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-->'''Heatwave:''' [[LargeHam WHY DO THEY CALL YOU PEOPLE THE HEAT? I AM THE ]][[IncrediblyLamePun HEAT!!!]]
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-->'''Heatwave:''' [[LargeHam WHY DO THEY CALL YOU PEOPLE THE HEAT? I AM THE ]][[IncrediblyLamePun ]][[{{Pun}} HEAT!!!]]
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* Joe and Eddie chasing some crooks, so they decide to call in the Flash. He gets into the cop car...with a guy he caught for "indecent exposure" (in other words, The Flash caught [[IncrediblyLamePun a flasher]]). And Barry's all being SmugSuper again during the whole chase.
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* Joe and Eddie chasing some crooks, so they decide to call in the Flash. He gets into the cop car...with a guy he caught for "indecent exposure" (in other words, The Flash caught [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} a flasher]]). And Barry's all being SmugSuper again during the whole chase.
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-->'''Cisco''': Hannibal? You're Face on your best day.
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-->'''Cisco''': Hannibal? You're Face Murdock on your best day.
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* Nia testing Nora's powers by tossing statues and other objects for Nora to catch.
* Nia pulls a Cisco by coming up with Godspeed's name.
* Nia pulls a Cisco by coming up with Godspeed's name.
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* Nia Lia testing Nora's powers by tossing statues and other objects for Nora to catch.
*Nia Lia pulls a Cisco by coming up with Godspeed's name.
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** Even better, Chester appears to get a little ''too'' into the dance party. Caitlin has to say "Chester. Chester!" before he abruptly stops dancing, says "Oh, right, yeah," and only then gets into position to take the "picture." with the device. He was ''holding said device in his hand whilst dancing.'' It makes it look like he ''genuinely forgot why he entered the room in the first place.''
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** Even better, Chester appears to get a little ''too'' into the dance party. Caitlin has to say "Chester. Chester!" before he abruptly stops dancing, says "Oh, right, yeah," and only then gets into position to take the "picture." "picture" with the device. He was ''holding said device in his hand whilst dancing.'' It makes it look like he ''genuinely forgot why he entered the room in the first place.''
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** Even better, Chester appears to get a little ''too'' into the dance party. Caitlin has to say "Chester. Chester!" before he abruptly stops dancing, says "Oh, right, yeah," and gets into position to take the "picture." with the device. He was ''holding said device in his hand whilst dancing.'' It makes it look like he ''genuinely forgot why he entered the room in the first place.''
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** Even better, Chester appears to get a little ''too'' into the dance party. Caitlin has to say "Chester. Chester!" before he abruptly stops dancing, says "Oh, right, yeah," and only then gets into position to take the "picture." with the device. He was ''holding said device in his hand whilst dancing.'' It makes it look like he ''genuinely forgot why he entered the room in the first place.''
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** Then Chester comes in and ''joins the party. With sunglasses on.'' He even tricks Barry and Cisco into not just looking at the flashing light emitter that returns them to normal, but leaning against and ''lying on the desk'' by asking them to say "cheese" like it's a camera.
** Even better, Chester appears to get a little ''too'' into the dance party. Caitlin has to say "Chester. Chester!" before he abruptly stops dancing, says "Oh, right, yeah," and gets into position to take the "picture." with the device. He was ''holding said device in his hand whilst dancing.'' It makes it look like he ''genuinely forgot why he entered the room in the first place.''
** Even better, Chester appears to get a little ''too'' into the dance party. Caitlin has to say "Chester. Chester!" before he abruptly stops dancing, says "Oh, right, yeah," and gets into position to take the "picture." with the device. He was ''holding said device in his hand whilst dancing.'' It makes it look like he ''genuinely forgot why he entered the room in the first place.''
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* TheStinger: After Joe decides to listen to Cecile and get a new house, Cecile decides that they should stay, since she's pregnant. The jovial mood of the scene grinds to a halt (as does the background music) as Joe locks up in shock.
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* TheStinger: After Joe decides to listen to Cecile and get a new house, Cecile decides that they should stay, since she's pregnant. The jovial mood of the scene grinds to a halt (as does the background music) as Joe locks looks up in shock.
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** Cut to a two-person dance party in which Barry uses his speed to [[MundaneUtility teach himself to breakdance.]]
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** Cut to a two-person dance party in which Barry uses his speed to [[MundaneUtility teach himself to breakdance.]]]] Caitlin is not very assertive in her requests to "take a break from the dancing."
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** Cut to a two-person dance party in which Barry uses his speed to [[MundaneUtility teach himself to breakdance.]]
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-->'''Barry:''' No. (Squealing) I didn't want to! (giggles hysterically as Cisco opens his mouth in mock horror before leaning back with a mischievous "you did NOT just do that" grin)
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-->'''Barry:''' No. (Squealing) I didn't want to! (giggles hysterically as Cisco opens his mouth in mock horror before leaning back with a mischievous "you did NOT just do that" grin)grin. Then Barry shrugs)
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'''Caitlin:''' ...You OK?
'''Cisco:''' ([[StageWhisper Stage Whispering]]) Did you stop the ''bad'' lady?
'''Barry:''' No. (Squealing) I didn't want to! (giggles hysterically as Cisco opens his mouth in mock horror before leaning back with a mischievous "you did NOT just do that" grin)
'''Cisco:''' ([[StageWhisper Stage Whispering]]) Did you stop the ''bad'' lady?
'''Barry:''' No. (Squealing) I didn't want to! (giggles hysterically as Cisco opens his mouth in mock horror before leaning back with a mischievous "you did NOT just do that" grin)
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** Mad props to Creator/GrantGustin and Creator/CarlosValdes, whose voices sell their emotional states ''flawlessly.''
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* After Rainbow Raider influences Barry to "enjoy some 'me' time...somewhere else," he appears in the doorway to the Cortex, standing awkwardly with the most JARRINGLY gleeful grin on his face. Even better, Cisco is already influenced:
'''Caitlin:''' ...You OK?
'''Cisco:''' ([[StageWhisper Stage Whispering]]) Did you stop the ''bad'' lady?
'''Barry:''' No. (Squealing) I didn't want to! (giggles hysterically as Cisco opens his mouth in mock horror before leaning back with a mischievous "you did NOT just do that" grin)
'''Caitlin:''' ...You OK?
'''Cisco:''' ([[StageWhisper Stage Whispering]]) Did you stop the ''bad'' lady?
'''Barry:''' No. (Squealing) I didn't want to! (giggles hysterically as Cisco opens his mouth in mock horror before leaning back with a mischievous "you did NOT just do that" grin)
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* Mirror Master traps Barry in a Mirror, and even still his girlfriend takes the time to set him up with a no win situation.
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* Mirror Master traps Barry in a Mirror, mirror, and even still his girlfriend takes the time to set him up with a no win situation.
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'''Barry''': ''(giving off a ''[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Seriously]]'' glance)'' I am literally stuck in a mirror!
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'''Barry''': ''(giving off a ''[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Seriously]]'' glance)'' I am [[ItMakesSenseInContext literally stuck in a mirror!mirror!]]
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** Barry's first hint that something is deeply wrong with Team Flash is Cisco's refusal to nickname the jewel thief. When pestered, Cisco finally comes up with a supervillain moniker: [[AtrociousAlias Thief]]. It somehow never occurs to Barry that maybe Thief doesn't deserve a nickname because he lacks metahuman powers or a temperature-based gun.
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** Barry's first hint that something is deeply wrong with Team Flash is Cisco's refusal to nickname the jewel thief. When pestered, Cisco finally comes up with a supervillain moniker: [[AtrociousAlias Thief]]. It somehow never occurs to Barry that maybe Thief doesn't deserve a nickname because he lacks doesn't have metahuman powers or a temperature-based gun.
