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* [[TheSmartGuy Taion]] being a [[CaptainObvious Captain Obvious]] about K's [[HealingFactor healing factor]].
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* [[TheSmartGuy Taion]] being a [[CaptainObvious Captain Obvious]] about K's [[HealingFactor healing factor]]. factor]] sets up this gem:
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'''Melia:''' Do not hide your stripes.\\
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'''Melia:''' [[BeYourself Do not hide your stripes.\\]]\\
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** The party remarks on Manana's [[IncorruptiblePurePureness innocent nature]] and upfront demeanor. Taion says that is characteristic of Nopon. Eunie is skeptical.
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** The party remarks on Manana's [[IncorruptiblePurePureness innocent nature]] and upfront demeanor. Taion says that is characteristic of Nopon. Eunie is skeptical. The exchange becomes HilariousInHindsight after Riku's appearance in ''[[VideoGame/XenobladeChronicles3FutureRedeemed Future Redeemed]]'', where how much he's been lying becomes evident.
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*** The above exchange becomes HilariousInHindsight after Riku's appearance in ''[[VideoGame/XenobladeChronicles3FutureRedeemed Future Redeemed]]''.
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*** The above exchange becomes HilariousInHindsight after Riku's appearance in ''[[VideoGame/XenobladeChronicles3FutureRedeemed Future Redeemed]]''.
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** If you visit a snowy region with Nia, she will complain about the cold and Mio will offer to walk close to her so she can be warmer. It certainly draws a parallel to when she snuggled up with Pyra in Tantal.
* In snowy regions, Taion will sometimes ask if he can walk a bit closer to Sena ([[DontExplainTheJoke since as a Fire Blade she emanates a good amount of heat]]). Sena will outright encourage Nia to walk closer to her to "be nice an' toasty" should Nia remark on the cold.
* In snowy regions, Taion will sometimes ask if he can walk a bit closer to Sena ([[DontExplainTheJoke since as a Fire Blade she emanates a good amount of heat]]). Sena will outright encourage Nia to walk closer to her to "be nice an' toasty" should Nia remark on the cold.
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** If you visit a snowy region with Nia, she will complain about the cold and Mio will offer to walk close to her so she can be warmer. It certainly draws a parallel to when she snuggled up with Pyra in Tantal.
* In snowy regions,Tantal. Taion will sometimes ask if he can walk a bit closer to Sena ([[DontExplainTheJoke since as a Fire Blade she emanates a good amount of heat]]). heat]]), and Sena will outright encourage Nia to walk closer to her to "be nice an' toasty" should Nia remark on the cold.
* In snowy regions,
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** During the same quest, when the party is trying to get answers out of Gray, Eunie tells him to "Use your words," which is the kind of thing parents say to a small child throwing a tantrum.
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** During the same quest, when the party is trying to get answers out of Gray, Eunie tells him to "Use your words," which is the kind of thing parents say to a small child throwing a tantrum. Which is doubly funny because Gray is the actual adult here.
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* Following the drama of Taion's Hero Quest, Isurd's Ascension Quest is a BreatherEpisode among the Ascension Quests...which involves trying to find a legendary natural hot spring to relieve his [[BeleagueredBureaucrat stress from overworking himself]]. After clearing the hot spring of monsters, Lanz and Eunie decide to throw Isurd in by force. After he and Lanz (who are now both naked) both spend some time in the hot spring and try to convince everyone else to do the same, [[NotSoAboveItAll Isurd]] commands Eunie to throw Taion into the drink to alleviate his uptight attitude, to which she happily obliges.
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* Following the drama of Taion's Hero Quest, Isurd's Ascension Quest is a BreatherEpisode among the Ascension Quests...which involves trying to find a legendary natural hot spring to relieve his [[BeleagueredBureaucrat stress from overworking himself]]. After clearing the hot spring of monsters, Lanz and Eunie decide to throw Isurd follow up on their claim of chucking him right in... by ''literally'' throwing him in by force. without warning. After he and Lanz (who are now both naked) both spend some time in the hot spring and try to convince everyone else to do the same, Isurd commands Eunie [[NotSoAboveItAll Isurd]] commands Eunie to throw Taion into the drink drink]] to alleviate his uptight attitude, to which she happily obliges.obliges.
-->'''Isurd:''' Eunie! Boot him in already, would ya!\\
'''Eunie:''' Copy that. [Eunie prepares to tackle Taion]\\
'''Taion:''' Now wait just a minute, Eunie. [[OhCrap I didn't say I was going in!]] [Camera zooms in Taion's face before cutting to black, with an audible splash]
-->'''Isurd:''' Eunie! Boot him in already, would ya!\\
'''Eunie:''' Copy that. [Eunie prepares to tackle Taion]\\
'''Taion:''' Now wait just a minute, Eunie. [[OhCrap I didn't say I was going in!]] [Camera zooms in Taion's face before cutting to black, with an audible splash]
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** Just...[[EpicFail Melia's attempt to waltz out of the castle incognito]], only to completely fail once Ouroboros recognizes her voice. Better yet, she clearly thought it would work, forgetting that,[[VideoGame/XenobladeChronicles1 unlike last time]], more people would recognize her voice alone, and the High Entia of Alcamoth were only fooled by her masked body double, because she herself barely made any public speaking appearances. And then there's her almost-pouty disappointment in being found out right away, showing there's still a bit of her old bratty nature still there deep down.
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** Just...[[EpicFail Melia's attempt to waltz out of the castle incognito]], only to completely fail once Ouroboros recognizes her voice. Better yet, she clearly thought it would work, forgetting that,[[VideoGame/XenobladeChronicles1 that, [[VideoGame/XenobladeChronicles1 unlike last time]], more people would recognize her voice alone, and the High Entia of Alcamoth were only fooled by her masked body double, because she herself barely made any public speaking appearances. And then there's her almost-pouty disappointment in being found out right away, showing there's still a bit of her old bratty nature still there deep down.
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-->'''Nia:''' (''jumps back, taken aback)'' Wh-what?
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-->'''Nia:''' (''jumps back, taken aback)'' aback'') Wh-what?
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-->'''Lanz:'' No one was saying that anyway...
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Moments pages are Spoilers Off.
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*** Even funnier when you see the origins of the second City in ''Future Redeemed''. Not just the Founders, but many of the citizens were Kevesi and Agnians, meaning they all sported all of the traits of every human-like race from both worlds. Yet somehow, they've all been lost by the time of the main game, or else [[spoiler: House Doyle's members like Garret and Julietta would have had Nia's Gormotti/Flesh Eater heritage, Cassini's members like Masha would have Pandoria's, Rhodes would have Pyra/Mythra's Aegis crystal, etc.]]
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*** Even This gets even even funnier when you see the origins of the second City in ''Future Redeemed''. Not just the Founders, but many of the citizens were Kevesi and Agnians, meaning they all sported all of the traits of every human-like race from both worlds. Yet somehow, they've all been lost by the time of the main game, or else [[spoiler: House Doyle's members like Garret and Julietta would have had Nia's Gormotti/Flesh Eater heritage, Cassini's members like Masha would have Pandoria's, Rhodes would have Pyra/Mythra's Aegis crystal, etc.]]