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* In chapter 10 we need the result of all the situations Naru's been put through. She takes her frustration out on Usagi, blaming her for not being there when she needed her. In perhaps the best form of redemption, Warrior's Moon and Jupiter blast a hole in Experiment-D-U-D. Naru then thanks Warrior Moon for being there to save her (again), Moon then unmasks and tells Naru she'll always be there to protect her. The two hug and the moment even makes Makoto get teary eyed.
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* In chapter 10 we need the result of 10, after Naru blames Usagi for all the situations Naru's been put through. She takes bad things that have happened to her frustration out on Usagi, blaming and she forced to face her for not being there when she needed her. In perhaps the best form of redemption, Warrior's rapist. Moon and Jupiter blast a hole in Experiment-D-U-D. destroy two clones of Experiment-D-U-D and Naru then thanks Warrior Moon for being there to save saving her (again), again. Moon then unmasks and tells responds by telling Naru she'll always be there for her because she doesn't turn her back on a friend. Warrior Moon then removes her mask, revealing her identity to protect her. Naru. The two hug and the moment even makes Makoto get teary eyed.brings tears to Warrior Jupiter's eyes.
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** Just a short bit later in the same chapter Usagi cries at Naru's bedside and tells her about Luna and being a Cosmic Warrior, it's a touching unloading of all Usagi has been faced with.
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** Just a short bit later in the same chapter Usagi cries at Naru's bedside and tells her about Luna and being a Cosmic Warrior, it's a touching unloading of all Usagi has been faced with.with.
* In chapter 10 we need the result of all the situations Naru's been put through. She takes her frustration out on Usagi, blaming her for not being there when she needed her. In perhaps the best form of redemption, Warrior's Moon and Jupiter blast a hole in Experiment-D-U-D. Naru then thanks Warrior Moon for being there to save her (again), Moon then unmasks and tells Naru she'll always be there to protect her. The two hug and the moment even makes Makoto get teary eyed.
* In chapter 10 we need the result of all the situations Naru's been put through. She takes her frustration out on Usagi, blaming her for not being there when she needed her. In perhaps the best form of redemption, Warrior's Moon and Jupiter blast a hole in Experiment-D-U-D. Naru then thanks Warrior Moon for being there to save her (again), Moon then unmasks and tells Naru she'll always be there to protect her. The two hug and the moment even makes Makoto get teary eyed.
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* Chapter 2: Once the battle between Experiment-D-U-D, Warrior Moon, and Tuxedo Mask is over, Usagi wakes up an unconscious Naru telling her the police are there. Naru wakes up and hugs "her tighter than she ever had before."
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**Just a short bit later in the same chapter Usagi cries at Naru's bedside and tells her about Luna and being a Cosmic Warrior, it's a touching unloading of all Usagi has been faced with.
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* Chapter 2: Once the battle between Experiment-D-U-D, Warrior Moon, and Tuxedo Mask is over, Usagi wakes up an unconscious Naru telling her the police are there. Naru wakes up and hugs "her tighter than she ever had before."
