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* Mercury is essentially alone in an unknown world, fighting for her very soul, and separated from friends and family alike. Her only contact is to scry on her loved ones at home and communicate with them via morse code. Despite not having any substantial contact with them for month, her friends still throw a party for her at her birthday so she can attend at least look at her friend having a good time on her behalf.
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* Mercury is essentially alone in an unknown world, fighting for her very soul, and separated from friends and family alike. Her only contact is to scry on her loved ones at home and communicate with them via morse code. Despite not having any substantial contact with them for month, months, her friends still throw a party for her at on her birthday birthday, so she can attend at least look at her friend friends having a good time on her behalf.
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* Jadeite goes to whatever lengths are needed to retrieve Ami from Azzathra and the Unraveller. On the one hand, it could be interpreted as a practical matter, since she provides him with valuable resources and influence. On the other hand, it's pretty clear that he really just can't stand to lose her.
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* Jadeite goes to whatever lengths are needed to retrieve Ami from Azzathra Crowned Death and the Unraveller. On the one hand, it could be interpreted as a practical matter, since she provides him with valuable resources and influence. On the other hand, it's pretty clear that he really just can't stand to lose her.
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* As of ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355812 Family Matters]]'', the complicated relationship of Tiger, Ami and Mrs. Mizuno is finally resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Namely - Tiger is now oficially Ami's 'older and bolder sibling' accepted by her Mom and engaging in traditional older sibling behavior. Awwwww!
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* As of ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355812 Family Matters]]'', the complicated relationship of Tiger, Ami and Mrs. Mizuno is finally resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Namely - Tiger is now oficially officially Ami's 'older and bolder sibling' accepted by her Mom and engaging in traditional older sibling behavior. Awwwww!Awwwww!
* Jadeite goes to whatever lengths are needed to retrieve Ami from Azzathra and the Unraveller. On the one hand, it could be interpreted as a practical matter, since she provides him with valuable resources and influence. On the other hand, it's pretty clear that he really just can't stand to lose her.
* Jadeite goes to whatever lengths are needed to retrieve Ami from Azzathra and the Unraveller. On the one hand, it could be interpreted as a practical matter, since she provides him with valuable resources and influence. On the other hand, it's pretty clear that he really just can't stand to lose her.
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* As of [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/250468.html DKA: Family Matters]] chapter, the complicated relationship of Tiger, Ami and Mrs. Mizuno is finally resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Namely - Tiger is now oficially Ami's 'older and bolder sibling' accepted by her Mom and engaging in traditional older sibling behavior. Awwwww!
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* As of [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/250468.html DKA: ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355812 Family Matters]] chapter, Matters]]'', the complicated relationship of Tiger, Ami and Mrs. Mizuno is finally resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Namely - Tiger is now oficially Ami's 'older and bolder sibling' accepted by her Mom and engaging in traditional older sibling behavior. Awwwww!Awwwww!
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* Mercury is essentially alone in an unknown world, fighting for her very soul, and separated from friends and family alike. Her only contact is to scry on her loved ones at home and communicate with them via morse code. Despite not having any substantial contact with them for month, her friends still throw a party for her at her birthday so she can attend at least look at her friend having a good time on her behalf.
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* Mercury is essentially alone in an unknown world, fighting for her very soul, and separated from friends and family alike. Her only contact is to scry on her loved ones at home and communicate with them via morse code. Despite not having any substantial contact with them for month, her friends still throw a party for her at her birthday so she can attend at least look at her friend having a good time on her behalf.behalf.
*As of [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/250468.html DKA: Family Matters]] chapter, the complicated relationship of Tiger, Ami and Mrs. Mizuno is finally resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Namely - Tiger is now oficially Ami's 'older and bolder sibling' accepted by her Mom and engaging in traditional older sibling behavior. Awwwww!
*As of [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/250468.html DKA: Family Matters]] chapter, the complicated relationship of Tiger, Ami and Mrs. Mizuno is finally resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Namely - Tiger is now oficially Ami's 'older and bolder sibling' accepted by her Mom and engaging in traditional older sibling behavior. Awwwww!
