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There is not need for a "but"
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* After the final battle, the [[EasilyForgiven Second Unit forgives Horikawa for betraying them]] and going out on his own to prevent his former master's demise, but they welcome him back in a heartwarming way.
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* After the final battle, the [[EasilyForgiven Second Unit easily forgives Horikawa Horikawa]] for betraying them]] and going out on his own to prevent his former master's demise, but they death and welcome him back in a heartwarming way.with open arms.
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* After the final battle, the [[EasilyForgiven Second Unit forgives Horikawa for betraying them and going out on his own to prevent his former master's demise, but they welcome him back in a heartwarming way.]]
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* After the final battle, the [[EasilyForgiven Second Unit forgives Horikawa for betraying them them]] and going out on his own to prevent his former master's demise, but they welcome him back in a heartwarming way.]]
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'''Katasugeki'''
* After the final battle, the [[EasilyForgiven Second Unit forgives Horikawa for betraying them and going out on his own to prevent his former master's demise, but they welcome him back in a heartwarming way.]]
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* Mutsunokami [[{{Glomp}} tackling and hugging]] the Saniwa upon hearing their master's plan to have Izuminokami revisit his former master just so that he can rid himself of any regret. He is clearly grateful for the Saniwa's willingness to understand their situation and his affectionate nature makes him look like a big adorable puppy.
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* Mutsunokami [[{{Glomp}} tackling and hugging]] the Saniwa upon hearing their master's plan to have Izuminokami revisit his former master master, just so that he can rid himself of any regret. He is clearly grateful for the Saniwa's willingness to understand their situation and his affectionate nature makes him look like a big adorable puppy.
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Incorrect fact. Mutsunokami did not hug the Saniwa because they were glad to see them but because he was appreciative of their understanding. It's been established that Touken Danshi's are the most part, forbidden to interact and personally meet up with their former master, but the Saniwa allowed it this one time simply because they wanted to assuage Izuminokami's regret. So, the hug was definitely not the result of Mutsunokami's glee from seeing their master.
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* Mutsunokami [[{{Glomp}} tackling and hugging]] the Saniwa upon seeing them again. The guy looks so ''happy'' to see his master in the flesh, and his affectionate nature makes him look like a big puppy.
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* Mutsunokami [[{{Glomp}} tackling and hugging]] the Saniwa upon seeing them again. The guy looks so ''happy'' hearing their master's plan to see have Izuminokami revisit his former master in just so that he can rid himself of any regret. He is clearly grateful for the flesh, Saniwa's willingness to understand their situation and his affectionate nature makes him look like a big adorable puppy.
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'''Episode 11 '''
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'''Episode 11 '''
* Mutsunokami [[{{Glomp}} tackling and hugging]] the Saniwa upon seeing them again. The guy looks so ''happy'' to see his master in the flesh, and his affectionate nature makes him look like a big puppy.
