors salary.
* Jason telling Cecelia to imagine parcel day.
* The OddFriendship between Spindella and Cora.
!!The Bonds of Blood
* Enobaria’s appeal to Boudicca to let Declan take the trials.
* The description of Enobaria and Maura’s childhood friendship.
* Enobaria being encouraging of Rob as he deals with the stress of being a career ally.
* A lot of Enobaria and Matthos’s scenes.
!! Secrets:
* Ahenobarbus being buried with his mothers shawl.
* Lue sending money to the families of the tributes he killed o keep them clothed and fed.
* Gleam’s dream of seeing his parents circus re-open.
* Camden giving his brother the money to get out of the coal mines.
* Cerulea leaving flowers on the tribute graves.
* Lupus finding comfort in jazz music.
!!Quell:
* While it doesn’t; do any good in the long run, the fact that the girl 5 voted into the Quell’s supervisor was willing to take the blame for the industrial accident rather than blame her.
* Bovina’s seeing Jon Parsons honored after his death.
* The sense of pride and support the District 11 volunteers get from the crowd.
* The District 12 girl feeling some comfort in knowing that at least her cat will miss her.
!!Arrow:
* Lyme and Abram finding almost fifty surviving Redfern residents, mostly women and children, after it looking like everyone was dead.
* The HeelFaceTurn of the District 5 peacekeepers, and the acquittal of their leader after the war.
* The memorials District 6 makes for their three victors, each something appropriately honorable.
* The salvation of the District 7 rebels by a calvary charge and the feelings that Blight and Jason’s romance might have been reincarnated in a sense through Blight’s nephew and his boyfriend.
