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* Kagami demonstrates her devotion to Konata in Chapter 2 when she comes ''very'' close to punching Misao for speaking ill of her. Fortunately, the situation is quickly diffused after Misao apologizes.
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* Kagami demonstrates her devotion to Konata in Chapter 2 when she comes ''very'' close to punching Misao for speaking ill of her. Fortunately, Ayano quickly diffuses the situation is quickly diffused after and Misao apologizes.apologizes. Kagami even refers to Konata as "my Konata".
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* Kagami demonstrates her devotion to Konata in Chapter 2 when she comes very close to punching Misao for speaking ill of her. Fortunately, Ayano was able to defuse the situation.
** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine (though she almost passed out after standing up too fast). Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami into going to Comiket again (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.).
** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine (though she almost passed out after standing up too fast). Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami into going to Comiket again (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.).
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* Kagami demonstrates her devotion to Konata in Chapter 2 when she comes very ''very'' close to punching Misao for speaking ill of her. Fortunately, Ayano was able to defuse the situation.
situation is quickly diffused after Misao apologizes.
** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lostmuch a lot of her Tsundere tendancies, tendencies, and Konata actually does her most of her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and she even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine (though she almost passed out after standing up too fast). Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami into going to Comiket again (referencing the famous scene in Episode 12 of the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.).lost).
** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost
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** Later, in Chapter 15, Miyuki returning the favor by taking care of Tsukasa, who is laid up in bed with her broken ankle.
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** Later, in Chapter 15, Miyuki returning the favor by taking care of Tsukasa, who is laid up in bed with her a broken ankle.
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* Kagami demonstrates her devotion to Konata in Chapter 2 when she comes very close to punching Misao for speaking ill of her. Fortunately, Ayano was able to diffuse defuse the situation.
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine (though she briefly blacked-out after standing up too fast). Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine (though she briefly blacked-out almost passed out after standing up too fast). Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket again (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)).
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** Later, in Chapter 15, Miyuki returns the favor by taking care of Tsukasa, who is laid up in bed with her broken ankle.
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** Later, in Chapter 15, Miyuki returns returning the favor by taking care of Tsukasa, who is laid up in bed with her broken ankle.
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine. Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine.shrine (though she briefly blacked-out after standing up too fast). Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)
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* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki decide that they can no longer hide their true feelings, and confess to each other.other without warning.
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* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki decide that they can no longer hide their true feelings, and confess to each other.
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* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki decide that they can no longer hide their true feelings, and confess to each other.other.
* In Chapter 13, Tsukasa staying with Miyuki as she undergoes laser eye surgery and taking care of her afterward.
** Later, in Chapter 15, Miyuki returns the favor by taking care of Tsukasa, who is laid up in bed with her broken ankle.
* In Chapter 13, Tsukasa staying with Miyuki as she undergoes laser eye surgery and taking care of her afterward.
** Later, in Chapter 15, Miyuki returns the favor by taking care of Tsukasa, who is laid up in bed with her broken ankle.
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* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki decide to that they can no longer hide their true feelings, and confess to each other.
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine. Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket (leading to the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine. Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket (leading to (referencing the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)
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* In Chapter 9, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. Making out ensues. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and faints, since her manga is now accurate.
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* In Chapter 9, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. Making out Hugging and kissing ensues. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and she faints, since her manga is now accurate.
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* In Chapter 6, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. Making out ensues. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and faints, since her manga is now accurate.
* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki suddenly, and without warning, confess to each other.
* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki suddenly, and without warning, confess to each other.
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* In Chapter 6, 9, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. Making out ensues. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and faints, since her manga is now accurate.
* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyukisuddenly, and without warning, decide to confess to each other.
* In Chapter 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki
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* In Chapter 7, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki suddenly, and without warning, confess to each other.
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* In Chapter 7, 11, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki suddenly, and without warning, confess to each other.
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine. Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami into going to Comiket (leading to the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out.)
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine. Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami (and Tsukasa) into going to Comiket (leading to the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out.out, and Tsukasa getting lost.)
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** Overall, Konata and Kagami act much more civil with each other. For one thing, Kagami has lost much of her Tsundere tendancies, and Konata actually does her own homework now instead of copying Kagami's. Also different is the fact that Konata doesn't seem to pull all-nighters anymore, and even gave blood at a Japanese Red Cross blood drive at the Hiiragi family's shrine. Naturally, though, some things haven't changed, such as Konata managing to shanghai Kagami into going to Comiket (leading to the famous scene in the actual anime in which Kagami finds some yaoi manga and gets freaked out.)
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* In Chapter 6, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. Making out ensues. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and faints, since her manga is now accurate.
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* In Chapter 5, Konata dedicates her song to Kagami, who she calls her [[TrueCompanions best friend in the whole universe]].
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* In Chapter 5, Konata dedicates her song to Kagami, who she calls her [[TrueCompanions best friend in the whole universe]].universe]].
* In Chapter 6, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and faints, since her manga is now accurate.
* In Chapter 7, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki suddenly, and without warning, confess to each other.
* In Chapter 6, Yutaka confesses to Minami, but immediately regrets doing so, thinking Minami hates her now. Fortunately for her, the latter was actually waiting for her to say that. In the next chapter, Minami rocks Yutaka to sleep in a rocking chair. Naturally, when news reaches Konata, Hiyori happens to be there, and faints, since her manga is now accurate.
* In Chapter 7, as Konata and Kagami are singing karaoke, and mid-song, Tsukasa and Miyuki suddenly, and without warning, confess to each other.
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* In Chapter 4, Yutaka's friends personally come over to the house to visit her. You see, she had come down with a nasty virus, and on that day her friends had planned a surprise 16th birthday party for her. So they eagerly moved the party to her house to cheer her up.
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* In Chapter 4, Yutaka's friends personally come over to the house to visit her. You see, she had come down with a nasty virus, virus (a potent combination of the common cold and influenza, as Miyuki puts it), and on that day her friends had planned a surprise 16th birthday party for her. So they eagerly moved the party to her house to cheer her up.
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''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' has no shortage of heartwarming moments.
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''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' has no shortage of heartwarming moments. For instance:
* In Chapter 4, Yutaka's friends personally come over to the house to visit her. You see, she had come down with a nasty virus, and on that day her friends had planned a surprise 16th birthday party for her. So they eagerly moved the party to her house to cheer her up.
* In Chapter 5, Konata dedicates her song to Kagami, who she calls her [[TrueCompanions best friend in the whole universe]].
* In Chapter 4, Yutaka's friends personally come over to the house to visit her. You see, she had come down with a nasty virus, and on that day her friends had planned a surprise 16th birthday party for her. So they eagerly moved the party to her house to cheer her up.
* In Chapter 5, Konata dedicates her song to Kagami, who she calls her [[TrueCompanions best friend in the whole universe]].
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''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' has no shortage of heartwarming moments.