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* While Toriel does make the scne take a [[KnightOfCerebus darker tone]], the player manages to CrossTheLineTwice when they have this to say when seeing her.
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* While Toriel does make the scne scene take a [[KnightOfCerebus darker tone]], the player manages to CrossTheLineTwice when they have this to say when seeing her.
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* Of all the things that have changed in the Ruins, the [[CallBack living rock that is too ignorant to help you is still here.]]
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* While Toriel does make the scne take a [[KnightOfCerberus darker tone]], the player manages to CrossTheLineTwice when they have this to say when seeing her.
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* While Toriel does make the scne take a [[KnightOfCerberus [[KnightOfCerebus darker tone]], the player manages to CrossTheLineTwice when they have this to say when seeing her.
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* While Toriel does make the scne take a [[KnightOfCerberus darker tone]], the player manages to CrossTheLineTwice when they have this to say when seeing her.
-->'''Player:''' the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] is going on with this game[sic]?
-->'''Player:''' the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] is going on with this game[sic]?
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* Flowey's attempts of trying to egg Frisk into KillingInSelfDefense go completely awry when they insistently spare all of the monsters that they come across, and his reactions to them are pretty amusing.
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* One of the Snowdrakes looking for their friend Snowy was planning on eating one of the ladder pieces. Flowey points out that it's made of wood, and the Snowdrake concludes that [[ComicallyMissingThePoint he can just eat the trees around him]] and thanks the "delicious" flower.
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* One of the Snowdrakes looking for their friend Snowy was planning on eating one of the ladder pieces. Flowey points out that it's made of wood, and the Snowdrake concludes that [[ComicallyMissingThePoint he can just eat the trees around him]] and thanks the "delicious" flower.flower.
* Dogamy and Dogaressa ask Frisk if they're a human. And of course they say yes.
-->'''Flowey (annoyed):''' (Of... of course.)
* Dogamy and Dogaressa ask Frisk if they're a human. And of course they say yes.
-->'''Flowey (annoyed):''' (Of... of course.)
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Despite being a horror themed AU, there are still several funny moments to be seen.
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* Initially, the horror remains rather consistent throughout the Ruins. When Toriel is tamed, however, ''all'' of the tension goes completely out the window and Flowey is left with WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises.
* Sans here is consistently menacing and never cracks a joke. Papyrus, on the other hand, remains as his usual goofy self, though he has been misled into believing that he has to be a murderer.
* The Ice Caps' swearing when you look away from their hat can be a bit funny.
-->'''Ice Cap:''' My hat's up HERE, dipshit!
* One of the Snowdrakes looking for their friend Snowy was planning on eating one of the ladder pieces. Flowey points out that it's made of wood, and the Snowdrake concludes that [[ComicallyMissingThePoint he can just eat the trees around him]] and thanks the "delicious" flower.
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* Initially, the horror remains rather consistent throughout the Ruins. When Toriel is tamed, however, ''all'' of the tension goes completely out the window and Flowey is left with WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises.
* Sans here is consistently menacing and never cracks a joke. Papyrus, on the other hand, remains as his usual goofy self, though he has been misled into believing that he has to be a murderer.
* The Ice Caps' swearing when you look away from their hat can be a bit funny.
-->'''Ice Cap:''' My hat's up HERE, dipshit!
* One of the Snowdrakes looking for their friend Snowy was planning on eating one of the ladder pieces. Flowey points out that it's made of wood, and the Snowdrake concludes that [[ComicallyMissingThePoint he can just eat the trees around him]] and thanks the "delicious" flower.
