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* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka using [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} her X-Ray vision]] to peep on Shinji next room over... and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
* A minor RunningGag of random crooks trying to [[ShootingSuperman shoot Supergirl repeatedly]] is spread through the earlier chapters. One crook proves to be even stupider than the rest by trying to ''stab'' Supergirl repeatedly. The gag mostly slows down when Asuka finally encounters a crook that immediately surrenders after shooting her once, and she praises his smarts.
* A minor RunningGag of random crooks trying to [[ShootingSuperman shoot Supergirl repeatedly]] is spread through the earlier chapters. One crook proves to be even stupider than the rest by trying to ''stab'' Supergirl repeatedly. The gag mostly slows down when Asuka finally encounters a crook that immediately surrenders after shooting her once, and she praises his smarts.
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* One chapter chapter's {{Omake}} has Asuka using [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} her X-Ray vision]] to peep on Shinji next room over... over...and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a yells--a ShoutOut to a certain episode of ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
* A minor RunningGag of random crooks trying to [[ShootingSuperman shoot Supergirl repeatedly]] is spread through the earlier chapters. One crook proves to be even stupider than the rest by trying to ''stab'' Supergirl repeatedly. The gag mostly slows down when Asuka finally encounters a crook that immediately surrenders after shooting her once, and she praises hissmarts.smart decision.
* A minor RunningGag of random crooks trying to [[ShootingSuperman shoot Supergirl repeatedly]] is spread through the earlier chapters. One crook proves to be even stupider than the rest by trying to ''stab'' Supergirl repeatedly. The gag mostly slows down when Asuka finally encounters a crook that immediately surrenders after shooting her once, and she praises his
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* The Omake of the next to last chapter has the rest of the Superwomen pointing out that the FinalBattle was based on ''ComicBook/TheDeathOfSuperman'' and are looking forward to the version of ''Reign Of The Supermen'' while dressed as the alternate Supermen, only for Asuka to barge into the room and tell them that she [[OnlyMostlyDead was not dead for months]] so they can all skedaddle, [[NotSoAboveItAll while wearing the black suit]].
* One Omake of the chapter of the battle against Doomsday has D-Day [[ClothingDamage shredding Asuka's top with his spikes]]. Cue {{Tsundere}} fueled-by-anti-pervert UnstoppableRage CurbStompBattle.
* One of the Omakes of the epilogue is Kal-El encountering Shinji in his dreams and giving him some TwerpSweating… with a shotgun, which just felt right even when he has the same powers as Asuka (as Shinji nervously questions). Furthermore, when he wakes up and tells Asuka what happened, she is nonchalant about it.
* One Omake of the chapter of the battle against Doomsday has D-Day [[ClothingDamage shredding Asuka's top with his spikes]]. Cue {{Tsundere}} fueled-by-anti-pervert UnstoppableRage CurbStompBattle.
* One of the Omakes of the epilogue is Kal-El encountering Shinji in his dreams and giving him some TwerpSweating… with a shotgun, which just felt right even when he has the same powers as Asuka (as Shinji nervously questions). Furthermore, when he wakes up and tells Asuka what happened, she is nonchalant about it.
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* The Omake of the next to last second-to-last chapter has the rest of the Superwomen (made up of, in this case, Rei as the Eradicator, Mari Makinami as a "Cyborg Supergirl", Asuka Langley Shikinami (from the ''Rebuild'' films) wearing a leather jacket and little round sunglasses like Kon-El, and Mana Kirishima in her Steel armor) pointing out that the FinalBattle was based on ''ComicBook/TheDeathOfSuperman'' ''ComicBook/TheDeathOfSuperman'', and are thus looking forward to the version of ''Reign Of The Supermen'' while dressed as the alternate Supermen, to come, only for Asuka herself to barge into the room and tell them that she [[OnlyMostlyDead was not dead for months]] months]], so they can all skedaddle, skedaddle. [[NotSoAboveItAll All while wearing a version of the black suit]].
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* One Omake of the chapter of the battle against Doomsday hasD-Day the monster in question [[ClothingDamage shredding Asuka's top with his spikes]]. Cue {{Tsundere}} fueled-by-anti-pervert UnstoppableRage CurbStompBattle.
* One of the Omakes of the epilogue is Kal-El encountering Shinji in his dreams and giving him someTwerpSweating… with TwerpSweating…with a shotgun, which just felt right even when he has the same powers as Asuka (as Shinji nervously questions). Furthermore, when he wakes up and tells Asuka what happened, she is nonchalant about it.
* One Omake of the chapter of the battle against Doomsday has
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** One Omake of the chapter of the battle against Doomsday has D-Day [[ClothingDamage shredding Asuka's top with his spikes]]. Cue {{Tsundere}}-fueled-by-anti-pervert-UnstoppableRage {{Tsundere}} fueled-by-anti-pervert UnstoppableRage CurbStompBattle.
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* One of the Omakes of the epilogue is Kal-El encountering Shinji in his dreams and giving him some TwerpSweating… with a shotgun, which just felt right even when he has the same powers as Asuka (as Shinji nervously questions). Furthermore, when he wakes up and tells Asuka what happened, she is nonchalant about it.
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* The Omake of the next to last chapter has the rest of the Superwomen pointing out that the FinalBattle was based on ''ComicBook/TheDeathOfSuperman'' and are looking forward to the version of ''ComicBook/ReignOfTheSupermen'' while dressed as the alternate Supermen, only for Asuka to barge into the room and tell them that she [[OnlyMostlyDead was not dead for months]] so they can all skedaddle, [[NotSoAboveItAll while wearing the black suit]].
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* The Omake of the next to last chapter has the rest of the Superwomen pointing out that the FinalBattle was based on ''ComicBook/TheDeathOfSuperman'' and are looking forward to the version of ''ComicBook/ReignOfTheSupermen'' ''Reign Of The Supermen'' while dressed as the alternate Supermen, only for Asuka to barge into the room and tell them that she [[OnlyMostlyDead was not dead for months]] so they can all skedaddle, [[NotSoAboveItAll while wearing the black suit]].
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* The Omake of the next to last chapter has the rest of the Superwomen pointing out that the FinalBattle was based on ''ComicBook/TheDeathOfSuperman'' and are looking forward to the version of ''ComicBook/ReignOfTheSupermen'' while dressed as the alternate Supermen, only for Asuka to barge into the room and tell them that she [[OnlyMostlyDead was not dead for months]] so they can all skedaddle, [[NotSoAboveItAll while wearing the black suit]].
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* The description of [[spoiler:Chiron]] skipping across the Geofront lake is just downright hilarious.
* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka using [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} her X-Ray vision]] to peep on Shinji next room over]]... and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka using [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} her X-Ray vision]] to peep on Shinji next room over]]... and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
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* The description of [[spoiler:Chiron]] Chiron skipping across the Geofront lake is just downright hilarious.
* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka using [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} her X-Ray vision]] to peep on Shinji next roomover]]...over... and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
* A minor RunningGag of random crooks trying to [[ShootingSuperman shoot Supergirl repeatedly]] is spread through the earlier chapters. One crook proves to be even stupider than the rest by trying to ''stab'' Supergirl repeatedly. The gag mostly slows down when Asuka finally encounters a crook that immediately surrenders after shooting her once, and she praises his smarts.
--->'''Asuka (to the stabbing goon, completely deadpan, as she is just standing there)''' You do know the definition of insanity, right?
* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka using [[ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} her X-Ray vision]] to peep on Shinji next room
* A minor RunningGag of random crooks trying to [[ShootingSuperman shoot Supergirl repeatedly]] is spread through the earlier chapters. One crook proves to be even stupider than the rest by trying to ''stab'' Supergirl repeatedly. The gag mostly slows down when Asuka finally encounters a crook that immediately surrenders after shooting her once, and she praises his smarts.
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* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka [[PowerPerversionPotential using her X-Ray vision to peep on Shinji next room over]]... and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
* One chapter {{Omake}} has Asuka [[PowerPerversionPotential using her X-Ray vision to peep on Shinji next room over]]... and unwillingly making him sterile ("My sperm!", he yells-a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'').
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