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** L’Arc and his party taking in Raphtalia after they’ve she was separated from Naofumi, helping her level up and providing food for her despite having been enemies prior to that.
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** L’Arc and his party taking in Raphtalia after they’ve they see she was separated from Naofumi, helping her level up and providing food for her despite having been enemies prior to that.
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** Naofumi learns the truth about Glass, where she came from and she what she's fighting for. He has a minor HeroicBSOD as he wonders why he's fighting her at all, when he doesn't care about this world, which has treated him so poorly. He decides that he doesn't care about this world. It can burn for all he cares. But Raphtalia and Filo need a place to live, so he'll fight Glass and the Waves and anyone else he needs to in order to protect that place. It's like an inverse of AlwaysSaveTheGirl - the world only deserves to be saved ''because'' the girl lives on it.
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** Naofumi learns the truth about Glass, where she came from and she what she's fighting for. He has a minor HeroicBSOD as he wonders why he's fighting her at all, when he doesn't care about this world, which has treated him so poorly. He decides that he doesn't care about this world. It can burn for all he cares. But Raphtalia and Filo need a place to live, so he'll fight Glass and the Waves and anyone else he needs to in order to protect that place. It's like an inverse of AlwaysSaveTheGirl - the world only deserves to be saved ''because'' the girl lives on it.
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* Naofumi helping Ruftmilia, the puppet king of Q-ten Lo, fake his death to appease the nobles of the other factions and giving him a place to stay in Rock Valley for no other reason than he's Raphtalia's cousin. The boy immediately latches on Naofumi.
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* Naofumi helping Ruftmilia, the puppet king of Q-ten Lo, fake his death to appease the nobles of the other factions his country's opposing factions/the rebellion and giving him a place to stay in Rock Valley for no other reason than he's Raphtalia's cousin. The boy immediately latches on Naofumi.
Naofumi and Raph-chan.
** Per Ruftmila's request, he also takes in Shildina, Sadeena's younger sister and Ruft's only friend.
** Per Ruftmila's request, he also takes in Shildina, Sadeena's younger sister and Ruft's only friend.
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* Imiya reuniting with her entire family. Naofumi bought them because he needed craftsmen and knew Imiya's skills were great, but he had no idea they were related.
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!! Light Novel and Manga
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!! Light Novel and MangaNovel
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* Naofumi helping Ruftmilia, the puppet king of Q-ten Lo, fake his death to appease the nobles of the other factions and giving him a place to stay in Rock Valley for no other reason than he's Raphtalia's cousin. The boy immediately latches on Naofumi.
!!Manga
* Raphtalia giving Keel the bangle Naofumi made her.
* When the village kids reunite with Raphtalia, they all comment on how pretty she got.
!!Manga
* Raphtalia giving Keel the bangle Naofumi made her.
* When the village kids reunite with Raphtalia, they all comment on how pretty she got.
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** The piece of work that was mistreating her is subjected to a choice bit of CruelMercy, a shield effect that conjures illusions of faces laughing at him in a void. He doesn't die, but his mind breaks. Naofumi is able to restrain himself ''that'' much without Raphtalia present.
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** The piece of work that was mistreating her is subjected to a choice bit of CruelMercy, a shield effect that conjures illusions of faces laughing at him in a void. He doesn't die, but his mind breaks. Naofumi [[PapaWolf Naofumi]] is able to restrain himself ''that'' much without Raphtalia present.
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** Apparently he even tried to cure Atla's blindness but could not but did make the first few steps into creating a cure for the disease that killed her mother that is not the rare and expensive Yggdrasil Elixir.
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** Apparently he even tried to cure Atla's blindness but could not but did make the first few steps into creating a cure for the disease that killed her mother that is not the as rare and or expensive Yggdrasil Elixir. as Elixir of Yggdrasil, which was the only thing that could cure Atla.
* Atla requesting Naofumi absorb her body into his shield as she lays dying, so she can keep her promise of being a shield that can protect him.
** Fohl rages at Naofumi not to let Atla's sacrifice be in vain and acknowledges that he would have been proud to have Naofumi as a brother-in-law if his sister had survive. He also starts calling Naofumi by the title Aniki or big brother.
* Atla requesting Naofumi absorb her body into his shield as she lays dying, so she can keep her promise of being a shield that can protect him.
** Fohl rages at Naofumi not to let Atla's sacrifice be in vain and acknowledges that he would have been proud to have Naofumi as a brother-in-law if his sister had survive. He also starts calling Naofumi by the title Aniki or big brother.
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* Season 3, Episode 3 has two:
** Naofumi bringing Atla and Fohl with him to Lurolona, and healing the former from her illness. Particularly when Atla starts walking.
** The return of Lurolona's inhabitants after months of slavery. The children have TearsOfJoy running their faces, and there's an adorable scene where a couple of mole demihumans lovingly hug each other.
** Naofumi bringing Atla and Fohl with him to Lurolona, and healing the former from her illness. Particularly when Atla starts walking.
** The return of Lurolona's inhabitants after months of slavery. The children have TearsOfJoy running their faces, and there's an adorable scene where a couple of mole demihumans lovingly hug each other.
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** Apparently he even tried to cure Atla's blindness but could not but did make the first few steps into creating a cure for the disease that killed her mother that is not the rare and expensive Yggdrasil Elixer.
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** Apparently he even tried to cure Atla's blindness but could not but did make the first few steps into creating a cure for the disease that killed her mother that is not the rare and expensive Yggdrasil Elixer.Elixir.
