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* If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?
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* If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement sub-basement, how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?
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** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might have been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
** There wasn't a large span of time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.
* Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock (guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, when it was obvious it was about to kill him.
** Frock was a scientist discovering new things to the end.
* Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German Shepherd Pollux in the sewers? It killed the other one Castor, but spares this one, despite killing its handler Bradley.
** It is likely that the Kothoga killed the first dog to see if it could feed on dogs (or other animals) the same way it would feed on humans. Realizing that it didn't work, there was no need to kill the second dog as well. It's also possible that if the Kothoga still had some of its human intelligence, it spared the one dog, knowing that a human would come looking for it and then eat that him.
** There wasn't a large span of time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.
* Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock (guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, when it was obvious it was about to kill him.
** Frock was a scientist discovering new things to the end.
* Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German Shepherd Pollux in the sewers? It killed the other one Castor, but spares this one, despite killing its handler Bradley.
** It is likely that the Kothoga killed the first dog to see if it could feed on dogs (or other animals) the same way it would feed on humans. Realizing that it didn't work, there was no need to kill the second dog as well. It's also possible that if the Kothoga still had some of its human intelligence, it spared the one dog, knowing that a human would come looking for it and then eat that him.
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** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate indiscriminate in its killings, but as it gets older older, it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then needs. Then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer longer, he might have been gotten munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's its "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the heads. The homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
its "territory."
** There wasn't alarge span of long time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) supply), and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.
* Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock(guy (the guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, it when it was obvious it was obviously about to kill him.
him?
** Frock was a scientistdiscovering who discovered new things to the end.
end. Maybe he also recognized Dr. Whitney as the monster.
* Why didn't the Kothoga kill the GermanShepherd Pollux Shepherd, Pollux, in the sewers? It killed the other one one, Castor, but spares this one, Pollux despite killing its handler handler, Bradley.
** It is likely that the Kothoga killed the first dog to see if it could feed on dogs (or other animals) the same way it would feed on humans. Realizing that it didn't work, there was also no need to kill the seconddog as well. dog. It's also possible that if the Kothoga still had some of its human intelligence, it spared the one dog, knowing that a human would come looking for it and then eat that him.
** There wasn't a
* Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock
** Frock was a scientist
* Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German
** It is likely that the Kothoga killed the first dog to see if it could feed on dogs (or other animals) the same way it would feed on humans. Realizing that it didn't work, there was also no need to kill the second
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** The transformation probably was causing it a lot of pain. When it killed the security guard, it was still smallish enough to fit into the bathroom to grab and drag him out. By the time we finally seen it in center of the museum he looks like a small Elephant. Growing that big and that fast had to have been hard on its body.
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** The transformation probably was causing it a lot of pain. When it killed the security guard, it was still smallish small enough to fit into the bathroom to grab and drag him out. By the time When we finally seen see it in center of the museum museum's center, he looks like a small Elephant. elephant. Growing that big and that fast had to must have been hard on its body.body.
* Why does the Kothoga hesitate when alone with Dr. Frock and Margo?
** The most likely reason is that Dr. Whitney recognizes his former colleagues.
* How does the Kothoga know its way around the museum well enough to seem as if it's teleporting?
** It used to work there when it was human.
* Why does the Kothoga hesitate when alone with Dr. Frock and Margo?
** The most likely reason is that Dr. Whitney recognizes his former colleagues.
* How does the Kothoga know its way around the museum well enough to seem as if it's teleporting?
** It used to work there when it was human.
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** The transformation probably was causing it a lot of pain. When he killed the security guard, he was still smallish enough to fit into the bathroom to grab and drag him out. By the time we finally seen him in center of the museum he looks like a small Elephant.
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** The transformation probably was causing it a lot of pain. When he it killed the security guard, he it was still smallish enough to fit into the bathroom to grab and drag him out. By the time we finally seen him it in center of the museum he looks like a small Elephant.Elephant. Growing that big and that fast had to have been hard on its body.
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* Why does the Kothoga have that wheezing problem?
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* Why does the Kothoga have that wheezing problem?problem?
** The transformation probably was causing it a lot of pain. When he killed the security guard, he was still smallish enough to fit into the bathroom to grab and drag him out. By the time we finally seen him in center of the museum he looks like a small Elephant.
** The transformation probably was causing it a lot of pain. When he killed the security guard, he was still smallish enough to fit into the bathroom to grab and drag him out. By the time we finally seen him in center of the museum he looks like a small Elephant.
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Might HAVE, not might OF.
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** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might of been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
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** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might of have been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
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** It is likely that the Kothoga killed the first dog to see if it could feed on dogs (or other animals) the same way it would feed on humans. Realizing that it didn't work, there was no need to kill the second dog as well. It's also possible that if the Kothoga still had some of its human intelligence, it spared the one dog, knowing that a human would come looking for it and then eat that him.
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* Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German Shepherd Pollux in the sewers? It killed the other one Castor, but spares this one, despite killing its handler Bradley.
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* Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German Shepherd Pollux in the sewers? It killed the other one Castor, but spares this one, despite killing its handler Bradley.Bradley.
*Why does the Kothoga have that wheezing problem?
*Why does the Kothoga have that wheezing problem?
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** Frock was a scientist discovering new things to the end.
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** Frock was a scientist discovering new things to the end.end.
*Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German Shepherd Pollux in the sewers? It killed the other one Castor, but spares this one, despite killing its handler Bradley.
*Why didn't the Kothoga kill the German Shepherd Pollux in the sewers? It killed the other one Castor, but spares this one, despite killing its handler Bradley.
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* Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock (guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, when it was obvious it was about to kill him.
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* Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock (guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, when it was obvious it was about to kill him.him.
**Frock was a scientist discovering new things to the end.
**Frock was a scientist discovering new things to the end.
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If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?
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* If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?
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** There wasn't a large span of time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.
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** There wasn't a large span of time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.hypothalamus.
*Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock (guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, when it was obvious it was about to kill him.
*Before the Kothoga kills him, why was Dr. Frock (guy in the wheelchair) happy and even smiling at it, when it was obvious it was about to kill him.
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** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might of been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
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** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might of been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory""territory"
** There wasn't a large span of time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.
** There wasn't a large span of time between when the Mbwun leaves were moved to the Secure Area (thus cutting off Mbwun from his food supply) and when the homeless man was apprehended. If the police had needed more time to find the homeless man, then there's a good chance that Mbwun would've gotten to him first and fed on his hypothalamus.
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** Even the Kothoga knows not to mess with that guy.
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** Even the Kothoga knows not to mess with that guy.guy.
** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might of been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
** It is possible that the Kothoga was still satiated enough at that point to not be indescriminate in its killings, but as it gets older it starts to hunger more for the hormones it needs, then if the homeless scumbag had stayed there longer he might of been munched, or another theory is that the Kothoga had territorial instincts and stuck around it's "nest" when it wasn't lopping off heads and the homeless guy wasn't anywhere near it's "territory"
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If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?
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If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?well?
** Even the Kothoga knows not to mess with that guy.
** Even the Kothoga knows not to mess with that guy.
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If the homeless man who later turns out to be a convicted rapist and a suspect was living in the sub-basement how did he not encounter or even get killed by the Kothoga that was living down there as well?
