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* Harrow fondly remembers that when she was three years old Mortus, her parents' paladin, held her in his arms in the chapel so she could see her mother at the altar. He even gave her mint candies to keep her quiet.
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* Harrow fondly remembers that when she was three years old Mortus, her parents' paladin, cavalier, held her in his arms in the chapel so she could see her mother at the altar. He even gave her mint candies to keep her quiet.
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"Then let us not seek out forgiveness, but forgetfulness," he said. "Bury me next to you in that unmarked grave, Joy. We knew that was the only hope we ever had—that we would live to see it through ... and pray for our own cessation. Oh, we'll still hate each other my dear, we have hatted eachother too long and too passionately to stop ... but my bones will rest easy next to your bones."
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"Then let us not seek out forgiveness, but forgetfulness," he said. "Bury me next to you in that unmarked grave, Joy. We knew that was the only hope we ever had—that we would live to see it through ... and pray for our own cessation. Oh, we'll still hate each other my dear, we have hatted eachother hated each other too long and too passionately to stop ... but my bones will rest easy next to your bones."
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!! Chapter 52
* After Mercymorn kills the emperor, Augustine talks her down from immediately committing suicide. Despite their intense animosity, it's made abundantly clear that they're the only ones in the universe who truly understand one another.
-->"You cannot make me do this"\\
"You have a job, Joy," he said. "If you kill yourself now, you'll leave everything remarkably untidy, and that's not like you, is it?"\\
She said numbly, "That was not the agreement."\\
"Bad luck," said Augustine. "It's done—as you chose to stain your hands so mine could be clean, you're going to have to put up with the fact that you picked the wrong man to enter into a suicide pact with. I hate 'em. Cristabel might have undone all my good work with Alfred, but here comes the reckoning. We're going to go round up the ships—everyone who's left—sue for peace as best we can—get the Edenites on side. And then we'll find a place to fulfill the old promise ... Somewhere out there exists a home not paid for with blood; it won't be for us, but it ''will'' be for those who have been spared. Babies always get born. Houses always get built. And flowers will die on necromancy's grave."\\
Her throat was working. "Augustine—"\\
The Lyctor took her silently in his arms: they held each other like children who'd had a nightmare and had woken in a fright. Just as silently, they detached.\\
She said in a low voice, "He was right. There can be no forgiveness."\\
"Then let us not seek out forgiveness, but forgetfulness," he said. "Bury me next to you in that unmarked grave, Joy. We knew that was the only hope we ever had—that we would live to see it through ... and pray for our own cessation. Oh, we'll still hate each other my dear, we have hatted eachother too long and too passionately to stop ... but my bones will rest easy next to your bones."
* After Mercymorn kills the emperor, Augustine talks her down from immediately committing suicide. Despite their intense animosity, it's made abundantly clear that they're the only ones in the universe who truly understand one another.
-->"You cannot make me do this"\\
"You have a job, Joy," he said. "If you kill yourself now, you'll leave everything remarkably untidy, and that's not like you, is it?"\\
She said numbly, "That was not the agreement."\\
"Bad luck," said Augustine. "It's done—as you chose to stain your hands so mine could be clean, you're going to have to put up with the fact that you picked the wrong man to enter into a suicide pact with. I hate 'em. Cristabel might have undone all my good work with Alfred, but here comes the reckoning. We're going to go round up the ships—everyone who's left—sue for peace as best we can—get the Edenites on side. And then we'll find a place to fulfill the old promise ... Somewhere out there exists a home not paid for with blood; it won't be for us, but it ''will'' be for those who have been spared. Babies always get born. Houses always get built. And flowers will die on necromancy's grave."\\
Her throat was working. "Augustine—"\\
The Lyctor took her silently in his arms: they held each other like children who'd had a nightmare and had woken in a fright. Just as silently, they detached.\\
She said in a low voice, "He was right. There can be no forgiveness."\\
"Then let us not seek out forgiveness, but forgetfulness," he said. "Bury me next to you in that unmarked grave, Joy. We knew that was the only hope we ever had—that we would live to see it through ... and pray for our own cessation. Oh, we'll still hate each other my dear, we have hatted eachother too long and too passionately to stop ... but my bones will rest easy next to your bones."
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* In ''The Unwanted Guest'', Palamedes finally gets to talk to and see the real Dulcinea, and tell her he loves her.
-->'''Dulcinea''': Was I cute?
-->'''Palamedes''': You're perfect.
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* In ''The Unwanted Guest'', Palamedes finally gets to talk to and see the real Dulcinea, and tell her he loves her.
-->'''Dulcinea''': Was I cute?
-->'''Palamedes''': You're perfect.
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--> '''Hot Sauce''': I'll always love you, Nona.
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!!Chapter 30
* Nona nearly gives up on piloting the shuttle out of exhaustion and desperation, which would kill everyone on board. As soon as Paul reminds them that Noodle is on the shuttle too, her resolve returns because she can't bear to lose the dog.
* Nona nearly gives up on piloting the shuttle out of exhaustion and desperation, which would kill everyone on board. As soon as Paul reminds them that Noodle is on the shuttle too, her resolve returns because she can't bear to lose the dog.
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!! Chapter 20
* Gideon was able to figure out that the avulsion trial requires the necromancer to draw on their cavalier's life energy, causing the cavalier an enormous amount of pain and risking both of their lives. How'd she figure it out? Because it's something Palamedes would never do, since "he's a perfect moron over Camilla the Sixth."
* Gideon was able to figure out that the avulsion trial requires the necromancer to draw on their cavalier's life energy, causing the cavalier an enormous amount of pain and risking both of their lives. How'd she figure it out? Because it's something Palamedes would never do, since "he's a perfect moron over Camilla the Sixth."
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!!Chapter 13
*Hot Sauce warns Nona to stay away from the burnings at the park, not because she knows Nona's a necromancer, but because she doesn't want her to be scared.
*Hot Sauce warns Nona to stay away from the burnings at the park, not because she knows Nona's a necromancer, but because she doesn't want her to be scared.
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* When Pyrrha thinks Nona is already asleep, she looks down on her and calls her her "beautiful babies." It's unclear if she's talking to Nona, Gideon, Harrow, maybe ''Alecto'', or even all of them at once, but it's still cute.
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!!Chapter 6
* When Pyrrha thinks Nona is already asleep, she looks down on her and her "my darling hearts, my sleeping babes, Daddy's own treasures." It's unclear if she's talking to Nona, Gideon, Harrow, maybe ''Alecto'', or even all of them at once, but it's still cute.
* When Pyrrha thinks Nona is already asleep, she looks down on her and her "my darling hearts, my sleeping babes, Daddy's own treasures." It's unclear if she's talking to Nona, Gideon, Harrow, maybe ''Alecto'', or even all of them at once, but it's still cute.
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** Camilla offers her the chance to leave with them, which Corona refuses, insisting that she's better off with Blood of Eden. Their conversation crosses into Tearjerker territory when Corona attempts to convince Camilla that they two of them are NotSoDifferent, and fails.
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--> '''Camilla:''' Come back with me. Leave the facility. Before the negotiator arrives, come back with us.
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!!Chapter 13
* Though Corona and Camilla's relationship is [[FireForgedFriends complicated]] [[ConflictingLoyalty to say the least]], their conversation after Palamedes reveals that he's sharing Cam's body shows that they do actually care about each other.
** Camilla offers her the chance to leave with them, which Corona refuses, insisting that she's better off with Blood of Eden. Their conversation crosses into Tearjerker territory when Corona attempts to convince Camilla that they two of them are NotSoDifferent, and fails.
* Though Corona and Camilla's relationship is [[FireForgedFriends complicated]] [[ConflictingLoyalty to say the least]], their conversation after Palamedes reveals that he's sharing Cam's body shows that they do actually care about each other.
** Camilla offers her the chance to leave with them, which Corona refuses, insisting that she's better off with Blood of Eden. Their conversation crosses into Tearjerker territory when Corona attempts to convince Camilla that they two of them are NotSoDifferent, and fails.
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* Pyrrha reminisces about Commander Wake to Pash, her niece, and tells Pash that Wake kept Pash's photo on her and was obviously really proud of her. Nona notes that Pash looks like she's having a religious experience when she hears it.
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* Nona's skill at reading body language comes in handy when she realizes that after her argument with Palamedes, Pyrrha went to the park and [[MercyKill mercy killed]] the prisoners before they could be [[BurnTheWitch burned alive]]. Turns out she's [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold softie]] after all.
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* Nona's skill at reading body language comes in handy when she realizes that after her argument with Palamedes, Pyrrha went to the park and [[MercyKill mercy killed]] the prisoners before they could be [[BurnTheWitch burned alive]]. Turns out she's
--> [[JerkWithAHeartOfGoldsoftie]] after all. "There's always some softie in the crowd."]]
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* Though it's heavily colored by Palamedes being defensive and Pyrrha being, well... [[KnightInSourArmor Pyrrha]], their constant arguments about the risks inherent in the Lyctorhood process show that both Palamedes and Pyrrha care a lot Cam, and want to make sure that she's as safe as possible.
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* Though it's heavily colored by Palamedes being defensive and Pyrrha being, well... [[KnightInSourArmor Pyrrha]], their constant arguments about the risks inherent in the Lyctorhood process show that both Palamedes and Pyrrha care a lot about Cam, and want to make sure that she's as safe as possible.
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!!Chapter 10
* Nona's skill at reading body language comes in handy when she realizes that after her argument with Palamedes, Pyrrha went to the park and [[MercyKill mercy killed]] the prisoners before they could be [[BurnTheWitch burned alive]]. Turns out she's [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold softie]] after all.
!!Chapter 10
* Nona's skill at reading body language comes in handy when she realizes that after her argument with Palamedes, Pyrrha went to the park and [[MercyKill mercy killed]] the prisoners before they could be [[BurnTheWitch burned alive]]. Turns out she's [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold softie]] after all.
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!!Chapter 7
* Though it's heavily colored by Palamedes being defensive and Pyrrha being, well... [[KnightInSourArmor Pyrrha]], their constant arguments about the risks inherent in the Lyctorhood process show that both Palamedes and Pyrrha care a lot Cam, and want to make sure that she's as safe as possible.
* Though it's heavily colored by Palamedes being defensive and Pyrrha being, well... [[KnightInSourArmor Pyrrha]], their constant arguments about the risks inherent in the Lyctorhood process show that both Palamedes and Pyrrha care a lot Cam, and want to make sure that she's as safe as possible.
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* At several different points in the book, Palamedes makes it clear that he considers himself a passenger in Camilla's body, and that he's going to do everything in his power both to respect her privacy and protect her.
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* Despite her gruff exterior, Pyrrha makes it clear that she genuinely cares about Palamedes, Cam, and Nona.
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* Despite her gruff exterior, Pyrrha makes it clear right off the bat that she genuinely cares about Palamedes, Cam, and Nona.
--> '''Pyrrha:''' If you asked me to pick between the three of us and those twelve million plus sixteen, I'd pick us without turning a hair.
--> '''Pyrrha:''' If you asked me to pick between the three of us and those twelve million plus sixteen, I'd pick us without turning a hair.
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* Despite her gruff exterior, Pyrrha makes it clear that she genuinely cares about Palamedes, Cam, and Nona.
