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** It's implied that few people keep the Key for long. It's likely nobody's just gotten around to some of the objects.
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** Why and how would they have only one other Object, or leave it in the Room instead of taking it with them?
** It's implied that few people keep the Key for long. It's likely nobody's just gotten around to some of theobjects.
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** It's implied that few people keep the Key for long. It's likely nobody's just gotten around to some of the
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* Joe finds the Coat in a closet in the Room. All of the other Objects are gone: how did the Coat get there? And why didn't it "leave" with the other Objects?
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* Joe finds the Coat in a closet in the Room. All of the other Objects are gone: how did the Coat get there? And why didn't it "leave" with the other Objects?
Objects? Or if it did leave, who brought it back? Only someone with the Key could enter the Room, but it's never said who or why they just brought the Coat back.
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** It's shown that using the items is addictive, driving otherwise reasonable people to extreme ends. It's likely any government agent would go rogue quickly.
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** The Window is presumably an Object, too...
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* Before Joe and [[spoiler: Kreuzfeld]] start their mission to get into the [[spoiler: Collectors' vault]], each of them leaves the potentially dangerous items from their personal belongings behind: [[spoiler: Kreuzfeld's Flask]] and Joe's handgun stays [[spoiler: in Kreuzfeld's house]]. Yet after the heist, when Joe finds [[spoiler: the Occupant]], he keeps his pistol on his body as he enters [[spoiler: the Occupant's room in the sanitarium]] in Green Valley.
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* Before Joe and [[spoiler: Kreuzfeld]] start their mission to get into the [[spoiler: Collectors' vault]], each of them leaves the potentially dangerous items from their personal belongings behind: [[spoiler: Kreuzfeld's Flask]] and Joe's handgun stays stay [[spoiler: in Kreuzfeld's house]]. Yet after the heist, when Joe finds [[spoiler: the Occupant]], he keeps his pistol on his body as he enters [[spoiler: the Occupant's room in the sanitarium]] in Green Valley.
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* Before Joe and [[spoiler: Kreuzfeld]] start their mission to get into the [[spoiler: Collectors' vault]], each of them leaves the potentially dangerous items from their personal belongings behind: [[spoiler: Kreuzfeld's Flask]] and Joe's handgun stays [[spoiler: in Kreuzfeld's house]]. Yet after the heist, when Joe finds [[spoiler: the Occupant]], he keeps his pistol on his body as he enters [[spoiler: the Occupant's room in the sanitarium]] in Green Valley.
