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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': Huh?!
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''shocked'') Huh?!
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--> '''Sakura''': (''with a genuine smile'') Thank you.
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--> '''Sakura''': (''with a genuine smile'') [[SincerityMode Thank you.you]].
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''snidely'') Your words, weren't there to begin with. You've spent so much of your time reading words that you can't see. That you loose your own words, your own thoughts!
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''snidely'') Your words, weren't there to begin with. You've spent so much of your time reading words that you can't see. That you loose lose your own words, your own thoughts!
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''with a cruel smile'') Your just a boring little puke, who likes to pretend to be cute and pleasant!
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''with a cruel smile'') Your You're just a boring little puke, who likes to pretend to be cute and pleasant!
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* Episode 9 "Aqua" Betterman going out of his way to help Keita, Hinoki, and Sakura after they'd been doused with a dangerous. Using his remarkable healing abilities to save them from it.
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* Episode 9 "Aqua" Betterman going out of his way to help Keita, Hinoki, and Sakura after they'd been doused with a dangerous.dangerous chemical. Using his remarkable healing abilities to save them from it.
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* Keita's dedication to Hinoki in general is very sweet.
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* Episode 9 "Aqua" Betterman going out of his way to help Keita, Hinoki, and Sakura after they'd been doused with a dangerous. Using his remarkable healing abilities to save them from it.
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''with a cruel smile'') Your just a boring little puke, who like to pretend to be cute and pleasant!
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--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''with a cruel smile'') Your just a boring little puke, who like likes to pretend to be cute and pleasant!
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* Episode 19 "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their [[EnemyWithout Dark Side]].
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* Episode 19 "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their [[EnemyWithout Dark Side]]. Sakura dealing with her double in particular stands out.
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': Every word from that mouth of yours is from someone else! What words do you have to say for yourself?
--> '''Sakura''': (''frightened'') I, I can't find them!
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''snidely'') Your words, weren't there to begin with. You've spent so much of your time reading words that you can't see. That you loose your own words, your own thoughts!
--> '''Sakura''': Well, maybe that's so.
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''with a cruel smile'') Your just a boring little puke, who like to pretend to be cute and pleasant!
--> '''Sakura''': (''with a genuine smile'') Thank you.
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': Huh?!
--> '''Sakura''': Thank you for letting me hear my own words. And then giving me the chance to face them.
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': Every word from that mouth of yours is from someone else! What words do you have to say for yourself?
--> '''Sakura''': (''frightened'') I, I can't find them!
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''snidely'') Your words, weren't there to begin with. You've spent so much of your time reading words that you can't see. That you loose your own words, your own thoughts!
--> '''Sakura''': Well, maybe that's so.
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': (''with a cruel smile'') Your just a boring little puke, who like to pretend to be cute and pleasant!
--> '''Sakura''': (''with a genuine smile'') Thank you.
--> '''Mirror!Sakura''': Huh?!
--> '''Sakura''': Thank you for letting me hear my own words. And then giving me the chance to face them.
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* The episode "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their [[EnemyWithout Dark Side]].
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* The episode Episode 19 "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their [[EnemyWithout Dark Side]].
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* The episode "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their DarkSide.
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* The episode "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their DarkSide.[[EnemyWithout Dark Side]].
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* The episode "Mirror", the gang each confronting (and in some cases even ''comforting'') the manifestations their DarkSide.
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* Keita's dedication to Hinoki in general is very sweet.
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* Keita's dedication to Hinoki in general is very sweet.sweet.
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Episodes Fifteen (Night) and Sixteen (Revelations) focus on the budding relationship with Hinoki and Keita as they go out on their promised date. While the majority of fifteen has Keita trying to impress Hinoki and create the right mood to kiss her, he ends up at Hinoki's old home. It turns out the Hinoki brought him here because she didn't want to visit her home alone and need some sort of moral support. She apologies to Keita for bringing him there but he responds that he didn't mind if he was of help. Hinoki gives a bit of back story to her and her family and how she was close to her brother Mario. There is a nice little tickle scene that ensues after Hinoki's apology. Episode sixteen has Keita and Hinoki trapped by the old priest who places a barrier to protect them from the battles that are ensuing from the episode. While trapped in the barrier, Keita tries to create a mood in order to kiss Hinoki, but ends up comforting her instead. By the end of the episode, it shows that Hinoki has fallen asleep hugging Keita while Keita himself is holding Hinoki in a way in which it looks like he is protecting her.
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* Keita's dedication to
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Episodes Fifteen (Night) and Sixteen (Revelations) focus on the budding relationship with Hinoki and Keita as they go out on their promised date. While the majority of fifteen has Keita trying to impress Hinoki and create the right mood to kiss her, he ends up at Hinoki's old home. It turns out the Hinoki brought him here because she didn't want to visit her home alone and need some sort of moral support. She apologies to Keita for bringing him there but he responds that he didn't mind if he was of help. Hinoki gives a bit of back story to her and her family and how she was close to her brother Mario. There is a nice little tickle scene that ensues after Hinoki's apology. Episode sixteen has Keita and Hinoki trapped by the old priest who places a barrier to protect them from the battles that are ensuing from the episode. While trapped in the barrier, Keita tries to create a mood in order to kiss Hinoki, but ends up comforting her instead. By the end of the episode, it shows that Hinoki has fallen asleep hugging Keita while Keita himself is holding Hinoki in a way in which it looks like he is protecting her.
