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* Kirito finally meeting with Asuna [[spoiler:in Albion]] and the subsequent BigDamnKiss. The buildup and followup count as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}} respectively. It's best summed up in a single word: ''"SWITCH!"''
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* Kirito finally meeting with Asuna [[spoiler:in Albion]] in Albion and the subsequent BigDamnKiss. The buildup and followup count as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}} respectively. It's best summed up in a single word: ''"SWITCH!"''
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** She allows herself to feel parental concern and pride for her youngest daughter when discussing her mission to Tarbes, [[SoProudOfYou and congratulates her for successfully completing it]]. [[spoiler: The narration notes that she is torn between praising her for stepping up and killing the boss, and scolding her for doing something so dangerous.]]
* Yui greeting her parents as they disembark from the returning ships.[[spoiler: Just when it seems that they won't disembark, she sees them and ''runs'' to them. There's a flying [[TheGlomp glomp]] for her Mama, who embraces her just as tightly, and just as teary-eyed. Then her Papa hugs them both.]]
* Yui greeting her parents as they disembark from the returning ships.[[spoiler: Just when it seems that they won't disembark, she sees them and ''runs'' to them. There's a flying [[TheGlomp glomp]] for her Mama, who embraces her just as tightly, and just as teary-eyed. Then her Papa hugs them both.]]
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* Yui greeting her parents as they disembark from the returning ships.[[spoiler: Just when it seems that they won't disembark, she sees them and ''runs'' to them. There's a flying [[TheGlomp glomp]] for her Mama, who embraces her just as tightly, and just as teary-eyed. Then her Papa hugs them both.]]
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* Argo hugging Suisen after [[spoiler:the latter's blossoming, and the pixie-turned-mousegirl calling her [[UsefulNotes/JapaneseSiblingTerminology Nee-chan]]]].
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* Argo hugging Suisen after [[spoiler:the the latter's blossoming, and the pixie-turned-mousegirl calling her [[UsefulNotes/JapaneseSiblingTerminology Nee-chan]]]].Nee-chan]].
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* Mortimer works feverishly to find [[spoiler: Sakuya's kidnappers]] and then insists on leading the unit to the likely location despite fatigue and injuries from [[spoiler: his own assassination attempt]]. He doesn't relax until she's safe with the soldiers. Then he collapses in her arms. Her following UnbrokenVigil and thoughts during are also sweet.
* Henrietta's relief upon seeing Sakuya [[spoiler: saved from her kidnappers]]. It goes to show that Henrietta truly considers Sakuya to be a close friend.
* It's a mild one to be sure but [[spoiler: Kayaba Akihiko doesn't seem to mind Yui referring to him as "grandfather" and the first thing he does in the story is save her life.]]
* Henrietta's relief upon seeing Sakuya [[spoiler: saved from her kidnappers]]. It goes to show that Henrietta truly considers Sakuya to be a close friend.
* It's a mild one to be sure but [[spoiler: Kayaba Akihiko doesn't seem to mind Yui referring to him as "grandfather" and the first thing he does in the story is save her life.]]
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* Mortimer works feverishly to find [[spoiler: Sakuya's kidnappers]] kidnappers and then insists on leading the unit to the likely location despite fatigue and injuries from [[spoiler: his own assassination attempt]].attempt. He doesn't relax until she's safe with the soldiers. Then he collapses in her arms. Her following UnbrokenVigil and thoughts during are also sweet.
* Henrietta's relief upon seeing Sakuya[[spoiler: saved from her kidnappers]].kidnappers. It goes to show that Henrietta truly considers Sakuya to be a close friend.
* It's a mild one to be sure but[[spoiler: Kayaba Akihiko doesn't seem to mind Yui referring to him as "grandfather" and the first thing he does in the story is save her life.]]
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* The Korutaka showing Morgiana that they still support her after she [[spoiler:announces her pregnancy and drops her "Big Sis" persona.]]
* [[spoiler:Eugene and Morgiana's wedding.]]
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* Eugene and Morgiana talking outside the Kirigaya's home at the start of the third arc. The two of them exchange their real names and commit to at least trying to [[spoiler: make a marriage work.]]
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* The Korutaka showing Morgiana that they still support her after she[[spoiler:announces announces her pregnancy and drops her "Big Sis" persona.]]
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* An [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]]]] is this and a little TearJerker.
* [[spoiler:Solomon 'recreating' the djinn that saved Baladene, and her subsequent reaction.]]
** [[spoiler:Yui giving Bardiche a peck on the cheek for his bravery in the battle with Octavia.]]
* [[spoiler:Solomon 'recreating' the djinn that saved Baladene, and her subsequent reaction.]]
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* An [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]]]] Kiss]] is this and a little TearJerker.
*[[spoiler:Solomon Solomon 'recreating' the djinn that saved Baladene, and her subsequent reaction.]]
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* Ch 53 of V.20 focuses on Yui's trip to the Arrun Central Library. Between her impatience in how slow her Aunt and chaperone is, childish delight of books, and just the sight of her walking with Leafa, she is absolutely darling. We also get to see Arrun on a peaceful day, after the shock of the Transition as ended and the shadow of the serial killer is gone.
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* Ch 53 of V.20 focuses on Yui's trip to the Arrun Central Library. Between her impatience in how slow her Aunt and chaperone is, childish delight of books, and just the sight of her walking with Leafa, she is absolutely darling. We also get to see Arrun on a peaceful day, after the shock of the Transition as has ended and the shadow of the serial killer is gone.
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* Montmorency and Guiche chatting before the Royal Gala.
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* Montmorency and Guiche chatting before the Royal Gala.Gala shows depth to their relationship. Guiche is honestly confused about his relationship with "Midori" and Montmorency helps him through it, supporting him with kindness and not once getting jealous.
* Mortimer works feverishly to find [[spoiler: Sakuya's kidnappers]] and then insists on leading the unit to the likely location despite fatigue and injuries from [[spoiler: his own assassination attempt]]. He doesn't relax until she's safe with the soldiers. Then he collapses in her arms. Her following UnbrokenVigil and thoughts during are also sweet.
* Mortimer works feverishly to find [[spoiler: Sakuya's kidnappers]] and then insists on leading the unit to the likely location despite fatigue and injuries from [[spoiler: his own assassination attempt]]. He doesn't relax until she's safe with the soldiers. Then he collapses in her arms. Her following UnbrokenVigil and thoughts during are also sweet.
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* Kirito finally meeting with Asuna [[spoiler:in Albion]] and the subsequent BigDamnKiss. The buildup and followup count as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfFunny respectively. It's best summed up in a single word: ''"SWITCH!"''
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* Kirito finally meeting with Asuna [[spoiler:in Albion]] and the subsequent BigDamnKiss. The buildup and followup count as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfFunny SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}} respectively. It's best summed up in a single word: ''"SWITCH!"''
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** Asuna sleeping peacefully in a rocking chair, with Yui curled up beside her.
** Kirito and Klein just sitting on the porch, drinks in hand, simply sharing idle chatter, laughing at an off-color joke, or just a comfortable silence... Just being a couple guys, no battles, no disasters, just... peace. [[note]]Quoted after Retsof; Post #3717, 6th thread.[[/note]]
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** She acts like "a school girl" when her [[HappilyMarried her husband nurses her and shows concern for her]].
** She allows herself to feel parental concern and pride for her youngest daughter when discussing her mission to Tarbes, [[SoProudOfYou and congratulates her for successfully completing it]]. [[spoiler: The narration notes that she is torn between praising her for stepping up and killing the boss, and scolding her for doing something so dangerous.]]
* Yui greeting her parents as they disembark from the returningships.
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* Asuna sleeping peacefully in a rocking chair, with Yui curled up beside her.
** * Kirito and Klein just sitting on the porch, drinks in hand, simply sharing idle chatter, laughing at an off-color joke, or just a comfortable silence... Just being a couple guys, no battles, no disasters, just... peace. [[note]]Quoted after Retsof; Post #3717, 6th thread.[[/note]]
** She allows herself to feel parental concern and pride for her youngest daughter when discussing her mission to Tarbes, [[SoProudOfYou and congratulates her for successfully completing it]]. [[spoiler: The narration notes that she is torn between praising her for stepping up and killing the boss, and scolding her for doing something so dangerous.]]
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* Kirito finally meeting with Asuna [[spoiler:in Albion]] and the subsequent BigDamnKiss. The buildup and followup count as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfFunny respectively. Best It's best summed up in a single word: ''"SWITCH!"''''"SWITCH!"''
**Once they are safely behind Newcastle's walls, they get a more mellow scene. After the adrenaline passes, they can fully soak up the fact that they are together again, and simply enjoy the others' presence.
**Once they are safely behind Newcastle's walls, they get a more mellow scene. After the adrenaline passes, they can fully soak up the fact that they are together again, and simply enjoy the others' presence.
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* Asuna and Suguha's conversation.
* More of a TearJerker, but the funeral held by Carmella and Kino.
* Asuna and Suguha's conversation.
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*Louise and Henrietta playing a game of poker in the former's boarding room (just before the Tarbes arc). The stakes are cupcakes from the academy's kitchen. It's such a warm and friendly scene, and the contrast with [[IneptMage the usual events]] [[TheChainsOfCommand of their lives]] underscores how much each treasures these moments.
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* Argo hugging Suisen after [[spoiler:the latter's blossoming, and the pixie-turned-mousegirl calling her [[JapaneseSiblingTerminology Nee-chan]]]].
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* Seven year old orphan Pippin clutching a raggedy gray kitten doll to her chest is pure D'awwww.
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* Tiffania proves her maternal mettle by not backing down until Shiori accepts a Hug o' Healing.
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* Yuuki planning what she wants to do now that she has a life to look forward to. Most of those are simple things too, like making snow angels and going to a dance. Then Silica helps her realize she can have a home, a family, and a future...
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* Yuuki planning what she wants to do now that she has a life to look forward to. Most of those are simple things too, like making snow angels and going to a dance. Then Silica helps her realize come to the bittersweet realization she can have a home, a family, and a future...
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-->She'd almost forgotten . . . those were things she could have now too, in this sadly happy horribly wonderful world.
-->She'd almost forgotten . . . those were things she could have now too, in this sadly happy horribly wonderful world.
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* Seven year old orphan Pippin clutching a raggedy gray kitten doll to her chest is pure D'awwww.
* Seven year old orphan Pippin clutching a raggedy gray kitten doll to her chest is pure D'awwww.
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** [[spoiler:Yui giving Bardiche a peck on the cheek for his bravery in the battle with Octavia.]]
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* Yuuki planning what she wants to do now that she has a life to look forward to. Most of those are simple things too, like making snow angels and going to a dance.
* Yuuki planning what she wants to do now that she has a life to look forward to. Most of those are simple things too, like making snow angels and going to a dance.
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* An [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]]]] is this and a little TearJerker.
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* An [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]]]] is this and a little TearJerker.TearJerker.
* [[spoiler:Solomon 'recreating' the djinn that saved Baladene, and her subsequent reaction.]]
** [[spoiler:Yui giving Bardiche a peck on the cheek for his bravery in the battle with Octavia.]]
* [[spoiler:Solomon 'recreating' the djinn that saved Baladene, and her subsequent reaction.]]
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-->“Please, Miss Montmorency, the gulf between two people is never so great for that to be true. Struggles great and small can mean the same thing through different eyes.” The Prince touched Suguha's shoulder gently and squeezed.
-->“Please, Miss Montmorency, the gulf between two people is never so great for that to be true. Struggles great and small can mean the same thing through different eyes.” The Prince touched Suguha's shoulder gently and squeezed.
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* An [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]].]] is this and a little TearJerker.
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* An [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]].]] Kiss]]]] is this and a little TearJerker.
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* An omake but still, on Page 117 of Thread 21 it's this and a little TearJerker. [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]].]]
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* An omake [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-thread-21-beach-episode.5815/page-117#post-1525022 omake]] but still, on Page 117 of Thread 21 it's this and a little TearJerker. [[spoiler: Sakuya giving a cracking Mortimer a [[CoolDownHug Cool Down Kiss]].]]]] is this and a little TearJerker.
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* After a Djinn calls Asuna Titania, she has a short HeroicBSOD, and seeks Argo's knowledge on the lore regarding the Fae queen. They find that Titania had been originally written as a strong-willed Yamato Nandeshiko, but got retconned by Sugou into an extreme doormat that would give herself to Oberon for the slightest favour. However, it turns out the Djinni still remember the original lore.
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* After a Djinn calls Asuna Titania, she has a short HeroicBSOD, and seeks Argo's knowledge on the lore regarding the Fae queen. They find that Titania had been originally written as a strong-willed Yamato Nandeshiko, YamatoNadeshiko, but got retconned by Sugou into an extreme doormat that would give herself to Oberon for the slightest favour. However, it turns out the Djinni still remember the original lore.
