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Reread it, and realised it said "Several" and not "Seven". Sorry about that
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* Three times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert says he's fed up and draws the gun), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Three Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert says he's fed up and draws the gun), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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You only visit NYC three times
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert says he's fed up and draws the gun), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Several Three times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert says he's fed up and draws the gun), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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-->'''JC Denton:''' What becomes of me?
-->'''Helios:''' You will be who you will be. We are our choices.
-->'''Helios:''' You will be who you will be. We are our choices.
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-->'''JC Denton:''' [[WhatHaveIBecome What becomes of me?
me?]]
-->'''Helios:''' [[IAmWhatIAm You will be who you willbe.be]]. We are our choices.
-->'''Helios:''' [[IAmWhatIAm You will be who you will
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* If you go for the Helios ending, the blunt, demanding, and somewhat creepy AI still takes a moment to reassure JC [[spoiler: before their MentalFusion]].
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* If you go for the [[spoiler: Helios ending, ending]], the blunt, demanding, and somewhat creepy AI still takes a moment to reassure JC [[spoiler: before their MentalFusion]].
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* Talking to the various people on the street (mostly bums and sick people) mainly serves to illustrate [[CrapsackWorld how bad the situation is]]. It can yield some nice moments as well, ranging from a child grateful for receiving something to eat to a sick woman who, while initially dismissive, ultimately thanks you for keeping her company.
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* Talking to the various people on the street (mostly bums and sick people) mainly serves to illustrate [[CrapsackWorld how bad the situation is]]. It can yield some nice moments as well, ranging from a child grateful for receiving something to eat to a sick woman who, while initially dismissive, ultimately thanks you for keeping her company.company.
* If you go for the Helios ending, the blunt, demanding, and somewhat creepy AI still takes a moment to reassure JC [[spoiler: before their MentalFusion]].
-->'''JC Denton:''' What becomes of me?
-->'''Helios:''' You will be who you will be. We are our choices.
* If you go for the Helios ending, the blunt, demanding, and somewhat creepy AI still takes a moment to reassure JC [[spoiler: before their MentalFusion]].
-->'''JC Denton:''' What becomes of me?
-->'''Helios:''' You will be who you will be. We are our choices.
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* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a forgotten virtue like honesty is worth at least 20 credits."
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* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the The option to give her money, stating that "a the money results in [=JC=] commenting, "A forgotten virtue like honesty is worth at least 20 credits.twenty credits".
* In Paris, the player can meet a homeless woman who owns plenty of cats, and is mourning the deaths of some of them after some greasels snuck into the area and killed them. When talked to, she requests that [=JC=] kills the greasels in the sewers. Upon doing so, JC says, "Nothing can bring back their victims, but the threat is gone."
* In Paris, the player can meet a homeless woman who owns plenty of cats, and is mourning the deaths of some of them after some greasels snuck into the area and killed them. When talked to, she requests that [=JC=] kills the greasels in the sewers. Upon doing so, JC says, "Nothing can bring back their victims, but the threat is gone."
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** Even better, [[spoiler: your brother survives up to the events of Invisible War, meaning the player character canonically chose to rescue him in the prequel of IW.]]
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* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a forgotten virtue like honesty is worth at least 20 credits."
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* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a forgotten virtue like honesty is worth at least 20 credits.""
* Talking to the various people on the street (mostly bums and sick people) mainly serves to illustrate [[CrapsackWorld how bad the situation is]]. It can yield some nice moments as well, ranging from a child grateful for receiving something to eat to a sick woman who, while initially dismissive, ultimately thanks you for keeping her company.
* Talking to the various people on the street (mostly bums and sick people) mainly serves to illustrate [[CrapsackWorld how bad the situation is]]. It can yield some nice moments as well, ranging from a child grateful for receiving something to eat to a sick woman who, while initially dismissive, ultimately thanks you for keeping her company.
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Actually, I blew Jojo away in one shot with my shotty without Gil even firing before Jojo hit the ground, and it still flagged.
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert lands the final blow), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert lands says he's fed up and draws the final blow), gun), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a forgotten virtue like honesty is worth at least 20 credits."
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* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a lost forgotten virtue like honesty is worth 20 credits."
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert lands the final blow), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert lands the final blow), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.daughter.
* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a lost virtue like honesty is worth 20 credits."
* You might encounter a beggar near the hotel in Hong Kong asking for 20 credits. You ask her what she want to do with the money and she'll admit it's for drugs. You have the option to give her money, stating that "a lost virtue like honesty is worth 20 credits."
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help, and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help, help (for a certain value of obvious - you're good as long as Gilbert lands the final blow), and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father who struggles to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter, who ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help, and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father who struggles struggling to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter, who daughter. The girl ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help, and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
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-->'''Paul Denton:''' I'm much better. Yes. I'm going to make it - and you will, too. Just do what you think is right.
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-->'''Paul Denton:''' I'm much better. Yes. I'm going to make it - and you will, too. Just do what you think is right.right.
* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father who struggles to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter, who ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help, and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
* Several times in the story you visit 'Ton Hotel, run by Gilbert Renton, an old friend of the Denton brothers and a father who struggles to protect his rebellious, estranged daughter, who ultimately brings in Jojo, a street thug who treats the whole place (not to mention her) as his own. Unsurprisingly Gilbert [[GiveMeASword asks you for a gun]] to protect her. If you can do it in such a way that he kills Jojo, without obvious help, and both Rentons survive, he finally earns the respect of his daughter.
