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-->"Speechless. I’ll have to tell Trixie about this."
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-->"Speechless. I’ll have to tell Trixie about this.""
* Meta: Twilight replaces MJ, according to WordOfGod. Hilariously, Tara Strong voices MJ in Ultimate Spider-Man.
* Meta: Twilight replaces MJ, according to WordOfGod. Hilariously, Tara Strong voices MJ in Ultimate Spider-Man.
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-->'''Peter:''' "You don’t want to know. I still have nightmares from my childhood about that guy."
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-->'''Peter:''' "You don’t want to know. I still have nightmares from my childhood about that guy."
* Twilight's comment when she drags Peter at a Victoria Secret store and lets him unable to speak when she shows off to him:
-->"Speechless. I’ll have to tell Trixie about this."
* Twilight's comment when she drags Peter at a Victoria Secret store and lets him unable to speak when she shows off to him:
-->"Speechless. I’ll have to tell Trixie about this."
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* {{Fridge}}-induced: spreading wings was previously established as a sign of Pegasus' arousal, and when Twilight, now an Alicorn, hugs Peter at the end of chapter 30 she suddenly spread wings.
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* {{Fridge}}-induced: spreading wings was previously established as a sign of Pegasus' arousal, and when Twilight, now an Alicorn, hugs Peter at the end of chapter 30 she suddenly spread wings.wings.
* This:
-->'''Spike:''' "Your aunt’s awesome, Peter, but why does she keep calling me [[Series/BarneyAndFriends Barney]]?"
-->'''Peter:''' "You don’t want to know. I still have nightmares from my childhood about that guy."
* This:
-->'''Spike:''' "Your aunt’s awesome, Peter, but why does she keep calling me [[Series/BarneyAndFriends Barney]]?"
-->'''Peter:''' "You don’t want to know. I still have nightmares from my childhood about that guy."
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--> [[spoiler: '''Tony''']]: What, three hundred not enough for you? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Fine, I'll give you five hundred million if it'll keep you from dying]] on [[spoiler: Stephen's]] table...
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--> [[spoiler: '''Tony''']]: What, three hundred not enough for you? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Fine, I'll give you five hundred million if it'll keep you from dying]] on [[spoiler: Stephen's]] table...floor...
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* During the middle of the battle with Sombra, Spidey strikes again.
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* During In the middle of the battle with Sombra, Spidey strikes again.
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“I think I'm pregnant,” Spider-Mane suggested inanely, earning a baffled expression from Shining Armor. After an awkward silence occurred between the pair, Peter raised his hoof and nodded. “Oh, and Twilight's the father.”
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“I think I'm pregnant,” Spider-Mane suggested inanely, earning a baffled expression from Shining Armor. After an awkward silence occurred between the pair, Peter raised his hoof and nodded. “Oh, and Twilight's the father.””
* {{Fridge}}-induced: spreading wings was previously established as a sign of Pegasus' arousal, and when Twilight, now an Alicorn, hugs Peter at the end of chapter 30 she suddenly spread wings.
* {{Fridge}}-induced: spreading wings was previously established as a sign of Pegasus' arousal, and when Twilight, now an Alicorn, hugs Peter at the end of chapter 30 she suddenly spread wings.
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-->'''[[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents Twilight Velvet]]:''' "You're handsome, too. It's nice to see my daughter has lovely taste."
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-->'''[[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents Twilight Velvet]]:''' "You're handsome, too. It's nice to see my daughter has lovely taste.""
* During the middle of the battle with Sombra, Spidey strikes again.
-->“Okay, I have a confession to make,” Peter murmured, attempting to ignore the throbs coursing through his cranium. His spider sense was only reacting to the heightened level of danger that was brewing above.\\
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Shining glared at the mist cloud, scoffing harshly once it took the form of a tornado. “I know. Sombra destroyed my crystal heart, too.”\\
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Spider-Mane shook his head. “No, not that. It's worse.”\\
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“How so?”\\
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“I think I'm pregnant,” Spider-Mane suggested inanely, earning a baffled expression from Shining Armor. After an awkward silence occurred between the pair, Peter raised his hoof and nodded. “Oh, and Twilight's the father.”
* During the middle of the battle with Sombra, Spidey strikes again.
-->“Okay, I have a confession to make,” Peter murmured, attempting to ignore the throbs coursing through his cranium. His spider sense was only reacting to the heightened level of danger that was brewing above.\\
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Shining glared at the mist cloud, scoffing harshly once it took the form of a tornado. “I know. Sombra destroyed my crystal heart, too.”\\
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Spider-Mane shook his head. “No, not that. It's worse.”\\
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“How so?”\\
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“I think I'm pregnant,” Spider-Mane suggested inanely, earning a baffled expression from Shining Armor. After an awkward silence occurred between the pair, Peter raised his hoof and nodded. “Oh, and Twilight's the father.”
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-->'' 'Fighting super-powered crazies is much easier than this. Is that even natural?' ''
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-->'' 'Fighting super-powered crazies is much easier than this. Is that even natural?' ''''
** Not that Twilight escapes unscated...
-->'''[[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents Twilight Velvet]]:''' "You're handsome, too. It's nice to see my daughter has lovely taste."
** Not that Twilight escapes unscated...
-->'''[[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents Twilight Velvet]]:''' "You're handsome, too. It's nice to see my daughter has lovely taste."
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* Peter meeting Twilight's parents for the first time.
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* Peter [[{{Adorkable}} Peter]] meeting Twilight's parents for the first time.
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-->Trixie sighed. Only today would she stoop so low. “Hoo-rah. Hoo-rah.” The unicorn blankly stated, mirroring Pinkie Pie’s motions with an immense look of exasperation. “Spider-Mane. Hoo-rah.”
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-->Trixie sighed. Only today would she stoop so low. “Hoo-rah. Hoo-rah.” The unicorn blankly stated, mirroring Pinkie Pie’s motions with an immense look of exasperation. “Spider-Mane. Hoo-rah.””
* Peter meeting Twilight's parents for the first time.
-->'' 'Fighting super-powered crazies is much easier than this. Is that even natural?' ''
* Peter meeting Twilight's parents for the first time.
-->'' 'Fighting super-powered crazies is much easier than this. Is that even natural?' ''
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-->'''Twilight:''' "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, Peter. Mares and stallions practice magic together all of the time. So there's nothing to feel weird about.]]"
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-->'''Twilight:''' "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, Peter. Mares and stallions practice magic together all of the time. So there's nothing to feel weird about.]]"]]"
* During the race between Spider Mane and Spitfire, Trixie getting roped by Pinkie Pie into ''cheerleading''
-->Trixie sighed. Only today would she stoop so low. “Hoo-rah. Hoo-rah.” The unicorn blankly stated, mirroring Pinkie Pie’s motions with an immense look of exasperation. “Spider-Mane. Hoo-rah.”
* During the race between Spider Mane and Spitfire, Trixie getting roped by Pinkie Pie into ''cheerleading''
-->Trixie sighed. Only today would she stoop so low. “Hoo-rah. Hoo-rah.” The unicorn blankly stated, mirroring Pinkie Pie’s motions with an immense look of exasperation. “Spider-Mane. Hoo-rah.”
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-->“Hold your tongue, knave!” Luna shot back, slamming her hoof into the ground. That same instance, [[DramaticThunder lightning erupted from the sky]], directly overhead the irate mare. “I am ''no'' bat!”\\
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Peter remained still but allowed a nervous chuckle to escape from his chest. “Noted. You're reminding me more of Thor now.”
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Peter remained still but allowed a nervous chuckle to escape from his chest. “Noted. You're reminding me more of Thor now.”
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'' 'The talking horse is telling me '''I''' don't exist? I don't know whether I should be terrified or insulted.' ''
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'' 'The talking horse is telling me '''I''' don't exist? I don't know whether I should be terrified or insulted.' ''''
* Early on, Spidey is a bit embarrassed of Twilight helping him practicing shooting webbing for his horn, because, "Don't you think it's a little unusual for a ''girl'' to watch a ''boy'' shoot a sticky, white substance out of his ''horn''?". Of course, Twilight doesn't get it.
-->'''Twilight:''' "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, Peter. Mares and stallions practice magic together all of the time. So there's nothing to feel weird about.]]"
* Early on, Spidey is a bit embarrassed of Twilight helping him practicing shooting webbing for his horn, because, "Don't you think it's a little unusual for a ''girl'' to watch a ''boy'' shoot a sticky, white substance out of his ''horn''?". Of course, Twilight doesn't get it.
-->'''Twilight:''' "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, Peter. Mares and stallions practice magic together all of the time. So there's nothing to feel weird about.]]"
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* The entire second half of Chapter 49 and made all the better by the massive MoodWhiplash. Going from [[ImHavingSoulPains everyone back in Equestria catching feedback from Peter's fights]] into [[MamaBear Twilight]] going on a mission. She borrows 98 million dollars from Peter, who asks [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong "What's the worst that can happen?"]] The answer? [[spoiler: Twilight buys out the Daily Bugle and fires J. Jonah Jameson.]]
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* The entire second half of Chapter 49 and made all the better by the massive MoodWhiplash. Going from [[ImHavingSoulPains everyone back in Equestria catching feedback from Peter's fights]] into [[MamaBear Twilight]] going on a mission. She borrows 98 million dollars from Peter, who asks [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong "What's the worst that can happen?"]] The answer? [[spoiler: Twilight buys out the Daily Bugle and fires J. Jonah Jameson.]]]]
* This gem from Spidey and Twilight's first encounter.
-->Twilight glanced to the side, retreating into the confines of her mind for any recollection regarding the given location. After several moments, her eyes sprung open at a late realization. "Earth? Human? I've never heard of anything like those. The fact that you're bipedal is unusual, but..." Closing her eyes, Twilight frowned. "You are not physically and scientifically possible."\\
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'' 'The talking horse is telling me '''I''' don't exist? I don't know whether I should be terrified or insulted.' ''
* This gem from Spidey and Twilight's first encounter.
-->Twilight glanced to the side, retreating into the confines of her mind for any recollection regarding the given location. After several moments, her eyes sprung open at a late realization. "Earth? Human? I've never heard of anything like those. The fact that you're bipedal is unusual, but..." Closing her eyes, Twilight frowned. "You are not physically and scientifically possible."\\
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'' 'The talking horse is telling me '''I''' don't exist? I don't know whether I should be terrified or insulted.' ''
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** [[CallBack Called back]] in Chapter 60 when Peter ends up giving the diner he and Twilight frequented to its manager as well as a hefty tip, implied to be several million dollars. As she passes out, Peter said, "So that's what it looked like."
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* The entire second half of Chapter 49 and made all the better by the massive MoodWhiplash. Going from [[ImHavingSoulPains everyone back in Equestria catching feedback from Peter's fights]] into [[MamaBear Twilight]] going on a mission. She borrows 98 million dollars from Peter, who asks [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong "What's the worst that can happen?"]] The answer? [[spoiler: Twilight buys out the Daily Bugle and fires J. Jonah Jamison.]]
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* The entire second half of Chapter 49 and made all the better by the massive MoodWhiplash. Going from [[ImHavingSoulPains everyone back in Equestria catching feedback from Peter's fights]] into [[MamaBear Twilight]] going on a mission. She borrows 98 million dollars from Peter, who asks [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong "What's the worst that can happen?"]] The answer? [[spoiler: Twilight buys out the Daily Bugle and fires J. Jonah Jamison.Jameson.]]
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--> [[spoiler: '''Tony''']]: What, three hundred not enough for you? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Fine, I'll give you five hundred million if it'll keep you from dying]] on [[spoiler: Stephen's]] table...
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--> [[spoiler: '''Tony''']]: What, three hundred not enough for you? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Fine, I'll give you five hundred million if it'll keep you from dying]] on [[spoiler: Stephen's]] table...table...
* The entire second half of Chapter 49 and made all the better by the massive MoodWhiplash. Going from [[ImHavingSoulPains everyone back in Equestria catching feedback from Peter's fights]] into [[MamaBear Twilight]] going on a mission. She borrows 98 million dollars from Peter, who asks [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong "What's the worst that can happen?"]] The answer? [[spoiler: Twilight buys out the Daily Bugle and fires J. Jonah Jamison.]]
* The entire second half of Chapter 49 and made all the better by the massive MoodWhiplash. Going from [[ImHavingSoulPains everyone back in Equestria catching feedback from Peter's fights]] into [[MamaBear Twilight]] going on a mission. She borrows 98 million dollars from Peter, who asks [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong "What's the worst that can happen?"]] The answer? [[spoiler: Twilight buys out the Daily Bugle and fires J. Jonah Jamison.]]
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* Peter brings a bunch of gems [[spoiler: to Tony Stark]] to get some money. [[spoiler: Tony]], being [[Fiction500 who he is]], sets up a bank account with three hundred million dollars. Peter faints from the sheer amount. Again, [[Fiction500 being who he is...]]
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* Peter brings a bunch of gems [[spoiler: to Tony Stark]] to get some money. [[spoiler: Tony]], being [[Fiction500 [[{{Fiction500}} who he is]], sets up a bank account with three hundred million dollars. Peter faints from the sheer amount. Again, [[Fiction500 [[{{Fiction500}} being who he is...]]
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* It took over forty chapters, but a 60's Spider-Meme finally found it's way in. When a now human Twilight comments on having 'tentacles at the ends of her hooves,' Peter says. "I've seen enough hentai to know where this is OW!" (His remark earned him a smack upside the head.)
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* It took over forty chapters, but a 60's Spider-Meme finally found it's way in. When a now human Twilight comments on having 'tentacles at the ends of her hooves,' Peter says. "I've seen enough hentai to know where this is OW!" (His remark earned him a smack upside the head.))
* Peter brings a bunch of gems [[spoiler: to Tony Stark]] to get some money. [[spoiler: Tony]], being [[Fiction500 who he is]], sets up a bank account with three hundred million dollars. Peter faints from the sheer amount. Again, [[Fiction500 being who he is...]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Tony''']]: What, three hundred not enough for you? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Fine, I'll give you five hundred million if it'll keep you from dying]] on [[spoiler: Stephen's]] table...
* Peter brings a bunch of gems [[spoiler: to Tony Stark]] to get some money. [[spoiler: Tony]], being [[Fiction500 who he is]], sets up a bank account with three hundred million dollars. Peter faints from the sheer amount. Again, [[Fiction500 being who he is...]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Tony''']]: What, three hundred not enough for you? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Fine, I'll give you five hundred million if it'll keep you from dying]] on [[spoiler: Stephen's]] table...
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* Peter meets Babs Seed. His response? "Oh God! They're multiplying!"
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* Peter meets Babs Seed. His response? "Oh God! They're multiplying!"multiplying!"
* It took over forty chapters, but a 60's Spider-Meme finally found it's way in. When a now human Twilight comments on having 'tentacles at the ends of her hooves,' Peter says. "I've seen enough hentai to know where this is OW!" (His remark earned him a smack upside the head.)
* It took over forty chapters, but a 60's Spider-Meme finally found it's way in. When a now human Twilight comments on having 'tentacles at the ends of her hooves,' Peter says. "I've seen enough hentai to know where this is OW!" (His remark earned him a smack upside the head.)
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* Lyra's mishaps while trying to prove Peter's identity as a human.
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* Lyra's mishaps while trying to prove Peter's identity as a human.human.
* Peter meets Babs Seed. His response? "Oh God! They're multiplying!"
* Peter meets Babs Seed. His response? "Oh God! They're multiplying!"
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* Just about all of the interactions between Peter and the Cutie Mark Crusaders would qualify for this, particularly their first meeting, when Peter gets inducted as their captain while he wasn't paying attention to them.
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* Just about all of the interactions between Peter and the Cutie Mark Crusaders would qualify for this, particularly their first meeting, when Peter gets inducted as their captain while he wasn't paying attention to them.them.
* Some of Peter's classical witty banter while fighting.
* Fluttershy's uncalled arousal.
* "Batmare!"
* Velvet's question to Peter and Twilight in chapter 35.
* Lyra's mishaps while trying to prove Peter's identity as a human.
* Some of Peter's classical witty banter while fighting.
* Fluttershy's uncalled arousal.
* "Batmare!"
* Velvet's question to Peter and Twilight in chapter 35.
* Lyra's mishaps while trying to prove Peter's identity as a human.
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* Just about all of the interactions between Peter and the Cutie Mark Crusaders would qualify for this, particularly their first meeting, when Peter gets inducted as their captain while he wasn't paying attention to them.
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* Probably one of the sweetest moments in the story would have to be when Applebloom gets Peter alone to confess that she deduced that he was Spider-Mane. A beautiful dialogue between the two that ends with Applebloom adopting Peter as a big brother when he admits that, with him being stranded in Equestria, he doesn't have any family left.
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* Probably one of the sweetest moments in the story would have to be when Applebloom gets Peter alone to confess that she deduced that he was Spider-Mane. A beautiful dialogue between the two that ends with Applebloom adopting Peter as a big brother when he admits that, with him being stranded in Equestria, he doesn't have any family left.
