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--> '''Ryback''': "Tits to die for, huh?"
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--> '''Ryback''': "Tits Tits to die for, huh?"huh?
* The fact that Ryback actually programmed the makeshift time bomb to display "You're fucked!" message for a hapless mook to see before he's set ablaze.
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--> '''Penn''': "Fuck, you ruined my coat!"
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--> '''Penn''': "Fuck, Fuck, you ruined my coat!"coat!
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--> '''Pilot''': "We sure taught that boy how to fly!"
--> '''Bobby''': (holds a gun to the pilot's head and puts on a feminine voice) "Oh, we sure did, honey! So what we gon' do now, is we gonna keep this chopper riiiight here! Or I'm gonna blow your motherfuckin' brains out! You got that?! ''[{{Beat}}]'' Honey?"
--> '''Bobby''': (holds a gun to the pilot's head and puts on a feminine voice) "Oh, we sure did, honey! So what we gon' do now, is we gonna keep this chopper riiiight here! Or I'm gonna blow your motherfuckin' brains out! You got that?! ''[{{Beat}}]'' Honey?"
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--> '''Pilot''': "We We sure taught that boy how to fly!"
fly!
--> '''Bobby''':(holds ''[holds a gun to the pilot's head and puts on a feminine voice) "Oh, voice]'' Oh, we sure did, honey! So what we gon' do now, is we gonna keep this chopper riiiight here! Or I'm gonna blow your motherfuckin' brains out! You got that?! ''[{{Beat}}]'' Honey?"Honey?
--> '''Bobby''':
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--> '''Penn''': "Fuck--you ripped my coat!"
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--> '''Penn''': "Fuck--you ripped "Fuck, you ruined my coat!"
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* Travis Dane using the backdrop of the Eiffel Tower for his threat video.
** And shortly after this video, the CIA director, Tom Breaker, [[DeadpanSnarker suggests they look in Paris to try and find him]].
** And shortly after this video, the CIA director, Tom Breaker, [[DeadpanSnarker suggests they look in Paris to try and find him]].
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* Travis Dane using the backdrop of the Eiffel Tower for his threat video.
**video. And shortly after this video, the CIA director, Tom Breaker, [[DeadpanSnarker suggests they look in Paris to try and find him]].
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* A Mook is distracted by a hostage [[DistractedByTheSexy who tries to expose herself to him]]. Cue Ryback popping up and knocking said Mook out.
--> '''Ryback''': "Tits to die for, huh?"
--> '''Ryback''': "Tits to die for, huh?"
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** And shortly after this video, the CIA director, Tom Breaker, [[DeadpanSnarker suggests they look in Paris to try and find him]].
* When Ryback and Penn start their knife fight, Ryback slices at his coat. Penn's response?
--> '''Penn''': "Fuck--you ripped my coat!"
* Bobby after he throws the DarkActionGirl out of a helicopter and takes the pilot hostage.
--> '''Pilot''': "We sure taught that boy how to fly!"
--> '''Bobby''': (holds a gun to the pilot's head and puts on a feminine voice) "Oh, we sure did, honey! So what we gon' do now, is we gonna keep this chopper riiiight here! Or I'm gonna blow your motherfuckin' brains out! You got that?! ''[{{Beat}}]'' Honey?"
* When Ryback and Penn start their knife fight, Ryback slices at his coat. Penn's response?
--> '''Penn''': "Fuck--you ripped my coat!"
* Bobby after he throws the DarkActionGirl out of a helicopter and takes the pilot hostage.
--> '''Pilot''': "We sure taught that boy how to fly!"
--> '''Bobby''': (holds a gun to the pilot's head and puts on a feminine voice) "Oh, we sure did, honey! So what we gon' do now, is we gonna keep this chopper riiiight here! Or I'm gonna blow your motherfuckin' brains out! You got that?! ''[{{Beat}}]'' Honey?"
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* Major-General Cooper's reaction to being told that the KillSat was made to be undetectable.
--> '''Cooper''': But not undetectable to us, dammit!
* When Dane tells Ryback that he will never be able to decode and disable satellite control program in time, Ryback responds by simply shooting the notebook, causing an OhCrap moment for the villain.
* When it's pointed out Ryback was shot in the arm, he doesn't even give it a second look.
-->''You think this is being shot? This ain't being shot.''
* Travis Dane using the backdrop of the Eiffel Tower for his threat video.
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--> '''Cooper''': But not undetectable to us, dammit!
* When Dane tells Ryback that he will never be able to decode and disable satellite control program in time, Ryback responds by simply shooting the notebook, causing an OhCrap moment for the villain.
* When it's pointed out Ryback was shot in the arm, he doesn't even give it a second look.
-->''You think this is being shot? This ain't being shot.''
* Travis Dane using the backdrop of the Eiffel Tower for his threat video.
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