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* Dan and Chris trying recreate Pinkie's photo album is this combined with a dose of HeartWarmingMoment.
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* Dan and Chris trying recreate Pinkie's photo album is this combined with a dose of HeartWarmingMoment.SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming|Moments}}.
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* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidentally quote [[Film/StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
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* Pinkie trying to telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidentally quote [[Film/StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
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* The next couple chapters, were a welcome fun pair of [[BreatherEpisode BreatherEpisodes]], in between two long arcs.
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* The next couple chapters, were a welcome fun pair of [[BreatherEpisode BreatherEpisodes]], Breather Episodes]], in between two long arcs.
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* The ranking in the Army of Dan debate.[[note: Made up of Dan, Pinkie, Mr. Mumbles, and Chris, ranking in that order.]]
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* The ranking in the Army of Dan debate.[[note: [[note]] Made up of Dan, Pinkie, Mr. Mumbles, and Chris, ranking in that order.]][[/note]]
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* The ranking in the Army of Dan debate.
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* The ranking in the Army of Dan debate.[[note: Made up of Dan, Pinkie, Mr. Mumbles, and Chris, ranking in that order.]]
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* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidentally quote [[StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
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* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidentally quote [[StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack [[Film/StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
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* Dan and Pinkie mad a list of twenty six possible solutions to problems, in alphabetical order with every letter. Viewable as the bonus chapter in part six.
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* Dan and Pinkie mad made a list of twenty six possible solutions to problems, in alphabetical order with every letter. Viewable as the bonus chapter in part six.
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** Dan and Elise still bickering, even while trying to fend off a made superhero.
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** Dan and Elise still bickering, even while trying to fend off a made mad superhero.
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* The next couple chapters, were a welcome fun pair of BreatherEpisodes, in between two long arcs.
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* The next couple chapters, were a welcome fun pair of BreatherEpisodes, [[BreatherEpisode BreatherEpisodes]], in between two long arcs.
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* Dan manipulating Twilight into putting on a magic show and later, giving him a HyperspaceArsenal.
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** Dan and Pinkie critiquing Terry's EvilCostumeSwitch, pointing out how cliche the RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver look is, and then getting distracted by the cool names of a couple shades of purple they thought would look better.
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*** At one point, Dan says he'll take back '''one'' bad thing he's said to Elise.
** Terry making an AccidentalPun when he says he'll take down Dan with his pinkie (finger).
** Pinkie getting a mega caffeine/sugar rush and fighting Terry is both this and a CMOA. Anything that could be put here could not do it justice.
** Terry making an AccidentalPun when he says he'll take down Dan with his pinkie (finger).
** Pinkie getting a mega caffeine/sugar rush and fighting Terry is both this and a CMOA. Anything that could be put here could not do it justice.
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* Anytime Dan and Pinkie put their insane brains together. [[AwesomeButImpractical pancake launcher anyone?]]
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* Anytime Dan and Pinkie put their insane brains together. [[AwesomeButImpractical pancake Pancake launcher anyone?]]
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* '''Every single second'', of Pinkie's attempt to check out at a clothing store.
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* '''Every single second'', second'' of Pinkie's attempt to check out at a clothing store.store. And it happens ''every time''!
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* Dan proving he isn't an imposter to Chris outside the bakery.
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* Dan proving he isn't an imposter impostor to Chris outside the bakery.
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* Dan and Chris trying recreate Pinkie's photo album is this combined with a dose of HeartWarming.
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* Dan and Chris trying recreate Pinkie's photo album is this combined with a dose of HeartWarming.HeartWarmingMoment.
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* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidently quote [[StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
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* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidently accidentally quote [[StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
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** The very idea of Dan and Pinkie Pie forming a VillainousDuo (Dr. Jerk and Party Hard), is comedy gold!
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** The very idea of Dan and Pinkie Pie forming a VillainousDuo villainous duo (Dr. Jerk and Party Hard), is comedy gold!
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* The teams conflicts with the JerkAss SuperHero/Villain Terry-Guy.
** Him showing up to harass Pinkie and Dan at the supermarket, only for Dan to immediately hit him with a bottle of hot sauce, his one weakness.
*** His constant complaining about having a literal WeakSauceWeakness and the fact that it seems to be well known.
** The very idea of Dan and Pinkie Pie forming a VillainousDuo (Dr. Jerk and Party Hard), is comedy gold!
** Pinkie trying to stop Dan from hitting Terry with another bottle, only for Dan to explain what Terry meant when he called her a "street walker". Cue Pinkie grabbing a bottle herself.
*** Terry constantly trying to swear vengeance, only for all party members to ignore him.
** Dan and Elise still bickering, even while trying to fend off a made superhero.
* The next couple chapters, were a welcome fun pair of BreatherEpisodes, in between two long arcs.
** Him showing up to harass Pinkie and Dan at the supermarket, only for Dan to immediately hit him with a bottle of hot sauce, his one weakness.
*** His constant complaining about having a literal WeakSauceWeakness and the fact that it seems to be well known.
** The very idea of Dan and Pinkie Pie forming a VillainousDuo (Dr. Jerk and Party Hard), is comedy gold!
** Pinkie trying to stop Dan from hitting Terry with another bottle, only for Dan to explain what Terry meant when he called her a "street walker". Cue Pinkie grabbing a bottle herself.
*** Terry constantly trying to swear vengeance, only for all party members to ignore him.
** Dan and Elise still bickering, even while trying to fend off a made superhero.
* The next couple chapters, were a welcome fun pair of BreatherEpisodes, in between two long arcs.
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* Anytime Dan and Pinkie put their insane brains together. [[AwesomeButImpractical pancake launcher anyone?]]
** Especially if they are at a Lenny's.
*** Chris and Elise's reaction to them spotting a Lenny's.
* This exchange, while Chris is picking a place to eat:
--> Elise: Say Burgerphile and I will '''hurt''' you.
--> Pinkie: Say Lenny's and I can't be responsible for what I do.
--> Dan: Say anything and I will punch. (Beat) I wanted to be a part of the conversation.
* After a brutally going at each other with blunt force weapons and having a touching friendship moment, what do Pinkie and Dan do? They start poking each other's bruises.
* As with the show, much of Chris and Dan's bickering is amusing.
* '''Every single second'', of Pinkie's attempt to check out at a clothing store.
* Dan and Chris trying recreate Pinkie's photo album is this combined with a dose of HeartWarming.
* The entire chapter with Dan meeting Pinkie's friends from Equestria for the first time is full of funny moments.
* The In-universe {{shipping}} is pretty amusing.
* The ranking in the Army of Dan debate.
* Pinkie and Dan taking CrazyPrepared and GenreSavvy to new levels in the camping arc.
* Though kind of sad, a monster subverting "Friendship fixes everything" and Pinkie's friends attempting to patch her up is pretty funny.
* Dan and Pinkie mad a list of twenty six possible solutions to problems, in alphabetical order with every letter. Viewable as the bonus chapter in part six.
* The gang’s antics at the bakery.
* Dan proving he isn't an imposter to Chris outside the bakery.
* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidently quote [[StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
--> Dan: That’s impossible!!!!
--> Pinkie: Search your feelings, you know it to be true.
* The chaos and anarchy that follows, after Pinkie curiously ventures into the adult only part of an Anime shop.
** Especially if they are at a Lenny's.
*** Chris and Elise's reaction to them spotting a Lenny's.
* This exchange, while Chris is picking a place to eat:
--> Elise: Say Burgerphile and I will '''hurt''' you.
--> Pinkie: Say Lenny's and I can't be responsible for what I do.
--> Dan: Say anything and I will punch. (Beat) I wanted to be a part of the conversation.
* After a brutally going at each other with blunt force weapons and having a touching friendship moment, what do Pinkie and Dan do? They start poking each other's bruises.
* As with the show, much of Chris and Dan's bickering is amusing.
* '''Every single second'', of Pinkie's attempt to check out at a clothing store.
* Dan and Chris trying recreate Pinkie's photo album is this combined with a dose of HeartWarming.
* The entire chapter with Dan meeting Pinkie's friends from Equestria for the first time is full of funny moments.
* The In-universe {{shipping}} is pretty amusing.
* The ranking in the Army of Dan debate.
* Pinkie and Dan taking CrazyPrepared and GenreSavvy to new levels in the camping arc.
* Though kind of sad, a monster subverting "Friendship fixes everything" and Pinkie's friends attempting to patch her up is pretty funny.
* Dan and Pinkie mad a list of twenty six possible solutions to problems, in alphabetical order with every letter. Viewable as the bonus chapter in part six.
* The gang’s antics at the bakery.
* Dan proving he isn't an imposter to Chris outside the bakery.
* Pinkie trying telling Dan they are both dorks, only for Dan to accidently quote [[StarWarsTheEmpireStrikesBack a famous scene]], while trying to deny.
--> Dan: That’s impossible!!!!
--> Pinkie: Search your feelings, you know it to be true.
* The chaos and anarchy that follows, after Pinkie curiously ventures into the adult only part of an Anime shop.
