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** [[spoiler:Ratchet also reassuring the Autobot leader that Annabelle is not in any life-threatening situation.]]
* In Chapter 23, [[spoiler:the Autobots being informed that Annabelle has woken up.]]
* In Chapter 23, [[spoiler:the Autobots being informed that Annabelle has woken up.]]
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* In Chapter 6, Ironhide and Chromia showing concern when they hear that the teenagers have kidnapped Annabelle and the other children.
* Sam comforting Mikaela when she's worried about where Wheelie is.
* Izabella recognizing the Autobots' heroics and asking Wheelie to introduce her to Chromia and Ironhide.
* In Chapter 6, Ironhide and Chromia showing concern when they hear that the teenagers have kidnapped Annabelle and the other children.
* Sam comforting Mikaela when she's worried about where Wheelie is.
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* In Chapter 3, Annabelle successfully convinces the other children that Wheelie isn't dangerous and they become more interested in him.
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* What is it that drives Annabelle to lead the other kids to attack the teenagers? Tommy calling Ironhide and Chromia evil.
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* In Chpater 10, [[spoiler:after treating Ironhide's injuries, Ratchet assures him that Annabelle is unharmed and wants to speak with him. He then allows the two to speak privately.]]
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* After Annabelle and Optimus Prime's conversation, the child acknowledges that the Autobot leader is very busy and Optimus replies with this:
-->'''Optimus Prime:''' Never too busy to have a very enlightening conversation with such a bright child.
-->'''Optimus Prime:''' Never too busy to have a very enlightening conversation with such a bright child.
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* In Chpater 10, [[spoiler:after treating Ironhide's injuries, Ratchet assures him that Annabelle is unharmed and wants to speak with him. He then allows the two to speak privately.]]
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* [[spoiler: In Chapter 21, Sam's proposal to Mikaela and the Autobots are there to witness it]].
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* [[spoiler: In Chapter 21, Sam's [[spoiler:Sam's proposal to Mikaela and the Autobots are there to witness it]].
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* In Chapter 22, [[spoiler:as soon as the fight with Sentinel and Megatron is over, Optimus quickly searches for the human who tried to take on Sentinel, Annabelle Lennox, and gently picks her up to get her medical treatment.]]
* In Chapter 22, [[spoiler:as soon as the fight with Sentinel and Megatron is over, Optimus quickly searches for the human who tried to take on Sentinel, Annabelle Lennox, and gently picks her up to get her medical treatment.]]
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* In Chapter 3, Annabelle successfully convinces the other children that Wheelie isn't dangerous and they become more interested in him.
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* Annabelle drawing a picture of Cybertron so Ironhide can still see his home. The Autobot keeps the picture safely in the glove compartment of his truck form.
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* In the opening chapter, Annabelle comforting some children in the aftermath of the Decepticons' attack on Chicago.
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--> '''Sam:''' Hey, I'm a modern man. I'm secure with my sexuality. I can handle the fact that my gorgeous, brilliant, and extremely talented girlfriend can be successful at whatever she does.
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* Creator/BookwormGal choosing to keep Mikaela in the series in comparison to the character's treatment in ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon''. This decision was appreciated by the readers.
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* As opposed to Carly Spencer in ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'', Mikaela Banes is much more supportive of Sam Witwicky for his decision to help the Autobots.
* In Chapter 2, Sam complimenting Mikaela's skills and her current occupation regardless of whether this makes him look inferior.
* In Chapter 3, Sam manages to get a job and regardless of how meaningful it is, Mikaela is still proud of him.
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* In Chapter 11, while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears [[spoiler: when the Autobots are seemingly killed in the rocket explosion]], it is still touching for Simmons to comfort her especially given how the two first reacted to each other in "Summer Vacation".
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* In Chapter 11, while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears [[spoiler: when the Autobots are seemingly killed in the rocket Xanthium explosion]], it is still touching for Simmons to comfort her especially given how the two first reacted to each other in "Summer Vacation".
''Summer Vacation''.
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* [[spoiler: In Chapter 21, Sam's proposal to Mikaela and the Autobots are there to witness it]].
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* In "A Child's Innocence", while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears [[spoiler: when the Autobots are seemingly killed in the rocket explosion]], it is still touching for Simmons to comfort her especially given how the two first reacted to each other in "Summer Vacation".
* In "A Child's Innocence", [[spoiler: Sam's proposal to Mikaela and the Autobots are there to witness it]].
* The final moment of "A Child's Innocence" is [[spoiler: Annabelle reuniting with Ironhide]].
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