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Wrote a second poem, this time from the POV of an old hag boss (Begoniax); when Rayman inadvertently crash lands into her outhouse, she accuses him of peeping at her and retaliates by engaging in a fight once he reaches her hideout.
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An intrusion has
Frightened the red lums, they've turned
Evil, get going!
Frightened the red lums, they've turned
Evil, get going!
to:
An intrusion has
has\\
Frightened the red lums, they'veturned
Evil, get going!
turned\\
Evil. GET GOING!
You filthy peeping\\
Tom, I'm gonna go turn you\\
Right into a frog!
Frightened the red lums, they've
Evil, get going!
Evil. GET GOING!
You filthy peeping\\
Tom, I'm gonna go turn you\\
Right into a frog!
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Focused on the lums becoming evil
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An intrusion has
Frightened the red lums, they've turned
Evil, get going!
''Submitted by Viracochaxevious''
Frightened the red lums, they've turned
Evil, get going!
''Submitted by Viracochaxevious''
