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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and her cassette country music starts to play, making Coffey becomes so frustrated he eventually elbows the player.
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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and her cassette country music starts to play, making Coffey becomes so frustrated he eventually elbows the player.
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'''One Night:''' ...Okay. Good reason.
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'''One Night:''' ...Okay. Good reason.reason.
** Especially funny to many military persons, who see marriages happen for similar reasons (single personnel often share a bedroom sized area with another person while married personnel get (at minimum) a two bedroom apartment).
** Especially funny to many military persons, who see marriages happen for similar reasons (single personnel often share a bedroom sized area with another person while married personnel get (at minimum) a two bedroom apartment).
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* During Bud's descent to the warhead Lindsey tells him that he's just set the record for the deepest dive by a human being. Bud's response: "CALL [[Literature/GuinnessWorldRecords GUINNESS]]"
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* During Bud's descent to the warhead Lindsey tells him that he's just set the record for the deepest dive by a human being. Bud's response: "CALL [[Literature/GuinnessWorldRecords GUINNESS]]"GUINNESS]]"
* Bud tells One Night how he and Lindsay first got together while working on a project she'd designed. After two months on the rig they started living together when they got back to the surface.
-->'''One Night:''' Doesn't mean you had to marry her.\\
'''Bud:''' Yeah, well, we were due to go back out for another six months. If you were married you got a state room, otherwise it was bunks.\\
'''One Night:''' ...Okay. Good reason.
* Bud tells One Night how he and Lindsay first got together while working on a project she'd designed. After two months on the rig they started living together when they got back to the surface.
-->'''One Night:''' Doesn't mean you had to marry her.\\
'''Bud:''' Yeah, well, we were due to go back out for another six months. If you were married you got a state room, otherwise it was bunks.\\
'''One Night:''' ...Okay. Good reason.
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* [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] waking up and seeing the water-tentacle. At first first he's going back to sleep... then he freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!
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* [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] waking up and seeing the water-tentacle. At first first he's going back to sleep... then he freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!
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* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" ''[someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig]'' "WHAAAAT?!"
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* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? person. Is there a reason for me to not I shouldn't be calm?" ''[someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig]'' "WHAAAAT?!"
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* Hippie commenting on Lindsey's decision to call the aliens a "non-terrestrial intelligence".
--> '''Hippie:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!
--> '''Hippie:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!
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* Hippie Hippy commenting on Lindsey's decision to call the aliens a "non-terrestrial intelligence".
-->'''Hippie:''' '''Hippy:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!
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-->"What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?"
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-->"What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?"movie?"
* During Bud's descent to the warhead Lindsey tells him that he's just set the record for the deepest dive by a human being. Bud's response: "CALL [[Literature/GuinnessWorldRecords GUINNESS]]"
* During Bud's descent to the warhead Lindsey tells him that he's just set the record for the deepest dive by a human being. Bud's response: "CALL [[Literature/GuinnessWorldRecords GUINNESS]]"
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* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling. After one argument, Bud removes his wedding ring and drops it in the toilet. A few seconds later, he has a change of heart and has to reach into the blue fluid up to his elbow to retrieve it.
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* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling. After one argument, Bud removes his wedding ring and drops it in the toilet. A few seconds later, he has a change of heart and has to reach into the blue fluid up to his elbow to retrieve it. It stains his hand blue — for the rest of the movie!
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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and the music starts to play.
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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and the her cassette country music starts to play.play, making Coffey becomes so frustrated he eventually elbows the player.
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* [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] waking up and seeing the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!
* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippie, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "[[UnwantedAssistance Hippy, do me a favor? Stay off my side.]]"
* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippie, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "[[UnwantedAssistance Hippy, do me a favor? Stay off my side.]]"
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* [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] waking up and seeing the water-tentacle. He At first first he's going back to sleep... then he freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!
* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her isHippie, Hippy, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "[[UnwantedAssistance Hippy, do me a favor? Stay off my side.]]"
* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is
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--> What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?
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* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling.
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* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling. After one argument, Bud removes his wedding ring and drops it in the toilet. A few seconds later, he has a change of heart and has to reach into the blue fluid up to his elbow to retrieve it.
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* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" *''someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig''* "WHAAAAT?!"
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* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" *''someone ''[someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig''* rig]'' "WHAAAAT?!"
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* Bud after meeting the NTI's in person, they saved his life and he shows his thanks by vomiting on their floor. Granted he was taking the liquid breathing apparatus off, but it still comes across as unintentionally funny.
** Technically he's not vomiting but choking up the oxygen-rich fluid that had been filling his lungs, but still.
** Technically he's not vomiting but choking up the oxygen-rich fluid that had been filling his lungs, but still.
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* Bud after meeting the NTI's [=NTIs=] in person, they saved his life and he shows his thanks by vomiting on their floor. Granted he was taking the liquid breathing apparatus off, but it still comes across as unintentionally funny.
** Technically he's not vomiting but choking up the oxygen-rich fluid that had been filling his lungs, but still.funny.
** Technically he's not vomiting but choking up the oxygen-rich fluid that had been filling his lungs, but still.
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** Technically he's not vomiting but choking up the oxygen-rich fluid that had been filling his lungs, but still.
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--> What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?"
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--> What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?"movie?
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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and the music starts to play. He totally smashes the sucker! Harsh, but funny.
* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling is usually always good for a chuckle or two.
* Personally I laughed my head off when [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling is usually always good for a chuckle or two.
* Personally I laughed my head off when [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and the music starts to play. He totally smashes the sucker! Harsh, but funny.
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* Bud and Lindsey'ssquabbling is usually always good for a chuckle or two.
squabbling.
*Personally I laughed my head off when [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] wakes waking up and sees seeing the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!PLANT!
* Bud and Lindsey's
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* When Coffey finally snaps and holds people hostage, he ends up creepily close to Lindsey, [[DoesThisRemindYouOFAnything stating that there was something he's wanted to do to her since they first met.]] [[BaitAndSwitch It looks like he's about to lean in to kiss her, but instead he just tapes her mouth shut, because he was sick of her talking.]] It's dramatic and scary at first, but this troper was laughing when he did that.
** Even funnier on the trivia track:
** Even funnier on the trivia track:
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* When Coffey finally snaps and holds people hostage, he ends up creepily close to Lindsey, [[DoesThisRemindYouOFAnything stating that there was something he's wanted to do to her since they first met.]] [[BaitAndSwitch It looks like he's about to lean in to kiss her, but instead he just tapes her mouth shut, because he was sick of her talking.]] It's dramatic and scary at first, but this troper was laughing when he did that.
**Even funnier on the trivia track:
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Stop Helping Me was split, so I changed the quote to a direct quote from the film and potholed it to the new Unwanted Assistance replacement for Stop Helping Me
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* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippie, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!"
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* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippie, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!""[[UnwantedAssistance Hippy, do me a favor? Stay off my side.]]"
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* When Coffey finally snaps and holds people hostage, he ends up creepily close to Lindsey, [[DoesThisRemindYouOFAnything stating that there was something he's wanted to do to her since they first met.]] [[BaitAndSwitch It looks like he's about to lean in to kiss her, but instead he just tapes her mouth shut, because he was sick of her talking.]] It's dramatic and scary at first, but this troper was laughing when he did that.
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* When Coffey finally snaps and holds people hostage, he ends up creepily close to Lindsey, [[DoesThisRemindYouOFAnything stating that there was something he's wanted to do to her since they first met.]] [[BaitAndSwitch It looks like he's about to lean in to kiss her, but instead he just tapes her mouth shut, because he was sick of her talking.]] It's dramatic and scary at first, but this troper was laughing when he did that.that.
** Even funnier on the trivia track:
--> What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?"
** Even funnier on the trivia track:
--> What did you expect to happen in a PG-13 movie?"
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* At the beginning of the movie, the technician watches Lindsey exit the helicopter on her way to the control room on the Benthic Explorer. He comments "Man, when she finds out about [the military taking over the rig and interrupting her field test], they are going to have to take her down with a tranq[uilizer] gun!".
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* At the beginning of the movie, the technician watches Lindsey exit the helicopter on her way to the control room on the Benthic Explorer. He comments "Man, when she finds out about [the military taking over the rig and interrupting her field test], they are going to have to take her down with a tranq[uilizer] gun!".gun!".
* When Coffey finally snaps and holds people hostage, he ends up creepily close to Lindsey, [[DoesThisRemindYouOFAnything stating that there was something he's wanted to do to her since they first met.]] [[BaitAndSwitch It looks like he's about to lean in to kiss her, but instead he just tapes her mouth shut, because he was sick of her talking.]] It's dramatic and scary at first, but this troper was laughing when he did that.
* When Coffey finally snaps and holds people hostage, he ends up creepily close to Lindsey, [[DoesThisRemindYouOFAnything stating that there was something he's wanted to do to her since they first met.]] [[BaitAndSwitch It looks like he's about to lean in to kiss her, but instead he just tapes her mouth shut, because he was sick of her talking.]] It's dramatic and scary at first, but this troper was laughing when he did that.
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* Bud after meeting the NTI's in person, they saved his life and he shows his thanks by vomiting on their floor. Granted he was taking the liquid breathing apparatus off, but it still comes across as unintentionally funny.
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* Bud after meeting the NTI's in person, they saved his life and he shows his thanks by vomiting on their floor. Granted he was taking the liquid breathing apparatus off, but it still comes across as unintentionally funny.funny.
* At the beginning of the movie, the technician watches Lindsey exit the helicopter on her way to the control room on the Benthic Explorer. He comments "Man, when she finds out about [the military taking over the rig and interrupting her field test], they are going to have to take her down with a tranq[uilizer] gun!".
* At the beginning of the movie, the technician watches Lindsey exit the helicopter on her way to the control room on the Benthic Explorer. He comments "Man, when she finds out about [the military taking over the rig and interrupting her field test], they are going to have to take her down with a tranq[uilizer] gun!".
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--> '''Hippie:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!
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--> '''Hippie:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!objects"!
* Bud after meeting the NTI's in person, they saved his life and he shows his thanks by vomiting on their floor. Granted he was taking the liquid breathing apparatus off, but it still comes across as unintentionally funny.
* Bud after meeting the NTI's in person, they saved his life and he shows his thanks by vomiting on their floor. Granted he was taking the liquid breathing apparatus off, but it still comes across as unintentionally funny.
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* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippy, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!"
* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" *someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig* "WHAAAAT?!"
* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" *someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig* "WHAAAAT?!"
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* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippy, Hippie, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!"
* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?"*someone *''someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig* "WHAAAAT?!"rig''* "WHAAAAT?!"
* Hippie commenting on Lindsey's decision to call the aliens a "non-terrestrial intelligence".
--> '''Hippie:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!
* Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?"
* Hippie commenting on Lindsey's decision to call the aliens a "non-terrestrial intelligence".
--> '''Hippie:''' [=NTIs=]. Oh, man, that's even better than [=UFOs=]! Though I guess that works, too, huh? "Underwater flying objects"!
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* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippy, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!"
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* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippy, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!""StopHelpingMe!"
*Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" *someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig* "WHAAAAT?!"
*Bud at the beginning of the film: "Yeah, I'm calm, I'm a calm guy, why shouldn't I be calm? Is there a reason for me to not be calm?" *someone on the other end mentions his soon-to-be-ex wife's imminent arrival on the rig* "WHAAAAT?!"
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* Personally I laughed my head off when [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
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* Personally I laughed my head off when [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!HILARIOUS!
* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippy, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!"
* Lindsey is trying to convince the crew that she isn't crazy and that she actually saw something out in the ocean. The only person who believes her is Hippy, who immediately dives headfirst into a ConspiracyKitchenSink. Lindsey's reply: "StopHelpingMe!"
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* Personally I laughed my head off when the guy who was asleep (don't remeber his name) wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
** That was [[TheBigGuy Catfish.]]
** That was [[TheBigGuy Catfish.]]
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* Personally I laughed my head off when the guy who was asleep (don't remeber his name) [[TheBigGuy Catfish]] wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
** That was [[TheBigGuy Catfish.]]HILARIOUS!
** That was [[TheBigGuy Catfish.]]
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* Personally I laughed my head off when the guy who was asleep (don't remeber his name) wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
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* Personally I laughed my head off when the guy who was asleep (don't remeber his name) wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!HILARIOUS!
** That was [[TheBigGuy Catfish.]]
** That was [[TheBigGuy Catfish.]]
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* When Coffey steals One Night's sub, and the music starts to play. He totally smashes the sucker! Harsh, but funny.
* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling is usually always good for a chuckle or two.
* Personally I laughed my head off when the guy who was asleep (don't remeber his name) wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
* Bud and Lindsey's squabbling is usually always good for a chuckle or two.
* Personally I laughed my head off when the guy who was asleep (don't remeber his name) wakes up and sees the water-tentacle. He freaks out and grabs a FREAKIN POTTED PLANT!! HILARIOUS!
