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* Maxima enjoys the meditation sessions and discovers she has a [[HiddenDepths talent for sculpture]].
** The very fact that the Academy values its trainees' emotional and spiritual welfare as much as their physical prowess, as well as encouraging them to develop their artistic abilities.
** The very fact that the Academy values its trainees' emotional and spiritual welfare as much as their physical prowess, as well as encouraging them to develop their artistic abilities.
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* Maxima enjoys the meditation sessions and discovers she has a [[HiddenDepths talent for sculpture]].
**sculpture]]. The very fact that the Academy values its trainees' emotional and spiritual welfare as much as their physical prowess, as well as encouraging them to develop their artistic abilities.
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* This story brings back Luma Lynai, a Pre-Crisis character who, in canon, wasn’t brought back in Post-Crisis times by the time the fic was written (later on, Creator/GrantMorrison brought her back to canon in ''ComicBook/TheGreenLantern'').
* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter (by then BrainwashedAndCrazy) in canon, [[SparedByAdaptation is alive and well here]], portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
* In a ComicBook/DCRebirth ''ComicBook/{{Superwoman}}'' issue, Maxima complains about not having a girlfriend. Here, she is paired with Luma in the second epilogue.
** Thankfully, by May 2020, Maxima did find a girlfriend in the comics, too: [[https://dc.fandom.com/wiki/Primaa_(Prime_Earth) Primaa]], a rebel from Almerac.
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* This story brings back Luma Lynai, a Pre-Crisis character who, in canon, wasn’t brought back in Post-Crisis times.
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* This story brings back Luma Lynai, a Pre-Crisis character who, in canon, wasn’t brought back in Post-Crisis times.times by the time the fic was written (later on, Creator/GrantMorrison brought her back to canon in ''ComicBook/TheGreenLantern'').
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** Thankfully, by May 2020, Maxima did find a girlfriend in the comics, too: [[https://dc.fandom.com/wiki/Primaa_(Prime_Earth) Primaa]], a rebel from Almerac.
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** The very fact that the Academy values its trainees' emotional and spritiual welfare as much as their physical prowess, as well as encouraging them to develop their artistic abilities.
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** The very fact that the Academy values its trainees' emotional and spritiual spiritual welfare as much as their physical prowess, as well as encouraging them to develop their artistic abilities.
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* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on Lana’s relationship with Clark.
* Lana is the first person to whom Maxima comes out of the closet. More than this, she feels positively inspired by Lana’s bravery and decides to fully embrace her homosexuality, refusing to bow to other’s expectations.
* Lana is the first person to whom Maxima comes out of the closet. More than this, she feels positively inspired by Lana’s bravery and decides to fully embrace her homosexuality, refusing to bow to other’s expectations.
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* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation.conversation, during which the latter's voice intonation [[TookALevelInKindness gets softer than usual]]. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on Lana’s relationship with Clark.
* Lana is the first person to whom Maxima comes out of the closet. More than this, she feels positively inspired by Lana’s bravery and decides to [[BeYourself fully embrace herhomosexuality, homosexuality]], refusing to bow keep bowing to other’s other people’s expectations.
* Lana is the first person to whom Maxima comes out of the closet. More than this, she feels positively inspired by Lana’s bravery and decides to [[BeYourself fully embrace her
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** The very fact that the Academy values its trainees' emotional and spritiual welfare as much as their physical prowess, as well as encouraging them to develop their artistic abilities.
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* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter (by then BrainwashedAndCrazy) in canon, is alive and well here, portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
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* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter (by then BrainwashedAndCrazy) in canon, [[SparedByAdaptation is alive and well here, here]], portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
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* As promised, the Academy’s headmistress Lys Amata welcomes Maxima when the latter decides to join the Academy, sometime after she’d declined the first invitation.
* Disowned by her family, Maxima finds a ParentalSubstitute in the instructor Lyrissa Mallor.
* Disowned by her family, Maxima finds a ParentalSubstitute in the instructor Lyrissa Mallor.
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* As promised, When Maxima declines the Academy’s first invitation to join the Crucible Academy, its headmistress Lys Amata welcomes says that Maxima when the latter will be welcome anytime if she changes her mind. When Maxima eventaually decides to join the Academy, sometime after she’d declined the first invitation.join, Amata keeps her promise and welcomes Maxima.
* Disowned by her family, Maxima finds a true home at the Academy, having a ParentalSubstitute in the instructor Lyrissa Mallor.
* Disowned by her family, Maxima finds a true home at the Academy, having a ParentalSubstitute in the instructor Lyrissa Mallor.
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* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter in canon, is alive and well here, portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
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* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter (by then BrainwashedAndCrazy) in canon, is alive and well here, portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
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* Then, they had to cooperate in order to escape, and they got along pretty well. Maxima is very protective to Lana, ordering the latter to be right behind her in order to be protected by Maxima’s psychokinetic force-field. She even hands Lana the [[RayGun laser gun]] she takes from one of Vernax’s robot guards– and compliments Lana’s aim when she hits the other robot. Once they’re out of the spaceship, she orders Lana to flee, once again priorizing the latter’s safety. She allows Lana to carry the laser gun with her, just in case.
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* Then, they had to cooperate in order to escape, and they got along pretty well. Maxima is very protective to Lana, ordering the latter to be right behind her in order to be protected by Maxima’s psychokinetic force-field. She even hands Lana the [[RayGun laser gun]] she takes from one of Vernax’s robot guards– and compliments Lana’s aim when she hits the other robot. Once they’re out of the spaceship, she orders Lana to flee, once again priorizing the latter’s safety. She allows Lana to carry the laser gun with her, just in case.case she needs it to self-defense.
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* Doubling as Tear Jerker, Maxima [[PietaPlagiarism is in tears when she carries a wounded Lana in her arms]]. And she does her best to save Lana’s life.
* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on Clark’s relationship with Lana.
* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on Clark’s relationship with Lana.
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* Doubling as Tear Jerker, TearJerker, Maxima [[PietaPlagiarism is in tears when she carries a wounded Lana in her arms]]. And she does her best to save Lana’s life.
* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere onClark’s Lana’s relationship with Lana.Clark.
* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on
* Lana wishes that Maxima finds a worthy girlfriend. Maxima, in turn, says she'll be glad [[LesYay if that girlfriend has Lana's qualities]].
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* In a DC Rebirth Superwoman issue, Maxima complains about not having a girlfriend. Here, she is paired with Luma in the second epilogue.
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* In a DC Rebirth Superwoman ComicBook/DCRebirth ''ComicBook/{{Superwoman}}'' issue, Maxima complains about not having a girlfriend. Here, she is paired with Luma in the second epilogue.
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[[folder:Clark and Lana]]
They are a HappilyMarried couple here, and they show true love and concern toward each other.
* When Maxima gives Lana a NeckLift, Clark immediately rushes to release his wife.
* Clark rebuffs Maxima’s attempts to convince him to be her consort. Even when the princess suggests an open relationship, willing to let Lana come to Almerac too, Clark adamantly refuses, stating to be monogamous.
* After Lana recovers from the virus infection, she and Clark hug and kiss each other.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maxima and Lana]]
Despite having, initially, a mutual hostility toward each other, Maxima and Lana [[FireForgedFriends developed a true bond during their escape from Vernax’s spaceship]].
* Even ''before'' Maxima properly emotes to Lana, she was still [[EveryoneHasStandards unwilling to]] [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind leave her behind]], including Lana in her escape plans.
* Then, they had to cooperate in order to escape, and they got along pretty well. Maxima is very protective to Lana, ordering the latter to be right behind her in order to be protected by Maxima’s psychokinetic force-field. She even hands Lana the [[RayGun laser gun]] she takes from one of Vernax’s robot guards– and compliments Lana’s aim when she hits the other robot. Once they’re out of the spaceship, she orders Lana to flee, once again priorizing the latter’s safety. She allows Lana to carry the laser gun with her, just in case.
* Lana, on her turn, uses the laser gun to distract Vernax and save Maxima from his [[AgonyBeam neural disruptor]].
* Seeing Lana hurt fuels Maxima’s HeroicSecondWind (and [[BerserkButton rage]]) against Vernax.
* Doubling as Tear Jerker, Maxima [[PietaPlagiarism is in tears when she carries a wounded Lana in her arms]]. And she does her best to save Lana’s life.
* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on Clark’s relationship with Lana.
* Lana is the first person to whom Maxima comes out of the closet. More than this, she feels positively inspired by Lana’s bravery and decides to fully embrace her homosexuality, refusing to bow to other’s expectations.
* Before Maxima leaves Earth, she and Lana share an affectionate hug.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maxima and the Crucible Academy]]
* As promised, the Academy’s headmistress Lys Amata welcomes Maxima when the latter decides to join the Academy, sometime after she’d declined the first invitation.
* Disowned by her family, Maxima finds a ParentalSubstitute in the instructor Lyrissa Mallor.
* Maxima enjoys the meditation sessions and discovers she has a [[HiddenDepths talent for sculpture]].
* She eventually finds a girlfriend there: Luma Lynai. In the story’s last scene, they share a passionate kiss.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Meta]]
* This story brings back Luma Lynai, a Pre-Crisis character who, in canon, wasn’t brought back in Post-Crisis times.
* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter in canon, is alive and well here, portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
* In a DC Rebirth Superwoman issue, Maxima complains about not having a girlfriend. Here, she is paired with Luma in the second epilogue.
[[/folder]]
Spoilers are unmarked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder:Clark and Lana]]
They are a HappilyMarried couple here, and they show true love and concern toward each other.
* When Maxima gives Lana a NeckLift, Clark immediately rushes to release his wife.
* Clark rebuffs Maxima’s attempts to convince him to be her consort. Even when the princess suggests an open relationship, willing to let Lana come to Almerac too, Clark adamantly refuses, stating to be monogamous.
* After Lana recovers from the virus infection, she and Clark hug and kiss each other.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maxima and Lana]]
Despite having, initially, a mutual hostility toward each other, Maxima and Lana [[FireForgedFriends developed a true bond during their escape from Vernax’s spaceship]].
* Even ''before'' Maxima properly emotes to Lana, she was still [[EveryoneHasStandards unwilling to]] [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind leave her behind]], including Lana in her escape plans.
* Then, they had to cooperate in order to escape, and they got along pretty well. Maxima is very protective to Lana, ordering the latter to be right behind her in order to be protected by Maxima’s psychokinetic force-field. She even hands Lana the [[RayGun laser gun]] she takes from one of Vernax’s robot guards– and compliments Lana’s aim when she hits the other robot. Once they’re out of the spaceship, she orders Lana to flee, once again priorizing the latter’s safety. She allows Lana to carry the laser gun with her, just in case.
* Lana, on her turn, uses the laser gun to distract Vernax and save Maxima from his [[AgonyBeam neural disruptor]].
* Seeing Lana hurt fuels Maxima’s HeroicSecondWind (and [[BerserkButton rage]]) against Vernax.
* Doubling as Tear Jerker, Maxima [[PietaPlagiarism is in tears when she carries a wounded Lana in her arms]]. And she does her best to save Lana’s life.
* After Lana recovers, she and Maxima have an affectionate conversation. Lana thanks Maxima for the life-saving and Maxima apologizes for trying to interfere on Clark’s relationship with Lana.
* Lana is the first person to whom Maxima comes out of the closet. More than this, she feels positively inspired by Lana’s bravery and decides to fully embrace her homosexuality, refusing to bow to other’s expectations.
* Before Maxima leaves Earth, she and Lana share an affectionate hug.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maxima and the Crucible Academy]]
* As promised, the Academy’s headmistress Lys Amata welcomes Maxima when the latter decides to join the Academy, sometime after she’d declined the first invitation.
* Disowned by her family, Maxima finds a ParentalSubstitute in the instructor Lyrissa Mallor.
* Maxima enjoys the meditation sessions and discovers she has a [[HiddenDepths talent for sculpture]].
* She eventually finds a girlfriend there: Luma Lynai. In the story’s last scene, they share a passionate kiss.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Meta]]
* This story brings back Luma Lynai, a Pre-Crisis character who, in canon, wasn’t brought back in Post-Crisis times.
* Lyrissa Mallor, who was killed by her own daughter in canon, is alive and well here, portrayed as an instructor of the Crucible Academy and a ParentalSubstitute to Maxima.
* In a DC Rebirth Superwoman issue, Maxima complains about not having a girlfriend. Here, she is paired with Luma in the second epilogue.
[[/folder]]
